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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 06 2023 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really cute story of the pretty 5th grade girl eating the boys in her class during the play. It's a fun and interesting idea and a pretty good setup, if lacking quite a bit on the delivery. For example, how were they shrunk? And why would the audience just sit there and let it happen as clearly the boys weren't acting or reciting any lines; the execution at the end needs to be more well thought out and the eating portions can certainly be made more fun and erotic.

Reviewer: kinkajou Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2022 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

Weird, I had reviewed this long ago, but it was replaced with a single dot, full-stop, or period. Did I say a bad thing, or disagree with an "admin"?

It's a great, well-written story.

Reviewer: Comix Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2009 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Let's see... I could give you praise for writing a "metaphorical" story about how murderous sexual fantasies are ruining media, but that's just me being too optimistic.

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