You're really killing it with these new stories!

I'm enjoying the chemistry you've established with this pair. I'm also glad that they ended up having mutual feelings for each other and I hope things end well for both of them.

The interactions are descriptive and detailed. The foot/toe play you did this chapter was great, but the part last chapter with the making out plus the gradual shrinking was amazingly done.

Looking forward to seeing how this one plays out.

Great job my dude. The story definitely got me in the Halloween spirit.

And good idea with having Lana be the unaware focused character, since she doesn't seem as keen to go into the crueler side of things like everyone else.

Good luck on your next story project. 

Great chapter all around! It's very enjoyable to see characters like Amoe say playfully teasing things (in their eyes) that are actually terrifying for the tiny character. And unaware showers are always enjoyable concepts, and you're doing well with it so far.

As for characters, I'm partial to Ani, so anything with her would be good in my book. Though Amoe is a close second.

Hope you're feeling better!

I swear you could have made a story just about this Meeting arc and it still would have been a good enough story on its own. But the fact that this is just a flashback to your main story is even crazier.

In case I wasn't clear, I still think you're doing a phenomenal job with this arc. The main characters of this chapter (Kelly, Naru, and Ani) are all great and the way they all playfully yet forcefully interacted with Mark while frequently underestimating their own strength was awesome to read. In a less unforgiving setting, this could be the start of a fun life for him.

Keep up the good work!

I think you're doing a great job, especially for your first attempt at writing a story.

You're incredibly descriptive and detailed, which really helps with visualizing how the events play out.

I also find it interesting how even though Dianne is pretty playful, it's treated as more of a downside since Mark has a far different view on how all of this works given his history and the world of the story.

There are lots of ways you can take the story once Mark tries to retreat to the purse like Dianne suggested. I'd be curious to see him get toyed with by a different woman without even realizing he was there. But I'm looking forward to whatever you have planned.

Keep up the good work!

I think this was a very good one-shot.

You had an enjoyable level of detail throughout the story, and I appreciated the small description of what her slippers were like, even though the main focus for the story was vore-centered.

I also enjoyed how severely her actions impacted Ryan, where even his voice could stop him in his tracks.

Nice job for a first story, and luck with your future writing projects!

This was a really cool story!

I liked how even if the tiny people were discovered, they could still be at risk due to the nature of the work.

And the action was intense and highlighted just how dangerous being at that small of a size could be.

I'm really enjoying the pace in this story!

You're taking your time and allowing your characters to shine through, while also giving time to focus on each size milestone Andrew reaches. I'm personally looking forward to how things go once he gets to the size he was in the prologue, especially since there's a lot of unaware potential.

But you could take a dozen more chapters before you made it back to that size point and it'd still be an enjoyable read. Justine and Maddie clearly have different takes on exactly how to interact with Andrew, beyond how to care for him, so it'd be fun to see you continuing to explore that.

Keep up the good work!

I've only read up to chapter 3 so far, but this story is going really well. You've really done an awesome job with the interactions between Rachel and Koji. And I liked how you saved the actual size stuff until this chapter, because it really allowed the reader to slowly immerse themselves.

Looking forward to reading more when I can!

Awesome job! It was a really creative method for having Mariam save her tiny boyfriend. And it was really wholesome.

It's nice to see that there are occasional happy endings surrounding that sorority.