[Report This]Date: June 13 2022 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 26: Losing Yourself In The Moment
Great chapter and very excited for what roxxane is "cooking on the side." But when six had his shoulder dislocated it was a little nerve racking. Anyways a ten star review to my favorite writer!
[Report This]Date: May 31 2022 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 25: Time Changes Us All
This is a great new chapter. I am excited to see how lyza and six act around each other and as always to my favorite author a ten star review!
Author's Response: They'll have their moments for sure! And as always, a pleasure to see you!
Date: May 26 2022 6:47 PM Title: Part 2: Chapter 24: How Things Change
I'm really starting to like Roxxane.
Author's Response: She gots charming qualities for sure!
[Report This]Date: May 19 2022 4:51 AM Title: Part 2: Chapter 24: How Things Change
Wow. You really out did yourself this time. Not only was it a long chapter but there was major story progression. Only question though now that the bandages are removed is Six able to be hurt? And as always a ten star review for my favorite author
Author's Response:
Six's bandages do play a key role in keeping him from any major harm. It stands to reason that, without them, he can be harmed far more easily. How easily though remains to be seen.
Ever a pleasure to see a review from you 😁!
[Report This]Date: May 08 2022 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 23: And What Needs To Be Done.
Very good story line, but one question when you said "part one final chapter" will part two be posted here or will it have its own title like alpha-beta forcefully apart or alpha-beta part two. And as always a ten star review
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the story! Part two will be posted alongside part 1 in forcefully together.
Date: April 19 2022 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 22: What Needs To Be Said
I'm not sure if anyone's said this yet but this shit is a masterpiecem
Author's Response:
I'm glad you think so!
[Report This]Date: April 11 2022 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 21: What Has Been Held Back
This is... AMAZING! I mean I was expecting Lyza and Maya to fight but six. wow. Also you posted this chapter really quick so brownie points for you. Fixed the grammar and another good review. Great.
Author's Response: Six had so much to say! Bout time he had his voice heard! Also trying to make more time to write so that I don't upload as late as I normally do. Making the most of my time when I can lol. I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
[Report This]Date: April 11 2022 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 21: What Has Been Held Back
This is... AMAZING! I mean I was Lyza and Maya to fight expecting a fight but six. wow. Also you posted this chapter really quick so brownie points for you.
Date: April 06 2022 9:30 PM Title: Part 1: Chapter 1: Relationship Goals?
Roxie's a fucking snitch
[Report This]Date: March 25 2022 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 19: Trying Is All We Can Ask
Your story is so great that even though you post slow I think it is worth it
Author's Response: I'm glad that you think so! I hope to post more consistently at least at some point though lol!
[Report This]Date: March 20 2022 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 19: Trying Is All We Can Ask
Alright, I’ve now caught up. And I have to say this story is written quite well. To a great detail and full of a good balance of when to have plot or fetish content.
The characters I was a bit shaky on at the start, but they all grow on you. Especially 6, Maya, and Maya’s girlfriend. Or the main trio I guess you could say. Cruelty is obviously a focus on this story, especially the emotional kind. Which even while I personally am not the biggest fan of, I can easily see it’s written well. No complaints there.
If anything the biggest complaint I can give is the same complaint I would give myself on my own stories, which is to watch out for spelling and grammar errors. I think I can identify at least a couple per every 2-3 chapter. Though if small grammar errors is the biggest issue we have, then we are still far in the green. Anyway, hope to see more. And am especially loving the more balanced relationships of the main trio.
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that you think the story is well written, even if it isn't something you're a fan of. Grammar continues to be an issue I deal with but I like to think I'm improving in that regard. It's nice to see that you enjoyed the story and the relationships. I hope that I can improve further to make the story even more enjoyable!
Date: March 20 2022 2:57 AM Title: Part 1: Chapter 1: Relationship Goals?
It’s a very interesting premise, or well one that is highly detailed with lots of room for many interactions. Am excited for more.
[Report This]Date: January 15 2022 10:49 PM Title: Part 1: Chapter 1: Relationship Goals?
Absolutely lovely story.
[Report This]Date: November 08 2021 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 11: On the Prowl
Incredible, super love it. Suggest an X rating though, anything sadistic or cruel often warrants an X rating since everyone has a drastic idea of what an X rating should be for. That's what I do, at least.
As for the half star review, seems unwarranted. I re-read your summary and pretty accurate to me, also, the summary isn't an "advertisement" it is a "summary", so that seems like a POS move to leave a half star because someone simply has the opposing interest of your stories topic.
That being said, Viper, I suggest posting TAGS FOR THIS CHAPTER in the notes for every chapter, so if people see something they don't want to read, they can opt to not read the chapter and you can avoid other morons from leaving ridiculously biased reviews based on self centered interests.
Keep on writing, you're a very good author and I love seeing how much you improve every time I come back! Makes me want to keep working my bunions off myself haha <3
Keep it up!
[Report This]Date: November 02 2021 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 11: On the Prowl
This promised to cut down on the sadism, at least from the description.
Nothing of the sort happened. It might not be bad, but it's still false advertising.
Author's Response:
Apologies but I don't really remember saying I'd cut back on the more sadistic aspects of the story. Could be my mind is running a blank on that promise though. But if it isn't then it really isn't false advertisement as such a promise wasn't made, at least to my knowledge at the moment.
Still I could be terribly wrong. Whatever the case is I am sorry that this warranted the low review. I do try to improve and hope that I can. That said i do appreciate the comment nonetheless as well as the feedback and hope this doesn't put you off from the story but will understand if it has.
Author's Response:
Apologies but I don't really remember saying I'd cut back on the more sadistic aspects of the story. Could be my mind is running a blank on that promise though. But if it isn't then it really isn't false advertisement as such a promise wasn't made, at least to my knowledge at the moment.
Still I could be terribly wrong. Whatever the case is I am sorry that this warranted the low review. I do try to improve and hope that I can. That said i do appreciate the comment nonetheless as well as the feedback and hope this doesn't put you off from the story but will understand if it has.
[Report This]Date: September 04 2021 11:06 PM Title: Part 1: Chapter 1: Relationship Goals?
0.5 for the site not working? Damn shame he can't read this masterpiece. I'm enjoying it a whole lot.
[Report This]Date: September 02 2021 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 4: Wolves Among Sheep
Good stuff, keep it up!
On a side note, upon reading other reviews, I find it quite ridiculous that someone has the audacity to leave you a 0.5 star rating because HE/SHE is having issues loading the story, when all the other reviews clearly show that the story is there.
Why do you deserve such a shit rating because of an issue HE is having? I honestly cannot stand these types of reviewers on this website, leaving the most unwarranted and not even relevant ratings and honestly I'm tired of seeing this nonsense.
I've had my fair share of negative reviews, I never delete them, I've had the posters delete them sometimes after I ask for clarification. The review I saw below however, on your story, is probably the most absurd I've ever seen.
Anyways, rant over, I just cannot allow you to get walked on for NO good reason because of a site error. Honestly, this is the first ever case where I'd tell you to just delete his review because frankly his issue shouldn't reflect your stories rating overall since it isn't even related.
More power to you my man, and your writing is solid, so keep it up!
[Report This]Date: September 02 2021 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 4: Wolves Among Sheep
Dam Dam what a duo but what is she talking bout fuge the food or o god nooooooo
[Report This]Date: September 02 2021 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Unexpected Guest
Dam maybe somebody possible worst the maya.
[Report This]Date: September 02 2021 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 2: Den of Pleasure
Dam maya if so dam evil she doesnt let up i like it.