Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2022 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 5: Crossing boundaries

awesome story so far!

Author's Response:

Thanks! Please feel free to give suggestions for the story! 

Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16 2021 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 5: Crossing boundaries

Great chapter and story. I like how Luna is balancing out how Levi is still her brother and a tiny that is a sextoy, her sextoy. Levi is struggling with the situation as well. He doesn’t want to be here but he is secretly enjoying it.

I do wish that he will be swallowed and live through it. He is pretty tough by the shrinkbox increasing his durability. Maybe one of those stores has a gel to protect the tiny even more, and give them a flavor, like strawberries. If she does swallow him, the question will be how big she wants to eat him. Would she keep him a small crumb or would she grow him to be a couple of inches to feel him go down?

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words! I believe the box will make him invulnerable to it from the start. I like the flavour bit though! Maybe she'll swallow him both ways. 

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16 2021 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 5: Crossing boundaries

Wonderful story so far. I hope one of the features of the update is an option to swallow a tiny, and have them come out the other end still alive. A full tour.

Author's Response:

Stay tuned, almost there :) 

Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2021 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 4: Taking things further

I was thinking that Luna could grow Levi’s dick to be bigger while he remains small. She can fun with his dick which is absurdly large for his body. She could also grow his tongue to lick her.

The other part is that she could use the shrinkbox on herself. She could minimize her breasts and place Levi on her breasts again under her bikini. Luna then returns the breasts back to normal to really have the bikini squeeze him.

Just some ideas. I really like the story.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'll take them in consideration! 

Reviewer: tra xanh Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2021 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

Great chapter! The end is really great at making me look forward to the next chapter and the slow buildup is great for character building. Kinda sad that she didn't buy herself a present from his money (connected to the app maybe?) but can understand if it's not in your vision. 

Very much looking forward to how the story continues! 

Author's Response:

Thanks! I still plan to do that. Maybe with an update from the shrinkbox. 

Reviewer: Lupe Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2021 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

Does the shrink box only shrink and change what they experience? Or does it also transform? Like could he end up as her thong? Or even transformed into a part of her body like her breast or butt to be teased?

Just trying to see what it is capable of!

Author's Response:

That's a nice thought! That would give her even more options later on. Will think about it, if you have any ideas, let me know. You can also write me an email: yougts@gmail.com

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2021 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 3: Settling in!

Love this chapter! It is great to see that Levi is enjoying her sister a bit too much. I like the addition of the tongue piercing to carry him in her mouth. I wonder what other sort of places she put the bead. I wonder what Luna would think when she notices Levi’s erection. Maybe play with it to make him cum.

Since she doesn’t have her usual toys to please herself, she is going to need a new set for the three weeks. Maybe a new product pops out in that store. A dildo that is customizable for whatever a person wants to do to a tiny person. An inside compartment for them to watch from the outside, check. A tip point to allow them to feel it, check. A pod with liquid to shot them inside, check. There are additional features that can be added but she can purchase those later.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: L200 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2021 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: The mistake

Mmmm... My post-horny self still wants her to get somehow caught just for the hell of it, even if it is an alternate ending, but still, great read.

As a side note, the shrinking process makes him not need to eat or anything, but it doesn't stop bodily functions, does it? I imagine him getting a bit of payback at her by shitting in her mouth or smth, dunno. 

Author's Response:

Hmm, I think the bodily functions just stops. :) An alternate ending could be an option though! 

Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2021 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 2: The car ride

An interesting idea for something for Luna to buy is an earring depending on how small she can make Levi when she can use the device again to change his size. If the earring had a glass bead that was hollow and one way visibility. Luna could have herself hearing the little voices of Levi without her parents know he was there. There are other ideas but it depends on how small and how much control Luna has over Levi’s size.

Author's Response:

Great idea! Luna has pretty much unlimited amount of control of Levi's size, so keep the ideas coming! 

Reviewer: L200 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2021 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 2: The car ride

I see the butt tag <_< will we get him going micro in her butt or something like that?

Author's Response: He's defintely going in, but don't know how yet ;)