Date: December 28 2017 9:27 PM Title: Update!
Hang on. Frizzle got the reference first. Shouldn't he/she get the story choice?
Anyway, welcome back Ratt35!
I thought your last chapter was in the summer, but it was way back in April. Time flew by. Honestly I wasn't disappointed as much, becuase there were plenty of good stories back then.
However, you showed up at the right time becuase there are only a few good stories taking my interest at the moment.
I wasn't dissapointed until I saw that this chapter....wasn't really a chapter at all. Lol. Just a status update. Haha!
Still, it's great to hear from you. School is tough. Christmas break gives a nice breather.
I still remember this story. Drake and Ricky shrink, they get passed around by everyone. Of all the people in this story, Christine is still my favorite. That one chapter: "Christine the goddess", I read that at least 15 times now. It was so good and that it inspired me to become one of those characters and I hope that Christine gets a turn with my guy.
Glad there is hope yet.
I can't wait for the next chapter! (In 2019. Haha.)
Author's Response:
LOL this isn't Game of Thrones :P
Frizzle acutally told me that he didn't really want me to write a story for him he just wanted to comment on the reference. So I naturally gave it to second place and treated second place as first place in that regard.
So hopefully they will have an idea in mind xD
Yeah Engineering School is SUPER busy. Especially in the senior level classes. Which I have reached now xD.
I encourage you to freshen up on the story as well as the characters so that when I start back to it, you won't have any issues remembering what's going down :D
Sorry to disappoint about this not being an actual chapter update but I have always been known to throw a ton of cliff hangers after many chapters xD
[Report This]Date: December 28 2017 5:34 PM Title: When Lambs Become Lions
Love It! Everything is finally tying together!
Author's Response:
Oh man. Just wait until you get to the later chapters xD
Date: December 28 2017 5:27 PM Title: Update!
It's all good we all appreciate the hard work you've put in this amazing story and life can get busy. Take your time and no rush at all! Glad to hear that the story will continue on!
Oh the reference is from Star Wars
Author's Response:
Congrats! You get to tell me what type of story you'd like me to write! You can decide if you want it to be a simple short story (1-5) chapters long or a moderate story (10-15) chapters long. Or have one as long as the one I'm currently writing! (20- 100+) chapters long.
Date: December 28 2017 12:15 PM Title: Christine the Godess
@rhatt35 you are correct! I meant Rachel, not Kaitlyn :) switched name's by accident
Author's Response:
No worries :D I'd hate for someone to get characters confused because that could make a reader get really confused via continuity xD
[Report This]Date: December 28 2017 9:26 AM Title: When Life Takes Your Lemons
Yay! Lovely cliff hanger!
Author's Response:
You're certainly reading the story super fast! I admire your progress sir!
[Report This]Date: December 28 2017 9:19 AM Title: Christine the Godess
Just remembered that Kaitlyn destroyed the shrink ray... oh dear! And Christine is the epitome of a milf fantasy!
Author's Response:
Ahh but remember that it was Rachel who destroyed the shrink device! She did so right in front of Ricky if my memory serves correct!
It can become really confusing even to me so I can provide a list of characters and who they are real quick.
Drake (First and main tiny)
Ricky (Second tiny and Drake's best friend)
Kaylee (Drake's younger sister AKA: The awesome one!)
Kaitlyn (Drake's older sister and also known as the tormentor you Love!)
Jennifer (Rachel's daughter who is friends with Kaylee)
Rachel (mother of Jennifer and Lover of Drake's mother)
Christine (Mother of Drake and Lover of Rachel!) May also be called Ms. Dobson.
Based off the chapters you have read, I believe that those are all of the characters you have run into so far that are of importance! I hope this helps!
Keep in mind I haven't went back and read these chapters in a long time so I may be wrong or have something mixed up so feel free to correct me if I'm wrong :D
[Report This]Date: December 28 2017 8:53 AM Title: Drake the Dungeon Diver
Kaitlyn is quickly becoming a favorite. I love the cruel woman!
[Report This]Date: December 28 2017 8:21 AM Title: The Things We Do For Love
Kaylee is a true heroine! Bravo!
[Report This]Date: December 28 2017 8:12 AM Title: Third Party Intervention
Poor Ricky! I love the the tornent!!
[Report This]Date: December 27 2017 4:03 PM Title: Heat of the Moment
1. I love the throwback to the chapter where Kaitlyn tried to get Drake up their sister's ads, nice touch and shows consistency
2. You keep saying "simulate" when it should be "stimulate" just a heads up:)
3. Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: December 27 2017 3:50 PM Title: Mind if I Butt In?
Hot damn...
Date: December 27 2017 9:32 AM Title: Close calls with little Sis
As predicted! The rock is gone lmao 😂👌🏼 poor drake
[Report This]Date: December 27 2017 9:25 AM Title: Kaitlyn, the Witch
Damn this was a hot chapter! Wished there was a bit more detail, but still a good read!
[Report This]Date: December 27 2017 9:15 AM Title: Kaylee, the Dragon?
Love It! And I already know the rock ray will be gone in the morning 😂😂
[Report This]Date: December 27 2017 9:03 AM Title: The Dragons Come Out at Night
Lmao. I love how he mistakenly fucks himself over 😂👌🏼 good shite right there. Short chapters, but certainly worth the read!
[Report This]Date: December 27 2017 8:44 AM Title: Wake up bro!
Kaylee and Drakes relationship is great! It's just how 2 siblings would act with one another imo!
Short chapter, but entertaining!
[Report This]Date: April 13 2017 7:59 PM Title: Wake up bro!
SHALLOWLY want my character to be shrunk. It doesn't matter to me, only if it is convenient to the plot. Oh and can my person NOT be a naughty bitch like Christina (Thumbs up good chapter bro)
[Report This]Date: April 11 2017 10:12 AM Title: Wake up bro!
OMG YES! I want to be shrunken just as much as Tom does. I'm sorry if it's inconvenient to your plans but that's what I've wanted since you mentioned it.
[Report This]Date: April 10 2017 3:22 AM Title: Briefing
This chapter felt long, I like it.
When the group walked in on Ricky and Drake, you mentioned "Tom and Ricky looked on over" when it should have been Drake and Ricky. Hmm. I guess you are already mistaking me as the shrunken guy already. :)
And yes! I DEEPLY want my character to be shrunken. Not only shrunken, but found by a naughty woman too (like Christina). Actually, I think you already know what I want, so I will stop right there.
Shusha is an interesting character. Like a female version of The Rock. If Jessica's plan doesn't work, plan B is just to send Shusha in to get the guards.
Well, there are so many things happening in this plan, so something is bound to not got according to plan. Good thing they went over back up plans.
Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Lol dang, I was trying my best not to mix up names xD. This chapter had so many characters talking to each other that I probably accidentally wrote it. Not to mention there is another story that I read on this site that has Tom as a protagonist xD. Oh well, I'll have to edit it in later, but you guys know exactly what I meant to put. And oh yeah, you're going to be shrunk. I just have to figure out a practical way for it to happen xD.