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Date: February 04 2019 9:51 PM Title: Kaylee, the Dragon?

Hmm I wonder where exactly he'll be sleeping tonight... ;)

 

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Date: February 04 2019 9:39 PM Title: The Dragons Come Out at Night

Here we go... ;)

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Date: February 04 2019 9:33 PM Title: School is Overrated

hmm this is starting to get interesting... ;)

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Date: February 04 2019 9:16 PM Title: Wake up bro!

Cute introduction! I like these two already lol

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Date: January 30 2018 5:52 PM Title: Showtime

HELL YEAH ITS BACK. And tacos are great also I found out I'm a lesbian surprise surprise

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Date: January 02 2018 10:50 AM Title: Showtime

All caught up. Shusha is hilarious. The guards screaming match with Kaylee was flipping great 😂😂😂



Author's Response:

I must admit that I was laughing the entire time I was writing it xD

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Date: January 02 2018 9:19 AM Title: Introductions

Kaylee and Joe better fuck. That's all I gotta say 😂

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Date: January 02 2018 8:22 AM Title: Dossiers

Shites boutta get realz 

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Date: January 01 2018 9:23 AM Title: A Most Awaited Reunion

I wanna fuck Christine LOL 

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Date: January 01 2018 8:55 AM Title: Little Exercise Never Hurt Anyone

I have an issue with this chapter. Earlier in the story, Kaylee had no issue putting Drake her pocket, but all of a sudden it's a 'tight' space? It doesn't really make sense, and the excuse seems odd :/



Author's Response:

Eh I can't remember the chapter where I had Kaylee put Drake in her pocket.

I usually have Kaylee as a person who mainly wears dresses so I find it odd myself that I wrote her wearing pants.

That would have fixed the excuse issue and the plot hole issue but oh well. Shit happens during writing.

 

I don't plan ahead my chapters. I actually brainstorm them as I write with a VERY general idea of where I want to go so hopefully you can forgive me for being a little absent minded xD

 

Thanks for pointing that out though!

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Date: January 01 2018 12:08 AM Title: The Apple Doesn't Fall Far From the Tree

Poor drake can't catch a break 😂

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Date: December 30 2017 10:20 PM Title: Showtime

Titled showtime, but it was basically the final prep. Lol. Showtime seems to be next chapter.

After all these months, it's good to see a chapter back out again. Makes me excited for the rest of the story.

Well, this chapter let us know that the plan is good to go and that everyone seems to be ready. I will reread the last few chapters because I forgot what this mission is even about, haha.

I really want Christine to have some fun, but first this mission has to be finished, so part of me is curious to see how this mission would go. Something tells me that soemthing will go wrong.

Future has many possibilities. I can't wait for the next chapter!

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Date: December 30 2017 7:41 AM Title: Life is Full of Surprises (And Lemons)

Jessica is everybody's dream giantess 👌🏼

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Date: December 30 2017 7:31 AM Title: Trust Issues

Damn... poor Kaitlyn  :( she clearly has a troubled history

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Date: December 30 2017 7:19 AM Title: A Brief Moment of Sincerety

YES!!! My all time favorite chapter!!! Ugh I fucking love Kaitlyn soooo much! I hope her and Ricky get together! Fuck their age gap xD 

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Date: December 29 2017 4:48 PM Title: Problem Faces Solution

I love Jessica! I'm so glad she's not an evil cunt LOL



Author's Response:

Haha Nooo Jessica is based off someone I know in real life. She may get sexual desires of course, but never be Evil

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Date: December 29 2017 4:29 PM Title: Planning Ahead

I'm happy to see Jennifer being remorseful over her selfish actions. But at the same time Kaylee is right not to trust her. I've actually grown to hate Rachel and Christina... tho their cruelty is hot af, on a moral level they are grotesque beings! Kaitlyn gets a free pass tho ;)



Author's Response:

Haha well Christine was always one I would consider the nicer of the two. The ONLY reason she treated Ricky the way she did was because she didn't want hers and Rachel's secret to get out.

I can't remember when, but I think I wrote Christine a bit more remorseful.

 

Or maybe that's what you're confusing Jennifer with?

It makes more sense to still dislike Rachel and Jennifer because that's the vibe I got from them lol.

Rachel and Jennifer were written to be more like, "like mother like daughter" type of relationship.

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Date: December 29 2017 9:32 AM Title: Not All Heros Wear Capes

Im honestly happy to see that Drake is finally in the hands of someone trustworthy!

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Date: December 29 2017 9:05 AM Title: Weighed, Measured, and Found Wanting

I was hoping Kaitlyn would eat him lol. Ugh she's so fucking hot!!!

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Date: December 29 2017 8:18 AM Title: The Lion Sleeps Tonight

Hot. As. F*ck.

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