Reviewer: Amista6 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2019 7:42 PM Title: Bath Time

"What if I WAS the face on the back of this thong"  is one the best lines (and there are a  lot in your story) of any gts story I've read before.

Author's Response:

Haha thank you so much. My girlfriend in college actually had a thong with a little smiley face directly above the ass crack, I remembered it and just had to put it in the story lol.

 

Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2019 8:37 AM Title: date night

And my ship has sunk. R.I.P Megan x Max kkkkkkkkkkkk

I can totally understand your struggle trying to redeem such a huge character rsrs. And, in fact, I can tottaly understand Megan arc. I would have done differently, but thats because I had a completely different understanding of the dinamics revolving around her character, be it with Max or with Ashley.

Obviously I loved Megan being assertive in protecting Max and humiliating Alexis.

You said theres two more chapters to wrap up the story so I am gonna wait to say more. The only thing I felt it was missing in this last chapter was more dialogue betwen Max and Liz.

As always, thank you for your hard work and dedication to the story.

 

PS. Would it make me evil to say I hate Ivan and I hope he and Megan break up? C'mon! No one is so goddamn perfect!  XDDDDDDDD

Again, R.I.P my ship TT_TT

 

Author's Response:

I may have sunk your ship but go read the last few chapters because I sent you a liferaft lol.

 

I'm sure I'll be seeing another review once you've finished the story so I'll talk to you then haha.

Reviewer: BigJames Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2019 8:35 PM Title: Expulsion

Have loved this story, very well written, a little too much fart stuff for me but did not get in the way of enjoying it. Would like to see Megan join him in the shower and see where that goes. Maybe he will reluctantly let her have her way after saving his life and all.

Author's Response: Haha thank you so much. Ass and farts are definitely my primary kink so it will likely come up a lot in all of my writing. Still I appreciate that people can enjoy my writing even if it features content that they aren’t particularly interested in. I hope you stay tuned through the finale! (Be aware that there will be more farting though haha) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: StoryArt1715 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2019 7:43 PM Title: Expulsion

Great story. I love the character development.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2019 2:16 AM Title: Moving Out Pt. 2

I am gonna keep this review short as this chapters portrayed a very unexpected route and I am now more curious than ever to know how things are going to play out.

I felt Megan change of heart was too fast. I understand she is not like Alexis but she had her power trips and was thrilled with the goddess treatment, even dreaming of being a giantess destroying everything in ch. 21 (if I am not mistaken). I just think it was too easy for Ivan, a complete stranger, to do all that in two chapters when we know Megan was much less understanding with her last boyfriend and Max.

Yes, they resisted. Ivan didn't. But resisting is part of the thrill, part of the power trip is it not? I guess the biggest question of these two chapters is "why?" Why the sudden change? Why Megan treated Ivan with so much more care than she displayed with her last boyfriend and Max? Max pratically begged for her to stop in some chapters and, although moved (sometimes) Megan didn't seem to care enough as to sacrifice her fun time. The same can be said of the boyfriend in the memories chapter.

PLEASE, DO NOT GET ME WRONG! THE TWO CHAPTERS WERE GREAT AND I CAN UNDERSTAND MEGAN'S CHANGE. IT WAS JUST AN UNEXPECTED TURN OF EVENTS AS I ALWAYS UNDERSTOOD SHE CARRIED A LOT FOR HER BROTHER AND I AM REALLY GLAD TO SEE HER ACTUALLY CRY FOR MAX SAKE, BUT SEEM TO HAVE MISJUDGED HER CHARACTER MOTIVATIONS.

AND I AGREE WITH EVERYONE: YOUR WRITING IS THE BEST AND I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WERE YOU WILL TAKE THE STORY NEXT.

EVERYONE CAN SEE YOU HAVE PUT YOUR HEART INTO BUILDING YOUR CHARACTERS. AS ALWAYS, THANK YOU AND PLEASE KEEP UP THE MARVELOUS WORK :)

PS. I still have to read the spin off. I will read it for sure, but I prefer to wait for the end of the main story. One emotional rollercoaster at a time kkkkkkkk

PS 2: Actually had to rewrite this review twice! Mixed feelings as Megan is also my favorite character but her cycle is aparently coming to a close XDD

 

Author's Response: Hello again! Thanks so much for another detailed review! You can see in a comment response that I posted just below this, my explanation for exactly why Megan made the change. And to your point, Ivan’s response was a huge part of why this change happened the way it did. He was broken, he didn’t fight back and he took a lot of the thrill out of it for her. He’s crushed spirit cut past her desire to play with a tiny and revealed her innate desire to be a decent caring human being. The boyfriend, he was scared and resisted. That thrills Megan but deep down she knows that he has an ass fetish so she has no reason to pity him. Ivan in the other hand offered no joy from being toyed with. Hopefully this helps to explain the change of heart. I admit that those chapters were a struggle for me to get across all the inner feelings that I wanted to portray. I appreciate the feedback as this helps me see that I need to improve my ability to write down more details of my characters inner conflicts, since the reader can’t see what is inside my mind. As always thank you so much for reading and helping me to improve!

Reviewer: Chanbon79 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2019 5:46 PM Title: Moving Out Pt. 2

Man, i´m from Argentina (sorry in advance for bad english).  It happens that I study to be a profesor of literature. Your characters building is just amazing. Why Meg suddenly change her mind? I undestand your doubts about how to show the understanding of her acts.

 

I say again thank you for this amazing story, so full and deep. 

I just can hope that the new chapter will come soon.

 

And again ( I won´t get tired)

 

Thank you very much!!!!

(really) this is good reading.

 

Author's Response: Hello! Thanks for leaving a review! I guess I’m my mind, Meg’s change of heart was brought on by a few factors. First, she really does love her brother. Sure she likes to torment him a bit, but deep down she loves him. Now when she begins to understand what a vile person Alexis is, she becomes more and more concerned for the well being of her brother. She begins to fear that he is in mortal danger, and it is her fault for putting him in that situation. Now as for why she treated Ivan so much better than she had planned, is because she was beginning to fear that she was the same sort of monster that Alexis was. This drove her to overcome her inner desires. Thank you so much for reading! I hope you stick around for the finale!

Reviewer: Recoveringlurker Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2019 7:47 AM Title: Smelling Salts

Great story. Glad to see Megan step up to the plate for Max. I like dominating but at the same time I want Alexis to get punished and Ashley to repent for her recent actions.

Author's Response:

I'm glad to see that people were happy to see Megan take a stand. She's secretly my favorite character haha.

 

Thanks so much for reading and I appreciate the review! Stay tuned!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2019 7:41 PM Title: A Savior Appears

YES! YES!! YES!!! BOTH CHAPTERS (32-33) DESERVE 10 OUT OF 10!!! 

As I said in past comments, I had the feeling you were cooking something big related to the sisters. Their relationship with Max, in my opinion, always was (and is) the main driving force of the story. Not Ashley x Alexis, but Ashley x Max x Megan, Alexis just playing the role of a catalyst in the barrel of gunpowder that was Max's house prior to her arrival. And I think only half of the barrel exploded.

On ch. 32, Ashley is hell bent on making Max admit that he loves her (third lesson), but she is not sattisfied with words, she steps up to the next level and in this chapter (33) openly admits he is hers and only hers. I've seen someone asking what would Alexis have done if Max had choosen to go with Megan, and my guess is: she would have gone for another tiny, but that wouldn't be the same experience for Ashley as it was made abundantly clear that, whyle Alexis enjoyed whatching Ashley torture Max (she is a sadist and a voyeur), the one getting trilled with having Max all to herself was none other than Ashley.  

Than there is Megan, who right after getting what she wanted (a tiny to worship her as a goddess), came right back trying to take Max with her. Why? For the same reason as Ashley - you can have sex with any tiny, that won't mean a damn thing without the feeling, and she has feelings for Max. That is why I think she is able to conciliate the fact that she doesn't care about having other tinies suffer for her pleasure, while also deeply carring for Max. In her eyes, as well in the eyes of Ashley, theri is the tinies, the people like her and there is Max.

Right now the roles are reversed, but we can't forget she paired up with Alexis at the begining. I doubt Ashley will let it slip as she is desperate to find some justification to run from reality. I think the fight will just escalate from here.

You even titled the chapter "savior" BUT, I think there is more to it then meets the eye. Megan is not strictly speaking a savior. And it's not because of the barista (I am not in the barista team kkk), but because Megan motivations are the same as Ashley. She loves Max and wants to have him all to herself. Thats the main reason she came live with Ashley (she doesn't want to be without Max, even if she has a boyfriend or a slave that worshps her everyday) and now her chance is here! She saves him and becomes the good sister, the goddess he puts up in a pedestal. She doesn't have anywhere to go? But she has! Don't they have a mother? Yes, she will bring him back to where he can be only hers.

The problem? The tiny slave and the barista. In my opinion he will scape, taking advantage that both sisters are just too flustered over their brother condition, and call for help as Max sinks into madness. This help will be Liz, who will get just in time to unmask Alexis that gets arrested or kicked out for good (I would love to see Megan kick her ass). That part settled, the conflict is not over. Far from it.

Seeing Max condition, Liz or even Dr. Tailford might suggest he be taken to a RP community for treatment. That is the main conflict I think will develop in this final arc as everyone will have to face their true feelings and motivations. As I said in another comment, neither sisters will want to hand Max over, and a battle will issue for the broken heart and mind of Max. How, if it's obviously Megan and Ashley won't let Liz near Max and she is a tiny? The University. Ashley is Max legal guardian and has to maintain a facade of normallity. To the rest of the world, she and Megan still just Max sisters.

Then there is Max, who is obviously attracted to his sisters but lives in conflict and denial. Part of his growth has to pass through this question: does he love his sisters only as sisters or there is more... man! this could even be left open in the final for a second part of the main story!

There is another possibility, as I don't think Alexis will fall without a fight. Both sisters made a ton of ilegal things, be it with Max or the tiny she gave to Megan. It would be just like Alexis to have recorded all Ashley adventures with Max. As for Megan, she just picks her tiny back and he is a living withness that will be willing to testify against her. But wouldn't he testify against Alexis too? No, either because he is more scared from her or because, different form Megan, Alexis doesn't have a history and would be more difficult to process. That is when Liz comes in, willing to help the sisters for Max sake.

I don't know if you already finished writing the end, but I would love to see a showdown between Ashley, Megan and Liz over Max, which would have to make his choice. If it isn't possible now, maybe in a sequel? A part 2? I think these conflicted feelings within Max (who also fells atraction for Megan and Ashley, it's undeniable) and his sisters are just too interesting and complex to resolve in a chapter or two.

 

You have writen a master piece!! It has all, emotional turmoil, the sexual parts play a crutial role into understanding the characters (you can't just skip them) and, most important, the characters!! You made me love them, than hate and then love again. You got people invested! Congratulations!! I haven't had so much fun with a story in quite some time. If just everybody could keep this level of quality while also updating daily! I sure can't! You have a talent! As always, thank you and, please, keep up the marvelous work :DD

 

Author's Response:

Once again thank you for the passionate review. It is very heartwarming for me to know that someone has enjoyed my work so very much, especially since this is my first attempt at doing this. 

 

As with your last couple reviews, I am going to avoid dropping spoilers because we are getting very close to the end and I would prefer that everyone get to see how things unfold organically. However there is one point that I want to make regarding the legality of using an RP as a plaything, and I cant remeber at the minute if I included this fact in this story, or if it got put into the spinoff "Losing Control - Escape From Tailford Manor." At this current point in time the laws surrounding shrunken persons are very vague, with certain groups of people trying to convinve the government not to provide special treatment for RP's. It is for this reason that Alexis is so confident that she will never see any punishment for the things she does, and it's also why she wants to go into politics, so that she can work to strip all rights away from shrunken people. Basically this is my way of explaining the police not getting involved with all these abducted people.

 

As always, thank you so much for the fantastic reviews and for supporting the story so wholeheartedly. I hope that the story gets wrapped up in a manor that feels satisfying. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Schroedinger Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2019 8:09 PM Title: Sore Loser

I am so glad you said thing would be getting better from here. I was starting to have a hard time reading this. And I know you hear this a lot, but I just have to say it. This is one of the best stories on this website. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

I know things had gotten a bit dark for Max, but I hope that the last couple chapters have renewed your spirit and made it easier to enjoy!

 

Thanks so much for reading and thge continued support!

Reviewer: DinoViper Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2019 4:42 PM Title: Smelling Salts

This is honestly one of the best stories ive read. You are such a great author! I am exited to see how the ending will turn out for Max!

Perhaps for one of your next stories (if you plan to write more) we could have some tiny girl action? I really enjoy those types of stories.

Again, you are an amazing author and you should keep doing what you're doing!

Author's Response:

I definitely plan on wrting more once this story is finished, and I can absolutely write a F/f type story. Keep an eye out for anything new on my page!

 

Thanks for reading and I'm thrilled that you've enjoyed it so far!