Date: October 19 2022 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 9: Into the stomach!
Nice. I hope Levi does get sucked into the intestines. I love full tour vore. I wonder if he will be lost in a pile of poop, and she doesn't see him before she flushes.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Wel'll see ;)
Date: October 19 2022 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
Really excited to see a new chapter. You did great with the vore perspective! Obviously hope he finishes the trip through her, just because her teasing is so much fun. Any idea when we might see another chapter?
Author's Response:
Thanks! I don't know when the next chapter is finished though, hopefully soon!
Date: October 19 2022 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
I really hope Levi gets some sort of payback or justice for this bullshit but with as far as things have gone it seems unlikely there can be a satisfying ending like that since it would be hard to come up with something suitable that fits the story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. I'm just trying to have a bit of fun ;)
Date: July 17 2022 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 8: Down the hatch!
Loving the story! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: June 22 2022 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 8: Down the hatch!
A great story, not really into vore more a pussy insertion fan but like it anyway. Please keep it up well
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm sure he'll return to her pussy once he's back out ;)
Date: June 21 2022 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 8: Down the hatch!
Nice. I really hope all the drinks make Luna forget about Levi. Especially if he gets caught in the villi of her small intestine so he has to spend several days in there without her remembering.
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks! She will forget him for at least a while.
[Report This]Date: June 13 2022 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
So glad I found this again! I read this a while ago and had forgotten about it. I just remembered the girls name started with an L and a vague idea of what the tags were. Spent about 10 minutes looking even with the advanced search.
Author's Response:
Thanks, but why the 2,5 star review..! lol
Date: April 15 2022 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
What I find so fascinating about the story is the fact that, from my point of view, it's neither "Gentle" nor "Cruel." For gentle, the victim suffers too much, for cruel, the victim doesn't suffer enough.
For gentle, the sister is being too hard on our brother, for cruel, it's still the sister knowing that it won't “hurt" him.
I find the story funny because of this.
Author's Response:
That is really kind of you to say, it's the exact mix I'm going for! :)
Date: March 24 2022 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 7: In you go!
what is lunas end game. no way levi is going to just let this go when he gets regrown well unless you pull a porn plot moment and he doesn't act like a normal person
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks for taking the time to comment on the story!
To answer you question; I don’t know yet. I’m just trying to have some fun.
But I got a lot of questions about the ending; maybe I’ll just leave that part open. But to be fair; it is porn writing in the end ;)
How would you end it? :)
[Report This]Date: March 22 2022 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 7: In you go!
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[Report This]Date: March 22 2022 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 7: In you go!
Excellent chapter. It will be awesome to see what Levi has to face in the future. He has this underlying feeling that is enjoying this and Luna is trying to pull it out. If he embraces it, he would love this intimacy.
Author's Response:
Totally agree, but when will he give in ;)
[Report This]Date: March 22 2022 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
Wonderful chapter finally getting to him getting truly used by her. Was excellent and I hope you keep going, I look forward to more if you do. Really want to see him get to experience anal at that size
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: February 04 2022 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 6: Panty prisoner
Okay, so I think even if Levi was turned on by his sister, she doesn’t realize he was actually just in a bad spot when he found the shrink box.
I think regardless of her enjoyment with shrunk Levi that since she has experience being a dom for shrunken people that she would’ve made sure to check if he really wanted this.
It’s likely she thinks his panic is more of an act but when the trip is over, she’ll soon realize he was actually traumatized by all this when they finally talk. So… she’ll likely need to keep him away from their folks until she can get him to get himself together.
I would however like to see Levi get one over his sister and she’ll be the one to see how her playthings dealt with their experiences as a shrunken toy with Levi back to normal size.
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks for your comments! Although I know what you mean, but I won't write the reversal part.. Let's see how this story plays out :)
[Report This]Date: February 04 2022 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 6: Panty prisoner
I'm really glad this is back! I love the teasing and everything about this chapter. It's sooo perfect! I just wish Luna brought along her brother during her run though. Still this is another one of a heck excellent chapter again, mate! Keep it up!
Can't wait for Levi to graduate as his sister's actual dildo
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: February 04 2022 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
Very fun chapter! Something tells me once she is finished using her new toy, she will have worked up quite the appetite!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Stay tuned for chapter 8 :)
Date: January 18 2022 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 5: Crossing boundaries
awesome story so far!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Please feel free to give suggestions for the story!
[Report This]Date: December 25 2021 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 5: Crossing boundaries
Very good story !
Author's Response:
Thanks! If you have any suggestions you know where to find me!
[Report This]Date: December 16 2021 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 5: Crossing boundaries
Great chapter and story. I like how Luna is balancing out how Levi is still her brother and a tiny that is a sextoy, her sextoy. Levi is struggling with the situation as well. He doesn’t want to be here but he is secretly enjoying it.
I do wish that he will be swallowed and live through it. He is pretty tough by the shrinkbox increasing his durability. Maybe one of those stores has a gel to protect the tiny even more, and give them a flavor, like strawberries. If she does swallow him, the question will be how big she wants to eat him. Would she keep him a small crumb or would she grow him to be a couple of inches to feel him go down?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words! I believe the box will make him invulnerable to it from the start. I like the flavour bit though! Maybe she'll swallow him both ways.
Date: December 16 2021 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake
Hey, just a suggestion, but what if there was a sequel in which it is the sister's turn to be the plaything? I believe some people might also get a kick out of a male giant :P
Date: December 16 2021 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 5: Crossing boundaries
Wonderful story so far. I hope one of the features of the update is an option to swallow a tiny, and have them come out the other end still alive. A full tour.
Author's Response:
Stay tuned, almost there :)