G Man, thank you so much for taking the time to write. Your words flatter me. This makes it all worthwhile.

I have many stories in the works and some almost ready to go but I'm taking a little break. I am hoping that the new stories will be better than this one. I know that not everyone will be interested in the type of stuff I write, but I figure I can't be the only one who likes stuff like this and I'm happy to learn that there are others who do.

The new stories will be different and will fall into different categories. Some of these even have violence (oh my!). For the most part though, the sizes will be along the lines of what "Inversion" has, they will fall into the "gentle" catetory (with some exceptions) and will be X or R rated.

As always, if you have suggestions, either for a particular story, or for what you would like to see in general, I'll listen. I can't guarantee I'll write what someone wants, but I'm open to ideas if anyone cares to share them and wants something along those lines written.

Thanks G Man, for all your feedback.

I think that the three sisters have certain roles to play left. 

Vicki - I think that she's going to end up playing a center-stage role before the end of the story. She's someone who has put on a selfish front, because she doesn't have many friends. But... for all the times mass destruction has been threatened, there hasn't been very much in the way of death or deep destruction throughout this entire story... until pretty much the past chapter. For everything she is, she doesn't have a whole lot of self-confidence towards anything other than her looks; even if she's smart enough, Vicki herself thinks that she's a complete moron. And very brilliant people are telling her mankind is on the brink of extinction. Telling her that there will be ZERO people left from events of the future. That - no matter what Vicki does - she will save people. Save mankind. Between these people manipulating Vicki and Nate's - albeit half-unwilling - encouragement, there's no telling what Vicki will do. Vicki thinks that she's going to save the lives of the few friends she has - and millions of other people - no matter what she does.  

Diana - Diana used to be the most responsible one. That's how she's been known. But, throughout the course of the story, how often has she been responsible? I think Diana's having second thoughts recently - the only question is what she does in response to realizing how things have gotten out of hand. But Diana may have some cards up her sleeve still. Especially now that she's actually mad about something. I think she's only been aggravated at most in the entire story I've written so far. And there's a large part of Diana that wants to be as carefree as Vicki. 

Sylvia - I think that there may be more to come from her maternal role. I think that we've only ever seen her happy or sad at worst. But, even if she didn't have much of an ego before, Sylvia knows how people see her. How much they adore her. And I think that a large part of her is aggravated enough at Vicki no matter how much she wants her to lose. Alien implant aside, Sylvia knows that all three of them could very well die soon. Along with Nate. Along with all of her friends. Sylvia may feel that it's her time to step up and be the responsible one. 

Nate - Isn't the issue that it isn't his story. I think he's only now begun to realize that he's not the one driving it. And, of course, he probably wonders how he can possibly drive it! When dealing with three sisters, his childhood friends and even lovers, who can squish him like a bug! And now he's dealing with a fanatic group on top of it. 

When I wrote to pillgram below about what Vicki would do as she grows, "no matter how depraved," I just meant "what would a brash, high-ego, party-girl sex-fiend, hundreds of feet growing, free of any sense of responsibility, do?" If you think that a part of Vicki would still hold back - that's good input as well. People never get complete freedom to do what they want - even regarding other people - so it's hard to know how someone in that situation would act. I'm working on it right now lol. 

So I do want feedback and suggestions on the story. I have the overall direction charted out.

What I'm really looking for are scenes/moments that you want to see from the three sisters, even for fetish purposes. Especially for fetish purposes. 

Glad to hear it, thanks! More coming soon