As the world slowly starts to change, we take a look at a slowly evolving world through a single family's perspective. (Step Family. No actual incest.)
I love this story and am engaged in the plot. As a fan of female feet, I appreciated the casual references to feet some of the characters threw out. I also like your penchant for being descriptive. I find scenes in which a tiny person is forced to smell a woman's feet, especially someone that they're close to, is deeply degrading. I don't know if you are a fan of eventually having main characters (tiny ones) be done away with at the feet (insert body part of your choice), but I hope the stepbrother is eventually done away with in something foot related, but unique. I'm a broken record but have often thought about the realism behind a tiny person being kept scrunched under a girl's toes or inside her sock until they suffer brain damage or something. That's probably too dark, but I'm a sick person! Please post your preexisting chapters asap! Thanks for a great story so far.
I'm mainly a foot guy, but you've done a great job so far. I for one actually hope the stepbrother is eventually forced to at least smell his stepsister's feet, and then placed in her ass. I'm sure the finale will be great, but I'm also hoping that his time in her ass is truly punishing and horrific, possibly ending him.
I am enjoying this story, despite being almost exclusively a fan of foot stuff. I for one appreciate the lead-up to the last chapter and think you've done a great job of laying out the cruel fate of this young man. I do have a question, though. You've said several times that you've already written this story out, including the conclusion. If so, why do you wait so long between posting chapters? For that matter, why not post it in its entirey?
I guess I should elaborate on this. I never have the story fully complete. I usually have the first four or five chapters done, outlines of a few chapters, and the conclusion partially written. For example, in this story, the ending was the last two chapters. Before I even posted the first chapter, I had the president's speech 3/4 of the way written, all the dialogue written after that speech, but I had none of the paragraphs that led into the presidents speech and very little written of the narration between each character speaking. That's why these last couple of chapters took so long, because I basically had to go back and write all the boring parts, a lot of he said, she said stuff. I usually write entire chapters, proof-read them a week later, and then post them, but occasionally I'll write chapters that are almost completely all dialogue because I don't have time to write the entire chapter, but I have an idea for what I want to happen. I usually kick myself later because it's boring to go back and fill in all the stuff between the dialogue and it usually needs a bit of a rewrite, which is why these last two chapters took a while. The only reason I even decided to do it yesterday was because of YOU GUYS! I know how frustrating it is when an author gives up halfway through a story, and that's why I always have an ending planned for mine before I start posting it. Yesterday, I decided it was about damn time I gave you the ending you all were waiting for, and I apologize for the wait.
On the bright side, I have about 25+ potential stories in a folder on my computer, and most of them are short stories like Kate's Detention or Sorority Prank, which means you'll get the full stories when I upload them. Only two of them are going to be divided into chapters like this one. When they'll get uploaded? Who knows. I have a story called Powder that's been about halfway written for two years. Then there's another story called Amy the Ass that I sat down and wrote half of the other night and hope to have finished very soon. So many projects, so little time.
Thanks for the thorough explanation. You're a great write and I am looking forward to the concluding chapter. Again, as a foot guy, you've really done an excellent job of making this girl's ass pretty darn attractive (from an abusive standpoint). I'm always in the mood for a dark ending and am hoping that the stepbrother's fate is as horrific as you alluded to in the latest chapter. His sister's cruel pschological abuse was perfect. All that remains is for the his his fate to be sealed!
Bro, I don't know how to tell you this.... Life Changes WAS the last chapter. I was going to state that in the 'End Notes' section after the chapter, but decided against it when I realized it would be better for the reader to finish the story and then just think about the fate of every tiny man in the world, especially Kevin's, Dan's and DJ Tiny's. Story's over... unless I do the epilogue chapter, but that wouldn't be for a long time.
Hey, no problem! I had an inkling that that was the conclusion, but also thought you might include a description or internal narrative of the stepbrother's emotional and psychological destruciton, as he was finally placed where his stepsister had always forshadowed he'd end up. Your ending works and does allow for the reader to speculate as to the gory possible ending to men in general, but the males in this family, specifically. Can I ask if you did intend for the stepbrother's fate to ba as dire and hopeless as was hinted here? If you did an epilogue, what'd you plan? Thanks!
Actually, I originally intended for it to be pure panic and fear, but I decided hopelessness made more sense. If the step brother hadn't been teased for so long about it, than fear would be the likely choice because he didn't see it coming, but with Nicole, you knew there was no hope, so it made sense for him to recognize that fact as well. Of course he was still petrified of Nicole's butthole, but knowing he could do nothing about it watered down that fear because living in Nicole's butt had already become a reality by that point by acknowledging it was completely unavoidable.
As for the epilogue, it would take place just moments later, but then suddenly go to a flashback about Debra, her step mom, and her step brother. The reason I didn't write it as part of the story is because it's VERY similar to chapter 13, so I thought it would be better to come back and add it later once chapter 13 has had enough breathing room to where it doesn't look like I just remade the same chapter! It's less of an epilogue and more of a "bonus" chapter.
A loving but strict mother disciplines her party-hard teenage son using a shrinking apparatus and a pair of high heels.
I really like the how vulnerable you protray the son, son tny, naked, and totally demoraize, all before even being subjected to his mom's monstroussly pungent feet! While the mother seems kind and loving, with a hint of a cruel, punishing streak, I have a feeling her feet might be too much this time for her son. Here's to hopeing that things get carried away, and don't end nicely for the time-out son!
hehe well as you've probably noticed in my past stories i'm not at all a fan of killing my protagonists. i think you'll still enjoy the ending though, which will be posted soon
Oh, I'm aware of your reluctance to have your "hero's" lives end at the feet (insert body part) of their tormentresses. That said, I imagine this story will be fairly short, as it seems rather straight-forward in scope. If you have the son live, I love to see him ruined emotionally from his mother's feet. But, hey, you know my by now to know I like these things to begin all sunny and fun, only to end on a dark note! Thank for the great read so far.
I loved your take on this old but classic tale--momdom and a tiny son. You did great and it was just the right length. I'd love to see the mom eventually sweat her son away down the line, but you once again used awesome descriptions to how deeply inferior the son was to his Mother's mature, pungent feet. He really was broken by her and I liked how she went about destroying her son's self-worth in a very nurruring, motherly fashion!
17 year old Derrick gets more than he bargained for when he discovers a way to make his wildest dreams come true.
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I'm really intrigued by this story. You have managed to write good descriptiions of the characters and scenery. More importantly, and what makes these sorts of stories stand out from one another, is the excellent way you describe the sense of humilation and utter helplessness that the main character feels at these women's feet in a dream-state. Letting the the woman's feet become characters in their own right adds so much depth to a story like this, and you seem more than able to do that. I also like the possibility that the first pair of feet he learns to fear may be those of his big sister. Maybe a foot massage is in exchange for her buying the little weakling booze?
Folks, hold your horses about the exact size this guy is going to get. I've never seen such concern about something so trivial from the first chapter of a story. He will likely decrease in size slowly. But whether the story ends with him at 2 inches, 1 inches, or micro, shouldn't be your ultimate concern right now, should it? Sit back and enjoy what is shaping up to be a potential classic.
Great addition. I think this guy is in for a horrifyingly pungent time at this point. I am curious if his sister is somehow in on this and was using the foot massage thing as a teasing forcast for what she already knew was inevitable. I hope you stay inspired and are able to put forth more and more chapters. And, I'm not going to lie, I hope this ends with him being purposely crushed by one of these girls!
Thanks Jay! Your stories were part of my inspiration. I'm glad you've enjoyed.
A teenage boy is preparing for his mother’s birthday when he inexplicably shrinks down to half an inch tall, and must find a way to get her attention before this becomes the last birthday they’ll ever spend together.
You're well-suited for the mother/son genre. When I saw that this would be mostly gentle and unknown, I was little disheartened, because I like the mother to know of such tiny matters. However, I know you will do a great job here. As you already know, I'm hoping the son is found out at some point, but by then, it's too late!
my goal here is to do something quite a bit different than normal, so unfortunately i'll probably need to stick to the unaware scenario to do that right. hope you enjoy it though
This was a good story and showcased your prowess at different genres of the giantess fetish. I know you aren't into death endings, but I loved your "Mommy's Time Out" story," and honestly would like to see it continued, or you attempt a new story, albeit similar in topic. I guess I'm hoping to see a foot story with a dom-mom and tiny son that ends painfully and smelly for the son. You do a good job of conveying true angst on the part of the tiny person, that's for sure. As always, your prolific output is appreciated no matter what sort of story you decide to write.
thanks. i do enjoy the mother-son genre, though as you know, i am not into a foot crush ending, but i'll probably find some variations for it
A man shows us what it's like to have a friend with pretty feet.
I really like the possibilities here! I've often written short accounts about my closest femal friend finding out about my fetish for her smelly athletic feet, and forcing me to experience my fantasy at a tiny size. This is interesting because he seems onboard with it, whereas in my fantasies, The sheer horror of my friend's pungent feet make me deeply regret my fetish. I'm curious if this will happen here, or if he'll go all the way into becoming a stain, happy as can be? Please continue!
Nick Avery -- tall, handsome, and well-liked-- is paired with a short, unpopular know-it-all named Michelle for a chemistry project. The experiment goes awry; Nick begins to shrink as Michelle grows taller and more beautiful. But he soon learns that Michelle had actually planned this all along, and he now must come to terms with his new position at the bottom rung of the social ladder. Only Michelle can help him now, but she is determined to make the most of her newfound power over her once-mighty lab partner.
Despite being pretty much a foot domination fan regarding this genre, your writing talent won me over and I am extremely grateful you took such care and time to produce such a great story. So many stories on sites that cater to this fetish come across as incoherrant that it was a breath of fresh air to read something so well-written. My only wish would be that in future stories, you include some forced foot-smelling and stuff. :) If you go with the family angle next, I definitely want to see foot stuff. But, given that you're the author, whatever you put out will no doubt be fantastic.
Never thought I'd read 'breath of fresh air' and 'forced foot-smelling' in the same review, hahaha.
But seriously, thanks for the kind compliments. I'll just be up front with you, though -- foot stuff just isn't my thing. The most you'll ever see from me is some very brief foot worship and/or footplay in the future (as you saw once or twice in Pariah), but no more than that, sorry.
Alex, a nineteen year old college student, is tired of hiding his secret desires from his friends. Until one saturday night, he reveals them and sparks compatible desires within them as well. Unfortunately for Alex, he is treading on a path that has no return.
I like the premise and hope the guy comes to deeply regret his fetish. Some friendly advice would be to make a stronger connection between the three characters. When the stuff hits the fan, so to speak, it's always more emotionally engaging to have a good background of the characters as one or more are met with devestation. But for a short story, I like it. It seems like a nice, down and dirty tale.
Thanks so much for your advice! I definitely see what you mean and I agree. However, when I first began this first part I had no idea it would turn out so long, and I found myself in a rush to get to the action because, well, a lot of the time I'll skip over much of the introduction just to get to the juicy parts. Though I can think of a few ways to easily create more of a history for them, I'd like to keep some form of distance between the two girls and Alex, otherwise I feel a loss of (I know, this is ridiculous to say considering the subject matter itself) realism in the story. I know lol thats insane to say.
A misbehaving teenage son once again finds himself shrunken and at the mercy of his overbearing and strict disciplinarian mother, who enlists the help of her entire women’s book club to help break her son of his bad habits.
I love that you went back to this theme! I think the mother/son scenarios, when done well, are among the best stories in this genre. Obviously, I'm hoping things get out of hand in this story, and Mom does the unthinkable... You continue to showcase excellent word choice and characterzations. I'm curious, is this a continuation of your first story? If so, are we going to learn what became of the main character's girlsfriend? I hope the smell of his mom's feet destroy him this time! Lol.
this is indeed a continuation; we probably won't hear from his girlfriend in this story though, since it's just another short episode of the scenario
Joe gets a new roommate, amazonesque basketball player Alex. But it's not all roses when the pheromones released in her sweat seem to have a strange effect on him. The sweet girl might not be so nice forever when her trauma and desires comingle with the state of her dwindling roommate.
I am enjoying this story. The idea that the scent is causing him to shrink is like an idea I've toyed with in stories, too. In my fantasy, the smell of the girl's feet causes shrinkage, including the feeling of humiliation. I'm hoping that while he is attracted to scent at this point, that he comes to deeply regret it as he's around an inch tall. Of course, I prefer dark stories and want him to become crushed psychologically and emotionally at this girls' monstrous feet!
Thanks. I don't want to reveal just how dark or not the story will be, or how the characters' feelings will change, because I think a lot of the fun in a story that makes you want to keep reading is seeing the tone evolve. Joe is definitely, in his rational mind, ashamed of how he feels about her scent. I hope I got that across clearly enough in the chapter.
I remember reading your story a while ago and enjoying it, despite not usually being in the mom-son gts stories.
A teenager and his friend are used as chess pieces by his mother and teenage sister.
I agree with everyone's sentiments on your excellent writing and sense of narration. I am intrigued by the setup and hope you are able to continue this story. Given your tags, I am also interested in seeing what you plan in terms of the violent/sadistic sections. Despite being a foot fanatic, stories like that are really well-written like this make it just a pleasure to read, regardless of how the tinies are done in! Great stuff.
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Good and tight story. I like your style. I'm sincerily hoping you continue with the Melanie Gold story. I'd like to see the son begin to truly suffer at her pungent feet!