[Report This]Date: May 25 2022 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love the build up setting and the vary few drama elements im glad you didnt go ai turns evil got one of the bad guys right 😆
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: November 15 2021 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
I've just read the story and really enjoyed it.
I think it's a very entertaining and interesting story. I appreciated the plot twists.
Good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: October 22 2021 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
Excellent! A happy ending, all around.
I don't think it even needs a sequel! But, if there is one, rest assured, I'll be here to read and review.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Not sure about a sequel. Time will tell.
[Report This]Date: October 02 2021 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 9
WHOA! This is getting to be like "War Games Meets Rambo."
Pidgin-English translation: me like!
:-)
[Report This]Date: September 30 2021 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 9
Excellent addition
I do hope after everything is said and done, that they can work out the kinks with the grow function of the size machine, cause that would be a great add on for sure
keep up the great writing, its very entertaining, I always end up reading the chapters a couple of times because they're so captivating.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: September 29 2021 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
When Steph gets back into action she should have sex with 2-3 little men at the same time. That would be hot!!!
[Report This]Date: September 23 2021 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
OK! I'm back as promised.
And Mark's right. Even with a Presidential order, what the CIA did would never be legal as they are not allowed to operate, domestically. It's the FBI that would have (and should have) handled the confiscation. I'm willing to concede, however, that maybe it's the NSA--National Security Agency--that were responsible...by posing as the CIA!
After all, they monitor all electronic intelligence in regard to what they eponymously safeguard. So, maybe they noticed all the computer hacking going on, within their most innovative government contractor, and investigated, accordingly.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the information, I'll correct this.
Date: August 28 2021 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
But, that's beside the point, which is...I will definitely be here for chapter 8.
:-)
[Report This]Date: August 28 2021 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
WHOA! I can't believe I read all seven chapters straight through. To describe them as "riveting" would be a masterpiece of understatement!
The closest comparison I can make to more canonical sci-fi would be the "I. Mudd" episode of the original STAR TREK series. But, remade as a serial drama for A&E. In fact, if memory serves, there was something like that about three years ago! With William Heard and a Sino-English acrtress named Gemma Chesterton(?).
[Report This]Date: August 24 2021 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
Nice addition ...
as for your question ... I think you should leave it with couples that are already started, your right too many people could twist the story around and potentially confuse the reader and the writer for that matter.
Yolanda is an interesting addition, but she might be better served as one of the other workers bots instead.
Though ultimatedly your decision, I believe you should keep up the style your doing thus far and really dive deep into the direction you wanna take this story ... its really good, and definately has me waiting every time for the next installment
looking forward to the next chapter, hopefully not too long of a wait
Date: August 24 2021 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
I say Yolanda should wear your hero home in her shoe. A nice, stuffy office type shoe, an extremely tight sandwiching between insole and footsole, he unable to move or make a squeak, especially when Yalonda's weight is on him!
Your hero will be ready to capitulate to anything after that sort of an ordeal. ;)
Loving your story!
Date: August 23 2021 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'd love to see you expand the number i volved! It could get busy but it's also not something you see on here too often, so I think it'd be interesting. A nice change of pace!
[Report This]Date: July 15 2021 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Welcome back
Excellent addition i must say, really glad to see the feet aspect of this story, particular with the nylons and pantyhose certainly a welcomed plus.
Really interested in seeing where they go with the shrinking tech, but more interested in the exploits with Tim and the girls with varying sizes.
keep up the writing, its very entertaining
[Report This]Date: July 14 2021 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
A well-reasoned and well-balanced story. I'm usually not interested in foot-focussed stories, but this one is pretty good.
Date: June 01 2021 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is my new favorite story on the site. More Please!
[Report This]Date: May 28 2021 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 5 The Search Continues
This story is quickly turning into one of my favorites, i particular like how you added in the element of shrinking the main character
Seeing his two girls love him so much really adds a certain depth to this story as well
keep up the great work, and by the way, love all the nylon content as well
Author's Response:
Been on vacation, new chapter soon. There doesn't seem to be much in the way of nylon content anymore. Too bad, I still definitely love it.
Date: May 15 2021 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 5 The Search Continues
Great chapter
[Report This]Date: May 15 2021 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 5 The Search Continues
Fantastic! Love the size change aspect, I'm invested in seeing how the story plays out, and I can't wait for some more hot content! Keep the chapters coming :)
Date: May 15 2021 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story keeps me coming back for more!
Keep at it, man! Super enjoyable!
[Report This]Date: May 12 2021 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it, dying for more, can't wait to see where it goes! Maybe some larger giantess content?
Author's Response:
Next chapter. ;)