[Report This]Date: May 20 2022 10:35 AM Title: The Trade
Well, didn’t they agree that the luckiest would take care of the unluckiest? Well... maybe they just asked for what came and now Amelie will take care of Luca forever.
But... for many, Luca is the luckiest now lol!
Another great one, I’m your fan by now hahaha!
Author's Response:
One could argue that being shrunken is an enormous curse. Everything has a higher chance of killing you.
Unless, of course, you're able to convince someone (usually a giantess) to take care of you and keep you alive, you'll have a rough time surviving. I think that's why I love gentle giantesses so much, they're very generous and selfless to help out the way they do. Wholesome.
Happy you're a fan, as well. I will attempt to step up my game and try not to submit anything subpar. :)
[Report This]Date: May 17 2021 12:44 AM Title: Contact
Hey, I just saw your update in the story description and I wanted to let you know that I'm wishing you the best. I'm really sorry to hear that you're going through a tough time right now, and that you've lost inspiration for this story. Do what's best for you first, and if you ever decide to revisit the story then I'll certainly be reading. Until then, I hope things get better. Take care.
-Pluto
Author's Response:
Thank you Pluto and I'm glad you saw the update.
I'm okay now but inspiration may never return. Rarely ever does. I might write anotherr story down the line but I'll try and make it one chapter that way I can finish it more succinctly.
Have a good one and thanks for always commenting.
Date: May 10 2021 2:57 PM Title: Contact
Damn no new chapter, thats sad. This was getting really good.
Author's Response:
Sorry, friend, I lost inspiration to continue the story.
However; all I can tell you that I had planned for the "benefit" the heroine gets was she would be extremely successful in everything.
A bandit attacks? He trips and breaks his skull on a rock.
A scandalous merchant flees town, dropping gold at her feet without noticing.
Etc, stuff like that.
[Report This]Date: April 16 2021 7:57 PM Title: Contact
They're so cute!! I really like how he was able to pick up on her feelings towards him right away. I think that'll make for an interesting dynamic later on. I also love how quickly he's coming to trust her, and I bet she's really happy about that as well. Lastly, I'm really curious as to how her life has been affected by the exchange, so I'm looking forward to finding out! I'm really enjoying this story, so thank you so much for continuing it! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
-Pluto
Author's Response:
I appreciate the support bro. Also Amelie's luck is broken now (needs nerfed). It kinda works on a scaling factor; the worse Luca's disabilities are, the stronger she got proportionately. And Luca's super vulnerable and at a huge disadvantage now, so I'm planning to try and show Amelie's ability off somehow in the next chapter. It may even end up that there won't be much conflict in this story, but that's just how it goes. I don't want Amelie to turn out to be One Punch Man, if I can help it. Thanks for the comment Pluto I appreciate ya
Date: April 16 2021 5:25 PM Title: Contact
Hmm, how exactly did the magic work? Did Luca transfer luck, potential, and/or fortune to Amelie? If she has an increased chance to say become rich or powerful, does Luca have the opposite? Increased chances for misfortune and bad events to happen to him? Seeing how small he is, not sure how he can survive increased misfortune or death events. Even if Amelie makes good on her promise to love and care for him, and ensuring a good life to support him and makeup for his sacrafice, I think plenty of chances for him to die or be seperated from her will occur.
Author's Response:
In my mind, it works a bit differently than that. I may not even get a chance to explain that in the story, but basically Luca will have neither good nor bad luck anymore. All the bad luck for the rest of his life was used up and gave him two severe disabilities, and all the good luck went straight to Amelie.
It's going to be difficult to show just how OP she's about to be, but as long as Luca's near her, he will be fine. The minute he's too far away or separated somehow is when he's vulnerable again.
Whatever Amelie wants or desires will probably happen somehow; and she's constantly going to be wanting and desiring Luca's safety.
Basically I want to say "don't worry, he'll be fine as long as they're together and he's fucked if he's away for too long" but that's a lazy explanation.
Good question though fam
[Report This]Date: April 14 2021 3:25 AM Title: Confusion
This is great! Already, your mains are super cute together. I really like stories where the giantess has to win the trust of the tiny, so this story is right up my alley. I'm excited to see how their relationship will develop from here, now that she's telling him their backstory. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
-Pluto
Author's Response:
Jeez, Pluto. You got here pretty quick lol. Thank you for the review. And, yes, I like all manner of gentle relationship beginnings. Respecting a tiny, or at the very least, proving you mean them no harm, is one thing I like seeing a giantess do sometimes. I plan to keep this story simple for the moment. No sexy stuff, no vore, etc. Only mentions of such things.
Yeah she has a lot of backstory to tell him, and I didn't plan to type it all out. It's mainly meant to defuse their situation and earn Luca's trust. Next chapter I'm gonna try and get them to break the "touch barrier." Talking is one thing. But there's different levels of trust to be earned here.
I appreciate your support, Pluto
[Report This]Date: April 13 2021 5:19 AM Title: The Trade
Hey, I'm really glad to see another story from you!! I hope you've been well. I liked this intro a lot, it has a really interesting premise! I'm really excited to see what their interactions will be like, now that he's forgotten everything and small. I imagine Amelie will be pretty guilty...
Regardless, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Take care.
-Pluto
Author's Response:
I haven't been too well, but I'm managing! Thanks for asking, though, Pluto. Yeah I banged out this intro right before bed so I hope it made sense, and I do plan to try and work on showing how their type of relationship goes from here. Yes, she's going to be on her best behavior after this lol. But, also, I had thought about it the other way around. Originally, Luca was going to be the one to keep his memories and Amelie would forget, so she would be able to "enjoy her new life" without guilt. Summarizing that alternate path; Amelie figures out Luca used to mean something to her and choses to take her along with herself anyway. But I decided last minute to go a different route. Thanks for leaving a review, they're critical in helping me keep motivated on writing. I don't think this story will be too long, though. Take care, yourself, as well.