First of all, I love how Michelle treats her husband! Also, for the record, I’d love a story about the 6-inch guy and Christine, especially her daughter’s mindset in allowing her mother to put her boyfriend under her feet like that to make him better for her. (Maybe chapters 1-3 of “My High School Crush” by dilbertaco would be some inspiration? Minus the weird religious aspect, that is...)

Anyways, what I really wanted to talk about was that all throughout this story, I get this really awesome vibe that Beth, while clearly being dominant(but in a sexy, teasing, playful way), also genuinely loves John in an almost romantic way! It’s like he’s her man! (And John is starting to see her as his one and only, like when he daydreams about her putting lipstick on “just for him”)
The only reason that it doesn’t seem like it is because Beth(and Michelle as seen with how she treats her husband) simply sees being a tiny pet as the role of men. She still wants John as almost a partner, but just through the lense of being his complete and utter owner and mistress who can do with him whatever she pleases... and he’ll love it.

Those are just my thoughts! I could be wrong, but I LOVE it!!! Very excited to see this going forward! Keep it up!

Author's Response:

There's a story of the 6-inch guy in the works, though my plan would be that he is taken without his girlfriend's knowledge. Not sure how it's going to look yet, it's only an idea so far.

I’m loving this story so far! This:
“After some time, Olivia offered the tiny man even more incentive to answer her questions. She took him into her palm, and started rubbing him gently against her moistened soles. She pressed his body deep into the balls of her feet, and planted his face firmly into each toe.”
Has got to be one of the most sensually well-written footplay scenes on this site, it was very refreshing. However, I don’t like how her personality went from being cute, playful, and definitely having a crush on him and admiring him to being a domineering figure who sees him as a slave.

Other than that I have nothing but praise keep it up!

Well, I like inshoe. I am hoping that he can be reconciled to Olivia though! Maybe in return for breaking her heart, Jack’s punishment will be to stay tiny for her forever?

Keep up the good work!

Taylor did sound enticing, but I’m glad he’s still with Kayleigh. I like that she’s almost treating him like a partner, and I’d like to see where that goes.
On the other hand, if you do write about the alternative, I’d really only like it if Taylor knows he’s a person. I’d like to see how she treats him. Anyways, keep up the good writing!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

This looks extremely promising! From the description, the notes at the top(15 chapters I can’t wait), the first chapter itself, and the author of the story, I can tell this is gonna be great!

Author's Response:

Glad to hear. Hopefully it delivers.

This is AMAZING so far!!!
I knew if would be just from the summary!
Keep it up! Can’t wait to see where this goes!

Author's Response: Thank you. Lots planned so hopefully you continue to enjoy!

@el_rooto
Thanks! I’ll check it out!

Another amazing installment!
“He’d have to go through with it. He’d get shrunk down by his own mother. And he’d get stuffed in her shoes and trapped under her toes.”
This line summarizes it very well. It’s really hot.

“Although, it might be that I break you in a little too well.... Just imagine if I crush your sprit so much that you can’t function in the real world anymore. You’d end up begging me to keep you small and beneath pretty feet. But don’t worry, if it gets that bad, I promise, I’ll keep you tiny forever.”
Part of me really wants this to be foreshadowing! ;)

Now that he’s finally shrunk, I can’t wait for what happens next!

(Sorry for the late reviews, haven’t been to the site for a minute)
OMG, this is gonna be great! First of all, I love the pun when she says that she supports him to live in his “flat.” ;)
Second, I’ve said it before, and I’ll say it again:
I don’t know what it is about this particular scenario, because when reading I never picture my mother. (She’s actually the furthest thing from my mind, lol) However, there’s something about the maternal “theme” that I find appealing, if that makes any sense.
Now that that’s out of the way...
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!
I love it when the protagonist is still normal sized, but doomed to shrink to a tiny and utterly helpless size, and the female caretaker in question taunts him about what she’ll do with him once he’s tiny(in this case, her list of punishments they’ll go through). Once he’s utterly unable to do anything about it. To me, as a macrophile, it’s my equivalent of “dirty talk,” and Karen certainly delivers! ;)
I love how she is amused, if not delighted, by his pure humiliation at her forcing him to shrink and be under her feet and toes. I love how she coerces him by threatening to leave him broke if he doesn’t do it. (I almost sense a possible future where she realizes she doesn’t have to go to all the financial trouble to take care of him, and he ends up staying under her feet forever!)
I love the part where she says “And to be honest, I think you’d be a little more grateful for all I’ve done for you.” As if her taking care of and supporting him should warrant him wanting to repay her by becoming an inch tall and temporarily living in her shoes, being a toy between her squirming toes.
I love immediately after when she shows him her foot and says “This is one of the feet that you will be under. Is it really so scary? I take care of them and, to be honest, I think they will be softer than you expect. Even the sole.” And then “See, it’s just a foot. And you will be perfectly safe tucked under there.” I love how she’s says these things as if he’s being totally ridiculous and should almost look forward to it and be grateful! (This scene reminded me of an almost identical one in Chapter 2 of DanceDance1982’s “Origins of a Foot Fetish” which I think you’d love if you haven’t read it).
Finally, I love how she taunts him when he looks at her feet, asking if he’s imagining being under them, and then how she teases and asks if he’d like to get a head-start and be under them right then!

Sorry that was so long, but you’re writing’s fantastic! Keep it up!

Great chapter!
I love how Kayleigh just gave her boyfriend to her roommate as a foot massager. Part of me hopes that maybe if Kayleigh becomes less interested, more busy, or less strict, she’ll lend him to them for longer periods of time. Maybe Kayleigh and her roommates could each take turns bringing him to work. I liked how Emma used her feet on Nate, and if Kayleigh stops being so distant at any point, I’d love seeing that kind of action from her. Maybe when they go to bed, I’d love to see the conversation between them as Nate is outraged that she just gave him away like an object, and Kayleigh persuading him that it’s no big deal and that she still loves him. I’m interested to see what Kayleigh’s true feelings are(I’m hoping she still genuinely loves him, but simply can’t help herself in a playfully domineering way), and I’m interested to see the next roommate!

Keep it up! It’s great so far!