Date: July 25 2014 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sorry I meant to click on 10 out of 10 instead of 9
Date: July 25 2014 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow you got me engaged from the first chapter and I just read it all through today. Great job!!!!!!
Date: July 24 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
In the immortal words of Arte Johnson:
"Veeeeeeeeeeeeeery interestink!"
Date: July 24 2014 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 12
intresting. the girls can hear him no problem, but other people can not.
Date: July 24 2014 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Man oh man you have quite a talent my friend. You really have a way with words. I have enjoyed every chapter so far, but I gotta say this was my favorite so far. I love the way the characters are interacting with each other. Can't wait to see where you take this one!
Date: July 23 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wait then how is it that guy didn't hear him or even see him? Or is Peter just lucky he didn't look.
Date: July 23 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Keep it going love your writing, it has inspired me into making my own story. Thank you!
Author's Response:
Wow, never expected to hear that from someone.
Good luck and thank you.
Date: July 23 2014 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Maybe only Emily and her friends can see him but this is creepy, how many people can't see him? This is definitely some sort of magical force at work.
Author's Response:
Well because of Emily's mom we have proof that anyone can see him. She simply thought he was a bug because she was without her eyeglasses.
Date: July 23 2014 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm in love with your style of writing. Seriously, wow. I can tell how much genuine value you put into your writing, which isn't something I see as much as I'd like to, sadly. It's very rare that I take a liking to authors in this community, but you've definitely captured that. You're a great person. Please, keep it up.
Author's Response:
Wow, that seriously means a lot.
I do really love writing this because Peter is pretty much me but with a different name. This is everything I've ever fantasized about. And not only that but this story is really important to me. You may notice the word "freak" gets thrown around a lot. That's because I've always seen myself as one ever since I learned what a giantess fetish was and that I have one. So, in a way, this story is me helping myself through some issues.
Date: July 21 2014 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 11
Sounds as if Pete might be afraid his good fortune, thus far, is literally too good to be true.
Date: July 20 2014 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
An amazing story, I would add more but my Internet is being very choppy but I will tell you, this story is amazing, the gentle aspect is something I enjoy and often hard to do but you pulled it off beautifully well done. I cannot wait for more. I crave it. Very amazing.
Date: July 20 2014 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 11
Another great chapter, I really look forward to this development and how far you'll take this. The telepotation is interesting me, I mean, no sound or flashes. NOTHING to indicate that it's there other than joseph's reaction, sounds pretty scary, I also love the fact that he is anxious, it really fits the situation.
Only thing I question, is how they heard the guitar clearly, as I thought it was just him that could be heard, not objects and other things, which begs the question whether that was intentional or possibly a gap/silence to leave an air of mysticism.
Either way, awesome job man/ma'am.
Date: July 19 2014 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Will you ever explain how she shrunk, how did a tiny guitar appear in the Batcave? It's too much of a mystery and also why must Peter have such terrible dreams, those girls love him too much for that!
Date: July 19 2014 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
I did not expect a tiny guitar to show up. But it improved the story. Wonder if he (and us) will ever find out where these things are comming from. Wonder what or surprises are in store.
Author's Response:
It improved the story?
I just added in that part mostly because I really enjoy playing guitar and one of my fantasies is to play songs for a giantess. I'll be honest, when I wrote it out I assumed everyone's reaction would be to say 'Goddammit. He turned the story into another High School Musical. How stupid can you get?'
Thank you for sticking with the story for as long as you have, and your comments are encouragement whenever I don't feel like writing. I'll try and answer as many questions as I can when I decide to rap this story up.
Date: July 19 2014 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
Was that dream Peter had an omen of what's to come or just a bad dream? I think dropping him in ice cream last chapter was kind of a dick move, especially since they don't know if his body retains heat the same way as a normal human and he could have gotten frostbite or something...But other than that the girls have been pretty good to him.
Im eager to find out what happens next and WHO the mastermind behind all this is!
Author's Response:
Who says there is a mastermind? . . . . Dun Dun Duuuuuuuuuun
Date: July 11 2014 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
The games girls play. Come to think it with so many girls knowing the truth, the odds of word getting out increases.Hopefuly thst won't happen. But a girl could have loose lips.
Date: July 11 2014 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey, awesome story so far!... Any idea when you'll be ready to do the Sequel to "Who's he Bigger Person"?
Date: July 11 2014 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
I notice how the others neglected to swear they won't tell anyone else about Little Peter.
Author's Response:
They did. Like I said they did everything Tara did when she first saw Peter at his new size. I just skipped over it because I was pretty sure you didn't want to have to read a lengthy conversation that has already been had once before.
Trust me, no one is going to tell people about Peter, that's not the point of the story.
Date: July 11 2014 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
So many people knowing, can't be good. No matter the laughs, someone will mess it up.
Author's Response:
If by "mess it up" you mean they'll accidentally let the secret slip it's pretty unlikely. And even if they did who would believe them? Even if they took a photo every one would just assume it's Photoshop. They'd have to introduce Peter to someone personally in order to spill the secret.
Date: July 07 2014 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 9
I love the way this story is shaping up to be, the protagonist seems pretty convincing and the spin you've put on this story, definitely puts it apart from A LOT of the gts material that I've read. I'm looking forward to the development of this story and I really wonder how the protagonist will cope with this new situation