[Report This]Date: July 16 2021 12:18 PM Title: A Deal is Made
Omfg Kristi is hot af, lucky bastard Richard is.
Also why is it only chapter 3 and it feels like a war has erupted xD people already breaking their arms lol these tinies are pathetic.
[Report This]Date: July 16 2021 8:57 AM Title: A Familial Situation
Finally, the long awaited chapter and it is so good and hot!
Althoug I was confused at first how did Richard become at the possession of his sister. And then I realized it was flashback. Still it was really good! Great descriptions, mate
Hope there will still be more Heather x Richard action. Thank you, man
[Report This]Date: July 16 2021 5:19 AM Title: A Familial Situation
I was confused on how he went from being inside Kristi to being inside Heather. The whole time this chapter, I thought it was Kristi. I think you could add a note at the beginning of the chapter to say this happened in the past.
Otherwise, good chapter. Made more sense after realizing it was Heather when I read it a second time.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Your confusion is exactly what I was going for, good sir. That's why I purposely didn't mention her name before the "face reveal"or offer a note beforehand. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: July 15 2021 9:06 AM Title: A Deal is Made
I love Kristi's behavior. The way she just controls the situation with ease makes me smile. While what Richard did was admirable, I'm not sure he could last this long.
I also like this setting about Richard returning to school and seeing how things turn out. I like how we get some action basically immediately into this story.
Will there be an actions with giantess teachers as well, or will it focus on only the students? There's always a power dynamic between a giantess student and a tiny student, but a teacher makes things interesting with their authority. Teacher or not, I'm sure what you plan on writing next will be entertaining.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! Richard is an adamant little bastard, for sure. For your question, let's just say that there might be a reason I added the young adult tag. ;) Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: July 15 2021 1:12 AM Title: Welcome to Leston High
Heck yeah, this my kind of story! Girls already shoving people in their panties and threatening to cram into their assholes? Lord help me I need to go to this school PRONTO.
Author's Response:
Damn right! I wish high school had been like this... Thanks for reading!
Date: July 15 2021 12:58 AM Title: Getting Ready
I like Heather... Hope she eats Rick he deserves it.
[Report This]Date: July 14 2021 9:03 AM Title: Getting Ready
Good start so far, kinda wish the chapters were a little bit longer but other then that look forward to seeing more :)
Author's Response:
I'll be increasing the length of some chapters. Just trying to get the old noodle put the words out. Thanks for reading!
Date: July 13 2021 9:37 AM Title: Getting Ready
Nice intro! I'll be staying tuned on this one. Hope to see some Heather x Richard action
Author's Response:
Heather x Richard, you say? I'll just say that his first day isn't over yet. Thanks for reading!
Date: July 13 2021 9:25 AM Title: Getting Ready
Looks promising.I'm shivering in me timber's.
Author's Response:
I hope what I put out lives up to your expectations. Thanks for reading!