[Report This]Date: August 04 2020 9:15 PM Title: A Sole-Crushing experience, featuring V-D and Erika!
It's not often I see such a great balance between Mia's confident attitude and the little dere-dere breaks in it; Erika's ditzy, carefree demeanor and her genuinely terrifying skills; the interplay between the two; genuine attempts for a "shrinkee" to escape, offset by their powerlessness; and a description of feet that feels erotic without exaggerating their shape or smell.
If anything, I feel like it could use a little more of that dialogue - just because you've nailed down the character relations so much, it feels like a shame to have some of their discussion described so generally.
But in all, it makes me flash back to being a teen and first discovering the fetish. Great work.
Author's Response:
Wow, I got a great review from a fellow writer! (though calling myself a writer is a bit much since I've only done a few short stories in private for people lmao)
Thank you for your kind words, I'm glad I was able to bring back a shadow of those nice memories you had, and I'll take your advice and feelings on the dialogue into account for any future chapters.
I'm also ecstatic that you thought I captured their personalities well with it. I feel like that's pretty difficult to do when handling characters one didn't create on their own; I feel like I've really accomplished something when you say as much about it.
I was a little worried about how I did on the dialogue but I suppose it was misplaced! Thanks once again for the review, its ones like these that encourage me to continue writing at all.
Date: August 04 2020 3:49 PM Title: A Sole-Crushing experience, featuring V-D and Erika!
I would definitely welcome more stuff like this.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed!
Date: July 24 2018 9:16 PM Title: Captured
Damn good stuff. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you friend!
Date: March 29 2018 4:25 PM Title: Captured
Here I was worried this story fell to the ether. Another nice chapter. Here's hoping for more. And holding out hope for my girl Erika
Author's Response:
It wouldn't be Shrink High without her and V-D, let's be real here, and thanks for the compliment! I think you and everyone else will be happy when that chapter arrives; just a bit longer! (tm) Its going to be a glorious one.
This chapter was actually done on the same day as the others, basically. I just utterly lacked energy to proofread it myself and my friends were too tired to proofread, I had to enlist someone else's help and that only ended up happening yesterday.
Date: March 03 2018 12:48 AM Title: Captured
Love the idea, hope you continue it. P.s Narue is best giantess. :D
Author's Response:
I do plan on it! Next chapter is effectively done and been done for a while but I've been having trouble finding a proofreader for it...
and I can definitely understand the appeal for Narue! Though, she might not make an appearance here but... who knows. Maybe she will :D
I can't decide on who would be the best giantess, personally. Too many amazing pics. Even people who aren't all that important to the story are just great, like melon bread girl for example.
Anyways glad you're liking it so far!
[Report This]Date: February 03 2018 5:29 PM Title: Captured
It's not often we get a Shrink High story around here. Bit of a pleasure honestly. So far so good. I like that you're giving some of the secondary characters some much needed love. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I appreciate it!