Date: November 02 2014 3:46 PM Title: Waitress
@Wildcat, this is probably not true but do you have a YouTube account called I am Wildcat?
Date: October 31 2014 8:15 PM Title: Waitress
Sure,.. four inches would be fine. Just as long as he's not so small that he could get lost in her hair....
btw- I've been casually scanning through some of your work, and you seem to be improving, somewhat. I think that if you slowed down, just a bit, you'd easily catch some of your blunders. Which aren't really too bad, just an occasional error in type.
EX: To; Too . and some slight wording, that I'm sure that you didn't mean to do...
Jack Smith told me a long time ago to just have fun, and write what you feel. And he's right,... If your not enjoying the story, then nobody else will either!
You've got some good stuff in there, if you just slow down, and clean it up a bit...
Wildcat ;`)
Author's Response: I agree in that I think I'm improving as well. I admit my first stories were awful but I feel that I'm making progress with my work. Don't worry, I enjoy what I write so other people should like it too.
[Report This]Date: October 31 2014 5:23 PM Title: Waitress
Cool,... Really, I like any waitress that likes to eat Peter! ;`)
I'd like to see your version of the 'Evil Stepmother'- turned Giantess, and her misbehaving little stepson,.. Only, don't shrink him down below six inches...
...anything smaller than that just seems to be 'overkill' for me. Although, it can work in short storys, I never really get into it much with longer versions.
Maybe he has a step sister too. And, she is the one that trys to 'save him', from her Evil Mother...
Author's Response: Maybe I could fit that into a really long short story. Would it be ok though if he was shrunk down to 4 inches?
Date: October 20 2014 1:45 AM Title: Waitress
Maybe an unassuming teen girl gets the upper hand against the popular bitch? (I know it's cliché...) Maybe with some slave stuff?
Author's Response: Oh ok. So a teen girl shrinks the person who bullies her and makes he/her a slave.