In this sequel to "Innocent Musings Over Breakfast", the tiny parents find themselves in the midst of a much bigger meal, and a much hungrier daughter.
I love this, and the idea backing it. Go figure, and go you.
Thanks so much! I always look forward to hearing what you have to say about my work. I appreciate you reading and reviewing!
I read this back when you first posted the new chapter, and silly me, forgot to review it. Love it, as always. I keep expecting their daughter's friend to stop by, or something...either way, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Thanks! I've come to appreciate and anticipate your thoughts on my work. Though sometimes I think you're trying to bribe me. :P I've actually considered that happening, a lot...a friend coming over. I don't know if it's going to happen or not yet. We'll see!
Great stuff, as I often find myself writing about your work. More please! heh
Thanks again, Knot!
Unlike most of my stories, I will be implementing two things I don’t normally do; Micro and Unaware.
The main idea of this story is going to be where a married couple are spending time together at home. The wife is going to leave the room for awhile and accidentally shrink her husband to about ¼ of an inch in height. After this happens, our little hero is going to need to get his wife’s attention in order to be restored to normal height.
17 year old Derrick gets more than he bargained for when he discovers a way to make his wildest dreams come true.
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I'm loving it. Happy to see authors take the plunge and submit, especially when it is as well crafted as this! I'm a fan, and chapter 2 really ramped up the excitement of the story. Keep it up!
Greatly appreciated Knot. I really enjoyed your stories, so thanks for the kind words.
After becoming jammed in a broken down elevator, I find myself within a new environment, where everything isn't as it seems.
Excellent start. I enjoy the back and forth style, alternating points of view. I look forward to seeing where you take this!
This is really shaping up to be a lovely story. It's refreshing to have characters acting like real people, as it adds to the realism and as a reader, you buy into what is happening more. I like how clean and wonderful the experience is. Keep up the fantastic work.
My beautiful upstairs neighbor has a new security system that can shrink any intruders. At first I find it terrifying, but later on... exhilarating.
[July 27, 2013: Chapter 6 added. Story ended]
Love this, love the concept, and love the size. Micro and unaware go hand in hand, keep doing what you do, and I'll keep coming back :D
Loving the regular updates, and I certainly didn't see the story heading where it has. Twists galore! Keep it up, I like your work.
Michael Parker and his wife Amy have recently purchased their first home that they can truly call their own. They're about to throw a housewarming party and their friends will be attending. What will happen when Michael decides to entertain their guests by showing off to them the latest invention he's been toiling away on for the past few months?
I've been following this story since it began, albeit from the shadows, but I really have to commend you on a job well done. My own tastes veer toward the unaware you had in the earlier chapters, but you have done such a stellar job with this, that I keep coming back, hoping you have posted another chapter. Keep up the great writing!
Thanks for leaving a review. And the shadows can be quite cozy, can't they? Haha.
So I checked out your profile after reading your review and I read Malfunction. You were off to a great start, I'd love to read more if you ever decide to continue writing it. I've noticed it hasn't been updated in 3 years though so I understand if you've lost intrerest in telling that tale since then.
Anyways, thanks for reading and I appreciate the review!
Johan attends a party hosted by his eccentric brother, Greg. He has no interest in seeing his brother, whom he despises, but goes to see his 13 year old niece Emi, but things take a turn for the crazy. Everybody in the house is shrunken down to near microscopic size and the only one left at normal size is Emi, who is completely unaware that her simple actions such as walking, sitting and eating is exterminating the lives of many defenceless party guest. Can anyone survive the unaware Emi and potentially a late party guest that Johan and Greg know all too well and how will Johan handle his evil brother Greg who is the root of all of these problems?
Love the set-up, loads of potential. I'll be eager to see where you take this!
Thanks, i was hoping this chapter would show the potential of this story. Glad this chapter did its job.
Several people all somehow connected to the same girl mysteriously disappear, only to re-appear shrunken on her Ice-cream cone.
I only had one problem with this: It was over too soon. I loved it. Granted, the genre's you mentioned are some of my absolute favorite, but you did them justice. There's just something so gripping and realistic about micro/nano and unaware that puts me right in the action, if done correctly.
Almost needless to say, I'd encourage you to flex these genre muscles whenever you feel the need.
Thanks for the review knot, as a returning author I was a little nervous about uploading this but your review put me at ease.
Also I agree with your opinion on unaware micro/nano; I like to think that stories like these are the hardest to predict because the giantess could do anything at anytime and the audience has no way of knowing whats going to come next.