I wish I was more adept at giving specific feedback but I will just simply say that the story was absolutely phenominal, and it's the level of worldbuilding, storytelling and quality that I hope to emulate with my own writings. The characters, the scenarios, the flow of the story, all great.

This story is probably up there as one of my favorites and I am excited to see more of these characters for a potential sequel.

Awesome!! I simply loved it!

Like you pointed out to me, I can't see my first review here, but I remember telling you that the story was very good but Katelyn seemed to be just words, telling but not exactly showing. Always winning, always getting, while Finn always had to give, to cede. Well, this changed a lot as the story grew!

You not just put Katelyn actually demonstrating her feeling and words but also put Finn's feelings and thoughts, whatever they were, on the table, showing how he was enjoying Katelyn's love and how it contrasted more and more with the Katelyn he used to know, at the same time showing his disapproval, be it public or just in his thoughts, about many of Katelyn's bad behaviors, including the party queen thing (OK, I loved the lesson she taught to Tina! <3). He started to have a voice in the relationship and Katelyn, despite loving to be always the center of attentions, let him have it.

Also, the development of the situations and dynamics were just brilliant, I must add that! The characters weren't just plain and obvious, for example Katelyn being just an caring ex-bully and Finn being just her boring ex-target and current lover. They reacted differently (sometimes even unexpectedly) in different situations, Finn kept having some hard feelings about Katelyn's past for a while, just fully accepting that she changed after Katelyn, in a bold move of love/reliability, claimed to be the only responsible for the 'growing problem' at the party, saving him from the worst... this didn't just made your characters more believable, it made them natural, it made them human! I felt connected to them! For example, I hated when Finn revealed that Gloria, despite talking again with Katelyn, actually didn't care about her when she was a giantess, and OK, I'm guilty: because of that, I just loved that Katelyn sort of ruined Gloria's party with her meltdown lol. Katelyn's losing nothing by forgetting Gloria. I felt sorry for Finn's past, felt happy that Katelyn was not only trying but actually being different, being better for Finn... I hated Tina but sort of forgave her when she talked better in the last chapter... these sort of connections don't happen when you're dealing with plain characters, those who are just a bunch of descriptions and robotic actions.

And the best surprise: you gave us a hook for a continuation! I don''t know what role Finn and Katelyn will have in the second story or if they'll show in it at all, but I'm already looking in advance to see it!

GREAT story! Hope we get a sequel!

Author's Response:

Thank you! Don’t worry! I’ve already got a sequel in the works!

I have my fingers crossed in hopes they eventually get married to top off the romance theme.

This latest chapter makes Finn feel like a total jackass.

Have been hoping for an update and this was a nice lengthy follow up.

I personally hope things between Finn and Katelyn don't sour. I love their relationship.

I also hope she doesn't get locked up (or turned into an experiment) or lose her powers.

Her size changing is such a great and fun aspect and when used with Finn it's a great plot device (and sexy plot device XD)

I think she definitely needs to not drink and grow (or if she does, ....not drink so much, and only do it with Finn and her are having some unwinding time with some alcohol) no more GTS party animal mode for Katelyn XD (even though I loved her sticking Tina in her ass crack and Finn in her armpit)

Tina really should learn to not be bitchy queen bee type to a girl who can literally grow and pick her up in one hand....like where is the logic in that.

I hope Tina isn't going to come back to bite them, but something tells me she might be a pain in their asses (....no pun intended). 

Again hope Katelyn and Finn can smooth things over, and Katelyn can keep her freedom. (I'm guessing her powers can't be removed/hoping they can't. So the government people Doctor Hopkins was talking about would probably try and kill Katelyn, lock her up, or try and control her) 

This chapter makes for a really great insight into how Katelyn acted before her growth. She's been playfully demeaning before, but she really embraces her ability to be the biggest personality in the room here.
I really liked her letting loose. She's been cooped up and kept away from everything she used to love for so long, I think it makes total sense that she might go a bit overboard. Sure, it doesn't suggest the healthiest relationship, but growing into changed people is what this story has at its core.
I'm just hoping that the doctor has some news about the risk of additional growth.
Great chapter, looking forward to the next one!

Another great chapter here :) 

Glad to see more of this story and it's continuation.

This chapter was wild XD

On one hand Katelyn was having a ton of fun (and definitely loved her putting Tina in her ass crack XD)


I hope Tina takes this as a lesson to not fuck with Katelyn any more.

But on the other hand, she did get a bit out of hand and didn't listen to Finn and humiliated him (whether drunken/without malicious intent or not)

I mean hey, if they were having kinky sexy fun and she put him in her armpit, that's different than doing it in front of a whole party when he is telling her he doesn't want to/wants her to calm down.

I hope they resolve the issue and make up in the next chapter, it seems Katelyn had a realization (and ensuing drunken crying/emotional moment) and will most likely be all apologetic, I hope Finn doesn't go too hard on her, but she still will need to apologize. 

Finn and Katelyn are still perfect together, I do love their relationship as a couple and again it's a great story you've woven between them and their growth together (hehe, not necessarily physical) but emotionally and how they are in love.

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Writing wise you continued to write these characters well and the interaction when Katelyn is big is also continued to be well written, picturing her chugging the keg's of beer, and then getting bigger and just crushing one open with her teeth, etc. 

And the armpit scene XD (as much of an issue as that was for Finn) was also really cool and described well.

Can't wait to read more, and hoping Finn and Katelyn make up over her drunken shenanigans. 

This was such a sweet story.  Personally I'm a sucker for wholesome lewdness, size changing girlfriends, and former villainesses redeeming themselves and this hit all those buttons.  The fact that Katelyn stays nice even after becoming small again shows that she's genuine about turning over a new leaf and her feelings towards Finn.

Glad tp know that this story is still going because I really love these characters and would love to see more of them. With maybe a bit more world building since I love the idea of the whole growing thing being a mutation that maybe anyone can get.