Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed
Date: February 19 2018
Title: Chapter 30: The Cycle Continues...
That was a good chapter. We got a really nice moment with Casey, Emma, and Ella at the the start. It's nice to know ho wmuch all of them care abut Abby. The relationships between all of them have really grown.
But when Ebon shows up, oh boy. I hope Casey is ok after we didn't see the outcome of the fight. And I was seriously worried that Ebon might end up killing one of the imps. I sure hope they're both alright.
But I really have no clue who this new girl might be, or when her previous cameos were. She save Abby just in the knick of time though. I'm guessing this new girl must know Eve in some way, but their response saving Abby was too coordinated for them to not be working together it seems.
But Ebon is in real trouble now, boy. Eve is angry, really angry. I do hope she doesn't kill her though. I was hoping that they might be able to get her see the lght at some point, and that she could eventually learned to live with Abby as well.
I'm always excited when I see updates for this story. No matter how long it takes to put chapters out, keep it up!
Author's Response: Does she know Eve? Hmm, possibly~
Or, maybe she just has impeccable timing~
You'll have to wait and see! >:3
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter Foreignkanto, I wanted to show more of the growing relationships that Abby has with each of the girls and even with the girls who once hated each other. There's an effect of sorts I'm trying to relay and I'm glad you caught onto it.
And I wouldn't worry about Ebon. I have plans for her. Big, plans.
Thank you so much for the review, it honestly makes my day and fuels my thoughts and words to keep writing for everyone. :)