Penname: NotSirk [Contact] Real name: Kris
Member Since: July 13 2017
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Definitely not that MrSirk guy......I think he's dead.


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GH-X2 by imagin8 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 286]
Summary:

Jack, a 'regular'-sized 17-year-old in a world now populated predominantly by humans twice that height, struggles to cope with life in a school and society built for people far larger than he will ever be.


Categories: Breasts, Teenager (13-19), Giantess, Adventure, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Muscle, New World Order, Unaware, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 111020 Read Count: 383035
[Report This] Published: September 12 2013 Updated: March 30 2018
Reviewer: NotSirk Signed
Date: January 27 2018 Title: Chapter 32: Attention

Once upon a time there was a story that pretty much everyone loved. Even to this day it's mentioned as a benchmark in the comments of other stories. This is the standard other stories try to meet. 

It had deep compelling characters, insightful writing, and a general mastery of the tropes of the genre! 

Then it disappeared. Only updating once in a blue moon. 

Now it's back and it's still just as good. 

GH-X2......Don't be gone so long next time. But don't listen to me. I'm just some hapless  chump. Trying and failing down at the bottom of  this site that is the home for people large and small. 

Anyways. I just have to say you have a talent for writing emotions. You spent three paragraphs describing two people walking by eath other! I don't think I could do that. 

Rating this storyis pointless. Just I don't know. Thank you I guess? 



Author's Response:

Thank you back. I'm totes emosh, I could write three paras about a spoon sitting on a window. Probably.

But, in all honesty, thank you. I do my best. I've no idea why people regard this story so highly, but I'll take it, and keep writing as best I can, when I can.

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 31 2018 Title: Chapter 34: Eruption

This chapter is....tiring.

Not because it's bad but because of the rollercoaster of emotions Jack went through in one day! One moment is the greatest of his life and the next he's questioning his self worth and full of resentment! Come up for air Jack!



Author's Response:

Yep, pretty full on. I've had days a bit like this, but you are right... it's too much to handle, hence the outburst. I hope people don't get utterly drained by these chapters, but at the same time, this is what my story is about... I hope it can provide an insight into what it is like to live through intense emotions (I regard myself as someone who wears their heart fully on their sleeve, for better or ill, and a lot of me is tied up in this story).

Ultimately, Jack needs rest, his brain needs a break. Fortunately that is exactly what he's about to get...

Summary:

When someone does something nice for you, you return the kindness. Orphened and raised by her villages local Doctor, Abby struggles to do just that when she winds up in a circumstance she never thought possible. Faced directly with her fears, she now has to try and help the very ones she hates the most...

Monsters...

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 273673 Read Count: 80870
[Report This] Published: October 31 2016 Updated: June 15 2018
Reviewer: NotSirk Signed
Date: October 24 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Something Lost - Part 2

Well this chapter was excellent. Eve has such a rich backstory that subtly hints at the present character. That's oone of the positives of this story or any of your stories. Every character has a story and feels fully fleshed out. Precious Little Demons was literally structured on that and it made the story better. The only gripe I have is that everyone hasn't gotten the same amount of attention yet. Waiting for Ebon's story most of all! 



Author's Response: I assure you, Ebon does indeed have a story to tell, and donít think all the girls have given up their pasts just yet. Layers are best discovered, one at a time. ;3 Thank you so much for the review NotSirk, I promise you more will be revealed when I return. :P

Summary:

A year into his house arrest, Scott Stevens is placed in shrunken criminal rehab, with the possibility of becoming his mother Judy’s permanent shoe slave. Faced with serious girlfriend troubles, a never-ending parade of greedy bare feet, and an increasingly powerful little sister, he’ll need all the help he can get.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Giant, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Odor, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 63541 Read Count: 156512
[Report This] Published: December 30 2016 Updated: November 15 2017
Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 20 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Training Under Maggie

"Life lessons"...right. This is all happening because why again? A phone call or a skype or something?..."Life lessons" I think it'll be fun and fair to literally start hating almost every woman in this story......5 stars!



Author's Response: Hehe. Part of the fun for me in writing this series is making characters it's easy to hate but also difficult to want them gone. Ideally, Scott is easy to feel for.

Summary:

Two girls from different backgrounds come together only to have evil forces target them.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Fantasy, Humiliation, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23022 Read Count: 18248
[Report This] Published: February 25 2017 Updated: July 06 2017
Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow! That's how this story end? Sondra forever floating in limbo confused and teased and lost and tiny!. You're horrible! Why did you ask me to read this?! I have to know how this end?! How will Wendy live with herself when this is over! Will Sondra be shrunk forever! I really feel bad she was dealt such horrible cards for basically all her life. Now one unfair curse and she's shrunk with nothing to live for but the girl she loves!........This was a bait and switch! BAIT AND SWITCH!



Author's Response:

Uh...sorry?  I thought you'd like it? 

Really, I have the next chapter 90 percent...well...80 percent if you count the serious re-edit it needs...maybe 75.   Anyway, I'm not done with this story and I do plan to continue.  I have one little project I'm going to be posting first.  That's gonna be done, finished ...complete.. before I post though.  None of this business of ...not doneness....there's enough not doneness going on around here. 

Yes, Sondra's plight is a rough one.  Tinies have it rough on this site.  I'm big on rough.  And who say's Wendy will live?  Huh? 

Really, though, I appreciate you taking the time to give feedback.  I enjoy your work a bunch and you commenting means a lot to me.

pix

 

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Okay after two chapters I must say I do like these girls. Your descriptions of them are brief but informative. It's something I could learn from because I don't often describe what my characters are  wearing for example. I feel it ruins the flow with my writing but it's something I should learn. Also you established both their backstories rather efficiently as well. I don't do that either and that's more of a personal preference thing. 

All that being said I am not quite sure where this is going yet. Becky seems slightly suspicious but not necessarily bad and Sondra seems like a normal girl sooo? You didn't tag any size categories so I can't even guess. Going for the slow start? I can respect that but from experience most readers don't have patience for it. Will comment again down the line.



Author's Response:

Hi Sir...uh...NotSirk!  Yeah, I'm all about character.  I'm glad you're intrigued and I'm really glad you found it in yourself to comment.  Believe me I totally need all the motivation I can get.

And descriptions are not something I find really necessary.  Letting your audience imagine the characters really is a legitimate technique.  But, yeah, I use descriptions.  Backstories can be so important, but also, having someone enigmatic can really pull your audience in.  God, I can drone on and on about writing all day. 

Thanks so much for the feedback.

Peace

pix

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Okay! A little over halfway through and I just really want this to be a movie or a comicbook! Wendy's compared to Harry Potter that makes sense because this feels like the start of a good fantasy series! Sondra and Wendy! Fighting demons and ghosts in other dimensions! Wendy can swordfight for fucks sake!



Author's Response:

Wow, I really enjoy such praise.  And I love comic books.  The Harry Potter is thing is all Sondra being unable to contain her smartassedness....is that a word?  Is should be. 

Yeah, that's weird.  Wendy said she was horrible at swordfighting, but there she is beating her teacher.  Huh?  How did that happen?

They are great together, for sure and I'm glad you're enjoying their relationship.  

Thanks for the review.

 

pix

Cheater, Cheater? by EDai Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

The story of what happens when a woman's shrunken wife demands that she get a girlfriend.


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Futanari, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Muscle, New World Order, Scat, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40130 Read Count: 36934
[Report This] Published: July 28 2017 Updated: August 04 2017
Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 02 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Of Failings and Showering

Wow. I'm not really super in to the cruel stuff but this story is pretty excellent and great inspiration for me. My heart goes out to Faye. I sympathize with tinies. Of course that doesn't actually mean anything. Tinies rarely get what they want. Chances are she won't even survive to the end of this story. I guess that's hubris or something. Just don't give Erin a daughter and name her Faye because that is fucked up! Hanging on a thread for the final chapter, although I can guess where it goes. No idea what you'd plan for an epilogue. 



Author's Response:

The epilogue will mostly be pointing out little shit in the story that I felt wasn't resolved enough. I'm sure there are some questions that will go unanswered, but ill try not to leave too many! Oh, and it'll include a sex scene that I didn't feel fit properly into the main story!

 

*Quietly adds pregnant Erin to list of Epilogue stuff*

 

But does her pregnancy come from before or after she -- OOPS, SPOILERS.

 

I can't wait for everyone to read it tho!

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed
Date: August 03 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Of Judging and Jurors

OH! And that's how the news goes!...Unless there's some crazy epilogue twist but I doubt it!

Some thoughts: Poor Faye! She made WAAAAY too many rookie mistakes as a tiny. Should've been gone after that first night Gwen showed up. Did she forget she's just like every other of the suredly contless tines she probably swallowed as a human. Her memory will live on in.....well not a photo, Gwen probably torched those. Song? Yeah sure song. Maybe try harder next time? 

Erin did nothing wrong. That is all.

Gwen's really insecure about a meager tiny for someone with such a huge dick. Just saying.

Great story about a widow finding love again after her wife tragically dies on her honeymoon! Unless I've gravely misinterpreted this story.....Hmmm..Looking forward to Monday!

Summary: Feature

Being a parent is a hard job. Being the step parent is a even harder job. One step mother finds her job just got that much harder when she takes some medicine which isn't perscribed to her and finds herself shrinking. 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107151 Read Count: 90533
[Report This] Published: August 02 2017 Updated: October 13 2017
Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 14 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I can't help but notice the dad is getting no heat at all for this affair/divorce thing that happened. Not that I really care that much about the marriage problems of these characters. I'm just saying it takes two people to cheat. Or one person and a sufficiently intelligent robot. I mean I've seen him. He didn't seem THAT great. I mean is he like some Channing Tatum looking embodiment of kindness and generosity. The actual Jesus reborn! I've gone on a tangent......

Also come on Nancy cheer up! You're cleaning out your step monster's teeth. It's not the worst thing! For Peyton's sake sing a song or something. Make work fun! Own it! That'll really throw her off.

Hard to read Sandra. I honestly don't know who the better parent is here. I mean Nancy ls a homewrecker but I ain't really reading much from these other two. Anyway it's good to see Peyton actually loves her stepmo- I mean cares about the time she's invested in training Twerp! Yeah definitely that second one!



Author's Response: Yeah the dad is getting a free pass on purpose thus far. It's rose colored glasses on Peyton's part. You always want to believe that the ones you love could do no wrong. You wa not to give them every benefit of the doubt. Then you mix that in with believing what you want to Bielieve. As the dad is from innocent. I have wrote him gettijgnheat a few times but have edited it out so far. I'm not sure whom is the better parent either overall. Both have their faults. I'd probably lean towards Nancy but slot of mistakes were made by all parties with Peyton caught in the middle. Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Hope you continue to enjoy.

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed
Date: October 14 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

First of all. Thanks for the shoutout!

Second: Wow. Totally unfair! But honestly I knew this story would end on a bittersweet note. Nancy List is dead and even worse she has to bear the full responsibility for her and Douglass' infidelity. That's what irks me most. Did she force Douglass into cheating? Did she make him divorce his wife? These were choices the man made in equal parts with her yet she's shouldering that burden and serving as a slave to Peyton the rest of her life. Peyton has to know that's unfair and that what's she's doing to Twerp isn't justice. I'd say it's even past revenge. I don't think Peyton will ever come to regret what she's done (especially not with Sabrina who has admitted she's just a petty and vindictive bitch influencing her partially) but I hope eventually she does or at least matures some. Regardless of her part in breaking a commited relationship Nancy List was a good person and a good mom. I would say moreso than Peyton's own mother who I've only known for a chapter and was ready to kill her husbands mistress on the spot at her most vulnerable. I would even wager there were problems in the marriage already or was Nancy just such a fine piece Dougy couldn't pass her up? The cancer probably didn't help though. But I hope one day Peyton realizes her fathers not innocent in all this and that Nancy wasn't some demon or a "Step monster"

Until then that girl better devote her life to taking care of Twerp! I mean yeah, she's gonna be horrible and make Twerp work way past what karma she's earned and them some, but she better never let that tiny get hurt, because that tiny is a much stronger and better human than she could ever be and for some reason she still loves her as a daughter! I hope Twerp finds peace and happiness as a pet and maybe even one day finds some of Nancy List again. Nancy List is a survivor. Twerp is the absolute proof of that. Good story. I hope to see these characters again and I wish Twerp as many happy days as she can make for herself, because no one else is gonna give em to her.

See ya! 0 STARS!!!!!!!

Edit: Sorry had to delete and repost my comment because I forgot somethings. Mainly

What happened to officer Daniels? He was barely mentioned. Is he still just chilling in Peyton's mouth? I feel kind of bad that I just forgot about him although I can see that being something intrinsic to his character in the long run. No one remembers Daniels.

That was it really. I could go into a whole analysis on Peyton's character and lingering questions about her motives and morality but I just hope she shows Twerp some compassion every now and then. Doesn't let Sabrina be a total bitch to her everyday of the week. And maybe give her that bed even if she hasn't earn that insane goal of ten thousand merits. Peyton will forget how many Twerps earned before that ever happens. And maybe scratch Twerp the way she likes that's so easy for Peyton to do and that she admits she enjoys. 

That's really it this time. Byes. 

 

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed
Date: September 17 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oof! Rough break Nancy. It's weirdly sweet in a way. You really nail the duality of Peyton's abuse which is what makes her a great character. Sewing your stepmom to a dirty sock is so incredibly cruel but it's also just to keep her warm which is probably the nicest thing Peyton's ever done for her.

I just hope it doesn't look too bad. I'll trust in Peyton's sewing skills and the fact that it's literally becoming her skin that's it's not some hatchet job. Craftsmanship! It's not too much for a tiny to expect from her mistress! I don't know how Peyton would live with herself to let Twerp walk around like a hot mess. That reflects badly on YOU Peyton! Everyone would whisper about it behind your back. 

Anyway I hope Nancy comes to appreciate her fur and Peyton's generosity. She can still comeback from this. You'll get a bath again soon! It won't smell like aggressive gorilla sweat forever. A bit of colored dye and you'll be stylin and profiling! Furs objectively cooler than boring human skin and long hair's really just a hassle. Plus think of all the fun new hairstyles you get to experiment with as it grwows back! Anyway, fun chapter!



Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy it and I agree a bad sew job would reflect on Peyton. The duality in peyton is something I've worked hard at making sure is present. As I feel it's a defining part of who she is. The fact she hates her step mother but doesn't want to admit maybe there is some love thee as well. Thanks for replying hope you continue to enjoy

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 20 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow.....this chapter was a tough read. Mostly because if it isn't obvious I highly sympathize with Nancy. The character I've read. The woman that so desperately wanted a family, to be a mother. The woman whose only crime was that she was selfish. The woman who can still love her stepdaughter after countless humiliations. She doesn't deserve what's happened to her. She doesn't deserve to lose her humanity. And it really resonates with me because I'm currently working with similar ideas in my own writing although nowhere near as polished as it is here. I really want Nancy to have a happy ending but I fear it's too late. I don't know if she's capable of coming back from this and finding peace and closure as a pet is a bittersweet ending to her story.......but that's how the dice rolls sometimes boys!!!!

I feel nothing for Pig. Mostly because his character is pretty shallow and it was very clear what was going to be his fate, also because abusive dad's suck and it's easy to hate him. I will say this. If Peyton's that broken up about killing a guy she literally hated I don't think she has the stomach to go through with her threats on Twerp. Not that it matter now. Twerp's already broken. Peace out! Great chapter! High score which it totally arbitrary by this point. 



Author's Response:

I really like nancy as  character myself. She's a strong woman. I can sympathize with her alot too. She definately made mistakes and who hasn't, but she doesn't deserve what has happened to her. I don't know if she loses her humanity in the end. Its all matter of perspective on how you view the ending. I haven't edited that chapter yet so i can't say anything is final. I will be curious to see how you feel after reading it. 

Pig always was intended to be a shallow character. He's easy to hate. He's relatively one dimensional. In another medium i would have spent more time interacting and showing more dynamics between him, avery and his wife. However, I didn't feel people would want to read that. So i didn't include anything like that in the story. Just in the outline. Even with that, the reader i feel gets the general gist. He's a drunk, and abusive, and isn't really father material. 

I don't think Peyton could kill Nancy/Twerp. She definately cares more then she shows her stepmother. Peyton isn't really the murderous type of person so it definately weighed on her. If it weren't for avery she probably never would have done it.  Don't give up on Twerp yet! I have your story small on my list to read after I finish writing this story. All my free time has been devoted to this story and editing the chapters. I really like premise of it. 

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Hmmmm. Peyton might have messed up here. I mean she'll probably get away with it anyway, but you don't mess with cops. There should be a intensive follow up investigation into his disappearance. Why am I imagining some situation where Twerp starts a new family with officer Daniels? No way that'll happen right?

Geez these girls are kinda evil. Strange for someone as religious as Peyton. Although I do understand Peyton's animosity towards Nancy what's Avery's issue? Real talk. Nancy's done nothing to her but she's just on board. Maybe it's loyalty to Peyton. I can understand that. And shrinking a cop?! You can make some half assed, prance about justification for Nancy and Pig (Pig's real name forgotten) oh they deserved it for crossing Peyton or being a jerk dad. Officer Daniels is actually just an innocent. I wonder how Peyton will justify that and further delude herself.... How many chapters are left in this thing? I really need to stop commenting on this story. Peace out!



Author's Response: Avery is more of a follower. She Takes her cues from Peyton. She also looks up to her. If I had it to do all over again I would better illustrate that point. So Avery treats her as she does because thatís how Peyton treats her. I believe it got edited out but I may put it back in. Originally Avery comes downstairs and sees Peyton gettin arrested and without hesitation jumps on the police officer. She does thatís without a second thought because of the bond they share. Peyton and Avery have a ride or die relationship with each other. Realistically there would be an investigation however that thread is just about wrapped up. Officer Daniels is innocent. His only crime is being nosey. Peyton definitely will full regret later but she also views it as a means to an end. She didnít want to go to jail. So she got out of it the only way she knew how. 17 chapters total. Not sure if I will do an epilogue. If I do that would be 18. However itís fully written out with ending. 17 total chapters.

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 07 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I know I  haven't commented yet, but just wanted to say I love your story. I really like Twerp/Nancy whichever she prefers. The fact that she still has mothering insticts after what she's endured from these girls says so much about her character. Honestly she's too good for Peyton. Looking forward to how things develop for her. I think she can find happiness. Peyton's cruel but not maliciously so I think. Otherwise why not let Simba shred Twerp? Huh? Answer that Peyton?! You can't can you! Get outta here!



Author's Response: I'm thrilled that you are enjoying it. I would definitely say Peyton isn't malicious. I ageee with you she cares more than she lets on. She is mean, and can be cruel. But she isn't heartless enough to have malice in her. I think twerp/ navy can find a form of happiness.

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

*Sigh*

Hearing stuff like Nancy losing her ability to read or do math is really what hurts most. More than officer Daniels being eviscerated by cookie crumbs. OREO cookie crumbs probably! But seriously her humanity is dying out. And being bred?! Only getting the family you wanted after literally becoming an animal. Bitter. Only silver lining (if you can even call it a silver lining. More like falling in poop and being happy you didn't swallow any) When Nancy's finally gone. Just a shallow memory in the back of Twerp's head. Twerp will be probably be happy. She'll have nothing to worry about except how to please Peyton, and maybe Peyton will actually love her for it. Her humanity is just a burden at this point.

Despite all the words above these one's I still have hope for Nancy List! She's a survivor if nothing less, Most tinies wouldn't even make it this far. I think even if Twerp wins out part of Nancy will always be around. One day years in the future Peyton will swear and then hear "Language young lady!" and it will be a nice surprise. (That probably won't happen) Still enjoying the story wherever it goes and looking forward to the end and whatever else you decide to do with these characters.

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

After sixteen chapters I still don't understand Peyton. I understand the sex play and having Twerp service Sabrina as whole part of the power trip and Sabrina being a love interest is a nice surpise even if it's sickening to me. But what does Peyton get from having officer Daniels sexually please Twerp? Why is that even on her mind? Why does she care about that at all? She even put his freedom on it! It's too next level for me. Every time I'm ready to say Peyton is this horrible monster (which she is) she does something that makes me question her perspective. Why does she even care what Twerp thinks anymore? Why does she care if Twerp still loves her? Why is she so obsessed with convincing Twerp that Nancy List doesn't exist when remembering her former life is a better form of torture? What is up with you girl?!...........sorry.

Side note: Sabrina is so bad for you Peyton. It's clear some of her influence has made you a worse person. Hope that you never take expired medication that's been released without sufficient drug trails and magically shrink in front of her. Sabrina will not take care of you. 

Only one chapter left! Let's go Nancy! You got this!!!!!...unless she doesn't. Then I'll be sad. Waiting for the weekend either way.



Author's Response: She gets revenge in a form she needed to move on. She needed her to feel a semblance of the pain she and her mother felt. However she does it in a way befitting her age and showing her immaturity. Peyton cares forntwerp more than she wants to admit to herself. So a part of her wants twerp to love her. However sheb is also mad and hurt over what she did to her mother and father. So twerp is often post accident at the mercy of Peytonís mood. Where somedays when she was mad at twerp she had no way to show her other than yelling or being bitchy towards her. She now has the ability to make her pay so she does. However some days she did feel somewhat loving towards twerp as she did show interest and care about her. Tune in soon to see if Nancy survives.

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

..................She can't even eat food now. It's really all in her head at this point. Day one shrunken Nancy would've eaten that waffle like a champ. Twerp with her badass sock fur I really want to draw and her obedience training can't because Peyton doesn't want her to. At least that's what I think. I'm noticing the more Nancy believes she's a pet the more her body changes to accept that. I wonder how much of that is from the effects of the shrink itself?

I'm not giving up on Twerp but I wonder if she won't give up on herself? Nancy's still in there I hope she wins and that winning won't cost her, her life. Geez there's just too much to talk about with this story! Like is the relationship with Peyton worth having if Nancy loses herself in the process? Nancy wanted a daughter but Twerp only has a master so it would be very tragic that Nancy only gets the love of a daughter after she's too far gone to recognize it. And what does Peyton want???? What the fuck was that whole "Did you mean what you said?" thing? She can't have it both ways. If she just want another pet that looks similar to a human then fine, but she's actually killing the person known as Nancy. Which I have to believe is someone Peyton cares for. And maybe one day Nancy will be gone forever and all she'll have is little Twerp and she'll have to decide if that was worth it?

Y'know what? This was too long a comment. I'm just gonna shut up on this for awhile. 5 out of 5 or whatever the scoring system is..ten points to Slytherin?

Summary:

Catherine and I are adults now and she still seems as she isn't going to stop growing anytime soon, what should I do?!


Categories: Giantess
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.), Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2267 Read Count: 7893
[Report This] Published: September 27 2017 Updated: October 28 2017
Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: October 28 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You're not actually twelve or well thirteen now maybe are you? Cause if you are good on you for posting a story! I'd never have that kind of guts at twelve! Anyway this is a little weird because by nature it's hard to review a smut story which is definitely what this is but....well you were asking for one soo:

First: Chapters are too short. This is more a personal preference type thing but short chapters don't give readers much to get involved with. I barely know these characters because you haven't spent much time fleshing them out. Who is Micheal? All I know about him is he's pretty good with money if he made like 3 million in the stock market and he loves his girl. Is he a hothead? Is he a dork? Is he a Ron Swanson type? No idea. Ditto for Catherine. All I know is they like having sex and even if that's all this story is meant to be you still need more.

Second: No conflict. If this is just a smut story then fuck conflict (literally) but you'd still need it something. There's no stakes so why should I care? Even if it's just the size difference is causing problems in bed that's something. I originally thought the conflict was between the couple. One wants to grow but the other is worried about the logistics. How she gonna live as a giant? Good conflict! But then he just buys her a house. Conflict over. Lets get married!

So those were just two examples. Honestly I feel more than a little dumb doing this especially if you're twelve and this isn't a troll. I don't wanna be the scumbag that knocks a kids writing but I really hope this is what you wanted. Keep going! Keep trying! I think you're having fun regardless and the story can only get better the more you try! I don't actually believe ratings are worth anything but I'll give it like a 5/10.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review it's greatly appreciated! And I'll try to do more, I know in my first story I still didn't talk enough about Michael and Catherine's back story.

Summary:

Join Scott Stevens, his dysfunctional family, and a shrinking device in these alternate reality what-if short stories.

Done as a commission.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Jacksmith Commission Stories
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9701 Read Count: 29744
[Report This] Published: October 14 2017 Updated: January 10 2018
Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Mother of All Problems (Part 1)

.........Scott.....Scott's had a hard life.



Author's Response:

An understatement