Reviewer: astrall Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2016 6:45 AM Title: Ashley and Amber

WoW. Great to see you back with another story Oishi :)  You, girlfood and french_snack write amazing Forbidden Dish stories.

As for this installment, I love it how Amber couldn't wait to satisfy her curiosity of how shrunken men will taste and feel in her tummy and totally disregarded Hary's wishes to enjoy his fantasy of being eaten too. Especially as he had only one chance at that unlike Amber, who by the looks of it will be enjoying many more willing or unwilling victims in the near future.

 

I also loved the twist at the end. Ashley, completly unaware, digesting away Jonas in her murky stomach while thinking of him and how they could become something else than just friends :) Well, he really did become something else at the end :D

In a way all of them got what they wanted. Well almost. Amber wasn't thrilled by Jonas changing his mind in the last second of her eating him and she wanted to get back at him. And what better way than feeding him to his crush Ashley. That was the way he wanted to go anyway. He just needed just a little help to go through with it, right? :) So, he should really be considering himself lucky.

And Ashley, well, if anything, she got a nice satisfying meal and good memories out of all this. Well, she might feel bad when she doesn't hear from him anymore, but most likely he'llbecome part of her, so just as Amber told her, they'll be closer than most couples :)

That was just great! Thank you for the great story, Oishi and hope to see you write more.

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I like how you picked up the undertones.  I hope to get back to writing. Reviews and responses are always encouraging.