Date: December 02 2023 1:30 AM Title: Date Night
Please Come Back and finish this Masterpiece 😭😭d84;a039;d84;a039;
Date: November 05 2020 7:44 PM Title: Dignity
Can't wait to see how it ends.
[Report This]Date: November 05 2020 4:01 PM Title: Dignity
Tanner's developed a lot over the course of this story. All of the characters have in their own ways. Even if it's ending sooner than I wanted (I was hoping to get one more kinky scene with him and Gail, but don't suit your story just for my needs alone, I'll just write a kinky fanfic), you've succeeded in telling a story where likeable characters really grow into some admirable people. That's all anyone can really ask for from a good story. All that's left to do is wait for you to bring is on home....... then write a few kinky fanfics about the characters...... (take it as a compliment. you know you've written a great story when it's got kinky fanfic spinoffs)
[Report This]Date: November 05 2020 1:45 PM Title: Dignity
I'm so proud of Tanner. He's come so far during this story. I hope Ivory is saved though. This is such an emotional roller coaster.
Date: September 18 2020 10:53 AM Title: Date Night
More .
Date: September 14 2020 9:40 AM Title: Date Night
Bro , I thing that me and you have the same taste , 'my marriage with a giantess and the freshman ' continue
[Report This]Date: September 14 2020 1:50 AM Title: Big
I'm almost angry that it ended where it did, only because I wanted so badly to see what happens next. I wish I discovered this story after you had written the last chapter because I feel like I could binge read the whole thing right now.
As always I love the characters, I love how real they feel and read, I love the emotion you convey, and I love the questions you ask when detailing Tanner's big character vs his small stature. Is it truly better to live an independent life when you know you're inviting in all kinds of abuse and potential pain? It's a good question to ask.
As always I can't wait for the next installment. After all of this torment is finally done I think Tanner deserves a kinky scene with Gail just so that he can experience some love to go with all the domination.
Date: September 13 2020 9:54 AM Title: Big
This was simply Astounding!! Im soo happy thaf Tanner has such great friends! Ivory went off the deep end but im sooo happy Gail and the others came to save Tanner from someone who was supposed to treat him as son and not a pet
[Report This]Date: September 13 2020 7:21 AM Title: Big
This is the first story I read on this site and by far my favorite. I'm so excited to see where this goes.
Date: September 04 2020 3:17 AM Title: You and I
Hope you come back to this story soon despite the Crazy Covid going around.
This story is really amping up! Also please let there be more Gail! She's a Dynamite character and would is definitely Best Girl😆 Her and Tanner are so great together🔥
Also I hope your not going to put the little guy through too much 😭😭🙏
[Report This]Date: April 08 2020 10:22 AM Title: You and I
Never expected Ivory to be that insane, threatening to stomp him. I cant tell if that was a bluff, or if she was serious. Seems like a "If I cant have him no one will" senario.
I dont see how Tanner at this point will be separated from Ivory without some kind of major intervention. Except at this point Ivory will assume if she loses Tanner once more she will never see him again. Perhaps, its not too far fetched than, if that the intervention occurs, she may swallow him whole so that in her head they will never be separated?
Seems like we are at a climax... question is now what will Ingrid do to save him if she wants to save him at all after being outcasted by her mother like that...
Don't know how you will continue the story, but I cant wait too see...
Date: April 07 2020 5:55 PM Title: Date Night
Stories like this are so difficult to read in this format. When the stakes are so high it’s difficult to read all this suspenseful action and then come up on a cliffhanger. That being said, it’s a testament to how incredible you are at writing. The characters are complex and it kind of feels like a TV with that way we move from one issue directly into the next. I cannot wait to read the next chapters. Amazing work!
[Report This]Date: April 07 2020 7:09 AM Title: You and I
This chapter has taken a far darker turn that I expected. Ivory has officially gone insane. I have no idea where things will go from here. Obviously whenever things do get sorted out Ivory won't be allowed to keep him anymore. Will he go to Gail's house again? What about Ingrid? Ivory clearly isn't a suitable mother for her anymore either.
Super excited for the next chapter. Seeing Mediation updated is always an instant click for me.
[Report This]Date: March 25 2020 2:37 PM Title: Date Night
I didn't get an update that you've added a chapter so I've only just read it now. Wow. that was some intense emotion, made even better by the back story at the end. You use those little nuggets of the past very well. You don't over use them, so when we do read them, those little peaks into what makes this family tick hit that much harder. Don't let anyone tell you you're not a good author.
As per usual the portrayals of everyone are great. Huge respect for Tanner for standing up to Ivory. If I knew Tanner in real life I'd love to be his friend. He's the kind of shrunken guy I'd want to be. The one strong enough to keep trying to live in a world that outgrew him. Even if he didn't succeed, the fact that he hasn't taken his own life is a testament to his strength.
I can't wait to see Ivory and Ingrid clash over what just happened. No way that isn't going to happen, what with the evidence left lying in a wreck on the floor. I like the dynamic. Both love Tanner and want him to be safe. Ivory wants to treat him as a glass ornament. Ingrid wants to treat him like a person. Gail is still around outside, I think. She might be there to comfort him at this time. I'm not sure.
I hope you don't mind long comments my guy. Understand it's one of the greatest compliments I can pay you. When I read a story like this. A story that prioritizes loveable characters and a great protagonist, over senseless festish material, I can't help but go on about it. It makes me think. Makes me imagine what I'd do in these scenarios. Makes me think what would happen in What If scenarios. It brings out the best in my imagination. And that is a gift. Keep writing dude.
Though truthfully I won't say no to some good fetish material. If ever you want to add more of that, be my guest.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I appreciate the long reviews. Even though there's so much I'd do differently in retrospect I don't think I hit my stride with this story until around the halfway point where Tanner stays with Blake and Gail. Even so, I tried to be very deliberate with this story and am satisfied with how far I've come with the first long term story I've written in a long time.
The flashbacks were mainly inspired from ThomThumb's "The Girl Who Grew" where the story later shifted to other character's viewpoints. I considered making the story from Tanner's perspective only, but since the story was as much about the family's dynamic as a whole, I found the 3rd POV better with the occasional first person glimpses of the thoughts of the main trifecta.
Tanner has been a surprisingly easy main character to write and I've liked conveying the extent of everything he has to deal with. At the crux of it all, he can't accept being so small. Despite trying to remain positive, joke about it sometimes, and his appreciation for everything done for him he's constantly bombarded with reminders of his limitations and is fearful where that will leave him in life.
Date: March 08 2020 9:18 PM Title: Small
Dang this chapter had me going to the end!! I hope Gail and/or Ingrid can lift his tortured spiritd84; and keep him from doing anything stupid😭😭
[Report This]Date: March 06 2020 7:40 PM Title: Small
Holy shit, I thought you were finished with the series, it has been quite a while. I love the idea that as one bully leaves another enters into his life, I'm really excited to see where this is going (although I would have loved to have seen marcelle successfully capture tanner) man your writing and its style is so much more unique and endearing to read, keep it up my man I'm super looking forward to more of your work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment! Although I'm not writing as frequently as I'd like, I assure you I still have a lot on the backburner. As this story is at it's final arc so to speak, I've mentioned in another comment due to Marcelle's popularity that I would write a spin off where Tanner doesn't escape. I've already outlined a few chapters of that and have a pretty clear picture in mind how that would go. Updates for this story come a bit slower from a combination of work and writers block in how I want events to proceed. Stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: February 03 2020 8:32 PM Title: Size Matters
I meant to write a review of this a long time ago, so I apologize for forgetting, but it still needed to be commended so here I am. This story has so much about it that I love it's amazing. The characters are so real and relateable. the dialogue between them all is better written and more natural sounding that some TV shows and movies that I've seen. The scene with Ingrid finally taking down Marcelle was like the release of a long pent up breath, a long time coming and satisfying to the extreme. Now that you're setting the stage for Gail and Tanner to maybe become a thing, I'm kind of into where it's going. They're really nice together and their conversations are fun to read about, how they philosophise size difference and stuff. That alone is an enormous compliment to your writing. When you can just write a conversation and I'm entertained by it, and the thought process behind it.
I know you just had a conversation with Gail thinking about other people being small but I'd love to read something about Gail talking about what it would be like if she were a giant in a world of tiny people. Maybe have the mood turn all sexual again and it may lead to something between her and Tanner?
That's just a suggestion. I don't ever want to tell you how to write your own story, because I can't ever do someone else's work better than they can. Go with whatever you want to do, and it'll come out as the best version of your work. I just wanted you to know how much I've enjoyed it. Please keep doing what you're doing, and I look forward to the next chapter, and whatever comes next for Tanner, Ingrid, Blake, and Gail.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for that. Looking back to when I posted the first chapter in 2017 there's so much I can think back on and would probably write A LOT differently in hindsight. Marcelle while I enjoyed writing her, I did want to send off to the sunset after receiving her comeuppance. Gail and Tanner's dynamic has also been very fun to write since they can bounce off each other with similar grievances.
[Report This]Date: November 14 2019 3:51 AM Title: Size Matters
I like to read in between doing other stuff, but I had to put everything on hold when I saw an update from this story. There are some good, very good stories in the site, but, I must say that your story is not just great. It has beauty. I get really scared sometimes because of the long hiatus between the updates, thinking you might just have given up on writing, but, when I see the depth you’ve managed to give your characters, I understand you have put a lot of thought in them. Either that or you are very talented. Not one member of the main cast is one dimensional.
I know it seems I am just a flatterer, but I mean every word. Thank you for writing and not abandoning this site.
About the chapter, I still ship Tanner with Ingrid as unlikely as it maybe at this point, although I will admit Gail is a very interesting character. She did with Tanner exactly what she said would do with her parents if they were small in ch. 20 (if I am not mistaken). She ended the conversation when and how she wanted because things didn’t go her way a.k.a Tanner being honest telling he had feelings for Ingrid. This foreshadows (and Tanner knows it) a lot of hardships will always come for him on an emotional level, for he will never be on equal grounds with anyone in anything aside from the intellectual and emotional dimension.
Tanner knows his reality, he is frail and powerless most of the time, but, most of all, he knows he can’t change the facts. So in this chapter he tries to instead change his own relation with himself, with his size and the sexuality that comes with it. This shows how mature he became (and how mature this story is).
Ivory on the other hand is very complex. She is right about the dangers surrounding her son and wanting to protect him from a world too big for him. But us, as the audience, instinctively feel this is wrong in some level and form . An interesting way of developing her (Ivory) arc would be for herself and her house to become a danger, a harm, for her son. Obviously I am expecting some showdown between Ingrid and Ivory, which will once again lead to many emotional revelations and growth.
I recently learned how to give five stars and your story more than deserves five stars. Thank you again and I can’t wait for the next chapters :D
Author's Response:
Thanks a ton, as I mentioned in a previous review sometimes it's hard for me to read praise like that when I look at previous chapters and begin thinking of what I'd do differently. Usually not major changes, but nitpicky things like a change in dialogue, character interaction, or catching typos and formatting inconsistencies. On a more optimistic note I am very satisfied with the overall progression of the story and how it's evolved from where it first started when I only had a very broad outline of the beginning, some of the middle, how I wanted the story to end, and some general characteristics of the main trio. With that framework in mind sometimes the difficult lies in narrowing down what I want to focus on especially when I can see something playing out in a few different scenarios.
Tanner trying to find his place in the world and come to grips with everything that comes with his size both good and bad, as you noted has been one of my favorite elements to explore. As for Ivory despite being hyper-protective of him and having a lot of justification for being so may not be best influence for Tanner.
Author's Response:
Thanks a ton, as I mentioned in a previous review sometimes it's hard for me to read praise like that when I look at previous chapters and begin thinking of what I'd do differently. Usually not major changes, but nitpicky things like a change in dialogue, character interaction, or catching typos and formatting inconsistencies. On a more optimistic note I am very satisfied with the overall progression of the story and how it's evolved from where it first started when I only had a very broad outline of the beginning, some of the middle, how I wanted the story to end, and some general characteristics of the main trio. With that framework in mind sometimes the difficult lies in narrowing down what I want to focus on especially when I can see something playing out in a few different scenarios.
Tanner trying to find his place in the world and come to grips with everything that comes with his size both good and bad, as you noted has been one of my favorite elements to explore. As for Ivory despite being hyper-protective of him and having a lot of justification for being so may not be best influence for Tanner.
Date: September 09 2019 3:43 PM Title: Date Night
I forgot to ask more specifically, are scat, watersports, or full anal insertion at all possibilities for the spin off? Or are those hard limits or just non-interests for you? To see those kinks in a story like this would be a dream come true but obviously artistic integrity is the most important thing.
[Report This]Date: August 12 2019 11:54 AM Title: Date Night
I just.... There’s a few stories on this site that completely cut through all the “pulpy” hedonistic erotica, and cross over into novelistic territory based on the level of story, character development etc... This in my opinion is the absolute best of them, this is basically a high quality novella, and I can’t tell you how much I appreciate you using your talent for this niche. You can legitimately feel the emotions of every character from the amount of effort and skill you put into each chapter. Once this is over, it’s definitely going to be a story I can come back to and read over again, several times. Which is not something I thought I’d ever say about any story on here. Anyway just wanted to voice my support like everybody else I guess.
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(In case you thought I wasn’t a deviant like everyone else on this site.) In this “What If” spin off with Marcelle, might we expect more intense butt related stuff? I agree with many others reviews that it’s nice to have this story that really gets to the heart and philosophy of what it would actually be like to be tiny in the real world, and dabbling in the fetish accepts but not focusing on them, it’s very refreshing. That being said, obviously the amount of realism you’ve put into this story makes the fetish stuff hit so much harder. The part where Blair ran with Tanner in her waistband and he fell in, despite being pretty tame comparatively to other things on this site, it was incredibly immersive and gripping because
the world feels so real. The characters are so fleshed out and we’ve invested so much time getting to know their emotions and the way they think. Anyway I’m rambling now, sorry, really I hope that with the “What If” spin off you fully indulge whatever kinks you enjoy cause I’m sure it’ll be fantastic if that’s the case. I’m very hyped to see how the main story wraps up, and it’s been an emotional, fun, mesmerizing and honestly thought-provoking ride.
Author's Response:
It's always odd to me to read such high praise coming from reviewers and I certainly appreciate it. I guess it's just the fact because I'm the author I'll always have a critical take to my own work where I'll read certain things over and find all the nitpicky things I would have changed, reworded, edited, etc. The beginning stages were a feeling out process and I'd say I didn't get a clear vision for what direction I wanted to take this story until the middle (when Tanner goes to stay with Blake's family).
The characters however I was pretty adamant about wanting them to serve a purpose. Tanner, Ingrid, and Ivory were the original trio planned from the start. Prominent later additions Blake, Marcelle, & Gail to even minor characters I wanted to have a clear idea of who they were, personality, etc. to justify their inclusion in the story. Even for the chapters that I harder time writing, thinking of their personalities gave me some framework to where I could imagine for instance how Ingrid would react to a situation versus how Gail would react.
For the Marcelle spin off, at this point maybe, maybe not. I roughly outlined a few things and have a general idea of what her modus operandi would be for handling Tanner. I haven't worked out completely what specifically I'd have her doing to him though. As you noted though, I like the opportunity to let the imagination go wild for a bit, throwing a lot of paint on the wall to see what sticks.
Thanks for the review!