[Report This]Date: March 29 2023 7:37 PM Title: Wedding Meal
I liked parts of all 3 stories.
I like the setup for the first chapter, but we don't know how the guy got shrunk and why his clothes shrunk with him - would have been better if he shrunk out of clothes, IMO. Also would have liked to have seen him absorbed by the villi once he fell asleep.
Chapter 2 was fun, if quick. I really like the casualness of the girls. This would have been even better with some backstory of the 3 protagonists.
Chapter 3 was fun and suspenseful. I like the casual and playful nature of the bride and bridesmaid. At the end, I would have preferred they simply got away with the voring without anyone noticing.
[Report This]Date: June 23 2021 9:04 PM Title: Wedding Meal
Omg!!! Absolutely brilliant work! And wonderful read to start my new day. Why couldn't have it been me instead of that fortunate guy? ah well! Alas… Better luck next time hey? Please write more of this genre if you should feel the urge?
Author's Response:
The guy who commissioned this story is having me write another one soon, so you'll be in luck! Otherwise tho I'm not really one for one-off stories and shorts, which is what vore seems to be best as
Author's Response:
The guy who commissioned this story is having me write another one soon, so you'll be in luck! Otherwise tho I'm not really one for one-off stories and shorts, which is what vore seems to be best as. But thanks for your review and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: June 13 2021 4:29 PM Title: Wedding Meal
Even now still a great commission. I live your style jess and thank you again for thus. <3
Author's Response:
thank you! glad you enjoyed :)