[Report This]Date: February 05 2018 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
I gotta give you massive props for the Beverly nightmare sequence. Probably the smuttiest sexiest thing you've done felt like it could be real and in her character, but finding out it was a dream made it even better because it goes to show the huge effect her actions are having on Zeke's mental state while she's never meant to hurt him and in fact has been a rather sweet and loving girlfriend to him. The fact that its indirect makes it seem that much more sinister and powerful.
Author's Response:
You can always count on nightmares to show the disturbed mental state of a character. You couldn't have broke down the unintentional pain Beverly is inflicting on Zeke any better. Thanks for another one of your reviews, combine45.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2018 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
Hey buddy! Its so good to finally see this story be updated! I'vew been looking forward to this. Also, thanks for the shout out to my story! That really made my day to see. :) Anyway, onto the chapter itself.
This starts out on a good place with Zeke's nightmare. The hotness of the early part clashes nicely with the horror of the later part. I may have mentioned this before but I also enjoy that you are exploring the toll that Bev's nature plays on Zeke, as well as Bev really loving Zeke. It adds some nice depth where they easily couldn't have been any.
Moving on, let's talk about Anika and Mildred. It appears that they may be leaving this story soon. I have mixed feelings on that. On the one hand, it would be the best option for them. But on the other, I kinda like them suffering at the hands of Tiffany and Sophie because its hot! lol. I'll just have to wait and see how things go at the meeting.
On a side note, if Anika and Tiffany are taken out of the story, I would like to offer a suggestioin that I know likely won't be used. lol. Here it is anyway. What if as a way to help slate Tiffany's desire to kill and domiate tinies, Thomas asks Gwen how she found Trisha so Tiffany can find a petist who would willingly be owned by them? And of course, if you did this, the tiny woman in question should be a lesbain, so Tiffany wouldn't get worried that the new little lady might steal Thomas away. Let me know what you think of this idea. Like I said, I'm all but ceratin that this won't be used in anyway! lol
Also, I was a little shocked to see Tiffanty actually kiss Thomas. Has she done that before? And does that mean that her feelings for Thomas are developing more maturely?
The copcept of the giantesses basically copying tiny culture for their own is interesting. I like it! lol
But as you shouldn't be shocked to learn, the scene with Gwen and Trisha was my favorite! I LOVE those two! Also, I like how Gwen was lusting after the Indian cuties! Gwen's mentality in general is my favorite in this story, kind and humane but unthinking and treating tinies like beloved objects or pets. I always hope there is more of them in this story, and I eagerly await the arrival of Gwen's birthday party.
This chapter was a delight and I hope you keep up the good work! :)
Also, sorry about not reaching out to you in a while, I've been distracted too. Want to respond talking via email?
Author's Response:
Glad to know the shout out made your day, man. :) Hopefully if you have the time or if you plan on continuing your story, we can see more of Anaya's amorous antics AND your other ideas ;)
Yeah, the affect Beverly is having on Zeke's mentality is very apparent. Let's just hope it turns out good for him. As for Anika and Mildred leaving, anything could happen.
Now there's an idea. Tiffany getting a petifist, (ideally a hot lesbian because hell yeah!) to cope with her tendencies sounds awesome. You know me too well, IamtheWalrus, how I don't usually use the sexy ideas (shame on me) you give me but who's to say I won't surprise you and everyone else. This idea of yours does give me an idea though so I might consider it.
I can't say Tiffany sees Thomas romantically. The way she kissed him could probably be compared to a little girl giving her puppy a kiss. I think one could say although Tiffany has some respect for Thomas, she still sees him as something that's hers like for example she picks him up without his permission sometimes.
How did I not know Gwen and Trisha were your favorite? ;p Gwen being at that age where she's just horny is probably why she's like that lol and soon we will see her birthday :D
We can talk via email whenever you like. Thanks for the review as always.
Date: January 31 2018 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
I want to say I've followed this story a while and finally felt I should review. It's one of my favorites and I enjoy your style of writing. It's a random comment but I love how moments like when Tiffany tosses the car over her shoulder in the first chapter, or the vending machine later on. Or Beverly poking fun of the girl's breast size. Attitude and what is said are things I really enjoy with stories like these.
I like how you have made a wide range of unique characters, I feel the general theme of the story is the movement toward ending rampages. Something tells me Bev is one rampage away from Zeke breaking down on her. I could totally buy into the idea of her crossing her fingers and telling him she is done, only to sneak out at night or something. Tiffany on the other hand, I halfway expected her mom to make her join her on a rampage, which she would discover Thomas was influencing her daughter, but maybe she doesn't care so long as Tiffany is happy. Tiffany could by her own go back to rampaging if the next meeting ends in disaster I feel. Lastly I think there is no giants because the giantesses need the tiny men to have children, but they can only give birth to girls. It would explain why the cultures are basically the same.
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking your time to leave a review, Gtslover. Glad to hear you like the little things in the story. I feel like thye character's attitudes and a few arguments here and there gives a story some spice so I make it an effort to add those things when it's appropriate.
That really does sound like something Beverly would do and yeah, Sophie can always turn the tides on Thomas's efforts in changing Tiffany. You make some really excellent points here!
I do plan on explaining more about the giantesses and whether giant males exist or not but man, you really broke down a lot of things. Makes me happy to know so much people are involved in the story. Thanks again for the review.
[Report This]Date: January 31 2018 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 20
WHOO! I thought you'd abandoned this story! I'm super happy to see it back! The dream sequence with Zeke was probably my favorite part of the chapter just because of how plausible it was. I'll give her credit tho, Beverly isn't really a good person imo but she DOES care about Zeke. Anyway the rest of the chapter was okay, I liked the bit with Cecillia where she talks about how they use things invented by tinies and enjoy their culture but still kill them. REALLY powerful words she gave there! It's really funny seeing her contrast in how she treats other giantesses vs how she treats tinies. She's all cutesy, nice girl with tinies but is a snobby prick to any giantess, even those that don't kill tinies! It makes for funny moments imo!
As for Tiffany, well she's attached to Thomas and basically will do almost anything to keep him happy at this point. I can see this backfiring if he pushes his luck but the fact that he came back to her even tho he had a way out speaks volumes, he definitely won alot of points with Tiff methinks. I'm glad this is back, I'm hoping for more updates soon!
Author's Response: Haha! Yeah. It really has been a long time. Don't worry though, I had no intentions of abandoning the story. Life got in the way at one point and when I actually did get free time again, it was serious writer's block and a sense of insecurities about my writing. Still, not a day past when I couldn't help but think about the story and what I wanted to happen. Looking back at you and everyone else's reviews gave me courage to keep writing. Cecilia is a unique character. It's night and day with her when it comes to giantesses and tinies, respectively. I guess what makes it interesting is how she's not only huge, at least compared to the smaller folks, but has an seemingly infinite amount of money yet is ridiculously loving to the smaller population. Her words about the hypocrisy her kind displays is pretty much like an activist. The concept of her treating the smaller race better than her own kind is pretty funny now that you mentioned it. ;p Beverly is a lost cause as far as I'm concern. Her sadist nature though has been dragging Zeke down which as we can see is playing on his mental state. You're right about Thomas. Let's hope he doesn't overly use the influence he's been having on Tiffany. As for Tiffany, I do have some ideas to make her stand out more. One of those ideas might shock you all but who knows what the future tells, how the story might unfold and what is expected next. As for updates, I will tell you all if there will be another hiatus. I had my work schedule managed to be more reasonable so I don't believe there will be another delay, at least not as big as this one. Thank you for your reviews as always, geeman. I always look forward to your thoughts and opinions :)
Date: January 31 2018 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Im kind of confused as to whether giant men exists in this world. Thomas makes it seem like they don’t, but then in chapter 19 when Trisha is talking about Gwen’s crush on this Jeremy person, she says: "Gwen, I see the way you look at the dear when your mom invites him and his parents.” This seems to imply that Jeremy and his parents are people who have an equal social standing to Gwen and her parents, which would mean they can’t be tinies, they must be giants.
Author's Response:
Thank you for pointing out the mistake. The real chapter 15 has been uploaded. I can definitely see the comparison to this Enju to Tiffany. The confusion will be cleared eventually. That's all I can say.
Date: January 30 2018 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Chapter 14 and Chapter 15 are the same, and I think the real Chapter 15 is missing.
Date: January 30 2018 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Rereadibg from chapter one before I read the new update, and I realized that Tiffany basically looks like Enju from Black Bullet.
[Report This]Date: January 30 2018 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 20
Glad to see this story is back! I remember reading it a long while back and thought it was fun. I like how all the different characters have moral compasses that point to how they should treat tinies!
Def giving this a follow since I hadn't already!
Author's Response:
Thank you, johnrussi. Your praise is much appreciated. I look forward, like so many others, to more chapters of Puberty as well.
Date: December 10 2017 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Still alive? Maybe not...
Author's Response:
I was dead but thanks to necromancy, I'm back.
[Report This]Date: November 16 2017 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Update plz.
Author's Response:
It's on its way! :D
[Report This]Date: October 27 2017 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 19
"...window washer for an executive *office building* was cleaning a window of the *sixtieth floor*...she had to *kneel* just to look at him..."
Finally! Some indication to the size of the giantesses! Now I can obsessively try to calculate their height compared to humans. Let's begin:
Firstly, how high up is Anthony?
According to the CTBUH tall building height calculator (yes that is a real thing. I'm also shocked. Link below) a 60 story office building is 257.4 meters (844.5 feet) tall. Subtracting out the height of maintenance areas on the roof, the height of the 60th floor window is 249.6m (818.9 ft). We can therefore assume that Cecilia's eyes are at a level of approximately 818.9 ft in height while she is kneeling.
Now the question becomes: if that is her eye level while kneeling, what is her total height? This question depends heavily on what one considers kneeling. According to Wikipedia, there are two types of kneeling:
"Vertical kneel: where both the thighs and upper body are vertical – also known as "standing on one's knees"
Sitting kneel: where the thighs are near horizontal and the buttocks sit back on the heels with the upper body typically vertical."
Basically, while kneeling, one's thighs can be at any angle from completely vertical to completely horizontal relative to the shins and the ground. As such, all numbers past this point will be given as a range. Based on measurements o took of myself kneeling, one's eye level is at between 68% and 57% of their full height. Given these numbers, we can find Cecilia's full height using the equation (818.9 / {0.68 to 0.57}) which gives us 1204.4 to 1436.8 ft as Cecilia's height.
Finally, we use this height to find the approximate ratio between human and giantess height. Since Cecilia is not presented as being particularly tall or short compared to other giantesses, we can assume she is around average height for a giantess, and is therefore equivalent to an average height woman of 5' 3", or 5.25 feet. Using the equation ({1204.4 to 1436.8} / 5.25) gives us a ratio of between 229.4 to 1 and 279.7 to 1 of the height of giantesses compared to humans. Given the uncertainty as to how average Cecilia's height is, the most I can say with confidence is that, on average, giantesses are between 200 and 300 times the size of humans, meaning that the average giantess is between 1000 and 1500 feet tall.
CTBUH tall building height calculator: http://www.ctbuh.org/HighRiseInfo/TallestDatabase/Criteria/HeightCalculator/tabid/1007/language/en-GB/Default.aspx
Wikipedia kneeling: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kneeling
Author's Response:
Welp, I didn't see that coming. :/ A tall building height calculator I mean. When I started writing the story, I used the Giantess Converter to determine the height of the giantess in the story but never thought to calculate the buildings they were surronded by.
Your impressive calculation skills has this half-baked writer stumped. My intentions was for the giantesses to be able to interact better with the smaller folk so I decided to have their height be around 120 ft. tall.
This has to be one of my greatest mistakes while writing this story and thank you for pointing it out. I might have to redit this chapter by changing the floors and height of the building. I apologies for this error.
[Report This]Date: October 22 2017 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Besides some spelling mistakes here and there, this story is the shit. I really like the interactions between the characters for instance. Not to mention, the way thick/curvy women are portrayed as well. Honestly I really like Blair and Sophie. I guess thick milfs for the win. Anyway, keep up the good work my dude :)
Author's Response:
Thanks man. :) It's been a while and I hope all is well with you. Have I mentioned that I suck at proofreading and spelling? I know a few people have been pointing that out so I better get my act together and fix them! P.S. I'm also a fan of MILFs ;)
[Report This]Date: September 02 2017 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
HrErYr rLrIrTrTrLrErKrUrRrIrBrOrHr,r rWrHrErRrEr'rSr rTrHrEr rNrErWr rErPrIrSrOrDrEr?r!r Sorry, force of habit. Just wanted to say that I'm really enjoying this story, and hope you update soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :) I've been really REALLY busy with a new job but I plan to update soon.
Date: July 23 2017 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
Seeing as you asked a direct question, I meant Asuka Langley from Evangelion. Although, those traits are what I personally got from Asuka's character - others may see her as just a hateful snobby rich kid - which she basically is at face-value throughout the show. But I think her character goes way deeper than that. (If you haven't seen Evangelion, ignore all this)
Oh, and yeah soz I meant to say Gwen :/ Just a little name mix up :3
See ya!
Author's Response:
Ah. Another anime I could put on my list to watch lol
[Report This]Date: July 21 2017 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 19
Sorry for not writing this review sooner. My stupid-stupidness didn't see this new chapter in the Most Recent page when it came out >:( Which is unfortunate as I really look forward to each chapter... stupid me and my stupid sleep schedule. Earl stupid of stupid town - his royal highness King Stu Pid IV - baka of bakas.
Anyway! I LOVED this chapter! It did everything it needed to and more - fixing the only real gripe I had with this story (there being too many characters introduced at one point) by sprouting off and giving focus to each one individually. With them being interesting and given distinguishable qualities that didn't fall under eccentricities. That's a really impressive feat! Their characters were subtle but also blatant (meaning they were easy to get the gist of) in their approaches - especially considering how many were introduced.
I already know that this review is gonna be a long one so I'm gonna do this to structure it better:
Intro: (Thomas and Tiffany)
At this point, (continuing on the thought of Chapter 18 being a turning point), I think this is as far as Tiffany and Thomas go in their development. As in, I think the way their interactions and everything have reached the point at which they've excepted each other and the only further development will be when this solace is disrupted - to test how much they actually and truly feel for each other (which has been done - but not to a dire extent).
Cecilia:
Definitely have a better grasp on her now - getting a sort of Asuka vibe. Her personality to me is that of someone how does care about what she believes in, but also on the other hand, also does it because it makes herself feel like a better person in a situation where she is dominant.
Maybe, that's why she decided to mother these tinies because people in the giant world saw her wealth and power and where too intimidated - maybe that's why she decided to become the center of these people's lives - as she couldn't connect with people in her own world.
Trisha:
To me, she seems like an interesting character to be developed. I want to see more scenes with her in the future to flesh out who she is - what type of person she is and whether or not she turns out to really care for her tiny. At this point she just seems confused so I wonder what it'll be like when she inevitably breaks - either in acceptance or denial. If you get my drift. I just mean that I think she'll be interesting to watch grow.
Bree:
Possibly my favourite of all the new characters. She's just an embodiment of absolute innocence within this story of arguably detestable/flawed natured characters. To me she's the only truly innocent and likeable character right off the bat of their introduction - like she isn't hiding anything. Whether that'll change or not I don't really know. But for now I appreciate her as being a relaxing and gentle character.
Blair:
What can I really say about that interlude?
...more like Inter-LEWD
Awww fam yeh cuz that was like bareeeeeeeee jokes man init bruv. Like - no neck, mothers. I swear down. You chatting my language?
Beverly/Zeke:
I've seen quite a few reviews already hypothesising the impending situations that may challenge Beverly's character so I don't think I need to here. But I have to say, I do see their relationship getting rather bitter-sweet/tragic by the end...
Regardless, I'm PUMPED to see what happens next. I've been enticed in this story since the first few chapters. And whilst I was initially drawn by the centralised narrative (and I'll admit a bit apprehensive about all the new characters coming in all at once). I now love the very natural direction the story has taken. I look forward in seeing what comes in the next few chapters.
(Just a tiny note, I noticed a few spelling errors here and there - like the very last word. I don't mean to be rude by saying this. I just thought making it known to you would be best if you were unaware)
See ya! ;)
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Hey MM! Man, you guys are killing with the reviews! Thank you so much! I guess chapter 19 was the best chapter so far. Btw, you're not a baka lol Sorry about some of the mispellings and grammar errors. It's sad that I actually thought I proofread this chapter properly -_-
I think I'm the real baka here...
Your analysis on the girl was interesting but just to clear any confusions, Gwen is the giantess and Trisha is her tiny lol I was actually more intrigued with your analysis of Bree. ^.^ She really does appear sweet and innocent, doesn't she? In fact, when I wrote her part in this chapter, I originally wanted the mother to reject her even after she sees Bree trying to comfort her son but I couldn't bring myself to have the titaness sweetheart go through that. The way you weighted out Bree's innocent nature compared to the other detestable/flawed girls from the meeting had me thinking I was reading a wikipedia page about an anime character's bio. It really got me hype lol.
Your deduction on Cecilia's kind treatment of the tinies to fill in that empty hole she has was another clever character analysis on your part. You truky have a sharp mind, man. I'm honestly a bit intimidated. :')
As for Tiffany's and Thomas's relationship, I have a feeling you and the other reviewers have an idea of whats going to happen next and the same goes for Zeke's and Beverly's relationship.
Thank you again for yet another review and btw, which Asuka from which anime were you referring to?
Author's Response:
Hey MM! Man, you guys are killing with the reviews! Thank you so much! I guess chapter 19 was the best chapter so far. Btw, you're not a baka lol Sorry about some of the mispellings and grammar errors. It's sad that I actually thought I proofread this chapter properly -_-
I think I'm the real baka here...
Your analysis on the girl was interesting but just to clear any confusions, Gwen is the giantess and Trisha is her tiny lol I was actually more intrigued with your analysis of Bree. ^.^ She really does appear sweet and innocent, doesn't she? In fact, when I wrote her part in this chapter, I originally wanted the mother to reject her even after she sees Bree trying to comfort her son but I couldn't bring myself to have the titaness sweetheart go through that. The way you weighted out Bree's innocent nature compared to the other detestable/flawed girls from the meeting had me thinking I was reading a wikipedia page about an anime character's bio. It really got me hype lol.
Your deduction on Cecilia's kind treatment of the tinies to fill in that empty hole she has was another clever character analysis on your part. You truky have a sharp mind, man. I'm honestly a bit intimidated. :')
As for Tiffany's and Thomas's relationship, I have a feeling you and the other reviewers have an idea of whats going to happen next and the same goes for Zeke's and Beverly's relationship.
Thank you again for yet another review and btw, which Asuka from which anime were you referring to?
Date: July 19 2017 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have to make this quick but I really really wanted to leave a review for you because this is one of my favorite stories coming out of Giantessworld right now. I'm more invested in the actual story than just the giantess stuff which for me is pretty rare. The character interactions are nuanced moments you have are beautiful. You really have a way of writing small character moments well as while I really want to see Beverely eat as many people as possible I still mourn every victim (like poor Kate from Chapter 17 who was revealed this chapter to have been devoured :'( rest in peace, in Beverly's bowels). That being said I truly am rooting for most of the characters, good and bad. I want Cecilia to be liked by Samuel Smith, I want Tiffany to be kind hearted, I want Abraham to admit his feelings to Lia, I want Mildred and Anika to get home safe, I want Zeke to keep loving Beverly, but I also want Beverly to wreck house. I really want Thomas and Tiffany to never fight and stay friends. I am more invested in these characters as actual people then for a majority of people in regular series I watch, and yu have actual conflicts in between making everything not pitch perfect, like Sophie not being upstanding by tiny standards or Tiffany getting jealous.
Your chapters are also really long, which is great because it's so much more to read, so much more content I have to look forward to. I can't wait for the next chapter to drop!
And one last plus, this world. If this story ever comes to a close I would definetly want to see the stories of more Rampagers. The world you've set up is rich and lively with different interactions between the giantess and tinies, between different cities attracting different company, different kinds of giantess that invade for different reasons, there are so many possibilities! You've done a good job of presenting them very well rounded with the different kinds of giantesses and as such it makes me really want to see more from within this universe.
Final thoughts, this chapter was light on giantess, well, Beverly style giantess rampaging which I usually come around these stories for. As such it says a lot that I didn't zoom through to look for any rampaging but read through the entire story, and have been since the beginning chapters. Not only that but have been completely invested with each character and their struggle, even the one off side characters. You've done really well and I hope to see this continue soon!
Author's Response:
Woah! Thank you, Gigastennistar! :D Imagine the look on my face when I saw your review!
I'm honored you like the story so much that you'd say it's one of your favorites! Yeah, I try to keep things interesting by showing as much conflict as possible oh and Beverly rampages are pretty sexy aren't, they? ;) There's a lot of things now I guess to look foward to and that was clever of you to point out what you want to see. Hopefully, you won't be disappointed lol
I might do a few shorts about this word like you said but I'm not sure yet. : Again, you honor me with your generous compliments. Thank you dearly for your words! :,)
[Report This]Date: July 16 2017 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 19
(Jesus that nineteenth chapter was ridiculously long, and I loved it)... So, I ran across this story two or three days ago and have spent a huge chunk of my free time reading it on my phone. I'm not very good with reviews, or even writing stories, mainly, but I can say I've enjoyed this one, a lot! It's hard to pick a favorite scene so far, such as Tiffany coercing the burger joint to feed Thomas because she couldn't stand him getting turned away, or Cecilia's understanding nature with Abraham's shyness. I'm a sucker for gentle themes, and there were quite a few in this story to be found so far! Really wish Thomas would tactfully and carefully explain to Tiffany what her Mother did to them, but I guess I can imagine why they'd stay quiet about it...
I hope Beverly gets her just-desserts one day, and Zeke's trying, too, but he's guilty through silence by this point. In my head, I imagine the only way to break her would be for someone to swallow Zeke, and tell her that it didn't matter because he wasn't as special to them as he was to her. But I'm stoked to see just how you move the story along from here. You've got a solid imagination, Nothingness!
And, so far, everyone's my favorite character besides the obviously douchebag ones. Haha! Anyways, I'm gonna favorite this so I can catch up on it later. Sooo, thanks! Good luck on the updates, but don't overwork yourself. I'm forcing a pace on myself with my own stories now, because when I start, I spend all day typing, and that ain't healthy.
See ya around.
Author's Response:
You flatter me, Intheliar. Thank you for the kind review and honestly, I think your being hard on yourself. You're an excellent writer and I"m not just saying that! I see nothing wrong with your writing, your spelling is on top with little to no errors and your females characters have pretty realistic dialogue if you ask me as well as being very likable and not possessing too much of a girly-girl stereotype. As you know, I've enjoyed Asher's Small Life like so many others have and of course, Dimensional Shift. I couldn't help but check your bio and my God, your almost 23?! I"m 23! :D You like Hunter x Hunter, I like Hunter x Hunter! I'm don"t smoke or drink either but you got me at the cursing and having a fiance part XD. Although, I usually curse with my friends like if we're joking or something, but for the most part, I talk pretty decent and my love life is empy T-T
Anywho, enough of that. Yeah, Tiffany getting Thomas that free meal was pretty sweet, right? Why can't I have a giantess get me a free meal?! Now that I think about it, reading your stories actually might have made me come up with Cecilia understanding Abraham's bashful nature without knowing it XD See, your an inspiration! Yeah, Beverly is a lose cannon, but like you hinted, Zeke may be the key to breaking her. Good luck on your updates too, and don't feel like you have to compare yourself or be better than anyone when you write your stories. ;)
Date: July 15 2017 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 19
By the way, is Gwen's birthday party going to be the next major event in this story? Or at least one of next ones? I REALLY hope so!
Also, sorry for forgetting to post this in my other review! lol
Date: July 14 2017 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 19
Hey buddy! This whole chapter was great, with lots of character development for all of the characters so far shown. However, and I'm sorry if I'm being obvious, but it was Gwen and Trisha who stood out the most to me! Not only were their interations super-cute and SUPER-HOT, but I like the idea of Gwen having a boyfriend while also having Trisha as a pet! My mind is already abuzz with all the fun stuff you can do with them! I'm kinda hoping for some three-way action! lol.
That would be cool, but I'd be just as cool with just some more Gwen and Trisha sexy-time! Can you pormise me there will lots more of that shown!? PLEASE! lol
Author's Response:
Hey back at ya, buddy! :D Gwen and Trisha stood out to you? Why, I had know idea :3 No need to apologize for the second post. As for more Gwen and Trisha time... Muhahaha! >3 We'll see... I think Gwen having a crush on Jeremy will be fun and hey, aren't birthday's suppose to be major? I don't want to spoil anything yet but I assure you IamtheWalrus, you won't be dissappointed. Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: July 14 2017 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter! I love how every major character got a bit of screentime here! My favorite of course was Cecilia's time but not just because of her but also because we were introduced to another character who I hope gets more screentime! Scarlet is another character I enjoy, she's not violent but is sexy, and knows it, and is obviously horny since she's looking for a mate. I dig how confortable she is with her body and how little shame she has, I don't think any giantess so far has been THIS flashy if you get me. I also like how casually playful she is, and of course: dat southern accent! It's obvious she's not evil and just wants a tiny mate, I actually think Cecilia was abit harsh considering she wasn't really hurting anyone but she got a cool million out of it! Also how loaded is this rich girl to just pay someone off like that!?
Anyway, as for the rest of Lia's story I'm not surprised to see that a tiny hates her, in fact I'm surprised it's only ONE person! Honestly I can't blame him if what happened to him really happened. Also lemme gush abit about Cecilia real quick...She's a keeper! She's super gentle, loving and caring but theres also that diva "princess" side of her that loves the attention and popularity. She's like a celebrity and I can tell she enjoys every second of it! I like how adorable she is when she was playing with the kids and how stubborn she is in her quest to have all the tinies become her adoring fans, no matter how jaded they are. She reminds me of those "rich blonde" archetypes in that they care more about animals than humans, sort of how she's super nice to tinies but is a stuck up snob to most giantesses. P.S.Abraham I'm rooting for you! Cecilia deserves her own tiny man!
The bit with Tiffany trying to figure out what was wrong with her friends and lifting Thomas with her feet was pretty cute. I like how tsundere Thomas was about liking Tiffany's feet, obviously he's ashamed of it since she's underage but we don't really know how the dynamics of age work in this world for the giants. Of course it's gonna be different for giantesses since they are so much stronger and bigger than a normal tiny sized kid, but at the same time being kids, they CAN be more easily manipulated by someone older even if that person is a tiny. We see it in this VERY chapter with Thomas talking her into going to the meeting when she obviously doesn't want to go. Not something that can be so easily done with an adult altho to be fair Zeke did also manage to talk Bev into going as well so maybe not...
As for Blaire, how did I know she was gonna be a mega lesbian? Lol. She definitely fits the "dyke" archetype. Her bit was pretty sexy, Bree had her cute moment too, I hope the mom tells everyone what Bree did so maybe the tinies can warm up to her. As for Beverly I'm not surprised she killed the tinies she had, I wish it wasn't off camera but oh well. I don't really see her changing honestly, Tiffany was also violent but she's still a kid and more maleable. And again, I'm not sure Tiff is really as "reformed" as she lets on, I really think she'd go right back to killing tinies like it was nothing if Thomas left her. Sorry for writting so much but the chapter had alot to cover. To recap my top thoughts: Cecilia's part was my favorite I hope she gets her own tiny man and I hope we get more Scarlet sexyness.
Author's Response:
First of, geeman. Whoa! Thank you for the long review! I kept on reading the whole thing smiling over and over again. I figured showing a bit of the other girls after the meeting would sell big time. What I didn't expect was Scarlett having a fan. lol I see you can appreciate a giantess who isn't too violent or forceful yet still possesses an amorous swag to her when interacting with tinies. Scarlett's southern accent gave her a nice flare to her character if you ask me. I have to agree with you, I like Cecilia a lot, too. She's definitely a very interesting character to have so much money and size over beings so small yet that doesn't stop her from loving them dearly. Her sophisticated speech and ignorance to certain lingo makes her all the more intriguing. I'll admit, her scene was the most fun to write about lol. I plan on showing were Cecilia's money come from but yeah, she's DEFINITELY loaded! Her snobbiness to other giantess gives her some spice which shows she has two sides to her personality. You have excellent taste in characters! Celebrity is a good word to describe Cecilia lol I didnt even see it like that!
Your right about Thomas being uncomfortable about Tiffany given her age. Personally, I don't know how I feel if I was in Thomas's place. While I have NO attraction to little girls, giantess little girls or giantess loli are a different matter... Anyways, like you said, it's easier for a giantess kid to be manipulated alright but I wouldn't nessessarily compare it to what Zeke did to Beverly. She's just blinded by her love for him, guess. :/
Bree's cute scene was a way to give the sweet girl a break from all the tinies that usually run from her and as for Blair, yeah, the lesbian bit does suite her doesn't it? I'm with you there with Tiffany not completely being reformed without Thomas's presence but hey, who know's? Not even I could tell lol We'll just have to wait and see. Ty for the amazing review and please, no need to apologize for it. ;)