Greg finds a watch that allows him to shrink and grow, he uses it to get closer to his neighbours.
Nice chapter. This has been one of my favorite stories in quite a while. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Thanks!
I like where the story is going. Nice touch on the dreams that the character is having. I'd think if someone could change size there would be some messed up dreams. I'd like to see some more unaware stuff, but I'm also looking forward to the latest installment.
Thanks! I'm also liking the dreams, gives a good idea where Gregs head is at. And dont worry, there will be more unaware in the future.
Ohhh, that's going to make things very interesting indeed. I can't wait to read what happens next.
Modeled after the Incredible Shrinking Man story by Richard Matheson, I will attempt to take you through various tragic stages and scenarios impressed upon a man with a shrinking disease. These scenes may not be in chronological order so please do not expect gradual size reduction.
That's some powerful theropy. I wonder how his interactions with his family will be when he reaches on inch.
Probably not... Well he'll have to cross that bridge when he gets there, he he.
Powerful therapy indeed though I agree. ;)
Thank you very much for the comments Kane. :)
Things are getting really interesting. I hope John's situation gets better, but something tells me I shouldn't hold my breath.
I'm glad that it hs piqued your interest Kane.. That's what this is all about after all... Thanks a lot for giving me some comments on this! :)
Man I don't know what was worst for John, the anal probe, the rape, or the fact he'll probably never be able to leave. It's like a snowball effect, the situation just got worst and worst and worst.
Maybe he'll get a big poster for the wall of his cell that they won't look behind for a while. Looking forward to the next installment.
Thanks a lot Kane... It's the old adage, from bad to worse that comes to mind. And yes, he was really put through the ringer this time... Hence he was pretty broke down when he was carried back to his minder at the end.
He, he. thanks a lot for the review and comments Kane. :)
"he belongs to someone and we’ve got to return him" He's not even considered a person now to the people around him. At 12 inches that would make him Hot Toys size or the size of a Barbie Doll. Now more than ever I'm curious to see what you have planned as he gets smaller.
I was wondering if anyone was going to catch that.. Glad to see that it definately did not escape your attention Kane..
I figured that some people would just callously assume that he was owned or possessed by a legal gaurdian of some sort.. Humiliating as that would be.
Thanks a lot for the comments and the good eye Kane. :)
Damn, he got some in a big way, and I do mean a BIG way. Makes me wonder if she did as an act of kindness or for her own disires. Kids being rough with him is very realistic. I wonder how rough things will get as he gets smaller.
I would imagine rougher, ha, ha! I figured that I'd let the motives of her sexual advances travel on the breeze but should have known that observant readers like you Kane would not overlook that and bring me to task on the issue.. He, he.
My big hint wasn when I said that she had not had any contact with another human for over 2 years.. But one can not rule out her inclination to bestow mercy either so perhaps she chasing both alternatives at the same time as I've known some smart ladies who could juggle multiple motives as one time.
If I were to vote, my ballot would be cast for both motives. :)
But that does not mean that she will not allow carnal desires to crush the good intentions eventually either. ;) I don't know if that will happen either.. I'd like to show off and say that I'm three steps ahead on her nature but sadly I am not.
I will think on it some more though Kane.. Thanks a lot for bringing that subtle point to the surface. :)
There goes the last lingering piece of John’s manhood. I'm curious to see how this plays out. Especially since she's pretty much threatened to step on him.
Yeah, evil women when givne free rain will do evil things.
Thanks for the comments Kane. :)
I hope he gets more gentle interactions than bad ones. This guy is having a really hard time what with being kept in a crib and not getting anything from his wife.
I wouldn't lose hope in him getting anything from his wife. Ha, ha!
And have I steered you wrong on gentle interactions yet Kane?
Thanks a lot for the comments. :)
So far a really nice chapter. I look forward to reading more in the future.
Thank you very much Kane as I truly appreciate your words..
I will try to give another chapter soon. ;)
When he suddenly finds himself reduced to the most minute of sizes how will Alex survive the little things in life that we take for granted?
Other than going from a first person narrative and changing to a second person narrative about half way through the story it's a nice first chapter. Looking forward to reading more.
Oops. I did do that didn't I? I will watch out for that in future chapters. Thanks.
Jake is short, nerdy, introvert in high school who would much rather spend time with a teacher than his fellow classmates. However, after an incident before chemistry class, he'll find himself getting closer to a teacher than he ever bargained for... Jake will enter a big new world way over his head, literally.
A nice start. Looking Forward to reading more.
Here comes a whole lot of fun, or a whole lotta horror. Depends on how you look at it. Can't wait to read how this plays out.
After discovering shrinking pills online, Logan uses them to grow closer to his 13-year-old, adopted sister.
I like the story so far. It's interesting how the brother has good intentions as his modivations to shrink rather than the typical selfish reasions.
An unfortunate man unfortunately becomes a part of a balanced breakfast in an unfortunate turn of events.
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Nice job with this one. Lots of detail which I love, gives great mental visuals. If I could nit pick, the only minor issue I have is the ending where she caresses her thoat. I don't know anyone who does this. I see this alot in videos and in other works of GTS fiction but as far as everyday life goes I have yet to see anyone eat something and carress their throat like that.
UNLESS
She knows he's there because she put him there and she's ignoring him while at the same time getting off from listing to his pleas and eating him alive. Then I could picture someone doing that. And maybe that's what you had in mind.
Looking forward to reading your next story.
Thanks! I tried to be pretty descriptive and yep! What I was going for is that she knew he was there, and was just getting off to his helplessness. Apologies if it wasn't very clear I tried to write it so that the reader along with the tiny man was experiencing this without knowing if she really knew he was there until the end! So you're right about that my friend! Thanks for the review and I look forward to writing more stuff~
A nice start. I would recomend using paragraphs. It makes it easier to read.
A workplace accident makes a man wish he had been a bit more neighborly
I will be writing this one at the same time as my other story, but I am trying to make them have much different themes.
Most of the time I hate when the little guy is being mistreated, but in this case I'll make an acception. Here we have a guy who was an Asshole at full size, and everything that's going on how he had coming. I like that. Karma is a Bitch.
Yeah, this will definetly be a story about him being put in his place and learning that karma is a giant bitch. Thanks for the review
