Date: August 20 2019 5:35 PM Title: The Games Begin
The story continues to be great.
I do hope Ashley and Max mend their relationship (and Alexis get's some commeupance, she is such a bitch!!!)
Author's Response:
It appears that most people have the same feelings about Alexis haha. Thank you so much for the reviews and your continued support of the story. I can promise that revenge WILL be served!
Thanks for reading and please stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: August 20 2019 1:25 PM Title: Unhealthy Relationship
You always have the best cliffhangers. I'm so glad the readers dont have to wait for long until the next chapter! but if you ever did need to take the time to work on a chapter I could easily wait because I know it would be worth it.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I'm glad to hear that the content is worth waiting for. But I do not like stumbling across a great story on here, only to find it immediately abandoned. In fact, once I've got the last chapter written, I think I'll just upload the rest of the story all at once.
Date: August 20 2019 7:25 AM Title: Unhealthy Relationship
I Forgot about the side stories question. I think your idea of letting some memories out of the main story line to make spin offs pretty neat. That way, you don't comprmise the main plot and don't end up dragging the story than necessary. For an example, lets take Alexis past. You could make a side story all of it's own, with Alexis when she is paying for her deeds and start rememoring all the tinies she hurt, including her father and starts questioning why. I think you will have much more freedom and time to do stuff like that when the main story is finished, otherwise you will end up having to work on two texts at the same time, which can compromise the quality and updates of the main story.
Date: August 20 2019 1:06 AM Title: Smelling Salts
Maybe you can make Max smaller! I love your anal content! This is the best story I've read recently
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind review! I dont think we will see any micro content in this story, but I have read a few great stories involving really really tiny people and I thinm I'd like to give it a try. Keep an eye on my page, and I think I'll have some good micro content before too long!
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: August 19 2019 7:34 PM Title: Unhealthy Relationship
cage plug, yup looking forward to next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you my friend! I hope you stick around to read through the finale, it wont be too long now!
Date: August 19 2019 7:05 PM Title: Smelling Salts
I feel bad for Max. I would really like to see Ashley realize how bad Alexis really is. I do have a qerstion: if Max went with Maggie then would Alexis get board with Ashley without a tiny and just leave her? Please keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Haha yes, Max has had a pretty long string of bad luck, thats for sure. As far as your question goes, please stay tuned, because I think that question will be answered very very soon and I would hate to ruin the plot by saying too much..
Thank you so much for reading, and I appreciate you taking the time to leave a review.
Date: August 19 2019 6:23 PM Title: Unhealthy Relationship
First, thank you for your response on my last comment. Very glad to know you are not annoyed by my theories :D It's incredible! Your story and characters are just so good and I am reading since day one. And now we approach the final arc! And, oh my God! What a emotional rollercoaster those last chapters were. Both thumbs up!!
I know it might not be your intention (or, maybe it is), but, with each chapter I come to hate Ashley and Megan more. You see many people might not like Alexis. Well, she is the villain. But, with Ashley and Megan, it already surpassed the mere fact they are family. Max did absolutely nothing but love his sisters, doing absolutely nothing to deserve this kind of treatment from both of them! Family or not family, right now both only seem as evil and nuts as Alexis to me.
Megan tortured 3 innocent people along the story for her own pleasure, one of them being her own flesh and blood which she just abbandoned with someone she knew was dangerous to him, without not even bothering to look back! No! She picked her payment for seeling Max and went home to have some fun with a complete stranger. Her slave!
As for Ashley, after this chapter, with Max opening his heart to her, pratically confessing to her, and she... tortures him! When he is hurt! After a almost death experience! I know it seems I am just venting my angry, which I won't deny, BUT, there is a reason, and this reason is a question that have been bugging me for some time: why Max loves his sisters?? Why bother answering them or doing anything?
Save his twin sister? The one that will torture him for her own selfish interests all the way home? Or the one who abbandoned him at the cabin? After all this, how he don't just disconnect from himself?
God! This last chapters! I just hope some major character development happens to Megan, like a really big change of heart. Why not for Ashley? Simple, because even though all the talk about Max being her twin brother, she choose the villain, so she is also a villain.
How Max could reconect with Megan? By helping the little slave scape. After the trip back with Ashley, he will be broken and, in an joint attempt to scape his own house with the slave, he ends up getting the short stick, being caught by Megan while the other scapes to ask for help and end up finding Liz. From here on is that it gets trick, because I don't believe only crying or talking will be enough. After this last chapters, it is clear that his suffer, plain and simple, isnt enough.
What do I mean? That Max will have to go a little crazy. His sisters don't care for his humanity? Good. Than he must be an animal, right? Not a brother, but an animal. Maybe he was an insect all along dreaming he was Max... this kind of thing, to the point he starts acting like an actual insect (charging at cockroaches and spiders, eating dirt from the ground, maybe attempting to eat Megan shit when she dumps him in the toilet again (so much for her speech, saying she went overboard and felt sorry at the cabin).
Now that we are nearing the end, I just can't thank you enough for your dedication, always posting and answering the reviews. What I can do is asure to you I will read until the very last chapter! :DD
Author's Response:
I very much want to respond to all the points in this review, but I think it will be better if I let you read what happens and hear youir thoughts afterwards. Chapter 33 begins a huge turning point in the story and I would hate to ruin the surprise for everyone.
That being said, I am eager to hear your throughts on all of our main characters when we reach the end. I'm curious to see if the readers are picking up on the motivations behind each character as I tell their stories.
Thank you so much for reading, and I'll see you at the finish line!
Date: August 16 2019 9:11 PM Title: The Good Doctor
I deleted my last two reviews because I wanted to summarize my ideas into a smaller text and because I thought 3 reviews in a roll would be too much, among other reasons I explain at the end. So, now that both sisters think they are goddess when compared to tinies... I just fell sorry for Max. Not only because of the torture, but, because he trully cares for these cruel and mean girls. Liked how you worked the conflict betwen Max will and his body reactions.
Now, I still think you are cooking something big with the sisters and their relationship with Max. I would love to see a love triangle involving Max, Liz and Megan or Ashley. There is planty of material from all chapters to backup the idea that, yes, Ashley or Megan (or both) harbour feelings for Max, and the next or last arc could be about it. Don't know, but I would love to see it.
Also, after seeing how the sisters just tortured and abandoned him, it would be good to see Megan and Asley to suffer the worst way someone can suffer: in their minds, eaten by guilty and shame from what they did to their brother.
That is it. Sorry for the last two reviews. Together they were far too long and too medling into details from the story, so I deleted them. Lets wait and see what you have in store. Having to wait for the chapters is making me hate the weekends kkkkkkkkk. As always, thank you for your hard work in bringing us this story that is already a gem of this site. I can only speak for me, and I am very grateful :)
Author's Response:
I appreciate your frequent reviews, and I've found it very interesting to read your predictions and compare them to what I have planned out. And I do not mind the long reviews one bit. I find this community to be incredibly supportive and it's you folks that have made it so much fun for me to write this story.
And don't worry too much about having to wait through the weekends. I'm making good progress on the story and we are definitely nearing the end. And not having to worry about posting on weekends makes it a lot easier to write the quality of content that I want to put out.
I appreciate you and the rest of the community sitcking through to the finish with me. I hope you enjoy what I have in store for our characters and thank you so much for all the support!
Date: August 15 2019 12:23 PM Title: CRUNCH!
Uurhhh, I really hate Alexis, hope Ashley eventually sees what a manipulative bitch she is and dumps her.
Author's Response:
Yes, I definitely did not intend for Alexis to be the "likeable" sort of giantess haha. I hope you stay tuned to see what happens to our primary antagonist!
[Report This]Date: August 13 2019 7:08 PM Title: Smelling Salts
Kinda a cliffhanger chapter lol. I hope you’re no where near close to finished with this story. Sooo many avenues to venture in this story. I feel like you’re just getting started. I wish there was a way to DM you or something. I can’t wait for the next chapter. I want to see more stories from you too. But I’m not ready, no where near ready, to leave this story. 😍🍑🤤 thank you for writing!!!!
Author's Response:
I would say that we are nearing the end of the second act. So still about a third of the story remains to be told. However, if it seems appropriate, I have no issue coming back and adding side stories, either into this story or ass separate one-off adventures of their own. As far as DM's go, I've started a twitter account @Omanahan88. Feel free to shoot me a DM if you like.
Thank you so much for the support on the story. Hearing the feedback makes it much easier to fight through the creative blocks. Stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: August 13 2019 3:40 PM Title: Exposed
You are a really, really great writer. This story has been outstanding from the start and only seems to get better. I can't wait to see what else you have in mind for this project and sincerely hope you are considering starting another one (or ten) once you do finish it. Thank you for writing this, really great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! We've still got a little while before this story is wrapped up, but I will absolutely be starting a new porject after this one is finished. Thanks for the support!
[Report This]Date: August 12 2019 7:18 PM Title: Smelling Salts
Hell YESSS!!! More more more!!!!! Maybe he’s going to find out he loves being tortured and used. Atleast his body does. You’re an amazing writer. Last 2 chapters have been fantastic!!! Please don’t stop. Love the LONG detailed chapters and your constant updates! DONT STOP!!😍🍑🤤
Author's Response: Well thank you Spider-Man! I really appreciate the feedback, as I was hitting a bit of a dry patch with my writing, but over the last day or so I’ve been reinstated to steam this story onward!
I’m glad you like the idea of Max being at war with his own carnal desires! It’s something I wasn’t planning on doing when I started but it just seemed like it fits.
Stay tuned to see what happens next, and thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: August 09 2019 1:48 AM Title: Smelling Salts
I've really enjoyed reading the story so far, you have a talent for this sort of thing and it's refreshing to see someone with your tastes writing a story surprisingly quickly. You really know how to sell the relationship between the characters and it was a joy to read the story. And as of the latest chapter, I loved seeing the mother interact with her shrunken son, if you ever wanted to write a whole story like that I think most people would love it.
Author's Response: Hey thank you so much for reading! I’m very glad that you’ve enjoyed it thus far. I’m able to write so much because this community has proven to be so very supportive! And as for the mother chapter, I’m glad you liked it. I wasn’t sure about it so it’s nice to hear that it was enjoyable and not too dark. And if you haven’t read it “Mrs. Riesen’s Son” by dirtyoldbukowski on this site is a fantastic story that inspired my chapter. Anyways, thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you stick around to see how things turn out!
Date: August 07 2019 9:52 PM Title: And Then There Were Three
Yes! Drama with giantess and there feet! Thank you! Since the last chapter with memories I keep thinking about the part where Megan grows to giant size... and I think it would be an interesting if Max where willing to play along with her... they even build a city together so that they can role play... So, about the two new chapters (21 and 22)
I was imaginig things differently, I would have done things differently... AND I AM SO GLAD YOU DIDN'T DO AS I WOULD! Let me explain
This is more of a theory than a review. A little of both. And, I must say, even I didn't expect to come up with those ideas but, these last two chapters where, in my opinion, a game changer. I even changed my initial outllok on the barista kkkkk. Hope you find it usefull as to draw inspiration. I am just having too much fun imaginig diferent scenarios for your story!
This two chapters gave a lot to think about. At first I thought that Alexis would be the 'goddess' cliche character, finding pleasure in power... but this passage - "“If only I were a little shrinky. Oh well.” Alexis laughs." - rises many questions. Maybe the pleasure she fells doesn't come directly from the sensation of control but of whatching said control while she fantasize herself as a tiny person.
About Megan, I am pleased the first thing she does after getting her hands on the toy she so eagerlythought she wanted, is to start looking at and worrying about Max. Why? Because, there is obvious tension betwen all 3 main chracters. Max find both Megan and Ashley more than atractive. There are times where he simply puts Ashley in a pedestal as every lover would do. For Megan, the scene where he peeps at her in the bathroom (ch. 3 if i remember right) speaks volumes.
Meanwhile, the sisters clearly compete to see who is more loved as to who Max prefers most. We can se that in the latest chapter, but also in the times Megan makes fun of how Max thinks Ashley is perfect. We can see that since chapter 1, specially with Megan, but now also with Ashley. She gets upset thinking that Max prefers Alexis or Megan over her and is starting to have fantasies with him, all while fagging ignorance and inocence. All that amounts to an interesting confllict. I started this story thinking that Ashley would get jealous of Alexis atention to Max, BUT, it could be the other way around!
We can not forget (if my memory is right - I need to read the chapters again to be 110% sure) that Max choose to go living with Ashley and Megan followed in their footstep. As I said in another comment, the Devil is in the details.
Only time will tell, but I am willing to bet this wasn't the last fight (nor the first) fight Ashley and Megan have over Max. Wich brings me to my last two points: the barista and Megan ex-boyfriend. I thought I disliked her. I WAS WRONG (MAYBE). She will eventually try to take Max out of the house and I don't think that is something the sisters will allow. Yes, I am thinking of antagonisms and deep revelations for the future, where the focus of the story may shfit, from Alexis playing the sisters, to Alexis shrinking and becoming a paw in a game to see who will get to rule over the protagonist life.
There are two parts of the chapter very important that weren't shown: Alexis talk with Megan and the first part of the fight between the sisters. But, it was hinted that Alexis wanted to stir drama. What drama, remains unclear BUT I wouldn't be surprised if at the center where the tension all 3 main characters don't want to adress. This drama, this tension, I believe caused Megan to break up with her boyfriend. Yes, she got what she wanted and then the trill was gone, just like it is implicit in ch. 21: she did all sort of things with Max to get a tiny slave. She got. And the next day she just wants to go back home WITH MAX? Shoundn't she rejoice and just enjoy the moment, seeing everything in a good mood? But she doesn't. She looks guilty, she doesn't want that anymore and, without a good reason, starts to dislike Alexis. Why?? She did all she did and now wanted to just leave with her tiny brother? I am with Max on this one: although the worry was real, she had ulterior motives and the fact tha she didn't got it rised the stakes and lead to an emotional outburst.
Thank you for the story and the answers. Hope you enjoy this comment as much as I enjoyed writing it. It has been a long time since I have found a story on this site that got me so invested in the characters!
Author's Response: Well I can tell from the size of your reviews that you genuinely enjoy this story, and that brings a tremendous amount of joy to my heart. So thank you very much for that. Now.. on to the review. I don’t want to spoil anything so I’m going to be very vague, but I will say this. On some points you’re nowhere close, but on a couple of things you’ve hit the nail on the head. Based on the review that you’ve left so far, and the fact that you aren’t upset by shocking revelations, I would say that you are going to enjoy where things are going to be when the story ends. As always I appreciate you reading the story and taking the time to leave a genuine review! Stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: August 07 2019 8:43 AM Title: Smelling Salts
I really like this story and where it’s going. iMac actually had an out by going with Megan but her past cruel antics made her unbelievable which was delightfully amusing. I hope Max continues to get broken down and that Ashley continues to use him as a mere toy with Alexis’ help. The development of Ashley from sweet and caring to active participant in Max’s torture has really made this very interesting. I like the aspects of being used by sisters. I really look forward to reading more. This is an excellent story. I have already favorited you as an author so that I can keep up with anymore stories you may write in the future. I also love that you constantly update the story. So much of the time I get really into a story only for the author to not update in 2 weeks and I get everyone’s busy but then I have to at least read the previous chapter as a refresher. I love that I can follow your story day by day. Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: Yes, the notion of Ashley transitioning from a loving and perfect guardian, to just another evil giantess is the whole premise that this story was built on. And it’s a bit of a cliche but I’m hoping that I’m able to approach the scenario in a fresh way that people will enjoy reading about.
Stay tuned, you’ll enjoy where the sisters stand by the end of the story.
Thanks for reading and thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: August 06 2019 1:17 PM Title: Smelling Salts
I love this story! Everything about it is perfect. I'm not big on the sister stuff but I pretend it's his stepsister but who cares its your story, not mine. I wish I could write and update as fast as you but I like to take my time to make sure Its exactly how I want it.
Eventually this story has to end, but theres still a lot of room for flashbacks and other details so whenever you do finish it I hope you begin another story.
10 stars!
Author's Response:
I'm flattered to hear you say that you are enjoying the story despite it prominently featuring a fetish that you dont necessarily subscribe to. I guess the whole "sister" thing is easier for me because I don't have a sister myself.
And as far as the story updating goes, I actually have about 4 or 5 chapters written that haven't been published at all times. This way I can have some time off to think, and still keep my story at the front of the "Most recent" page. Obviously the quality of the content and the author's enthusiasm are most important, but I find that having a good amount written before I start posting, was incredibly helpful for me.
And you are correct, this story will absolutely come to a conclusion at some point. I subscribe to the theory that it's better to let a story end with dignity rather than just continue to push out garbage forever. That being said, I can definitely see myself working on some spin off short stories based on some of the characters featured here.
Thank you very mush for the support and I hope you stay tuned for the rest!
[Report This]Date: August 05 2019 10:16 PM Title: Smelling Salts
PLEASE.. NEVER STOP THIS STORY! Love how long each chapter is and I love every little gory detail. If you ever stop writing this story.. there better be a part 2 and 3 and 4 and 5... do ya SEE where I’m going with this?! Lol the fact that it’s MOSTLY ass related is the absolute best part! Never stop with the ass... there is never enough. Thank you and please continue.... I’ll be watching 😈
Author's Response:
Well I am thrilled to hear that you're enjoying the experience so far! And while I am a firm believer that all things must eventually come to an end, I think that we still have a number of chapters to go. And I think with how much people are enjoying this story, I might end up writing some spin offs. Also I'm glad that you appreciate the ass content as much as I do. While I am going to try to feature some other material in the next couple chapters, there will always be time for more ASS!
Thank you so much for the words of encouragement and thank you for reading!
Date: August 05 2019 7:48 PM Title: Not a Morning Person
Ashley... that scalated fast kkkkkkkk. Felling sorry for Max once again. Can't see him running away to reach a RP community and surviving. He must, not only rebuild, but, build a new family with the ties that were severed.
Also can't see how the barista (Liz) will manage to help him... but that is just because I don't like her. Sorry >.< kkkkkkkkkk. It's not a rational thing. I just root more for the giantess x tiny romance XDD
Well, I can't say much more than what has already been said - you have skills, imagination and is willing to tell a story and update it daily. You respond to comments and it is very friendly towards sugestions (even the long ones kkk). You are the best. Gonna keep reading and reviewing and rooting against the barista till the end XDD
Author's Response:
Yes, Ashley did do a bit of a powerslide into the role of domineering giantess, but it'll seem less drastic as the story continues. And it's been a while since we heard from the barista, I'm glad that youre still thinking about her haha.
As always, I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your reviews.
Stay tuned!
Date: August 05 2019 6:01 PM Title: Smelling Salts
I love this story! You are a great writer. There’s new twists and turns at every corner and it’s not easily predictable. Wish I was Max
Author's Response:
I think we all want to be Max!
Thank you very much for the compliment, I am trying very hard to keep the story from getting too boring and predictable.
Thanks for reading!
Date: August 05 2019 3:55 AM Title: Smelling Salts
This story keeps getting better and better! I can't wait to read more please keep going your are already one of my favorite writers on this page.
Thank you
Author's Response:
That is incredibly kind of you to say. I was a rwader on this site for years and I never thought I would enjoy writing my own story this much. Thank you so much for reading and I hope you stick around to see how things pan out!