[Report This]Date: July 20 2022 5:41 AM Title: Little, Big Brother (Coming Soon)
Wow literally all of these stories sound incredible I really hope they get finished. All the scenarios are my absolute favorites I love the unaware stuff! Hopefully in one of them the tiny is mistaken for a bug.
Author's Response:
Thank you, and I’m planning to get to and finish them ALL eventually. I just wanted to post some previews and get some feedback on which ones to do first: My next Novel will be Little, Big Brother, with a couple of smaller projects coming first to get my writing and scenarios up to high quality. Thus, Tim’s Tiny Week is going to be first, along with a giantess chapter for Babysitter Trouble, and maybe a couple of short stories before I get to the novel work.
FYI, unaware is my FAVORITE type of interaction, and being tinies being mistaken for bugs comes with the territory.
[Report This]Date: July 20 2022 4:38 AM Title: Little, Big Brother (Coming Soon)
Definitely like the family domination stories. I’d personally like to see him have a level of invulnerability, where he doesn’t pop like a grape after getting stepped on, repeatedly. Also prefer the main character to be on the bigger size (3-6 inches) instead of 1 inch or less, as you can have more interactions between the other characters. I realize that the bigger sizes make it harder for unaware scenarios, but you can make it where they forget about him too.
Author's Response: Yes, and this’ll be my first foray into the family domination genre, so I want to do it justice. I also prefer my “shrinkies” to have some degree of durability, as I like having tinies stepped on and stuck to people’s soles, and although the unaware genre is usually somewhat limited to an inch tall or less, I’m going to find ways to work it in at larger sizes. There will also be a fair bit of playfulness among the characters, and embarrassing situations for a doll-sized person to get into, so once we get to the 1-foot-tall or less part of the story, the playful dominance can begin.
[Report This]Date: June 29 2022 12:44 AM Title: Little, Big Brother (Coming Soon)
My vote is for the chapter 2, little big brother, i love all these teasing from the little sister suddenly gaining power over the big brothers.
Author's Response: Thank you for your response. I’ll tally another vote for chapter 2!
[Report This]Date: June 22 2022 11:52 AM Title: Little, Big Brother (Coming Soon)
So happy to hear you are well and still writing!! I was thinking whatever happened to you just this Sunday! And your writing is as mesmerizing as I remember.
I agree wih Jsmith20 and kickflipper. The second story – Little big brother - picked my interest more. Yes, huge “Homunculus” vibes - I just love that story and I really want to see how you will work the family relationships... I am already having Ideas! Are Noah and Tabitha orfans? And look at that name! Treva. Was Noah scared of her before shrinking? Why? What is her deal? What is their story?
Sorry! I just had to put it out! I will stop with the questions here. From the excerpt, it seems like it will be another great story.
Thanks for the good news. I am eagerly waiting for the result!
Author's Response:
Yes, I understand “Homunculus” is a pretty popular story. I can’t guarantee that THIS story ISN’T influenced by it, but some of the interactions will be somewhat similar.
So, Noah and Tabitha are NOT orphans; they have a mother, Amy, who WILL be in the story as well; Katherine is Noah and Tabitha’s aunt, and Treva is her daughter (Noah and Tabitha’s cousin). Noah, 17, is the oldest, and Tabitha and Treva are both 2 years younger. The normal sibling rivalry applies, but it’s not like anyone HATES anyone else, or anything like that. Some of the characters are just more playful and absentminded than others 😏. Regardless, I will make sure to develop all of my characters and their relationships with each other in this story.
Moving on, pretty much, the names, temperaments, and descriptions of most—if not all—of the female characters in my stories are derived from—or based on—women I’ve met or known in the past. It makes it easier to picture/describe them and bring them to life.
I’ll mark another vote for Chapter 2!
Date: June 22 2022 11:10 AM Title: Little, Big Brother (Coming Soon)
This one for sure! I love the taunting and teasing of the girls saying they could accidently squish him if he doesnt show himself
Author's Response:
…And there’ll be a lot more of it.
Another vote for Chapter 2!
[Report This]Date: June 21 2022 8:08 PM Title: Little, Big Brother (Coming Soon)
It's good to know that you're doing well. Babysitter Trouble is one of my favorite stories on this website. It was such a thrilling read.
With the second one I'm curious if you're going to pull a "Homunculus" by Cayce style story where the girls slowly get better and treat him with more respect. Seeing as there are two of them the way they interact with him has more potential. I also hope that whichever one you choose it's non-fatal. It could be interesting if he thinks he could die only to survive and the two of them continue to 'play' with him.
Good luck, I'm sure what you produce will be great!
Author's Response:
So, I’m not saying that there WON’T necessarily be similarities with “Homunculus”, but this is going to more of a slow shrink story as opposed to an immediate shrink story, with the characters having to deal with the consequences of the main character’s diminishing stature…and some becoming more and more playful than others the smaller he gets. However, I do have several characters who will be developed and intertwined throughout the story, and each will have varying attitudes to Noah’s shrinking.
So, I take it, unless you say otherwise, that your vote is for Chapter 2?
[Report This]Date: June 21 2022 6:56 PM Title: Little, Big Brother (Coming Soon)
Another excellent chapter!
Personally, unaware (in large doses) and crushing are less engaging than the intentional verbal humiliation and non-painful footdom from Chap 1.
But still top-quality creative writing, and thank you for sharing it!
Author's Response:
Oh, there’ll still be verbal humiliation and non-painful foot domination, it’ll just be coming from a sister, cousin, and a few other teenaged girls, as opposed to a mother-in-law and wife.
Nonetheless, I’ll take your preference/vote as Chapter 1.