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Summary:

Claire Abernathy is a kind girl. Having moved after family issue's she winds up working at a Daycare. Its a dream job for her, she loves children... but the children here have secrets of their own.

Contains Underage content, along with a lot of other strange philia's. If thats not your cup of tea, feel free to look somewhere else.

 


Categories: Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Furry, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, New World Order, Nose, Odor, Scat, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196299 Read Count: 215679
[Report This] Published: February 22 2016 Updated: March 16 2017
Reviewer: jessebona Signed
Date: February 15 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Why We're Here...

I wouldn't sell yourself short. I largely lurk around here because critical reviews of fetish stories just seem odd to me but I've been enjoying this.



Author's Response:

Thank you then for coming out of lurking to tell me that. To us writers we love when people tell us what thye think and even a couple words of encouragement is enough to make our days. So thank you again.

Reviewer: jessebona Signed
Date: February 27 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Fated meetings

So did they erase her memory of meeting them the first time or not? I assumed when they first said they had met her before that something bad happened and the twins wiped or changed her memory and she doesn't seem to react to any of it until the whole story is told. Look at me, questioning potential plot holes on GW lol.



Author's Response:

Lol XD

They had met her long ago, and learned a lot from her and wanted to eventually bring Claire into their world. But with her sincerity came her naivety. She wouldn't be ready to learn of  everything they had been doing. So they had planned on completing their plan before eventually bringing Claire into it, but they ran out of time...

Claire was reverting back to her old deppressed self because no one was there for her anymore. So, they stepped in. But they had to make her forget... so to not frighten her or change her irreversibly like they had with their friends. Their extremely cautious with Claire after all that had happened with their four friends. And Claire is the last one they'd want to mess with mentally.

I hope your reading this helps clear up any confusion. Or... possibly adds on a few other questions that i haven't answered yet...

:P

Summary: Taking place ten months after Ryan took control of the colony, the survivors living under a dresser have seen ten girls live in their room and all of them shrunk by Ryan. They see no end in sight to this cycle. Until one girl moves in.
Categories: Couples, Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Crush, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45742 Read Count: 70510
[Report This] Published: October 23 2016 Updated: March 12 2017
Reviewer: jessebona Signed
Date: March 12 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Honestly, as good as these stories are, I feel like this one has been dragging on a bit. I get you were going for a plot heavy story but I've caught myself thinking that it's just taking too long to get anywhere.

Cheater, Cheater? by EDai Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

The story of what happens when a woman's shrunken wife demands that she get a girlfriend.


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Futanari, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Muscle, New World Order, Scat, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40130 Read Count: 109251
[Report This] Published: July 28 2017 Updated: August 04 2017
Reviewer: jessebona Signed
Date: July 30 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Of Harmony and Hangovers

The whole dick thing isn't really for me but as far as story goes, gosh I hope that vindictive bitch cops the shrinking thing as well and gets what she deserves.



Author's Response:

I totally understand! Luckily, I have the intention at the moment (once I've finished editing, uploading, and all the hoopla surrounding Cheater, Cheater?) of going back and basically writing the story with one small change.

Erin shrinks instead of Faye.

I'm sick to death, tbh, of writing the names Erin, Faye, and Gwen, so all of the characters will have different names, but the basic premise will be fairly similar; Only Faye's character isn't one to willing let someone weild a dick on her, so... The next version(?) of this will not have a futa character.

As far as Gwen getting nailed by the shrinking thing, well... Spoilers!

Reviewer: jessebona Signed
Date: August 02 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Of Harmony and Hangovers

I'm just not feeling this story. it reminds of another one I read once with a guy that started treating his shrunken wife as a plaything over the course of the story and, despite being a fetish story, he was just such an unlikable wanker it drew you out of it all. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

A story of a professional and a new hire in a highly erotic field.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Muscle, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f, FM/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 62976 Read Count: 537920
[Report This] Published: October 01 2017 Updated: August 29 2023
Reviewer: jessebona Signed
Date: May 04 2018 Title: Chapter 9: The First Lesson is Always the Hardest

Yeesh you weren't kidding about that being disturbing. I was thinking ultra kinky sex toy or gorey violence, not bestiality. That girl is crazy.



Author's Response:

High and right. I needed a truly fucked-up character to do to Becca what I needed done. Holly's trade makes her comfortable with sex but she clearly has boundaries. Paige does not. 

Summary:

Annie is a shrinker.

She ran away from home to live her own life in New York city. She meets Marilyn, the woman who's got the appartment above hers. 

Read The Insole Girl for reference. I would like to thank Exiguus. This is a fan fiction of what you created.

Enough said.

 

 

 

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Lesbians, Odor, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3031 Read Count: 43414
[Report This] Published: October 11 2017 Updated: April 17 2018
Reviewer: jessebona Signed
Date: November 10 2017 Title: Are you still alive?

Whelp, that was disturbing. Damn right you should feel guilty you horrible bitch. This whole thing was your fault because you were too petty to take her in in the first place.

By Proxy by omnishambles Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

A short story set in the Mass Effect universe. Tali takes control of an inch-tall avatar to make repairs, and Liara volunteers to take care of her afterwards...


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Breasts, Gentle, Lesbians, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2002 Read Count: 4739
[Report This] Published: April 28 2018 Updated: April 28 2018
Reviewer: jessebona Signed
Date: April 28 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A pretty good premise. I like it so far. Are you going to write another chapter?

Spoiled by S_P_R Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

In a dangerous world, a young mother does everything she can to protect her daughter, even if that means shrinking everyone around her. 

 

(Story involes people being shrunk around a girl as she ages from birth to adulthood and the content of this story ranges in age) 


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Mouth Play, Scat, Unaware, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10001 Read Count: 68640
[Report This] Published: January 12 2019 Updated: December 27 2019
Reviewer: jessebona Signed
Date: March 02 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Becca and the Baby

I know we shouldn't criticize the plot in fetish stories too much but as if the police aren't eventually going to link this to the one person involved in every scenario. But having said that maybe that's where you're planning to take this I don't know.

Summary:

Rose is a doctor that specializes in piloting a P.O.D. (Physician Operated Diminisher), a vehicle designed to investigate health issues at a small size. Sara is her “guardian”, who assists in the procedures she performs. James is Rose’s boyfriend and Sara is far from his biggest fan. When he comes to Rose with a personal issue that he wants her to look into off the books, the three of them get tangled in a series of multisized affairs, some of which are not fun for all involved.

This heavily features giant male and giant couple. There will be sexual content.


Categories: Body Exploration, Couples, Entrapment, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, Lesbians, Sci-Fi, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, FM/f, M/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10931 Read Count: 27698
[Report This] Published: February 15 2019 Updated: February 27 2019
Reviewer: jessebona Signed
Date: February 15 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The few ways being? Personally I just hope he gets a taste of his own medicine. It is, ironically, a pretty dick move.



Author's Response: Yeah, I have a few sliding scale items I am considering: how unaware James remains. How drastically things escalate. How far things actually go. It kinda comes down to plausibility vs drama. Haha, it is very much a dick move, on his part and mine. And it would certainly make me a better person to give him his just desserts.

Summary:

Blair is a tall and confident star athlete. Daisy is a small and shy bookworm. The big loves to dominate the small, and when Blair gets her hands on Daisy's shrink ray her small classmate becomes the perfect toy.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Giant, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, FM/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104793 Read Count: 261738
[Report This] Published: February 15 2020 Updated: March 27 2021
Reviewer: jessebona Signed
Date: July 03 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Regret

Actions have consequences, who knew? I'm glad she finally got slapped with the reality of what she was doing given how long she ignored her feelings. Not overly sympathetic towards her though.

Summary:

A young fairy, the smallest of her group, must rescue her adventuring companions as they are shrunken into the clutches of a powerful succubus! 

 

This was my entry for SizeRiot's Gentle April


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Fantasy, Gentle, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2848 Read Count: 7167
[Report This] Published: November 22 2020 Updated: November 22 2020
Reviewer: jessebona Signed
Date: November 22 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I could see a second chapter. It definitely sets itself up well for one. Especially if you want to throw in some normal sized person on double shrunk shenanigans.

Summary: Past Featured Story

*FORMERLY KNOWN AS "Time Machine Mishaps"*

A time machine made for the local science fair has the adverse side-effect of causing its occupants to grow after the trip. The high school girls who built it decide to use this quality to their advantage in changing history.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Crush, Destruction, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Instant Size Change, New World Order, Sci-Fi, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20855 Read Count: 56370
[Report This] Published: June 20 2021 Updated: January 05 2022
Reviewer: jessebona Signed
Date: September 23 2021 Title: Chapter 5: The Third Trip - Constantinople

I'm going to stake a guess they'll either make the stupid mistake of travelling somewhere too close to the present and they'll use recordings/pictures of them to track them down in the present after realizing the stunt they're pulling or they'll get a visit from their future selves putting them on the other side of it at least once.



Author's Response:

(furiously writing this down)

Whaaaaat? Of course not, that's not what's going to happen, psh, nah, I already have everything planned out anyway. Sorta. Kinda.

Reviewer: jessebona Signed
Date: January 04 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Vows

I have to say I'd come to accept this wasn't getting another update, a pleasant surprise for the new year. I'm guessing the finale won't be quite so long in the writing room?