Date: July 14 2017 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 19
I loved this, would like to know how a pre teen like Gwen knows how to get people off, also hope Tiffney and Thomas's relation develops into something similar. My only complaint is it is hard to remember all these people but still please keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Ty for the review, Slacker28! ^.^ Glad you like the story. Yeah, i know its going to be overwhelming remembering everyone but most of the people I've mentioned are probably not going to reappear again lol
Date: July 04 2017 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
Thank you thank you thank you for updating this story! Hopefully you've gotten the inspiration you needed to continue - writer's block can be a bitch. I thought Thomas' look on the situation he's in was interesting, like his relationship with Tiffany itself. How he thinks there's hope for her but deep down knows that throwing his life away to stay with Tiffany isn't very realistic. I'm probably reading too far into it, but normally when character's realise that the situation they're in, that forms the main basis of the story, is temporary and fleeting away/coming to a close - it foreshadows the forthcoming narrative change and shift towards the final act.
Like ToraDora for instance, if you've seen that show. How Kawashima digs into tha main character when the anime is starting to come into the final act - telling him that he can't keep up a front of negligence just so that good times can last - how people need to move forward...
Anyway, that's just me rambling I guess. I could be wrong, could be right. I don't know. I need sleep. See ya!
Author's Response:
How's it going, MarsyMan. Thanks for the review and for the support when we were in the shoutbox! : 3 Yeah, one day someone will fine a vaccine against the dreaded Writer's Block, hopefully soon. I guess I could at least tell you Thomas's outlook on his situation won't necessarily bring the story to an conclusion but your right about it foreshadowing something. It's funny, everytime I try to start ToraDora, another anime distracts me. I've only seen like the first few episodes but I heard it's good. Also, congrates on getting a 20k read count and 40 reviews on your story. ;) Expect a review from me soon.
Date: July 02 2017 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
Hey buddy! I tried to post something longer but my computer won't let me paste it. So I'll write a basic review now and hopefully give you something more later.
Great chapter! The opening conversation was great! But the stuff with Sophia was better! I really like Sophia as a character! Outside of Gwen and Trisha, she's my new favorite. I hope we get to see more of her being sexual and controling of tinies!
Just so you know, your story has inspired me to dream up some ideas for a giantess themed anthology story based on similar concepts to yours. If you are interested, I could share them with you. You interested? Either way is fine by me.
Regardless of your answer, great chapter and I hope to see more in the future! :)
Author's Response:
Hey IamtheWalrus! Glad to know your doing well and I am honored that this story has inspired you. I'm interested in your ideas, however Im trying to make a new email specifically for this site since my primary email gives away my unique full name and all x.x but... if you want, you can tell me your ideas in your next review if you want to or you can check my Bio to see if the new email is up. You should soooo write a story of your own because you've recommended me some pretty cool ideas! :D
Date: June 30 2017 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 18
I liked. Vore, a little of harem... Good chapter.
Keep writing.
Author's Response:
Your review is much appreciated, BP75. When you asked me when was the next chapter on my other story, I knew I had to post this up lol. No more delays! Time to start writing! >:3
Date: June 30 2017 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh damn. Favorite chapter.
Author's Response:
Ty, Officerkc. Hopefully you won't arrest Ms. Sophie for what she did cause you'll need some really big handcuffs. O.O
Date: June 30 2017 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 18
YES! I've been looking forward to an update from this! Now I didn't get to see the character I wanted: rich girl Cecilia, but it was still really good! The first section with the interaction between Mildred Anika and Thomas was a standout. It's true what they said: Thomas has NO obligation here. And he HAD his chance to escape! I'm sure they must feel frustrated too since there is no doubt they don't wanna be Tiffany's toys.
Anyway, the rest of the chapter was pure fanservice, again really good in a different way! Sophie is really sexy, I like how she's playful and sort of demanding but not overtly demanding, like saying things like: do it or I'll kill you. She's more like: do it or I'll force you to do it. It's almost as if she likes them to fight back and gives them the wiggle room to do it, I'm sure if the threat was death most tinies would lose all fight in an instant. But she enjoys their struggles.
I hope you write again soon! You already know which character has my vote for next appearance! I'm a little sad that the character I was most interested in has had the least screen-time but it's your story at the end of the day so don't feel obligated to write that if it's not your plan!
Author's Response:
Hey, geeman :D Sorry for the delay. Again. My incompetence knows no bounds. As usual, your reviews are so well-formulated, I'm sometimes at lost at your skills! O.O Yeah, Thomas really has no obligations in terms of Tiffany's reforming but I guess he feels like if he doesn't help her change, he'll feel like he 's let her down cause he knows Tiffany's killings and treatment towards people his size isn't right and maybe a little part of him is thinking about the possibilites of maybe... Being her petifist? As for Sophie, let's just it was in the trio's good grace that she's naturally so playful and laid-back. I think the only thing that can probably make her mad is knowing someone hurt her daughter and boy did we see how that went... Also geeman, don't feel like your pushing me. You keep telling my stupid-ass what you guys want till you see it in the story, of course if it's in reason or if I can't commit. In a way, it's our story because I wouldn't come this far without you guys. As for our lovely Cecilia, well, you'll love the next chapter.
Date: June 30 2017 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 18
Miss Sophie rules.
Author's Response:
MILF giantess ftw ;)
Date: May 11 2017 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is one of my favorite introduction chapters in any story really. I've read it a few times when I'm bored just to refresh my mind of the cruelty and fun.
Author's Response: Thank you, Panzer! :D I'm honored that one of my favorite authors enjoys my story.
Date: April 10 2017 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 17
Hey there! Let me say sorry about the long wait for this review. I was sick when this chapter was uploaded and I've been busy with work ever since. But onto the review!
Firstly, I REALLY liked the interactions between Gwen and Trisha! It honestly makes me want to see a lot more of them, or maybe even a spin-off that focuses on them! lol. Also, connected to that, I'm interested in the idea of Gwen having a mom and sister. Will we be seeing them at some point down the road?
Gwen and Thomas were both very funny in the tree. And the scene between Thomas and Tiffany was very sweet.
But the breakout star of this chapter was Beverley! My god, that final sequence was so hot! And I love how she keeps the woman trapped in her bra! I really hope that this story has lots more of giantess playing with tiny women. And speaking of tiny women, are Kate and that other girl going to be returning charatcers as Beverley living nipple toys? I know that's unlikely, but I'm kind of hoping they are. lol. ;)
Author's Response: Hey IamtheWalrus! Sorry to hear you were sick :( hope your all good now and that everything is OK with you. You'll be happy to know I got sooo many ideas for Gwen and Trisha. Probably more of Gwen lol. As for her mom and sister... Well see ;) I gotta agree with you, I find F/f or even better FF/f really sexy so expected more of that stuff. As for Kate and our mystery woman surviving... idk they're are with Beverly after all o_o I honest want to tell you what to expect from Gwen's life later on in chapters but sadly it would spoil everything. Guess I better start getting to work cause you and everyone else who's updated recently have given me fuel yet again with your reviews. Ty as always IamtheWalrus, your reviews are always exciting to read.
Date: April 02 2017 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved the park. Great story. Excellent squishing. Glad you like my one liners.
Author's Response: You the man, diesel. Cool dude ;). Thnx for all of the reviews.
Date: March 27 2017 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 17
Ah I'm glad we got that bit of world building here! So there's a giantess company that goes around fighting human armies and that's why they aren't around to fight these battles. The cops should be a little more effective against these giants especially since its been shown that a single shotgun blast was at least a little effective against them but okay, at least this kind of helps with making the story more realistic.
Im glad Tiffany and Thomas made up, honestly I don't know know how I feel about Thomas going back to Tiff, she's not exactly 100% gentle, but okay, it was a cute moment at least. I hope we get more Cecilia soon, it was a shame we didn't see any of her here. As for Beverly and Zeke I mean finally the guys showing some guts, even though Beverly might mush them outta him soon if he keeps it up. I'm surprised she didn't just do that already! I guess she really DOES love him!
Anyway, amazing stuff! I hope you update again soon, this is a favorite of mine on this site and I was wondering where it went!
Author's Response: I finally gave you that explanation even though I was waaay too late lol. I literally thought when I was writing this that geeman is gonna point it out again, better start explaining. I guess now that we got more giantesses, Thomas actually has an opportunity to get their help and go back to his dorm or even live with them but in the end, he couldn't leave Tiffany's side even though we know Tiff isn't 100% reformed. The two are getting pretty close I guess. I know I said this once, but it's like we're in sync, geeman. I was seriously gonna add Cecilia to this chapter but I kept getting some serious writer's block and left it alone. Maybe we'll see her in the next chapter. I like her concept as much as you do and I plan to give her some serious screen time. Kudos to Zeke for finally standing up to Beverly and defending Thomas. Let's just hope Beverly doesn't do anything she'd regret... I'm honored that this story is one of your favs. You never hold back when you leave your reviews, you always speak your mind and your passion is the real deal. Ty for your reviews, geeman. They help me improve.
Date: March 27 2017 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
Nice chapter. Well done with the bath and the babysitter.
Author's Response: Thnx diesel! I've missed your cool one liner comments lol.
Date: January 03 2017 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yeah... That's sort of what I was expecting 😂 It's completely fine if you're waiting to reveal these things later on. At least you know the answers to begin with ;) Oh BTW, it's 'MarsyMan', but dont sweat it. Although, now that you mention it, 'MarshyMan' might've been a better choice of name xD Anyway, thanks for the reply! If you want to know if I like the story... Look at my favourites and all the reviews I've written on my profile ;)
Author's Response: Your too kind..."MarsyMan" :)
Date: January 02 2017 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
Hey! I thought this chapter was great! Learning the characters was interesting and the cliffhanger really makes me really wanting to read on. But I have a few questions...
Now, I'm an extremely OCD person (don't have the condition, but you know what I mean) and I'm not trying to nitpick or criticise by asking this but, Bree said she was an Otaku and Thomas claimed he was one aswell. So is the Japan they consume media from in the tiny world? If so, with the amount of respect 'tinies' get, how would they get publishing rights to print manga in the giant world from them? And would the giants want to read something from the widely per sieved 'inferior' world?.. Like do they have Harry Potter and stuff like that? You said they have 'The Walking Dead' in a previous chapter, so is it an all-female version or is it imported? And do they obtain rights from the tinies to broadcast it. Or is it public domain in their world or something? Furthermore, how do the women get pregnant? Do they rape male tinies or something? Or like do they have sperm banks?
I'm sorry, I know I'm over thinking it but it's been bugging me since I read this chapter a few days ago. If you don't want to reveal some of these things, like you plan to reveals them in upcoming chapters, that's completely fine. Just want to get some more as much insight into the world as possible ;) Thanks! - MM
Author's Response: Hey MarshyMan! I really REALLY wanna answer your question about why the giantesses have the same medias as ours and trust me, I have an explanation "wipes brow" but I plan on saving it subsequently in the story as well as the mystery to how the women breed. I gotta tell ya, I almost freaked out when I read your comment. "Nooo! I plot holed my own story! :'( I'm a failure! I-I-I... Oh, wait...They have the same crap as us because---" It also occurred to me that I forgot to put the SciFi tag on this story so... "hint, hint." ;) I see geeman's title as the "slueth" might be threatened lol, jk. But seriously, thanks for pointing those things out, MarshyMan and I totally get what you mean about the OCD thing. It just means you enjoy the story and it would be such a turn off if there where plotholes in it. You do enjoy the story, right? RIGHT?! o_o Don't worry, your questions will be answered but maybe not too soon and I think you might find one out of two of the answers was something you didn't expect ;) Oh and forgive me if my response here was too congenial or offensive to you in anyway. Thnx for your review. :D
Date: December 31 2016 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oooh the story is definitely getting more interesting! For some reason I'm glad concerning Tiffany's outburst, hopefully we will see more of Bree thanks to that. I also found Cecilia quite interesting, hopefully we'll see her again!
Author's Response: Oh, don't worry my friend, we'll see a lot of Bree AND Cecilia. I'm glad Cecilia is getting some recognition and I can hardly blame ya for wanting there to be a little friction thanks to Tiffany's outburst. Are redheaded protagonist will almost always get her scene time but its time to branch out with some new characters. ;)
Date: December 30 2016 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
When they were all at the meeting and were about to fight each other I almost leap from my chair. Good thing there was someone their to save Thomas and stop such conflict from arsising. Overall, keep up the amazing work dude :)
Author's Response: srsly, right?! :D that was a close call for Thomas. Beverly is one vicious giantess, thats for sure and ty for your encouraging words, HuzToru ;) don't worry, this story is far far FAR from finish so expect more surprises! >:D
Date: December 28 2016 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
It was only a matter of time with Tiffany, she's obviously the jealous type, but it makes sense, she's a little girl still. I hope she doesn't go back to her old, violent ways because of this. I expected Tiffany's snapping, but what I didn't expect was Cecilia's character. Sure she's a spoiled, bratty, rich girl, but she does seem to genuinely care about small people, something I was expecting to be a farce. But I doubt that considering how passionate she was in this chapter. I hope to see more of her again, she's definitely the most interesting new character so far, and could end up being my favorite character! Most stories portray rich people as evil, uncaring, etc, so I think it's great you did a sort of role reverse on her. Some of the other new characters were also interesting, Bree and Blair also caught my attention. A shy, otaku gts hasn't been done before I think. And Brair is hiding some demons methinks. Anyway great stuff, hope you continue this soon!
Author's Response: Geeman...don't freak out but I think we may be mentally linked somehow o_o I too have a fascination with spoiled rich girls (who have redeeming qualities), characters like Diamond Tiara from MLP and Pacifica Northwest from Gravity Falls (there cartoon characters btw if you don't know 'em) so that gave me the idea to make Cecilia's character. I'm so glad you like her and that you pointed out the usual rich people stereotype and figured out Cecilia doesn't match it completely. Man, you're perceptive as always, I love it! I took a shot at making an otaku gts like Bree here because I'm kinda one myself and I have a suspicion you might be one too given the fact that you knew what a tsundere was =3 but then again, you could just be Japanese, idk lol. Blair does seem to be hiding something, huh? I also like how you pointed out Tiffany's adolescene of being the reason of her jealousy. She's still a child, right? You are one hell of a sleuth which makes writing this all the more enjoyable. I look forward to more of your reviews ;)
Date: December 28 2016 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 16
Ooh! Someone is jealous! And overpossessive~
Author's Response: Ikr! Ty for the review and rating. :)
Date: December 27 2016 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
terrific, pkease develop the ideology struggle here and dont go back to the gore too much. great so far though, cant wait to see how Tiff develops
Author's Response: Ty, Js23! :D I surprise Tiffany is still so popular or at least that's what I'm assuming from the reviews. I do plan on continuing more drama but I can't promising there won't be less gore.
Date: December 15 2016 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 15
Hello buddy! Sorry about not reviewing this story recently but my life got kinda crazy. Anyway, these past few chapters have been pretty good! Brooke is a very nice character to the add to the cast. But...if I'm being totally honest, my favorite new characters are Trisha and Gwen.
MY GOD! I LOVE these two so much! The idea of a teenage girl having a damn sexy older woman as her willing sexual pet is SO FREAKING HOT to me! There introduction might be my favorite in this entire story so far. I NEED to see more of them! Will we be seeing them later on in this story? I really hope so. What I would ideally like is for Gwen to become best friends with Tiffany and thus her and Trisha come by all the time.
I'm also really interested in the idea of petifists. I could totally see there being a small section of tinies who actually want to be owned and used by sexy giantesses! Are we going to learn at any point how Trisha came to be Gwen's pet? And are we going to learn more about the particulars of how these kinds of relationship form? Because if we aren't in the story, I'm very curious as to how you envision the normal sized people establishing a connection with giants who they are sure will tried them kindly.
Author's Response: Hiya, IamtheWalrus! Nice to see you back! :D and please, there's no reason to apologize, my friend. It's life. What are ya gonna do am I right? Somehow I had a feeling you'd like Trisha and Gwen =3 I could see why you'd think Gwen would be friends with Tiffany: almost same age, both have tinies. Makes sense. I'll tell you this much, all the girls in the meeting are definitely gonna get some serious screen time so expect more Gwen and Trisha ;) Oh and don't feel like you should leave a review everytime you read a chapter, that is TOTALLY up to I mean after all, you've left so much reviews here already. As far as I'm concern, this story got more reviews than I thought which alone is enough for me to say, "Damn. This story MUST continue!" And its all thanks to reviewers like you, IamtheWalrus. I thank you dearly. :) Sorry I didn't answer all of your questions but you know me =}