I've never read a story like this before, it was interesting. You did a really good job with character development, the characters seemed real.

This has got to be the best description I've ever read in a giantess story, as far as the reaction of the protagonist when he realizes he's been miniaturized. This has taught me to try to do the same thing in my stories, your prose is amazing, you've definitely got the knack for writing.

I like how this started out, it’s interesting that you didn’t provide an explanation for how the city got there, my weakness as a writer is to show the entire origin of the premise before getting to the good stuff. I think more readers prefer your approach. I found some minor errors, but not many. I hope you add to this!

Author's Response: Hey thx for the compliment! I think it depends on the story. I have even read stories where the writer revealed the ending in an early stage but somehow made the reader crave for the path to it. I think both approaches have their strengths to draw a reader in, if used correctly that is. Please don’t hesitate to flag my grammar errors. Im totally aware that my writing is far from flawless. Unfortunately, english is not my first language. I use all kinds of programs to filter out errors and study on regular basis to learn and understand the rules of grammar. But I still have a long way to go. Thx again for the review! Appreciate it!