Penname: billyevil [Contact] Real name: billy
Member Since: March 21 2006
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Summary: The first born always has it a little bit easier then the rest, but easy street ends for Jacen when he finds himself shrinking do to a electrical surge. He now finds himself a inch tall and forced to seek out help from his siblings.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Instant Size Change, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28014 Read Count: 325153
[Report This] Published: December 20 2006 Updated: December 03 2007
Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: You are your own worst enemy

really fun stuff so far man.. this last update really was cool.. i'm glad you decided to write this story.. i hope to hear more! :)

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Date: January 03 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five: "Fall seven times, stand up eight"

I'm loving this story! Thank you for this chapter.. This is really turning into quite the epic.. thank you for keeping it so voyeur.. I love that!

Author's Response: The voyuer part, i feel will help make him more of a character people care about, later on.

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Date: January 07 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six: “We come nearest to the great when we are in great humilty"

Thought buggie was a dog at first, being called to lick up the chips from the floor. interesting that she thinks he's just a bug.. wonder how long it will take her to notice.. :)

Reviewer: billyevil Signed
Date: January 08 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: "We must accept finite disappointment, but never lose infinite hope."

The threat of being fed to her lizard was a great idea. Too bad for him that she feinted before she could get him help. Great story. :)

Author's Response: thanks, im glad you are enjoying it. I orginally had a scene planned with him in the cage with hte lizard but i took it and went  the direction you see now.

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Date: January 14 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: Facts and Reality

Interesting denial angle.. I look forward to seeing how this plays out.

Reviewer: billyevil Signed
Date: January 18 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: The Death of my Brother

This story just keeps getting better and better.. I love what you're doing here.. I can't wait to read more.. :)

Author's Response: thanks, imhoping to get another chapter out this weekend.

Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 27 2007 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven: The Day After

I like how things are going.. The realism is interesting, as you said in another comment.. it's nice to see a different take than brother shrinks.. sister takes instant power trip.. sometimes people don't know what to do and some people can't always make decisions.. I have the feeling this story is going to go on for quite some time.. and i know i'll love every minute of it.. I look forward to seeing each new chapter.. and it made my day seeing it at the recent stories top.. thank you!

Reviewer: billyevil Signed
Date: April 12 2007 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty: Solutions and Problems

Interesting. I wonder if the girl intends to mix it in with Emma's food and shrink her as well. Being stuck in that pouch without anyone knowing where he's gone is going to make escape difficult. Especially if something happens to Emma.

Author's Response: We are getting near the end of this tale, but a few twists are still in store. I'm glad to see you still reading after all these chapters. I hope you are still enjoying it as much as the first.

Summary: When Donna Johnson makes a wish on a passing star, Her husband, Tim, and two sons, Dylan and Jason, may be in for more of an adventure then just the camping trip they planned.
Categories: Insertion, Giantess, Humiliation, Unaware, Body Exploration, Feet, Incest, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3504 Read Count: 65165
[Report This] Published: January 09 2007 Updated: March 11 2007
Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 10 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting story and idea. I like where this is going and look forward to more. Thank you.

Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your writing style is really enjoyable for me. I really like what you've done so far with the story, and I look forward to see what happens now that there are two giant women running around unaware of the tiny people around them. I hope you continue as I'm really enjoying the story. Thank you!

Summary: A young woman seeks the privacy of nature, unaware that she's destroying a civilization.
Categories: Odor, Giantess, Butt, Crush, Insertion, Unaware, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16917 Read Count: 248646
[Report This] Published: January 17 2007 Updated: January 11 2009
Reviewer: billyevil Signed
Date: January 17 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Look Out Below

That was a good read.. thank you!

Summary: Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Giantess, Mature (40-49), Feet, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26648 Read Count: 181729
[Report This] Published: January 22 2007 Updated: July 05 2007
Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 08 2007 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: A Long Sleepless Night (Part two)

Very nice! I enjoyed having him trapped in her nylons. This is a really fun story. Thank you.

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Date: March 03 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: The Game

This has been my favorite chapter by far. I love how despite her being quite evil, the relationship seems to be taking on an understanding. Poor Amber though, she's the kind of girl who other people have to help a bit and unfortunately that kinda girl usually ends up with the kind of guy who takes advantage of her appreciation for everything she's lucky enough to be given. I'm really enjoying this story and hope you continue it. Thank you!

Author's Response: thanks alot. I enjoy reading reviews like this.

Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 26 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Confused, Used, and Abused

I told you she was evil.. i doubt the father will see through her until it's too late for him to do anything to stop her.. and any attempts to expose her by the son will not be believed due to the history the son has with Cindy.. the father will just think that he is trying to get her in trouble out of revenge for turning him in as a pervert.. the best thing the son can do is go on the run in the house.. gather information on Cindy without her knowing.. in his current position she's in total control.. something needs to be done to change the situation.. or she will win.. i'm really enjoying this story as you can tell.. i hope you keep it going..

Author's Response: with reviews like this, I'd hate to end the story.  thanks

Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 22 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: How I Came To Be

Girls like her are trouble.. I really like how this story is going, but I find myself wondering what kind of control she has on his father to get away with what she does.. It will be interesting to see what happens next, but I really don't like that girl, no matter how seductive and sexy she is, she's still evil and trouble, and I hope the father is able to see through that before someone ends up getting hurt. Thank you for this story!

Reviewer: billyevil Signed
Date: January 23 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: SPENDING THE NIGHT AT CINDY’S

I still don't trust her, but she is turning into a character that I can see liking. Going after both the father and the son is dangerous. I hope she's ready for the jealousy that is sure to happen when one feels neglected.. I look forward to more. :)

Author's Response: Glad you like the story.  More is on the way.

Summary:

A college junior is reunited with her brother, years later. However, the older brother in his misguided attempts to protect his family is now a very different man and finds himself in need of his younger sister. How will the Siblings learn to adjust to the changes that come from their new relationship?


Categories: Gentle, Giantess, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6058 Read Count: 61844
[Report This] Published: February 01 2007 Updated: March 14 2009
Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reunion

I love your writing style.. this is coming together great.. I look forward to the adventures as now the story is ready to shine.. thank you!

Summary:

Your friend shows you an odd device that she brought from a tech lab.  What is it?  You'll have to find out as you go.

In the tradition of the "choose your own adventure" books.


Categories: Adventure, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Incest, Insertion, Vore, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9306 Read Count: 154886
[Report This] Published: February 06 2007 Updated: December 03 2007
Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 06 2007 Title: Chapter 12: Ch. 21: What Are The Odds?

This was a fun change! A couple chapters are missing in it, so you kinda have to choose one path over another.. but despite that i had a great time playing choose your own adventure, you should do more of these.. once you get all the chapters in this one of course.. Thank you!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it!  I plan on making some more of these; they're fun to write since I don't have to choose between different plotlines that I'd like to do.

Father's Daughter by Vord Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: After his wife died, a father learns more struggles he will have to face as he begins to shrink. And only his 17 year old daughter can be the one to help him out, if she lets him.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Gentle, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15977 Read Count: 206220
[Report This] Published: February 11 2007 Updated: March 13 2007
Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 11 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Coming thoughts

A very beautiful story so far.. let's see where it leads.. thank you

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Date: February 23 2007 Title: Chapter 9: From secrets to warnings

I dig Beth and this story.. You've really taken things at a perfect pace to build anticipation without it getting boring.. and that's a fine line to walk.. I look forward to see where things go from here.. I have to admit I am curious what exactly will happen if he gets left alone for the night with Beth.. You've made a great story here and I thank you.. Please continue..