Reviewer: Ugly one Signed
Date: September 18 2018
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion
Intresting chapter,
Juliie likes being big, Julie I would gues would like to be bigger, and she is becoming aware of her power.
Ideally her and Sam stick it out, but I think the danger has passed for Borgfield victims house, I think Julie has her sights sent on the Tall Woman's club.
What happen to Sam was a test of her power (she admitted it, and experiment), continued tests to folks like Sam(assult and battery, sexual assult), Zoe, Erin even Jill (if Jill didn't kill her first)(all women rape), would only get law enforcement involved and ethier end her incaricated, unable to grow and highlighted as both a sex offender and a giantess to be contained, not what she wants and not what she needs.
I believe a much more satisifying test would be to pick a 'small' Tall and completely dominiate her in a way she couldn't do with Sam. To start marking the club as hers and hers alone.
She can be nice and gentle with Sam and the family, help with chores, drive, ect. cause what she is really doing is rebuilding her network, getting Sam to help with her college selections (she should go if only to boarden her influnce in another area), and maybe tution, or grants/loans (that whole why shouldn't I take advantage thing), Sam on his worst day after what she did would still help her with that. Talk with Zoe about her field, speak with the doctors, she started to grow when she and Sam did it, maybe the inversion table is a catalyst for the virus, allows it to go where it is need for her to GROW. Basically keep her nose clean, smile, learn and network from the embrassment of riches she has there.
Once she gains control of the Tall club, do the same thing slightly less nice (use them for all her experimentail 'urges') use thier connections and contact to further her influnance.
She Wants to grow, to do so means understanding the virus, so use her growing influnance, power and connection to do that. Direct them to work toward a true cure (don't want anyone follow her footsteps do we).
As she devolps from being selfishly aware of her power she will gain an understand of her responiblities (at the least keep the serfs happy so they feed her) and the core Julie who is nice, kind, sweet and gently should be able to expand and merge with her confident and strong persona.
If Sam wants to go(I hope not), let him, but don't let him go completely, he will always have her back and in time her friend could again become something so much more, espeacilly after she has helped found a cure.
So in essence Julie, don't commit crimes or stupid personality fights, think of the duck arguments flow off your back, enemenies like Zoe and Jill may just stab you in it. Besides only those opionion you need or agree matter, anything else is a gentle wind blowing. Grow broaden, strengtheb relationships and network with everyone and use the Tall Club as your release, don't think you can subjagate those girls enough.
To sum it's all about making friends and influcaning poeple. to quote "make new friends but keep the old, one is silver the other gold". Oh and don't forget to take your birthcontrol pills they should help your influnance (and GROWTH) as well.
And please Sam take her back.
Thank you.
Author's Response: You all have lots of thoughts and theories. I like the "pick a 'small' Tall and completely dominiate her in a way she couldn't do with Sam" idea. It's interesting. Right now Julie is still the new girl in town, so to speak, in the club. Her influence can only grow, however, like her physical growth, so we'll see where this takes her.
The question still remains at this point: will Sam take her back?
Thanks for the ideas and the feedback.