A quick-moving story about an unaware giantess mom.
While this is demented on my part, it accords well with your storyline. I vote that the final punishmnet consist of him having to orgasm 10 times straight in an hour, while being playfully scrunched and squeezed beneath the folds of his mother's toes. This should prove exahausting and darn near impossible for our little hero. If he doesn't accomplish this, I vote that the maid force the mother to crush him. Pehaps she could blackmail her with something even worse if she doesn't agree to it!
This is really exciting. Something tells me that the little guy isn't going to be able to eek much out for his mom's foot, leading to what I hope is a degrading end! I also have a feeling that the mother is going to admit how much she is actually enjoying this!
Each chapter is a self-contained, independent story of a son's torture at the feet (or butt!) of his mom.
Your latest is one the best pieces you'e written! I really enjoyed the nonchalant cruelty of the mother regarding her son, who I got the impression was either going to be crushed into a stain at night's end, or suffer emotional devestation for the rest of his life. Either way, this one really was enjoyable to read!
Absolutely brillient addition! I love how she is hellbent on forcing ejaculation after ejaculation from him. Even after his soon-to-be orgasm beneath her toe, I'd like to see her force at least one more, only this time, simply allow the pungent smell of her feet to coax it out of him, nothing more! She could scrunch his head and upper torso beneath the tolds of her toes, and simply hold him up until she sees the eventualy "explosion.!"
This is extremely well written, full of spot-on description! I actuall see these characters. The tension between the mother's playfullness and her cruel actions, work pefectly. The son is simply being overshelmed into accepting the power of his mother's bodies and odors to control him. Keep this up; it's one of the finest stories I've come across that deals with this theme!
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I was really chuffed to get a comment from this guy, so there you go. Look up his stuff if you haven't, it's a lot darker than I'd like but really good.
I have been waiting for years for a story told from the point of view of a mother interested in using her son as cannon fodder for her pungent toes; now the wait is over! I like how descriptive you are, yet at the same time, "get down to bussiness." As a fan of incestual foot play in theses sorts of stories, I simply cannot wait to see if her son's enthusiasm for his mother's feet diminishes once he has to experience them at an inch tall! Let the crushing of both body and spirit begin!
Great conintuation! Unfortunately, it's made me insanely eager to read more and more of this finely developing tale! I know from experience that it can be tempting to "jump" right into the meat of the story with storie like this. However, I like how you are building up to what will hopefully be a life of foot smelling servitude for Phil. My vote hope is that, while his mother's foot pheremones may cause an arousal of sorts, that Melanie's feet are simply too much for poor Phil once he is gummy bear sized. Please continue, ASAP, if at at all possible!
I think this story touches a nerve because not only do I have a mom/giantess/foot fetish, but can actually imagine what this lady looks like. I've met Eastern European woman that I see in this most taboo of roles! I agree with the previous review; it'd be great to see Phil's slow realization that not all is going to be right in his world for the foreseeable future. I love the gradual shrinkage to, as it really allows the mom to possibly verbally tease and tell him exactly what his fate is before it happens!
A young man and his stepmom get to know more about each other after an unfortunate accident.
You're an excellent writer and continouly produce tantalizing scenes of mother/son naughtiness. I like how she simply dominates him with her maternal body and power. Personally, I'd love to see her gently place him between her toes and slowly pump him dry. Also, do you plan to have her turn a bit "evil," or be gentle the whole way? Thanks for such a great story; you can tell you've taken your time!
I have thought about turning her evil, and I tried it for a while, but I abandoned that. It turned out not to be as believable as I would have liked. So I will probably save that idea for another story.
Rest assured though, there are some parts coming up that I'm working on now that I think you will enjoy.
A brother finally gets the upper hand against his bratty younger sister with a bit of blackmail. Unfortunately, a chemical mishap causes him to shrink down to a few inches tall, and his sibling is not in a forgiving mood.
You're doing a great job in setting this story up. The pacing and characterization is spot-on. As a foot guy, I particularly like the way the sister is slowly exerting a dominant nature on her older brother. Also, you did a good job of giving us a hint of how strong her feet are, particularlyt the pugent smell. I see this as foreshadowing how destructive her feet will be on her brother when he's really tiny! I hope she breaks and destroyes him! Keep up the excellent work!
Wow, great additions here! You really handled the foot smelling scene better than anyone else in recent memory; your description of the brother's reaction and humilation from just one sniff struck me for its brutal affect it had on him. I honestly thought he was done for! I don't know how this will end up but from that one scene, I'd say that the brother is in for a punishment he may never recover from, physically or psychologically!
I enjoy the entire process of writing these, but the kinds of scenes that involve the main character being impossible humiliated are way too damn fun to do. I've read a lot of descriptions of a guy being exposed to a giant foot and then getting the shit kicked out of him by it, but it occurred to me that each moment, right from the first whiff of them to the awful beating after should be tangible and real, so I tried to put extra care in that first bit
You're hitting a homerun! This story is reminencent of the classics by Ziggy and Littlelee and Ogelthorpe. The story is simple, in that it essentially deals with two individuals, yet complex due to your strong descriptions and characterizations. I'm not sure of your ultimate conclusion, but my intuition tells me the brother may not make it out of this alive. I've wondered if the smell of a woman's feet at such a tiny size could "end" someone and could see this being the fate of this now-little brother! No matter what, as an old time fan of these sorts of tales, I appreciate your work!
Thanks for your interest in my stuff, bud. It's flattering to be compared to those guys when I've really just kind of started thinking about this kind of thing a matter of days ago. You obviously like the foot stuff, so I'm betting you already know, from the lead in from chapter 7, that chapter 8 is going to continue in that vein heavily. enjoy!
You did a fabulous job, especially or your first story. These suckers can drain an author, and I commend your tenacity in seeing it through to a conclusion. My two cents, for what it's worth, is that I would have liked to have seen the brother meet his demise at his sister's feet. Sure, he could have held out, but still being slowly scrunched to death or something (says my one-track mind)! However, I liked the way you left it open-ended, as well. As some here realize, I'm a pretty predictible author in terms of being foot-focused and in having the main character end up ruined at woman's feet, so don't mind me! I'd love to see new stuff sometime from you!
I did wonder if wouldn't like the ending; i really just did that because i feared the foot stuff would start to get stale if i didn't mix it up, and as im really kind of a varied person, i like vore probably as much as feet, i tried to spread the love. hopefully you enjoyed the heavy amount foot stuff in there, though, as its almost all foot before chapter 10, i now realize. thanks for the mass of five-stars you gave me in reviews, its much appreciated
A brother, shrunken to a few inches tall, is held captive by his gigantic younger sister and forced to endure further challenges as she takes revenge for his blackmailing plot.
I'm really glad that you were able to conclude this great story! The ending was great and I believe Carly's brother is suitably broken at this point. I honestly thought she was going to crush him at the end, but leaving him alive does allow for future installments of sibling degredation! Thanks again and for accepting my apology earlier. I'm certainly in no position to dictate what someone shouldor shouldn't write about. Also, if you were to have Carly off her brother, what was your idea to have her do? Did the lost section contain a different ending?
i did think briefly of killing him and it would have been by vore, to sort of mirror the fake-out ending of the first one, although the "lost" ending didn't actually involve this. however, i have some other, unused ideas that i felt could comprise another (and probably final) installment, so i decided to hold off. additionally, i just didnt' feel like it made sense in the context of the rest of the story. carly never really wanted to kill her brother, just break him down into a bug, basically, and that was the intent from the start. at some point, though, as i do enjoy exploring other options, i may write a much darker story with more of that kind of thing, we'll have to see
I love the foot torture depictions. I also think the end of the story, if not the brother's life, is near and at hand. I could obviously be mistaken, but feel that even Carly is beginning to realize that there's not much more she can do to destroy her brother's humanity. That said, he seems to be thinking the opposte, that Carly plans only to keep him around as her house-broken, tiny brother-pet. That may be what she's thinking but I guess I'm hoping for the "dark side" to win out, and to do so in the most humilating, painful, and soul-massacering fashion as possible! Thanks again and keep pounding chapters out like a champ!
indeed, the story is drawing to a close. i have it all typed out, but i thought since this is the end, i'd make the effort to actually read over my stuff this time before posting it. it's not that i'm lazy, i'm just so gut-bustingly busy right now these things would never get out if i editted each and every one. they'll be up soon; thanks for reading.
I appreciate your consistent chapters. You've got great discipline to shoot new stuff out consistently! I really liked this latest chapter (11), as it's showing how emotionally wrecked he is. I also believe you're near a final conclusion and can honestly say, I have no idea of what will happen!
It seems as though you've probably got a conclusion sorted out at this point, but if you're looking for suggestions, mine is that Carly finish him off in some fashion. While it looks like he's a goner by way of her teeth an/or digestive tract, I'd obviously love to see him forced to endure her feet like in the first part of the first story. Perhaps even have the hellishly pungent stink force him to ejaculate against his will, only to have Carly slowly, agonizingly, and cruely, smush him as she painfully scrunches her toes over him. Now, predicable I may be, but it's just my two cents. You've done a superb job and you should be truly proud of your effort!
i have got the weirdest working brain; when i try to think of a story, i either get zilch or i get a massive load of random ideas to use. as the latter has been happening in the last week or so, i was able to just toss the chapters out like hotcakes. you are correct, i actually do have a conclusion written out as i write these in quick little spurts of a few chapters at a time, and while your idea is a bit different from how it ends, i think you'll still be pleased with some of the content the end contains
One really smart thing you've done is write most the story before posting sections of it in separate chunks. I can't say how many authors (me included) have started a story, only to burn out after a few chapters or so. You're lucky these stories have flown so well!
I apprciate you not taking offense to my emphasis on the foot stuff, particularly the smell aspect of it. It's my favorite aspect of this fetish, but excellent writing like yours, makes any size-related domination exciting and fun to read! Now, that said, from some of your characterizations and scenes seem to indicate that Carly's feet pose a deep sense of dreadful aprehension for her brother. She also seems to realize this. Stories like this inspire me to try and finish some of my own tales, currently laying about, collecting dust!
hey, it's all good, they're your opinions. i certainly can appreciate the foot stuff, perhaps not at the level of depth that you do, but I have enjoyed including a lot of that kind of stuff in the stories to make a cohesive whole with all of it
It's great to see you continuing such a fine story! You're very creative and I'm loving how many degrading things his sister can put him through. I'm also excited to see the forshadowing of utter humilation at the sister's feet again. I think she enjoyed instilling the fear of god into him at first, only to find that her feet were mostly fresh and clean! I don't think he'll be that fortunate again, though! Pehaps he'll be forced to "like" it this time, albeit agains his will. Keep up the good work. I'm really curious as to how you plan to end things!
hey, thanks for checking in with the sequel. i will say, this one may be a slightly less feet-centric to make room for the countless other methods the character could be using, but hopefully you'll still enjoy what you read
A curse placed on a princess causes her to steadily grow. However, when a dark threat looms over the land, her large burden may be the kingdom's only chance for salvation.
Man, what a jerk I was! I'm really sorry to have posted such an immature diatribe last night. I think I had too much wine, dealt with a bad day, and, like a jerk, took it out on you. I wish I could remove my two comments on this story, but they stand as testament ON HOW NOT TO GIVE FEEDBACK. You're a great new author and I appreciate your stories. Please forgive my irrational spewl the other day.
i do honestly accept your apology, and i understand that you perhaps weren't thinking straight, but i would like to end this whole thing with this: in a different comment, you thanked me for not being offended at your personal preferences that you often mention in comments. and i in no way am, because it's your right to enjoy your time on this site however you like. please extend me the same courtesy in the future
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I think you're a great artist of words and ideas. That said, the thematic theme of this story isn't my cup of tea. It's well written, to be sure, but deals with an entirely different aspect of the GTS fetish than what we're used to seeing from you,
Judging from your previous two stories (really one long, unfinished oddessey, if you will). I'm wondering if this is a diversion from you posting your previous story's conclusion, or an experiement to see if your "fans" truly enjoy you, the author, or just the themes and subject matter previously written about? I guess I'm must pointing out the obvious on this one.
Given that your previous story is entirely, completely, catastrophically, finished, yet you "wait" to post the conclusion, makes me ponder the real purpose behind starting an entirely new story before the posting of a previous story's conclusion (a conclusion that's said to be already finished and done with). Then again, perhaps I'd just like to see the final chapter of your other story! I'd be more understanding if the other story wasn't entirely finished, in need of only being posted. If it wasn't already done, that'd be a different story.
there's no need to accuse me of testing my "fans" as you say. there's zero reason i should have to restrict myself to one genre if i enjoy them both in different ways, and other people enjoy them in different ways as well. see my above response to hear what's up with the story