[Report This]Date: December 23 2019 5:50 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
Great story! In addition to the epilogue, I expect a full 500-chapter story from the alternate Chapter 10 within the next two weeks. Thanks!
Author's Response: Truth be told, I really like the thought of Chris and Rachel, too. I don’t mind having something going on between two young teenagers of the same age, I just feel a little uncomfortable writing intimate encounters involving characters that young. I’m not saying that I won’t use young characters, but I normally careful about how far I take things. That being said, I’m glad you enjoyed that chapter, but if I had to do over again I probably would’ve made Chris and Rachel a little older.
[Report This]Date: December 23 2019 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 59
This was a great chapter. Loved the description of micro Chris and what he went through. Maybe for. Spin off idea Rachel lies about not finding Shannon then when no one is around uses what’s left of the shrinking formula to make her micro like Chris and the crush her with her butt. Overall really good and can’t wait to see some spin offs :D
Author's Response: I’m glad you liked it. At first, I wasn’t planning on doing much detail about the micro world, but I knew that you and several other readers have been asking for a Micro Chris interaction, so I figured I needed to add at least some. I don’t currently have any plans for a spin-off, but the epilogue May leave the door open in the future should I desire it. Thanks for reading, and for ALL your reviews!
[Report This]Date: December 23 2019 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 59
I think it's a nice conclusion to this story.
Thank you for the ride you took us on. It was a blast, with many unexpected turns.
The only thing is that I think these characters are so well set up, that I hope we will see them again sometime, in another story or some extra epilogue perhaps?
Thanks for writing and until next time!
Author's Response: Well, as I said in the story summery, I may have written a story with these characters, but I didn’t create them. When I found the story on Writing.com, I thought I could develop the intended story a little better, but obviously I couldn’t do it there, so I decided to post it here and it just sorta took off. I’d like to develop my own characters; it’s something my readers have said I need to work on.
[Report This]Date: December 23 2019 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 59
Definitely a good way to conclude this story. I look forward to the epilogue next and see where everyone is at with their lives.
I do want to talk about my thoughts on Shannon as a character but I'll wait until the epilogue is up.
Author's Response: So, about the epilogue: it was always meant to be the true end to the story, but not EVERY character will be in it. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: December 23 2019 11:44 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
What A Wonderful End to the Story! I've been reading since the Beginning and I've loved every chapter.
Well done man! Hope for some more gentle based stories from you! Really l looking forward to that epilogue!
Merry Christmas Mate! And a Happy New Year!
Ps. I've been wanting to do some writing of my own. Dont suppose you have some good tips for a first time writer?
Author's Response: Thank you for your readership. As for advice, I would suggest starting with short stories, then listening to reader feedback as far as how to proceed. Obviously, take all comments in stride, but write what you like. One last piece of advice: always make sure to check your grammar!
Date: December 13 2019 12:26 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
If the durability of nose end elbow compensates each other and shrunken size then its a question of force still? Does the shrunken condition also increases the strenght of the body proportional to the increased durability? If so then shrunken Chris, Sue Ann, Shannon and Ray should be as strong as an Ant in compare to the size or something, if not Shannon´s nose and Sue Ann´s elbow should simply be so solid that both are unable to cause each other any harm.
Author's Response: Well, obviously I wouldn’t pick apart every detail, as then we’d have to discuss the realities of a person actually shrinking. Let’s just call it a question of force: the force and density of the elbow was able to overcome the increased strength and density of the nose. Think “Ant Man”: when he punches, the force of his punch applied over such a small area means his punch is like a bullet. When he and Yellow Jacket fought, they certainly could hurt each other.
Date: December 12 2019 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 57
As fun as the fight is between the two shrunken women, how is that possible now? Earlier its stated that with reduced size the durability of the body increases so that a tiny can even survive being squeezed under a toe or an asscheek but now a tiny elbow can hurt a tiny nose?
Author's Response: This is actually a really interesting question, and I’d like to take a moment to explain my reasoning. Now, considering the most popular trope of how a person shrinks, where “The space between the molecules shrinks”, barring any problems with the physics of possibility, this would increase a person’s density, which would in turn make their bodies more durable and harder to break. However, this doesn’t make the person invincible, as I’ve shown with Ray being squished. So, why did Chris survive being stepped on, but Ray did not?
Consider this example: you are lying in the middle of a football field at the 50 yard line, and a huge piece of paper over the top of you that spans end zone to end zone, and sideline to sideline. You would certainly notice a weight on your body but you could easily push the paper up and roll out from underneath it. Now let’s fill that paper in half and place you underneath the middle of it again, the pressure would be increased, but you probably still be fine. However, the more the paper is folded, the more pressure you’d feel. Eventually it will get hard to breathe, hard to move, and it might actually be heavy enough to crush you. The paper’s weight hasn’t changed, but the force it’s applying feels like it’s increased. In actuality, it hasn’t, but when the paper is unfolded, it’s weight is being distributed over a large area, and you’re only feeling the weight of what is actually in top of you. The more the paper is folded, the less area over which the force is applied. Each time Chris was stepped on, he ended up in the middle of a person’s sole, where the least amount of weight across the foot is applied. Ray, however, was under the ball of Shannon’s foot, where far more weight is applied—Enough, in my world, to crush him. However, each time Chris was stepped on, he wasn’t technically “unharmed”, though he certainly felt it. Basically, in my world, when a tiny person survives being stepped on or sat on, they are under a person’s fleshy sole, or on the cushion of a couch—or any soft surface that can help absorb and ease the immense pressure.
This leads me back to your question about the tiny fight between Sue Ann and Shannon. Despite Sue Ann being just as small, the density of her elbow increases in proportion to how much she shrinks, and when she applies that force over a small area (her elbow into Shannon’s nose) the increased density of Sue Ann’s elbow compensates for the increased density of Shannon’s nose.
Remember though, this is all fantasy and fiction. Sure, it’s my world, and the physics may not actually work out that way, but I’ll at least try to explain my reasoning(s). I hope that answers your questions.
[Report This]Date: December 11 2019 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 58
So... guess Chris is forever micro? I know I should be sad for him and I will be if he dies… but, at the same time I can’t help envying this boy unique experience a little kkk
For the ones that wish for a micro Chris x Giga Rachel moment like me, I wouldn’t worry too much. Remember how Mrs. Carlson exited by the backdoor on last chapter? And she cleaned some dust from her left foot (the same she stepped on Chris)? And how Rachel used the same backdoor to enter the house now? Yeah, I think the next chapter will be just… GIGANTIC 😉
I was surprised Sue Ann was so eager to grow back. I thought she would want to search for Chris since she was the only one capable of spotting him now. Oh well, not that I am complaining that we now have two goodsess in the room…
I am happy you dropped this short chapter and glad Noren hasn’t appeared. Not that you can’t use her. Maybe Mrs. Carlson can call out to Noren, telling her that no one is at the Martins house right now. Both ladies stop to talk while giving Shannon the foot hell she sought herself.
Will be visiting this site as much as I can until Christmas. Will also try to think something for the extra chapter about Shannon. Thank you for your hard work. I will be orphaned when this story reach the end T_T, but I also can’t wait for it. I am full of contradictions. Who isn't? kkkkk
Author's Response: Yes, the next chapter with be the aftermath of everything. I know exactly what’s going to happen, but getting everything to mesh and intermingle correctly is what I’m working on. I know some readers would have liked Sue Ann to stay small for a while, but being shrunk wasn’t exactly something she wanted to endure a lot of. Yes, it would have been easier for her to see Chris at that size, but where was she supposed to start looking, and how long do you think it would take to look everywhere at that size. Besides, she knows Chris isn’t doing well at his micro size, and knows he needs to be restored soon, so the tracker was her best and quickest option of locating him.
Now, bear in mind that this is my first foray into the micro interactions, so forgive me if it’s not up to snuff. I will do my best!
Date: December 08 2019 12:28 PM Title: Alternate Chapter 49–What if Mrs. Carson had found Chris?
Wow this chapter turns Janet into an airhead, finding the missing neighbour son in a reduced condition makes an assumption and judges him for it without listening. Not even concidering the fact that she did not notice him all the while before in that chair so he had to be much smaller before, not concidering how he could have climbed on the chair if she was not able to notice him as she sat down on it the first time.
How he managed to enter the house. I only can hope you altered Janet for this chapter only to explain how poor chris (who you seem to hate really, thinking that everytime he has luck once, he gets bad luck twice as compensation) Suddenly got dominated, tortured and abused by a the person in this story i showed the most degree of responsibility so far.
Author's Response: Yes, this chapter does make some assumptions and take some artistic license with Mrs. Carson to facilitate the overall plot, but it’s all in fun.
[Report This]Date: December 06 2019 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 57
Wow really great chapter. I can’t wait to see how it all ends. I hope for the most part it’s a happy ending. Was Shannon killed when she got stepped on? If so I was kinda hoping she would have met her end from Chris, Sue Ann, or Rachel. Regardless still a really good chapter.
Author's Response: You find out Shannon’s fate, as well as everyone else’s, in the final chapter. I’m sure you’ll like it.
Date: December 05 2019 9:21 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
I've Been following this story since the beginning. And I'm really hoping for a happy ending for Chris,Sue Ann and Rachel. I would prefer if chris was grown back to normal so he could be happy with Rachel.
Please dont let anything bad happen to the good Characters!!!!
Feel Free to punish shannon all you want though. Hehehe
This is my first ever review sorry if it sucks.
Author's Response: Well, first let me say: Congrats on your first review.
A happy ending is certainly one possibility, but so is a sad ending. I’m sure you’ll enjoy the ending I have planned; I’ve been waiting to write it for almost 2 years now.
[Report This]Date: December 05 2019 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 57
“fatal consequences”?? God! What a talent you have for cliffhangers!! I will cry a lot if Chris ends up killed by Rachel… and so will herself I think. More than that, at that size and the lack of air, he will certainly die if someone doesn’t find him and give the antidote! Congrats on your accurate description of Chris situation as a micro. I saw in a video that if shrinking was possible, the person wouldn’t be heard and would have a hard time breathing, eventually losing conscious and dying.
Can’t wait to see how Rachel will look like for him and her reactions when she realizes everything… grantted Chris has been stepped before, but, now everything human-sized must be pure torture for him – the smell, the sound of the voice… – and he is already weak…
About the chapter, the interaction between Chris and Sue Ann is simply marvelous, the way you describe the pleasure she felt of having Chris inside her… and the way she recognizes that Chris sacrificed his own safety for her sake… oh yeah. She might have said that she wasn’t interested in him when they were in her house… but I wonder about now. Have I ever said the triangle is my favorite geometric form? XDDD
Chris is obviously outside after Mrs. Carlson cleaned her left foot… Just, please, don’t make Noren get there before Rachel…
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My fan theory for the next chapter:
My guess is that Rachel will get there first, steps on micro Chris, trapping him, but won’t find Sue Ann, who is unconscious. She picks Shannon purse. Then Nooren gets there and asks what is going on. Rachel tries to lie her way out of the conversation. Noren sits on the chair and tell Rachel about all the strange things that are happening around Chris, her weird “dream” of him being little… Rachel opens up, desperate for any help finding Chris and Sue Ann. That’s when Noren fell something odd at her toes, as if someone was smacking her big toe… It’s Sue Ann, and she breaks the news Chris is microscopic. Both giantess worried, sit on the couch and spread their toes for Sue Ann inspect… She find the tiny speck right in the middle of Rachel’s ball… she has to pell him out of all the dirty and sweat… he doesn’t show any sign of life… they try the antidote, but that only grow him back a few inches, barely enough for him to be heard again… still, no reaction.
As for Rachel’s reaction to all that… meanwhile, Shannon tastes hell stuck beneath Mrs. Carlson.
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Please, almighty author, bless us with the next (possible final) chapter!!
PS. Sorry for any mistakes in the text. Blame the excitement XDDD
Author's Response: First off, I wasn’t initially planning on ending on a cliffhanger, the chapter just got a bit too long.
Secondly, I’ve stated in other reviews that I like to keep my stories as accurate and believable as possible....relatively speaking, of course. There have been requests to have Chris going to micro size, but that posed some speculation on what would really happen. I’ve also seen videos on YouTube saying why shrinking would be impossible, or what would happen if something really could shrink, so I added those aspects in.
To expand on that, a lot of story elements in these last two chapters actually came last minute: I always was planning on having Shannon shrink, but I’ve been debating on whether Sue Ann would shrink too. I also debated on Chris becoming microscopic. I ultimately decided on having everyone shrink, and Chris making a heroic leap to stop Shannon from shrinking Sue Ann helped blend resolve all the issues on how exactly to do it. And yes, it does pose an interesting thought as to how Sue Ann feels about him now.
As far as your fan theory, you’ll just have to wait for the next chapter to find out.
Date: November 26 2019 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 56
I can imagine of a alternative ending before chapter 56, where Shannon already got everything done with her luggage and it's already in her way to the airport and in between that time Chris try to escape again and that end up resulting in Shannon keeping Chris inside her panties now, while Sue Ann arrieve in Chris house Shannon is already in the airport waiting to enter her plane and when Sue Ann realise the Shannon is no longer in the house it's to late, the plane already takes off and Shannon sucess in her escape, and something extra that can happens ( junst in my own thoughts), while in the plane Chris end up stimulating Shannon's pussy and that's makes Shannon instinctively play around with Chris from outside her pants and ending up making him get shoved inside her pussy, and Shannon notice that the passenger that was sitting next to her (a really well looking man) notice her stimulating herself from outside her pants, he smiles and invite her to the plane bathroom, Shannon notice the outline of his hard boner on his pants while he takes off to the bathroom to wait for her, she thinks "why not" just because she got Chris already, it didn't mean she wouldn't enjoy some normal sized mans too, and with Chris inside her it would be extra pleasure and would also make Chris learn to behave more and accepts this is his life now and he'll have to learn to like it, beginning now, Shannon enter the bathroom the man is with his pants down and with a hard boner waiting for her she lower her pants and panties together, the man insert his dick in her moisty and wet pussy and both start to fuck in silence to not bring any attention from the outside passangers, the man unawared that a little person is inside that vagina while he vigorously fucks her, in the mean time Chris is enduring the whole situation of being shoved inner Shannon's vagina by this gigantic unaware dick until finally the unaware and unknow man and Shannon cames leaving Chris just a little space to breath while he swims in there, after that the man take off his dick from inside her and Shannon had to hold her pussy closed so Chris can no slide off her, they both clean up and dress up and the man exit first while Shannon waits just a little longer to exit too, she still can feel Chris inside her and that's good, she goes back to her sit.
(But anyway this is only my thoughts of for the extra "Bad ending" to makes Chris have no rights anymore then being only a sex toy to Shannon and she could do anything that she wanted with him and he would have to obey)
But I can't wait to see the next chapter of the story (probably the conclusion) and I also can't wait for a alternative "bad ending" where Shannon escapes with Chris.
Author's Response: It’d be a pretty unhappy ending for Chris, that’s for sure, but sometimes it pays to be bad.
Date: November 26 2019 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 56
Nice. I hope Sue Ann is bigger then Shannon after shrinking ends, but chris shrinks more as well, i also hope rachel finds them and gets Sue Ann and Chris to safety.
Author's Response: Well, they all got dosed, so anything is possible. Stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: November 25 2019 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 56
Well, well, well... Shannon tasting of her own venom. She maybe smaller than Sue Ann, but who am I kidding? We just care that Chris is back to micro size! :DD And with Ray out of the picture, no one can ever bring him back to normal.
I could never imagine this story ending anywhere else other than Chris house. The story started there and it’s the place everything will end. As for the fighting sequence, I love how clever you are with your characters. Sue Ann believing to be leading Shannon into a trap, Shannon fooling her rival and you using this opportunity to get both barefoot and our hero on the floor ;)
And we have one dead tiny. I am not surprised. Since the beginning Ray seemed disposable to me, just an instrument to get the story to the next phase. He died by the foot of the woman he loved. Pretty poetic for such a pathetic dude.
I think the showdown will continue between Norem (who will take her friend side under the condition of having access to the shrinking formula) vs. Mrs. Carlson (who will take Sue Ann side). Rachel, being the rebel she is, disobey Sue Ann instructions and hurry to the scene just to find everyone has ended up shrunk, even her mother. But, more importantly, Chris is nowhere to be found. With all the chaos, the boy was forgotten… Sue Ann remembers seeing Chris on Shannon face before she shrunk….. oh no….. Everyone rise their feet and check the sole… there is a little red stain on Shannon and Sue Ann soles… Yeah, I love imagining a devastated Sue Ann and an enraged Rachel without anyone to stop her.
Wait, scratch all that. I just realized Sue Ann will be naked on the next chapter! God! It’s half of the dream of chapter 53 coming true. Sue Ann is now a naked giantess from Chris perspective! Something tells me Rachel will not be happy and will crush the competition kkkkkkkkk
Need…to know… what… will happen next! Also, can’t thank you enough for the quick updates. Don’t know why, but I feel you are going to drop the last chapter on December 25 and be like “merry Christmas everyone” huehuehue
Author's Response: I’ve known that there would be an eventual showdown between Shannon and Sue Ann for some time now, and I also knew the confrontation would happen at Chris’s house just before Shannon leaves, I just hadn’t worked out all the details up until now. I ultimately decided on having BOTH Shannon and Sue Ann shrinking when Shannon tries to shrink her, and I’d wrestled with the idea of a “micro Chris” as well.
I obviously needed to have some kind of giantess interaction (this is a fetish’s story after all) and I figured Chris dodging two sets of bare feet while the giant women fought overhead would be perfect here, I just needed to get them barefoot first.
It’s true that Ray is a means to an end, and that his death is somewhat poetic, and quite ironic; in actuality, his character served several purposes: I wanted a somewhat believable origin for the shrinking potion—it’s not something that just comes in the mail. I also wanted to show how Shannon uses the men around her. Then, I knew that I wanted him to end up squished, and that I wanted Shannon to be the one to do it; it demonstrates the realistic dangers of someone being shrunk. Ray’s death also sets up how the story ultimately ends, but that’s all I’ll say for now.
While I AM planning on a chapter for Christmas, I’m hoping to finish the story before then.🤞Actually, I’ve been a a writing spree as of late, probably since I’m so close to the end, so expect the next chapters to be posted about every week or so.
[Report This]Date: November 25 2019 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 56
The fight is at Chris’s house?! In the last chapter, Shannon says “it’s time to go little guys” and then next we see a paragraph of Rachel and Sue Ann thinking of how they can find Chris and then Sue Ann decides to leave her house to check Chris’s house. And then in this chapter, Shannon still hasn’t left yet??? I thought she would be at least on the road.
I guess it’s more realistic to have the fight at the house instead of the airport so that way, there would be no police or spectators. But I could’ve sworn that Shannon already left by the time Sue Ann arrived.
Spoiler: (for those who didn’t read the chapter yet.) I’m curious why you made Ray die like that? Wouldn’t it be awesome for him to be kept as a permanent sex toy or something? Personally, I think it would be a better ending for him.
So Chris was able to super jump from a stair and land on Shannon’s eye?! Haha. Kinda ridiculous but also awesome.
I think the biggest surprise is that Sue Ann and Shannon are shrinking too. I have no idea what size they will be but I assume Shannon will be smaller than Sue Ann since I think Shannon got most of it in her mouth.
Also, what’s with all the slaps. Where are the punches? I’m pretty sure they are trying to kill each other.
My favorite part was when Shannon tried to convince Sue Ann on joining her and having a tiny for her own pleasure. The way Sue Ann hesitated in her response made me excited. She actually considered it for a second. If the villain was a guy, I could easily see Sue Ann shrinking him and ending keeping him as a toy. So, I’m glad Sue Ann is somewhat open to the idea of being a giantess.
Well I can’t wait for part 2!
Author's Response: To begin, I wanted the fight to happen as Chris’s house: it’s a more intimate setting and helps set up the ultimate ending to the story. At the point Shannon said, “Let’s go”, she still had to finish packing the car, and while she was off getting ready, Rachel has roused Sue Ann. Several events actually overlap timing-wise; sorry if that wasn’t clear.
I had planned on Ray’s death from the outset, and I also knew I wanted Shannon to have done it. It would be interesting to see him kept as a permanent sex toy, and letting the other characters THINK he was dead, but his death actually serves an important purpose to the end of the story....though maybe in an alternate chapter...🤔
I had toyed around with BOTH Shannon and Sue Ann shrinking for a bit, along with Chris shrinking to micro size, the issue was exactly how to make it happen. At the same time, I also wanted for Chris to discover he’s not as helpless as he initially thought. In actuality, this scene facilitates several plot points: When he sees Shannon about to shrink Sue Ann, Chris is snapped out of his helplessness, and unleashes all of his pent up anger towards Shannon. Him thrusting himself heroically towards her causes Shannon to spill the potion on herself, Chris, AND Sue Ann.
As for the overall fight scene, girls are more prone to slapping each other, but I wanted to show them throwing a few punches as well, like Sue Ann nailing Shannon in the nose, and Shannon slamming Sue’s face into the bannister and the floor.
I REALLY liked your suggestion about Shannon trying to entice Sue Ann with a shrunken man of her own, so I knew I had to add it into the confrontation. And yes, Sue does hesitate, though only for a moment, which lets Shannon believe that her desperate offer might actually work.
Stay tuned for part 2, which will hopefully be done sometime next week!
Date: November 19 2019 12:45 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
This is easily my favorite story on the site! Thank you for updating it often! Honestly I’m really hoping for Shannon to win, I love the way she uses Chris and Ray. My perfect ending to the story would be Shannon getting away with it and forever using her boy toys for her pleasure. (And if that’s not the ending you want I definitely think you should write an alternate chapter where that’s the case) but up to you thanks for the story.
Author's Response: I’ve been toying around with multiple endings, along with how the last alternate chapter’s going to go, so you might just get your wish. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: November 15 2019 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 55
Wow, what a chapter! I like how you literally wrote a little about every character in the story.
Hmm, where to start? Well, I like Shannon’s threats to stuff Ray and Chris in her underwear or ass, but she mentioned panties so much, part of me just wanted it to happen to at least one of them. Ray seemed like the best person for it. I think Shannon should have reused her soiled panties just to torment him some more.
I like Rachel and Sue Ann parts since they are going to be the rescue team. Next chapter seems like the battle of the babysitters.
Mrs. Carson still enjoying that novel. I wish I was that purple dildo. Must have had some fun nights lately.
Good to see Noreen after so long. It was a long time since she had any moments with Chris.
Alright, how will the fight happen. I was hoping for a surprise, haha. Hmm. Looks like it will happen at the airport. Probably before Shannon gets on the flight. I’m thinking the fight should happen before security, but there could be a moment where Shannon explains to either Ray or Chris that she has to smuggle them inside her when they cross security.
We know Shannon’s car so Sue Ann could maybe track it down at the airport. Shannon will probably make some mistakes by stalling and day dreaming of playing with 2 tinies while Sue Ann is in hot pursuit. Sue Ann finds Shannon and yells at her, snapping Shannon out of her dream. Chris struggles furiously once he hears Sue Ann’s voice. Ray has no idea what’s going on, but believes that anyone is better than Shannon at this point. Sue Ann runs at Shannon and Shannon tries to run but is slower and also is carrying luggage. Sue Ann tackles Shannon and they begin wrestling. A crowd begins to mobilize and watch the women fight. Punches and kicks are thrown, hair pulling is involved. Soon, airport security shows up and separates the women.
They are taken to a spare room and are questioned in front of 2 male officers. Shannon smiles knowing she can probably woo these men over unlike Sue who isn’t so easily swayed by her charms. Sue Ann gives her speech accusing Shannon of theft and Shannon laughs knowing Sue Ann can’t give away the state of Chris. The officers state that both women are to be taken to a police station for further questioning which makes Shannon’s laughter stop. Now Shannon argues her point in frustration and Sue Ann is finally calm thinking of a new plan. Once Shannon realized that these cops couldn’t easily fall for her tricks, she reaches for her necklace which has an odd color inside the gem piece. She begins twisting it and Sue relealizes what’s about to happen so she ducks. Shannon then takes the necklace gem and sprays the room with the shrinking potion, some of it landing on the officer’s faces but missed Sue Ann. The officers begin to shrink leaving Sue Ann speechless as it’s the first time she has seen someone shrink so fast.
Shannon then turns to Sue Ann. “Now it’s just you and me, bitch”. Shannon smiles as she charges at Sue Ann. They begin wrestling once again, Sue Ann carefully trying not to roll on the tiny officers who begin crawling toward the edge of the room. Shannon pins Sue Ann and uses her weight to hold Sue Ann down. “Chris is mine!” Shannon screeched. “And you will never take him from me! You want to know where he is going next?” Sue Ann watched as Shannon reached for one of the tiny officers trying to escape and dragged him by the ankle towards the giantess duo. Shannon then brought the tiny man toward Sue Ann’s waist and brought him lower towards the young woman’s underwear. The man screamed in despair, hoping this was not his end. His screams became muffled as Shannon released Sue Ann’s waistband as the little man struggled against her. Sue Ann instinctively moaned in pleasure and Shannon continued. “Maybe you can understand me, girl to girl. We have needs, and Chris is perfect for me. Accept this man as a gift from me and you can understand why I want Chris inside me so bad! I can feel him wiggling inside me!” Shannon began closing her eyes and imagining Chris’s face.
This got Sue Ann back to reality. She reached for the 2nd officer near her and grabbed him in desperation since there was nothing else to grab. The officer could do nothing as Sue Ann brought her hand toward Shannon’s face. Sue Ann then shoved the poor man into Shannon’s moaning mouth and she began choking on him. Shannon rolled off Sue Ann trying to spit out the man and Sue Ann then climbed on Shannon pressing her hands on Shannon’s face preventing her from breathing. The little man clawed at Shannon’s throat, and made his way toward the opening of Shannon’s mouth trying to escape, but Sue Ann then stuck her fingers into Shannon’s mouth and pushed the little man, forcing him into Shannon’s throat. She felt bad for the young man, but she had no choice. Sue Ann put both hands on Shannon’s nose and mouth and she watched as Shannon’s struggles became slower and slower until her body went limp.
Sue Ann climbed off, and wiped her forehead with relief. She reached for Shannon’s panties and ripped them off, casting it the side while she reached into Shannon’s pussy to feel for Chris. Meanwhile, Ray was trapped in Shannon’s panties but now finds himself free as he looks around the room. He looked around and saw Sue Ann fingering Shannon. “Not another one!” He complained, tired of these crazy women. Ray ran to the door hoping for an escape.
Sue Ann felt Chris and pulled him out slowly. Chris seemed to be knocked out but still breathing and Sue Ann kissed him repeatedly. Sue Ann felt some movement in her own panties and remembered the tiny officer that Shannon used to try and seduce her. She was about to fetch him out when she heard loud footsteps. Soon a door burst open and there was Rachel rushing over to Sue Ann and hugging her after seeing Shannon’s body laying motionless. She saw Chris in Sue Ann’s hand and the 3 of them formed a nice group hug. Sue Ann asked how did Rachel get there and in the doorway walked in Mrs. Carson standing there smiling at the group. She smiled at her daughter as Rachel went in for another hug. Mrs. Carson then saw something move near her shoe and picked it up. It began squirming, but Janet held a firm grip. Mrs. Carson couldn’t believe her eyes. In her hand, was a tiny man trying to wiggle out of her hand. Maybe the stories of what Rachel told her were true! She was too stunned in the moment that she got surprised when Rachel asked for her. “So mom, do you believe me now?” Mrs. Carson smiled, quickly moving the tiny Ray behind her back. “Of course I do, sweetie.”
Mrs. Carson then walked out of the room, out of sight of the other ladies. She brought up Ray back to her face and he began begging for her help. Mrs. Carson ignored his pleas and then noticed a resemblance of Ray to the man in her romantic novel which sparked an idea in her head. “Oh, I think we can definitely help each other young man. I have been looking for someone that can....entertain me, and in return, I can help you out.” Ray had learned enough from Shannon. “If you mean sexually, then I’m not going to agree to become your toy, you cunt.” Ray responded in frustration trying even harder to squirm from her hand. Janet smirked at Ray’s insults. “Mmhmm, I think you will do nicely. I have been getting aroused very often these days and I have been looking for a fun way to orgasm. How would you like to by my panty pet?” Mrs. Carson winked as she lowered him down to her jeans. “Wait, no! Not you too! Why is every woman I meet so horny!” he shouted as Mrs. Carson pulled her jeans and panties away from her waist revealing Ray’s new home for the time being. Janet released her grip and watched as Ray slid down into her panties and nestled between her vaginal lips. She let her panties snap back against Ray, leaving him in his new prison. “I think I found a new partner to have a bedtime story with” Janet chuckled to herself imagining the possibilities. Janet patted her crotch and felt the little man slip between her pussy lips. A slight moan leaked out leaving Mrs. Carson blushing with embarrassment. Mrs. Carson looked down and after checking that there was no noticeable bump in her pants, she went back to join her daughter and Sue Ann.
As Mrs. Carson reached the room again, she saw Sue Ann and Rachel talking together. “Make sure you take care of him Rachel” Sue Ann said. “But what about you? I thought you wanted to take care of Chris? That way, you won’t feel lonely.” Sue Ann felt another tickle in her panties and smiled. “Don’t worry, I won’t be alone.” Sue Ann walked Rachel out of the room with a tiny in her panties while Rachel had Chris in her hands. Mrs. Carson had no temptation to hold Chris. After all, she has her own little man too.
All 3 ladies walked out of the airport with their own tiny passengers to keep them happy.
The End.
Of course, I had to involve some fan fiction.
Anyway, I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: In this chapter, I really wanted to give an update on where all the characters were up to this point. I pictured it like a movie montage where you see each character struggling with their own situations.
Trust me, the fight scene WILL be a surprise, I just wanted to get some suggestions and include those that I like. Hopefully, you’ll enjoy the final product.
[Report This]Date: November 15 2019 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 55
And the final showdown of the best giantess harem of the site draws near! XDDD
Shannon is, as I said, a very complex villain and I really like her character. Yes, she does bad things and doesn’t hesitate to hurt others if it means having her way. BUT, isn’t that also true for other characters like Mrs. Carlson? (I am thinking about that extra chapter she finds Chris… and it just occurred to me, she would end up competing with her daughter for Chris wouldn’t she?? KKKKKKKKK This story gets my gears running with every chapter), but when it comes to Chris, she is like the other girls and don’t want to put him in harms ways.
'Harms ways', I might be way off, but I think that is the key for the end. So far lucky has been on little Chris side and he avoided any serious injure, but, as we draw near the climax of the story, something unexpected is bound to happen, an accident, and even Shannon can’t predict the consequences. With everyone together in this kind of mayhem, the chances of danger for Chris rise 120% (It’s pure math and numbers don’t lie. Believe me kk).
And sweet Sue Ann… I imagine she and Rachel are pretty upset right now, and if something were to happen to Chris, they would be really, really pissed off. Rachel I think is too young for what I am imagining, she would be devastated by the situation, but lost. Sue Ann is more mature and that’s the point I want to make: she is sweet and gentle, but I would love to see her lose composure and be angry, hating Shannon for everything she did. Maybe even Sue Ann might be surprised with how much she carried for our beloved protagonist… ;)
Things might go two ways:
Sue Ann gets to Chris house and the fight begins. Shannon tries to splash Sue Ann with the shrinking formula, but Sue Ann already expected that. She is younger and stronger so she holds Shannon hand and splash her with the formula, not knowing Chris and Ray are also trapped within the woman body and gets shrunk even more.
The two manage to scape their prison, trying to avoid getting the attention of the now 1 inch tall (but still gigantic in there perspective) Shannon. As for Sue Ann, she is now far to huge for Chris to even distinguish her face traits; She steeps on him, but even so he is luck for he realizes he is right in the gap of her big toe. Ray is not so luck and when Mrs. Carlson come to see what is all that fuss, hears a plop noise. “Ugh, did I just step on a bug?” she asks rising her feet, revealing a pint-size red stain on her sole.
That’s exactly when Rachel enters the scene after making sure Chris wasn’t in Sue Ann apartment and snaps. She (and Sue Ann) think that Chris got crushed and is beyond herself. Mrs. Carlson tries to understand what is happening and asks Rachel how Shannon is so little, but she just scream for her mother to “SHUT THE FUCK UP YOU MURDER!!”, as she strides towards Shannon to start torturing the main responsible for killing her best friend. Meanwhile, Chris tries to get Sue Ann attention and cause even a tickle at her feet, but he is far too small, maybe forever now. Moreover, Sue Ann is in shock, crying like a child, blaming herself for everything.
You can switch roles and Chris will have to escalate Rachel sandals and get more intimate than he ever did with his best friend and now girlfriend foot. Oh God, I can’t wait to see what it really will be like!
If they grow, I would love to see a fight between a GodSue Ann versus ‘Shannonzilla’ while a most confused Mrs. Carlson tries to not destroy everything in the search of her daughter or she might think its all part of a wet dream and finally fulfill some of her fantasies with Chris (who Sue Ann still believes she crushed to death) all in front of Rachel.
Rachel, desperate to save Chris from her own mother, enters the house and finds Ray, who makes a full perfect growth formula for her. Ray gets back to normal, but Rachel drinks the rest of the formula. Ray screams for her not to, but she isn’t going to listen and is too late anyway. She grows but gets much more big than the other 3, who seem mere action figures from her perspective.
Rachel puts an end to the fight but is very aroused by the experience. She is, after all, an adolescent who now doesn’t have to answer to anyone. She squeeze her mother, demanding to have Chris who is promptly given to her. She has a power trip thinking about the videos and what she saw her mother doing and wants to play with Chris forever. Out of character? Maybe. Maybe its a side effect of ingesting so much growth formula. She just stops when Chris stops moving and seems to not be breathing. Ray saves the boy with his Deus Ex Machina formula and brings everyone back to normal.
What about the destruction of the city and the deaths? Well, a 300ft giantess is too surreal to believe, so people just assume all was caused by an unknown mass hysteria or the govern covers everything up, taking Ray, Shannon into custody. After some time, life gets back on tracks. Rachel and Sue Ann still blame themselves for everything, but a now forever shrunk Chris comforts both and assures the guilty falls entirely with Shannon.
I know I am the one who suggested the growth possibility. It’s just that, after giving more thought, I guess things would just get messy, and this has always been a story about shrinking. Just to be clear: I will definitely love either of the two ways! Hope some of my ideas come in handy when writing the final showdown.
Don’t care about Norem enough to think about anything for her. Sorry.
Now, for some questions: You think you will be able finish the story before new year? After finishing this one, you already have plans for other stories? Maybe in the same universe? You write other stories together with this one?Sorry for the many questions. I am just curious.
If you ever want to discuss about some story you are writing for the site and needs help, just send me a message (I never sent one, don’t even know if the site has the feature for private messages, but if it has, you can send me anytime kkk). My writing is nowhere near the quality of yours, but sometimes only talking helps to get new ideas.
Thank you, not only for the story, but also for being such a nice guy when answering all the reviews. Five stars for you! A lot of people obviously love your characters, me included, so you are a big inspiration :D Let’s go for the final ride!!
Author's Response: Well, you certainly have some interesting ideas. I had given some thought about other characters shrinking, and Chris shrinking into the micro-verse....and someone getting squished.
To answer your other questions: I am really hoping I can finish this story, and the last alternate chapter, before the year is out, and yes, I do have plans for many other stories that I’d like to start working on: some long, some short.
[Report This]Date: November 15 2019 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 55
Blergh, Shannon is becoming so mean. I really hope she ends up under Sue an's ass somehow. Then I'd be happy.
Author's Response: Well, I’ll consider your suggestion. Thanks for the input.