[Report This]Date: June 04 2022 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Your story has a nice pace, and your writing can be what I call beautiful. It's nice, sort of peaceful, still giving us the thrills of the actions it's narrating.
I'd just suggest to keep related chapters together in the same story. There are some stories of yours that are just direct, single chapter continuations of other stories of yours. I know, there are lots of reasons it would be better to split some stories in smaller stories than in multiple chapters, but I don't think your stories fit those reasons. They're like chapters trying to stand out as full stories. They're still good of course, but I think that they would fit better as chapters in a single story.
Author's Response:
Hi Milla,
Thank you for your feedback, which is gratefully recieved. I'm glad that you like my writing style and narrative.
I will consider your advice and see how best to post the stories, I suppose different chapters sometimes contain different types of content and this is why I originally divided them up because I like to diversify my stories and writing so it is not all just the same. It also makes it more interesting to write as well.
Cheers
Rich