Reviews For The Empty Coffin
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Reviewer: Panzer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2019 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is such a fantastic premise. Every line just built up the fear and then to be so stoic about the funeral had me wow'd.  

Reviewer: Binary_Prophet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

I found this to be cleverly written. it was a real pleasure to read, and damn hot. hell of a strong voice. wonderfully concise. love, love, love Kerry. really enjoyed it!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2014 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

Kerry is one of the most insanely hot giantesses on the site, seriously.

And she loves him!

Lucky bastard ;p



Author's Response:

Thank you for your feed back, high praise indeed!

Glad you enjoyed it.

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Reviewer: lilguyunderfoot Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

this was really cool, i like the setting and intense interaction with your characters. well done



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feed back, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well played, I've seen this concept before but rarely as a stand alone. Well done good sir.



Author's Response:

Thanks AdamX, I appreciated the feedback and am glad you enjoyed it.

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Reviewer: Casanova Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nigma, this was a very sexy story. I was particularly impressed by how much you were able to evoke from the characters in so little space. Plus, something about the funeral setting made it that much better. I'm not sure that I've read a GTS story quite like it. Great job!

I can only think of one piece of constructive criticism to give you, and really it isn't much, but anyway I just felt like you missed an opportunity to expand even further on the funeral setting. While I of course enjoyed Kerry's violent imaginings, I think you could have made it even more personal by introducing another character, however-so-briefly, and have that character give Kerry a hug or something, thereby increasing the tiny's suffering even further. Maybe a knowing remark from Kerry during a snippet of conversation between her and someone else could bring the horror of the situation starkly to the fore. Just a thought.

Either way, I very much enjoyed the story and I'll be going back to read the rest of your work as well. Hope to see more sexy foot action from you in future stories!



Author's Response:

Thanks Casanova,

I'll take that feedback on board going forwards, I'm always keen to improve the quality of my stories. I hope you enjoy my other work as well.

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Reviewer: The Demon Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2014 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love it. Keep going.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it.

This story is finished now but it is my ninth on the site so hopefully you will enjoy the other ones too.

 

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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2014 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow. This was fantastic. Hope to see more of your stories.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks aaron and thank you very much for the rating.

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