Just a quick addition to my last comment: Shannon is walking around full of chemicals and something is bound to happen. Maybe she will accidentally shrink down herself while having Chris on her body (or protagonist will end up in micro-verse allright XDD) or someone will end up growing… just some ideas. Oh I can’t wait to see!

These Shannon chapters are getting better. At the beginning of this story, I hated her, but she actually makes herself quite an interesting villain. Of course, if she was hot, it would cause me to have difficulty choosing whether to root for Shannon or the good guys which is everyone else.

I like how Shannon is basically using her body to have her way with all the men she meets in this chapter. Whether it’s sex or flashing some guy, she gets more perks to help her move out of the country.

This new super absorbent pouch panty seems interesting. I like how Ray is sewn inside the actual panties. He can’t even see anything. He is just a Maxi pad basically, ready to absorb and smell her juices.

One thing I don’t think is clever is Shannon’s plan to frame Sue Ann. It seems very silly. Putting Chris’s clothes in her room? She put a “trail” that leads to her house? What trail? Chris’s favorite snack crumbs? Lol. It wasn’t specified. Also, when she told the landlord woman that Sue Ann was stalking her, I facepalmed. Why would Sue Ann stalk Shannon if Sue Ann kidnapped Chris? Wouldn’t Sue Ann be avoiding Shannon instead?

The fact that Shannon disappeared and Chris is missing will connect both of them together since Chris’s parents left Shannon in charge. So the police would look into Chris’s house. Then they would probably ask neighbors and such so Rachel and Mrs. Carson would help frame Shannon. No one else knows about Chris besides them and Sue Ann.

Is Sue Ann dead, or just paralyzed? Does the effect wear off? Also, if Sue Ann can get back up, she will look for Chris inside the closet and find the clothes of Chris in there, and deal with it appropriately. So Shannon’s trap won’t work if Sue Ann could just remove it.

With the info given, Shannon’s “clever” plan doesn’t seem so clever at all... unless I’m missing something.

Well, I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: First, I want to address the elephant in the room: Shannon’s plan. You’re not missing anything; Shannon’s plan isn’t “clever” at all, and that’s the whole point. She’s not thinking clearly she’s making it up as she goes, basically fumbling through things. She’s so blinded by her ambition and her love for Chris that she can’t see the mistakes she’s making, and when you see how everything ends you’ll understand.

I really wanted to explore Shannon using her body to get her way in this chapter. It explores her manipulative nature. I wasn’t sure how much Giantess/tiny man interactions would be in this chapter, so I added the bed scene with Shannon and the salesman. I’d actually think it’d be funny for Shannon to have sex while a tiny man was trapped inside her. Plus, I’m a fan of a woman who likes to tease her man in bed.

Now, just to settle your mind, Sue Ann is just fine, only knocked out for a while. I did extensive research on which drug could get the job done without doing any kind of permanent damage, so relax. Sue Ann is crucial for the ending of the story, as are Rachel, Noreen, and Janet Carson.

A lot of things happened this chapter, but I'm glad we got more fun size interactions with Sue Ann. Based on your last review response, I think you're doing an excellent job with the role you want for her, where she isn't intentionally stimulating Chris or is even aware of it, but intentions still don't exactly matter in the end.

Personally, I would have enjoyed it if she let him do something a tad more risky, like sleeping near/on her feet. But from how Sue Ann is personality wise, it wouldn't have really felt in character. But I think doing a alternate chapter (or set of chapters) where Sue Ann allows Chris to live out his fantasies with her would be quite enjoyable to read. I'm not sure what your plan is yet for the next alternate chapter, bit I think a Sue Ann focus would be a great idea.

But I think you did a great job with the relationship between Rachel and Chris, and I could see her wanting him to shrink more frequently in their real life too.

And I'm probably still in the minority where I do not like Shannon, but I guess that means you wrote a good antagonist. So I hope Chris is just having a nightmare with the ending of the chapter.

If you have no interest in exploring any alternate stuff with Sue Ann and Chris, then I'd be willing to write and give it a shot. If you don't mind and don't already have plans for it.

Looking forward to the next chapter and what ever alternate stuff you have planned next!

I sense a lot of foreshadowing in this chapter. And you did a great job showcasing how prompt Rachel is to swing moods in these last two chapters. First she is worried and sad for what happened to Chris, than she is playful and happy but also clueless about how dangerous she can be to him and also gets angry if someone calls her out. Question: what would have happened if an authority figure (Sue Ann) wasn't around? I think she would eventually get carried away and hurt Chris unnintentionaly. Can't wait to see more of this love story XDD

Speaking of Sue Ann, I must say I wasn't all that invested in her character, but you made it impossible not to like her. She is the only character so far to take care of Chris without asking or getting anything in exchange. She just want to help someone she trully cares about. It's just sweet. And the fact she does not display any sexual desire towards Chris is very good for his own development in the story, because he has to step up, take the lead and open up to her.

You have handled the story extremely well so far. And what a cliffhanger!! Now I am gonna update daily waiting for the next chapter! Hope you are happy!! XDD

But, seriously, It seems we have entered the final arc of Chris, Shannon, Rachel and Sue Ann tale. Thank you. I can't wait to see the next chapter :)

Whoops, forgot to give a review after reading it the other day.

I agree, this was a long chapter. You won’t hear me say this often, but I found the Shannon bit to be the most interesting part of this chapter. Loved the way she kept Ray in her ass the whole time.

Even the dialogue this chapter was spot on. I couldn’t help but get excited about Shannon foreseeing the future and imagining taking care of Ray while he takes care of her needs. The way she worded it made it more amazing.

If she going to let the salesman fuck her in the ass with Ray inside her butt? That’s fucked up but hot at the same time. She is the only giantess in this story to actually have a scene like this.

Then the bulk of this chapter was dedicated to Sue and Rachel, but mostly Rachel. She tried to remain calm, but kept worrying about every little detail. I thought she was going to faint multiple times this chapter, I mean relax girl. What happened in the past is in the past. I don’t know how Sue Ann and Chris dealt with her. She almost reached the annoying category when she reacted to Chris started sharing his memories with her.

Then at the end we have some Rachel foot play which I know someone was looking forward to this. I had to smile because I knew it was going to happen soon once Rachel was aware of Chris.

However, at the very end Chris is growing again. Now I think he might be growing too fast, haha! Remember when I would complain that you were keeping Chris too small for too long? (It was a long time, to be honest.) Well, now I keep forgetting how big he is and I think I lost track. Is he 1 foot tall now? Or is he the popular 6 inch dildo size?

Also, will Chris have more adventures with Mrs. Carson, or Noreen again? If not, that’s ok, there is at least Sue Ann so hopefully they can have some fun together.

Anyway, glad to see another chapter and I can’t wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Yes, I was actually wondering if you were going to write a review or not.

I had actually debated whether or not to include the Shannon update in this chapter, or wait until later. I figured since readers were curious as to what she’s been up to the whole time, it was best to check back in with her. I wanted something sexy to happen as I was wondering if the rest of the chapter would have anything juicy, so I figured Ray stuck in her ass would suffice.
Now, if you recall, Shannon told the salesman “only through the front door”, it was meant as an innuendo for “NO butt sex”; Of course, she WAS still planning on leaving Ray stuck in her ass while she screwed the sales guy, so...

I knew the bulk of this chapter would be dialogue driven, exploring Rachel finding out about Chris, coming to terms with his situation, and developing their relationship, I just didn’t realize how long it was going to be. I really needed the transitions and emotions to feel natural and not forced. Remember, Rachel’s not only been worried about Chris, but she finds out that he’s actually been shrunk, something up until now she thought impossible, so it’d definitely be a shock! You must also remember that “he hadn’t told her about the pool incident”— I apparently left out that he hadn’t told Rachel everything—so he’s left out some important details in his story. And although Rachel develops real feelings for him, I wanted her to interact with Chris and show her playful, teasing side.

As far as Chris’s current size, he’s still only 1/2 an inch tall, until he grows at the end of the chapter. How big will he be now? You’ll just have to wait and see.

As far as Mrs. Carson and Noreen...well, once again, you’ll just have to wait and see.

Chris and Rachel fun time fells lighthearted and natural as it should be. Overall, a great interaction chapter. Both are starting to admit there feelings and Rachel seems honnestly elated to find out Chris likes her feet. I can only pray that someday I will write scenes as good as you do.

I would say the only sad thing is that Chris is growing again, but it's obvious things aren't going to be that simple for him, especially now that Rachel and Sue Ann are finally taking a more central role in the story.

Thank you for the chapter! Can't wait to see how Chris and Rachel will end up when the story reaches the climax XDD

Hmm. Sue Ann and Rachel are aware of the tiny Chris.

Personally, I think it’s too soon to let Rachel see Chris. Sue Ann just noticed Chris at the beginning of this chapter and it would’ve been nice that she gets some alone time with Chris while everyone doesn’t know his situation.

I agree with Chris, that she didn’t have to answer the phone while Chris was hanging onto her nipple. Maybe, she is just used to answering phone calls. She prioritized a phone call over helping Chris. Lol.

I love how you had Rachel react to Chris before and after meeting him. The way she was super eager to see Chris, unaware of his condition shows that she is ready to see him no matter what. I love how you had her show up at the door unannounced. Her character is the rebellious teen and she disobeys all the adults in this story.

Sue Ann could’ve also used a video to send it to Rachel so Rachel could calm down. Is FaceTime in this universe? Clearly Rachel got what she wanted by manipulating Sue Ann to let her see Chris.

If it was this easy for Sue Ann to slip up, imagine Rachel, whose mother can easily tell when she is upset or excited. You already know Mrs. Carson is going to see the look on Rachel’s face and see what’s up.

So, did Rachel just walk all the way to Sue Ann’s house? Did she ask her mom for permission? I’m also guessing Sue Ann’s Place isn’t that far since Rachel just showed up there and she is too young to drive. It’s interesting because earlier Sue Ann said she was too far to spy on Shannon and that’s why she asked Rachel to help. So, I think we need clarification on the location of Sue Ann’s house to Shannon’s.

After reading numerous chapters of unaware, it almost seems off to have not just one, but 2 giantesses be aware of Chris. Something is abound to happen. Maybe Rachel gets overprotective and Sue Ann finds it dangerous. Also, with 2 giantesses, means Chris is twice as likely to have some “accidents” going on with either of them. But either way, now you can try all the aware stuff that you have been waiting to write about.

Sue Ann could bake a cake. She puts Chris on top of it when it’s finished and Chris starts eating. Then Rachel walks in the kitchen and takes a piece of cake with Chris on it. Sue Ann turns toward Rachel to say hi, and noticed Chris is missing from the cake and connects the dots. Rachel is about to eat Chris when Sue Ann stops her. I could see some playful ideas show up.

It’s hard to imagine something sexual when both ladies are there. One has to be separated. I think Rachel has to leave so her mother doesn’t wonder why she is gone for so long. Then Sue Ann could have her fun. After all Chris wants to be alone with Sue Ann. While, he likes Rachel, I’m sure he wants to be with the woman who he fell in love with.

Well, this chapter is very different from the rest since we are moving from unaware to aware. I like aware so this is a great change of pace. Very unexpected though so I appreciate the surprise. I can’t wait for the next chapter!

(Also, congrats on 150 reviews!)

Author's Response: To begin, I’d been debating for a long time whether I not wanted Rachel to know about Chris. I ultimately decided for her to find out because I wanted their relationship to grow an evolve. I also wanted her reactions to seeing him small to seem realistic, and for her quirks to come out moving forward.
If you recall, Rachel walked to a park earlier in the story. Not long after, Sue Ann walked up. I mentioned that Sue lived nearby and would occasionally do work in the park to enjoy nice days, so it’s not inconceivable for Rachel to be able to walk to Sue Ann’s place, as they both know each other.
To be honest, I kind of thought up the whole “phone incident” on the fly. I needed to have some kind of sexy interaction between the two of them in this chapter; I felt it fit well.
Now, moving forward, keep in mind that Chris has feelings for both girls, and each one cares about him in different ways. There might be some playful aspects, but he’s still a teenager, so is Rachel, and although hormones might be raging, they’r still young and innocent. Don’t worry, though, Chris will have his moments with both girls.
I really hope you like where the story is heading; I’m also pleased that you posted review 150!

Yeeeeeessssss I’ve been waiting like a year and a half for Sue Ann to find Chris

Author's Response: Yes, a lot of readers have been waiting for this. I knew Sue Ann was always going to find him, but I couldn’t decide how it would actually come to fruition. I ultimately decided on having Chris end up in her house to leave the door open for some gentle encounters, so I certainly hope you enjoy the next chapters with Sue Ann.

Wow! I didn’t think it would be possible, but this is now my favorite chapter in all of giantess world! Now I have to change my reason for favoriting this story. It’s not just the consistent torment of giantesses on Chris, but now it’s this chapter. This is the chapter that will be remembered for years to come.

My previous favorite chapter held the top spot for over 2 years and now this chapter just topped it. It was phenomenal! I think it was worth the wait. I kinda forgot about this story, haha, so I didn’t worry about when you were going to post next. I remember faintly you said that this Labor Day weekend you will post, and look at you, posting at the beginning of it.

Where could I see a part 2? Haha! I would love to see Mrs. Carson do yoga with Chris inside her. But I’m glad you at least had Janet mention it, making Chris squirm in fear. Loved it!

It’s crazy because, I made the suggestion for this exactly 1 year ago! (Off by a few days, but basically a year.) This is well worth it since during this time, we had enough time to flesh out the characters, especially for Mrs. Carson.

Now I truly understand why you wanted me to pay attention to Mrs. Carson for the past 2 chapters. I never even thought about Chris actually being under her that time those past chapter, now this chapter felt like a behind the scenes moment. Like “hey, do you remember those Mrs Carson scenes? Well, Chris was actually being used for her pleasure here.” You were planning this for a while now, weren’t you? Haha! Thank you.

Also, we can’t forget about the length of this chapter! It was basically more than double what you usually write! I even had to take breaks during the chapter since I was already working up a sweat reading this, haha. I felt just like Mrs. Carson, getting turned on by such an erotic tale. I mean, I’m reading and it’s super sexy. Then 15 minutes later, I’m reading another sexy scene! It was a never-ending thrill ride, and I’m glad I am able to read it now despite waiting for all those months, haha. But it’s all worth it once it’s here.

After all these chapters without Chris growing much, it felt weird to see him grow so fast. I mean, he was already about 9 inches long by the time Janet went to her master bedroom. That reminds me, Chris is 9 inches tall and Mrs. Carson’s pussy still swallowed him up whole. Either she has a monster pussy, or her vagina is super tight right now with Chris wedged up in there. That’s just extremely sexy. Not to mention the fact that he is still growing so he might actually fill her up like her giant 12 inch dildo.

Also, you used the dialogue perfectly in this chapter! The way Mrs. Carson went from shocked to horny was nice! And the last few paragraphs when she talked to him while he was inside her was super erotic! I loved how she mentioned that she will keep him in her room to keep him safe and also that she will take “good care of him” and lastly mentioning how he may feel while she does yoga with him inside her.

Wow, I’m so jealous of Chris right now. I know this is an alternate chapter, but if this is the spark to another story, it would be great to see Mrs. Carson have her way with a tiny as her own pleasure pet. It could easily be a story on its own. Who knows, maybe Shannon accidentally shrinks a local neighbor called “Tom” and Tom somehow winds up in Mrs. Carson’s house. Hehe.

Thank you for this gift of an amazing chapter! I can’t wait for the next one!

Author's Response: I’m glad you enjoyed it; I just took your idea and ran with it. I liked the whole erotic novel aspect along with the giantess orgasm with Chris under her, so that’s what I focused on. I knew it was going to be a big chapter, and I had to have everything flow smoothly with lots of details, but I still wasn’t expecting it to be as long as it was. I know it might be weird to see Chris growing so fast, but there is a reason. I won’t spoil it, but it’s very subtle; Check out the times that Chris grows in this alternate chapter, and then read the last chapter of the main story to see how and when Chris grows. That should give you a clue as to the triggers. Thanks for all your suggestions!

Whoa! Now this is what I’m talking about! We actually have a person aware of Chris? And Chris actually grew, not once but twice?

It finally makes sense. The shrinking potion kept him shrunk for a while, but once it starts leaving his system, he starts growing fast. Personally, I would have preferred that Chris grew gradually so we can spend lots of time at each size, but I’m ok with this as long as we get someone to play with Chris at the fun sizes: 3 inches, 6 inches, maybe 1 ft or 2ft. Soon, Chris can actually be a viable toy for these ladies.

So Chris went from 1/8 inch to 1/4 inch and now I’m guessing 1/2 inch? It’s double each time, right? Or did he super grow this time to 1 inch or something? I think once Chris reaches 1 inch tall, the real fun begins.

So Sue Ann finds him. Funny how the only people who have seen Chris being tiny are the babysitters, the ones whose job is to take care of someone that is not dependent. And Chris needs all the help he can get.

Hmm. 1/4 inch is like ant size. I’m thinking ant man. Now 1/2 inch size is like the length of a single staple. Now thinking about it, how does Sue Ann even recognize a face that tiny. I mean, if the whole body is 1/2 inch tall, the head is like 1/8 inch tall. Maybe she guessed? I think Chris’s face is too small to be recognized.

So Rachel is in Chris’s home. Shannon left, but the big question is what about her boyfriend? I have to predict that she took him with her rather than keep him alone in the house. So Shannon has taken his car, his shrinking formula and also his little body all for herself. She controls his life, kinda erotic. Now let’s say he is in the house still. mean, imagine Rachel finds that guy? That would be awkward.

Maybe Rachel thinks the guy is Chris and takes him to her house. She goes to her room, ignores her mom and closes her door. She uses a magnifying glass, because kids would use something like that and then she sees that it’s not Chris. Rachel screams in fright, Mrs. Carson shows up and Rachel points at the tiny guy on her bed to which Mrs. Carson rushes over and grabs the little man who squirms in her grip. She tells Rachel that she will handle this and Mrs. Carson leaves the room with the little man in hand. Rachel meanwhile cries, wondering if the same fate happened to Chris. She cries herself to sleep, which lets Mrs. Carson be alone with the tiny man. She takes him to her bedroom, drops him on her bed in her master bedroom (aka the sex dungeon) and accuses him of being a pervert and spying on her daughter. The man explains his side, but Mrs. Carson isn’t having it. She thinks of a way to punish him, and remembers the erotic tale that she was just reading about before Rachel screamed. Mrs. Carson seductively says, “I know what you want” and he watches as Mrs. Carson lowers her right hand to the front of her yoga pants and begins caressing it. Almost immediately, a wet spot forms and is visible to the tiny man and Mrs. Carson could feel it. She closes her eyes and lets out a little moan. The tiny man sees Janet’s eyes close and decides its time to escape. He takes off as runs to the side of her bed, as fast as his little legs can carry him. After a few moans, Mrs. Carson opens her eyes and spots the tiny man attempting to escape. She takes her free hand and grabs the guy with one swift movement while her right hand is still rubbing her crotch. She looks down at him and says “I think it’s story time, what do you think?” and she giggles, not even waiting for a response. She heads into the living room and sits on her favorite chair, eager to continue reading her ongoing story. She picks up her book and reads aloud “and the giantess got turned on by the thought of keeping a tiny slave at her will, ready to use him for her pleasures for the rest of his days. The man screams in fright as the giantess kisses her tiny captive and drags him down her body, from her lips, through her cleavage, across her belly and stops at her pussy.” Mrs. Carson pauses and looks down at the tiny man in her hand who is shaking his head as fast as he can. Janet smiles in response, almost like a smirk knowing that she is role playing one of her fantasies. She puts the book down and takes the waistband of her panties and yoga pants, letting her musky fragrance spread and find the nose of the young man to give him a sample of her essence leaving him trembling in fear. She takes the struggling tiny man and lowers him into her panties and lets her clothing snap back into place securing the tiny man against her. Janet picks up the book and continues reading aloud so her new toy could listen. “She tells her slave that this is his new home now and he must bring her an orgasm or else she would kill him. The slave quickly began using his tiny arms to rub the giantess but she had another idea. Without saying a word, the giantess pressed the tiny’s body from the back and without any resistance, he slid right into her pussy, her vaginal lips closing the gap behind him.” Mrs. Carson, who was ready to follow the main character’s actions presses onto her own little man’s body and he too slid easily into her. Janet wanted to read more, but she was already living through her own story and her body felt it too. She never felt this way in so many years that she felt that she might have an orgasm right there on the spot. But then she composed herself. This wasn’t just about her having fun, but also to punish this man who was shrunken inside her daughter’s room. Mrs. Carson wanted this moment to last. A quick orgasm would be too easy of a punishment. No, instead she is going to keep him inside her pussy as long as she can. And when she is ready, Mrs. Carson will create the most powerful orgasm than she has ever experienced and give this man a true taste of her sexual nature.

I was going to type more about this chapter, but once again, I couldn’t resist and wrote another fan fiction.

Haha, I hope you enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the next chapter! (I also hope you change your mind and post before Labor Day.)

Author's Response: I’ll say this, TomSpeedy, you and the other readers sure do think up some creative scenarios. I can’t guarantee that they’ll all be used, but I guess in the alternate chapters, I can let loose and have a little fun 😅. I’m actively working on the “surprise”, and I’ve set a goal of Labor Day to have it all finished. However, if I get it done any sooner, I’ll post it as soon as I can.