Penname: Ugly one [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: September 14 2018
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Semi-active, helped OHH on Deviant art with his hieght charts seiries, hope I can start doing work 1/10 as good as he has in the next couple of years.


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Inversion by littless Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 158]
Summary:

Sam's life undergoes some BIG changes when he gets back together with his high school sweetheart.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breast Enlargement, Couples, Gentle, Growing Woman, Incest, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 102 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 518393 Read Count: 696304
[Report This] Published: May 16 2017 Updated: April 29 2019
Reviewer: Ugly one Signed
Date: September 14 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Rereading Bedtime 73

I think more then ever the main Couple should reconcile and move forward with their relationship.

Why? Julie actually showed restraint, she was a spotted Hynea marking her much weaker male mate, but considering the size and strength difference she HAD to have worked on not hurting him.  She was 5x as strong back in chapter 41, she having atleast stayed the same and him shrinking like 7x to 8x if not more.  For her to pin him and use her clit being as angry as she was, he should of came out of it with at least a broken bone and interal bleeding, consider he and Zoe shared pleasentaries I think we know physcially Julie restrained herself, hell if she thrusted her clit in the wrong postion or with too much vigor Sam's large intestents would be bleeding and his hip shattered (let alone her roughly 100lbs of hips against his two).  If she didn't show restraint Sam would be dead or badly maimed, if she was actively trying to kill him it would of been over in seconds.

Also, in the build it is obivous she is jealous, complains about him being happy after dancing, says something about him needing a hunderd women, says he can't satify her at this size, but she can't satisfy him either, gets offended at JUST HER.  Her new friends are getting her insecruties peaked, and she has a shoot first ask questions latter streak in her.  What she did was wrong, and what she did to dominate Sam during was even worse, but it was to mark her mate, not kill, or even injure.  She felt she had to subjagate him, humilate him, but once it was over she knew she was wrong.

She needs to have some serious anger management counseling, and if she is going to be jealous use that dominance in a good way and tell Sam, this is now one on one, no more making me wait (at least chapters 68-73) what a month before you service me, that and him servicing anyone else at all likely didn't help her state of mind.

She does need help, I don't think this giantess thing is what she wants, she's being 'friends' with folks who don't seem to see a problem in making her miserable, likely cause they are miserable as well.  She doesn't fit in the world, she frightens poeple which after a while must be more annoying then 'cool'.  Her size and mass make her a hazzard to her friends and since she isn't on a battlefield it really doesn't help much besides moving (and that's only on the outside).  I don't doubt there are times she likes being the biggest most dominate being but again that has to ware thin over time.  

I think Sam after he recoups a bit will be fair, he will give her at least a Jill moment and I think Julie will rise to the occeasion(hopefully she will be talking to at least friends and family on how to fix this, if not getting counseling).  They are the main couple and the source of most of whats good in this story I for one want them to reconcile, correct and thrive.

Thanks



Author's Response:

Sam has always been fair. But this time he was greatly hurt. Do you think he'll be able to forgive Julie? Do you think Julie wants it? These questions will be answered soon but it will take a few chapters for us to find out.

It seems every reviewer is pulling for Julie and Sam. I hope I don't disappoint.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed
Date: September 18 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Intresting chapter,

Juliie likes being big, Julie I would gues would like to be bigger, and she is becoming aware of her power.

Ideally her and Sam stick it out, but I think the danger has passed for Borgfield victims house, I think Julie has her sights sent on the Tall Woman's club.

What happen to Sam was a test of her power (she admitted it, and experiment), continued tests to folks like Sam(assult and battery, sexual assult), Zoe, Erin even Jill (if Jill didn't kill her first)(all women rape), would only get law enforcement involved and ethier end her incaricated, unable to grow and highlighted as both a sex offender and a giantess to be contained, not what she wants and not what she needs.

I believe a much more satisifying test would be to pick a 'small' Tall and completely dominiate her in a way she couldn't do with Sam.  To start marking the club as hers and hers alone.

She can be nice and gentle with Sam and the family, help with chores, drive, ect.  cause what she is really doing is rebuilding her network, getting Sam to help with her college selections (she should go if only to boarden her influnce in another area), and maybe tution, or grants/loans (that whole why shouldn't I take advantage thing), Sam on his worst day after what she did would still help her with that.  Talk with Zoe about her field, speak with the doctors, she started to grow when she and Sam did it, maybe the inversion table is a catalyst for the virus, allows it to go where it is need for her to GROW.  Basically keep her nose clean, smile, learn and network from the embrassment of riches she has there.

Once she gains control of the Tall club, do the same thing slightly less nice (use them for all her experimentail 'urges') use thier connections and contact to further her influnance.

She Wants to grow, to do so means understanding the virus, so use her growing influnance, power and connection to do that.  Direct them to work toward a true cure (don't want anyone follow her footsteps do we).

As she devolps from being selfishly aware of her power she will gain an understand of her responiblities (at the least keep the serfs happy so they feed her) and the core Julie who is nice, kind, sweet and gently should be able to expand and merge with her confident and strong persona.

If Sam wants to go(I hope not), let him, but don't let him go completely, he will always have her back and in time her friend could again become something so much more, espeacilly after she has helped found a cure.

So in essence Julie, don't commit crimes or stupid personality fights, think of the duck arguments flow off your back, enemenies like Zoe and Jill may just stab you in it.  Besides only those opionion you need or agree matter, anything else is a gentle wind blowing.  Grow broaden, strengtheb relationships and network with everyone and use the Tall Club as your release, don't think you can subjagate those girls enough.

To sum it's all about making friends and influcaning poeple.  to quote "make new friends but keep the old, one is silver the other gold".  Oh and don't forget to take your birthcontrol pills they should help your influnance (and GROWTH) as well.

And please Sam take her back.

Thank you.



Author's Response:

You all have lots of thoughts and theories. I like the "pick a 'small' Tall and completely dominiate her in a way she couldn't do with Sam" idea. It's interesting. Right now Julie is still the new girl in town, so to speak, in the club. Her influence can only grow, however, like her physical growth, so we'll see where this takes her.

The question still remains at this point: will Sam take her back? 

Thanks for the ideas and the feedback.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed
Date: September 20 2018 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75 - And Now for Something Completely Different

Well Sam got his release, if Julie finds out she will be angry, but Sam's been doing things close to this the whole story.  Unless I missed something (will re-read) to be sure it was mutal oral sex and a shower,  So, yeah she will be pissed, but in comparsion to what she did, I think she will calm down and think to herself, Sam had this one coming, though she might yell at him a bit after he takes her back and then doing everything in her power to make sure her little man Sam only releases in her or her little woman.

As far as him taking Julie back, I think Sam may of reached a point where taking her back would be taking the entire house, he missed them all, if one is gone it won't be as it should, so he will take her back as part of the group of Giantess, normals, and Borgford victums,  He will have a full and unified and when Julie grows in understanding happy household.  Heres hoping he takes Julie back.  Thanks interesting read.



Author's Response:

In case you didn't pick up on it, the difference was the writing. I used more humor in this chapter. As far as Sam, you're right, not much difference. And you're right about Sam getting his release. Let's hope he can get his head together now and move on with things.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed
Date: September 21 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

No need for a shout here, I am sure I have done enough damage without one! LOL.



Author's Response:

LOL. I just wanted to pay you all back for the reviews. Thanks. It won't be chapter coming, but maybe another chapter or two after. We'll see.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed
Date: September 27 2018 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76 - A little surprise

Hope whoever is sick gets better and that things go better from here.

For the story good chapter

Julie is still feeling her oats but less so, however she wants to feel Sam's oats quite a bit...  I think she's starting to figure who cares for her, that dating let alone finding a relationship at 8' tall (if she's stop growing) isn't going to be easy.  Yes she can get 'respect' for her hieght and strength, but it's not love, or not the Love she's looking for.  Great poeple like me because I am huge... what about the rest of me...

Sam will alway support her and if he could keep it in his pants (he did actually make and effort this time, and Julie did say he could 'help' but I doubt she meant it in this manner) I think the two are feeling themselves toward what should be a good and healthy new realationship.

The safety issue, that will require some work considering she's over twice his hieght and likely 10x his mass.  Why does it have to be a couple though?  Zoe seems quite fond of both of them.  Sam will stand up to Julie cause it helps her, or others, he seems not as forthcoming for himself, Zoe will stand up to any one at any time for her own benefit, Julie's benefit, Sam's benefit, ect.  Maybe the small woman who is 99.5% Lesbian could be the unknown factor ensure safety and stabilty with Sam and Julie.  It would amuse me seeing Zoe running circles around the physically dominate Julie and the oh so smart Sam while ensuring all three were happy.  First choice Sam and Julie, second perhaps better grouping Sam, Julie and Zoe.  Thanks for the Chapater and again hope things go better with life soon.



Author's Response:

Ugly one,

Thanks for the hope. I hope things get better too.

Ten times his mass and probably ten times or more stonger. Oh my. I like how you're thinking about why does it have to be a couple. I think you'll like the latest chapter. Funny how all of you picked up on the respect thing. 

Thanks again.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed
Date: October 07 2018 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77 - Relationships

Man, Sorry about RL, hope things work themselves out.

Awesome Chapter!

Julie if only she didn't do what she did would be perfect, Think her and Sam can go the distance.  Two issues as pointed out by others, She's BIG but with help I think Sam can handle it and Sam can't keep it secure but again if they (Chloe, Zoe, Cindy and Tee) can please Julie, Julie has state they can please Sam.

They will never be out of the woods, I am sure the Sunflower girls will continue to poke and prod.  The time in AZ will likely be bad for Sam and Julie caring about him like she does it won't be a happy time if he finds out he gave Borgsford to two poeple.

With all that I believe they can make it espeacilly with the others, a final problem for Sam or it might not be, what happens if the inversion bench returns the girls to normal size over time and poor Sam is stuck at 3' 71/2" or less...  Maybe a bad thing for Sam, or maybe heaven for Sam? probably a little of both...

Again hope things start going your way and thanks for a great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the hope and kind words.

I think it is more what Sam does that seemed to sabotage their relationship. Julie just had that one episode where she kind of lost it. Had I been a better writer I think we may have seen her build up to that moment. Poor Sam can't keep it in his pants. In his defense there's that medicine he's taking that's making him that way plus all those gorgeous girls who have the same problem. I wish I had such problems.

Sam hates being small. He's never had luxury of being big, or even normal sized as all the others, including the ones shrinking, have. He can be bitter about it, and he is a little. But Sam is realizing that maybe size doesn't matter so much and is learning to appreciate his, uh, problems? Let's hope he doesn't get any smaller than 3' 7 1/2". Oops.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 02 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reunion

Glad Sam and Julie have stabilized and that Julie likes to expirement!

Zoe seems to be trying to heal and have them understand the other more, the poor woman has PTSD, little worried that the glue that's keeping the tissue together as it heals isn't quite right herself.

Read Jill's part a couple of times, not sure if the fight even involved Sam, could be how great it was to be tall (which while the realationship was on Ice she made clear to Sam).  I don't quite know what Sam could learn, if it was really hurtful to Julie my bet is Jill would of told him.  I am sure it will be yet another obsticile that they will have to deal with in the last few chapters.

I think since Zoe talks and spends more time with both Sam and Julie she's if not pushing, she's clearing what Julie does and doesn't do to Sam during their 'sack' time.

Intresting concept crossed my mind, Zoe maybe the one thing that holds Julie and Sam together if things get as rough as I think they are.  Both love her, and she loves both of them, having Sam's harem (with Wilma trying to get in) and Julie's arrogance with her size having what I would hope is their final flare up that they pull back from the edge and know they have to help Zoe and that Zoe wouldn't put up with their stuff if there wasn't something good and worthwhile about their love (her wishpering in Julie's ear and helping her deal with Sam's Harem, as with her talking to him and pushing him to do right by Julie).  That if Zoe can see it, they begin to see it as well and their combined efforts to 'help' Zoe allow them to overcome the last and greatest issues.

Keep Julie and Sam together, they need each other and Zoe needs them.

Thank you.



Author's Response:

Ugly one,

Thanks. I'm glad Julie and Sam are back together too and hope they stay that way. It seems everyone here does.

Zoe has some problems but I think she's strong enough (emotionally) to handle them. If not, she has some new friends, not the least of which being Sam, to help her out. What do you think?

Ah, Jill. What is it that she knows that nobody else does? Is something hurtful to Julie? Or Sam? Or anyone else?

I'll hopefully start posting chapters again soon. Read down a few comments to find out what has happened IRL lately. I'm grateful for the support you and everyone else here is giving me.

Summary:

Nathan is going off to college soon, leaving behind his closest friends and neighbors, the Small triplets. But they let him know that they're going to the same school as well, and he's staying with them! However, after some time he begins to wonder what their true intentions really are...

Soon Nathan, and the world, will find out.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Mouth Play, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, BBW, Butt, Feet, Futanari, Gentle, Growing Woman, Incest, Lesbians, Maternal, Odor, Slow Size Change, Giantess, Body Exploration, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Watersports, Vore, Unaware, Sci-Fi, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 195544 Read Count: 331324
[Report This] Published: July 08 2017 Updated: July 04 2022
Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 28 2019 Title: Chapter 1: The Small Sisters

Sylvia is awesome in this chapter, more!!!  Keep it up, if possible less time beteewn chapters!



Author's Response:

I already have quite a bit written out. I aim to complete it within a bit of a reasonable time. However, at this point I'm taking suggestions because there're a few thibgs I'm unsure about when it comes to ending it.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 11 2019 Title: Chapter 1: The Small Sisters

Keep up the good work, more Slyvia, more Small sisters!!!

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 19 2019 Title: Chapter 1: The Small Sisters

More Slyvia!!!  Bigger Slyvia!!!  Have her kick her sisters but!!!

Summary:

Disappearences of ships, people, and other strange things happen on a remote mysterious Island. A 20-year-old college sophomore visits the Island for an internship at a facility... Powerful forces put her at the forefront of life-changing events and some events that could even change our world forever.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Destruction, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing Woman, Humiliation, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Slave, Slow Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 82447 Read Count: 168814
[Report This] Published: July 23 2017 Updated: April 26 2022
Reviewer: Ugly one Signed
Date: October 15 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants

Stumbled on to this one, so far so good, agree with the comments.  One thing I think most didn't fully pick up on, Bruce and Genie as well as Sea King.  Helga has set up Wendy to find out that the place she is interning for is kidnapping poeple.  She "owns" the pair, if it's her and Helga likely the 'test subjects' will be plianent and cool (and Wendy and Helga will be professional, likely gentle and kind), but I sense Helga will leave for oh about and hour after proding, or stubly hinting to Wendy or Bruce and Genie how those two got to the Island.  Wendy if she's who I think she is will be horrified when she finds out one they were kidnapped, two what Ming and Lyn did to them and three that Helga and her youngest captured them.

Helga will take the hate and explain as best as she can, Bruce and Genie will likely back her (espeacily since they are being treated by her and Wendy likely having much better conditions and being treated like humans!).  When the stuff hits the fan what will Wendy do?  My guess is folks like Helga have a plan and want Gene-tech to be a force for good for humanity, that they are likely not in a postion to ensure that and that Wendy and others they are bringing can help so that Gene-tech can be such a good instiution.

All I can guess is a lot of Wendy's wonder will be lost, I think her, Helga and others will do the right thing.  It would be ironic if while on a 'recreation' hike (Wendy carrying the pair in her pocket or the like)the information slips when Helga instructs her to 'secure' some tourists in the wrong place which would prod Bruce and Genie t spill how they were captured...

So far a good stroy, thank you for your effort in this.



Author's Response:

@Ugly One. Interesting reasoning and thank you for this detailed review and liking this story.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 05 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants

Finally more Wendy, Helga, good seeing Sam, little embrassing what happens at the mansion...  Glad to see Chapter 7, please let it be weeks rather than months for chapter 8.  Thanks great chapter



Author's Response:

Chapter 08 - "Different faces of terror" is on its way. It is half done. I hope I can speed up the frequency too.

 

Thank you for your comments. :)

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 28 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 01 - Land of the Giants

Great Story, awesome discriptions and attention to detail, definitely a favorite of mine, Keep up the excellant work!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Ugly One.

I try to be very descriptive and detailed as possible. Sometimes a writer can forget that the reader can't see his thoughts.
I'm far with chapter 10 and hope it will be finished this week.

Summary:

Its Madison's birthday!
What will she get?

This story takes place in the universe of Brobdingnagians, humans and lilliputians.

 

Take a look at my patreon page!

https://www.patreon.com/glaazius


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, New World Order, Slave, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 110961 Read Count: 417492
[Report This] Published: November 16 2017 Updated: November 29 2023
Reviewer: Ugly one Signed
Date: January 28 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Madison's birthday present

hopefully the little ones and Madison will have happier times...



Author's Response:

I hope so too.

All those evil Brobdingnagians...

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 26 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Madison's birthday present

Hoping Madison can keep Claire in check, doubt Sophie can be so contained ;-(



Author's Response: Hey thx for the review! You will soon find out ;)

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed
Date: November 21 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Madison's birthday present

Come on the Human and Liliputen societies are so advanced and with the Lilies be even more so that they haven't synthizined Nerve Agent.  Some Sarin or VX (about 20 gallons worth to be sure) would down any Giant/giantess, Bypasses barriers since it appears to the skin and nerves as something the nerves need, then kills, heck their are mercury compounds even smaller and deadlier and just as able to bypass, if you want to make a point to the giants every time they F with one of you cities they are at best neruolgically crippled at worst every one involved on their side is DEAD!  Your going to lose a 100,000 anyway to Sophie or her daughter might as well make them pay!  Enough dead or crippled Bonbargions and the rest will think twice or not attack at all.  Best play for the tinies and could turn the tide of war for humans.  Basically compounds taking early industrail age tech would hurt and/or kill the largest of giants, it's in their capicity prehaps in this story they will use them.



Author's Response:

Interesting notion those nerve gasses.

Maybe the Lilli's still have something up their sleeve, or maybe not ;)
We will find out.

Thx for the review!
Appreciate it!

Summary:

     When Chris’s parents go on a second honeymoon during his summer vacation, they leave him in the charge of an unwelcome babysitter, and things quickly go from bad to worse when this much-abhorred sitter hatches a plan to have some fun with him...much to Chris’s dismay.

This story is based on an original idea from aow4321 on Writing.com, to whom I give full credit for the creation of most of the characters involved therein.

12/28/2023: 1 million reads and counting! 🥳 For anyone just finding this story, I want to reassure you that the main story has concluded and is complete. For those of you who have been waiting patiently for an update, I know it’s been an over a year since this story concluded, but I wanted to assure those of you who have been waiting patiently for the Giantess Shannon alternate chapter that I am planning to get back to work on it once my current story is finished. As I mentioned before, I’ve never actually written a growth story before, as it’s not something that I’m really that into, but I have been collaborating with, and taking suggestions from, several of my readers and fellow authors as to how to write such a project, and have been working to create a finished product that’s worthy of posting.

After I finish my latest project, I want to get back and finish this before jumping into my next novel, so feel free to provide any more suggestions—scenarios, interactions, etc.—that you have in your reviews. I want to create something high quality that everyone can enjoy.

Thank you ALL for your feedback and suggestions that have made this story possible! If you like what you read, leave a review; if certain chapters are your favorites, tell me why. Don’t forget to add me to your favorites so you’ll know when I post more stories, and if you have any commission requests, feel free to shoot me an email! Thank you all for your continued support! 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 304400 Read Count: 1038485
[Report This] Published: February 20 2018 Updated: September 20 2021
Reviewer: Ugly one Signed
Date: June 29 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Part I—Chapter 1

Kind of been reading in the background, seems we see the two exteremes of GMing.  Monty Hall for Shannon (come on if your son had been sick for a week and hadn't been seen or gone to the doctors you would be on the first thing back and would of called the cops to search the house), which every benefit of the doubt swings her way, every resource is a$$ pulled to help her while Chris is a Paladin who can only make desperate thrid way choices (are you going to murder orc childern or let the town die equivllent) aka killer dungeon GM for Chris.

Would like it if it this was reversed at the end and there was consequences for Shannon evil deeds (bad like prision) and some reward for Chris (like him and Racheal becoming 'better' friends).

Just my view on a decent story.



Author's Response: I appreciate your honesty. I didn’t realize how long this story was going to be when I started out; I just had so much I wanted to have happen in a relatively short amount of time, that I probably ended up sacrificing the overall believability of and interest in the plot. This is why I’m trying to move things along as we approach the end of the story. We’re coming up on the end of the week and we’ve seen that Shannon is now under suspicion; with Mrs. Carson, Rachel, Sue Ann, and Mrs. Martin all closing in on the truth, Shannon is becoming more and more desperate to keep her secret, and pull off her great escape!

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 31 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Part I—Chapter 1

COME ON! COME ON! Chris never gets a break, Racheal even after he's saved plays a bit rough with him, then he gets spurned by the older woman and then Shannon screws (or atleast tries to) him over.  Not that her plan would remotely work in real life as Rachel and her mother will likely point how Shannon had him there for a week and never called the cops, would not let them into the house and how she claimed he was sick.  How do those remotely point to Sue Ann kidnapping him?

I mean really give the kid a break, you spend DOZENs of chapters tormenting him give him three of 'lighter' torment, have Shannon and Ray get jusctice done.  Have Rachel and Chris have their happy ending, let the suffering END!  Thank you.



Author's Response: I know that it’s frustrating to see Shannon seemingly winning all the time, and I also understand your dubious belief in her plan; actually, that’s the point. Her plan is unbelievable: SHE thinks it’ll work because she’s blinded by her ambition and isn’t thinking clearly. She’s basically making it up as she goes.

I wanted to share Shannon’s day, but I honestly wasn’t expecting it to take up the whole chapter—I was only expecting it to take up maybe a couple of pages—Plus, I was hoping to end the chapter later on into the night, but by the time she and Chris began their confrontation, the chapter was already 7-pages long, and I personally don’t like to spend an entire chapter where you’re waiting to see the conflict start being resolved to be filled with a bunch of back story that barely moves the main plot along, so, sorry about that. But, I assure you, the story is coming up on its conclusion, and I plan on the next chapter having some real excitement!

Endless by Curse Crazy Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A creepy college student uncovers a book of curses, and the depths of her wild personality come to life. By conducting a ritual to shrink people, she is able to hold in her hands the target of her obsessed affections, along with other victims that cross her hexed path.

(If you enjoy the story, consider supporting me on Patreon~ https://www.patreon.com/cursecrazy

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Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Crush, Entrapment, Fantasy, Humiliation, Lesbians, Slow Size Change, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168220 Read Count: 252390
[Report This] Published: June 25 2018 Updated: May 02 2019
Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstar
Date: November 06 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Great another series where the villian has 'invincible' grade plot armor.  Cindi was WAY to easily gotten rid of and she could of been a morality pet with Adrain, she was also written way to weak for a harden dective.  So more torment of folks who may deserve it, may not when you have actual rapist, murders (now to include both main characters, though one was under deress) and worse that Candi may of been able to talk Mel into hunting rather then Co-Ed and their dates.

No it's going to turn into another Vore fest (which for those who like it just copy and paste the other 10,000 stories on this site, God forbid something new and less dark might entertain you) in which Mel litterally gets away with murder after murder when any police force would of had two squad cars at her apartment the moment Candi went dark with others ready to go on such a high profile case, and yes they would have body cameras at this point if Candi didn't already have one herself, they would notice if for some odd reason wine was shrinking one or both of the officers, so the second pair would going shooting, but hey lets go from suspension of disblief to out and out fantasy.  'yeh' PLOT ARMOR,,,,



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! I always appreciate feedback.

I do apologize if the tone of the story isn't to your interests, especially at this particular junction. I know not everyone is into vore, but it's something wild and derranged -- something Melanie would absolutely do to one of her enemies. I disagree that this is becoming "a vore fest," so far it's just the one person being vored after all! Which, compared to many other stories around this site, I'm currently in the low estimates of vores-per-chapter. I'm sorry that the vore was off-putting to you, especially if this was a make-or-break part of enjoying Endless. I know now I did not have it tagged appropriately, so I can understand how this would be surprisng.

Indeed, that would be a very realistic approach to this story! If a pair of cops did, in fact, come to interrogate Melanie versus a single private investigator. Perhaps that could have made a more compelling story for you and others, but a realistic representation of a police investigation would have only slowed my story down. As you yourself can see, Melanie would have easily been caught. That's not a very exciting ending to Endless, right? At least, it isn't in my opinion. To be frank, I found myself stuck in this situation: do I just shy away from the fact that people are going missing, and that Melanie would look suspicious? Or do I have the world respond appropriately, which in turn would lead the story to a pretty abrupt end? I had to choose a middle ground, and this approach looked most fun for me, a detective that gets the reader to think, "Finally! Someone that can stop Melanie!" only for her to then be embarrassingly defeated in the very next chapter.

I will finish my response with this thought: this story is not meant to be a happy one. From the very beginning, I wanted a story of hopelessness. I didn't want to be too on the nose with my other responses to past reviews, but I don't perceive Melanie as a villain. Well, not necessarily. She's the protagonist, and this is her story of magic and love. Of course it would be a cleaner and more traditional tale if Melanie had a match to contest her, but that isn't the force I have opposing Melanie. That isn't the story I'm trying to tell.

I know I might have sounded harsh in this review~ I just wanted to reply genuinely since you did so as well. I hope you continue reading Endless and find more to enjoy! Perhaps my reply here might clear some of the air.

Cansara by Julianz Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

After surviving a tragedy in space, two siblings and a stranger must work together to survive the hostile planet they have all found themselves on.

 

This story is going to be one of my first attempts at a more narrative driven story. It'll probably take a while to get to some of the tags.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21952 Read Count: 47234
[Report This] Published: July 30 2018 Updated: August 12 2020
Reviewer: Ugly one Signed
Date: January 28 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Rough Landing

you got a good build up, good story so far keep it up!