Enjoying the story so far. I really love the interactions between Danielle and Erica as it really shows how well Danielle knows Erica. It also makes me wonder, what could have happend if Danielle never gave Erica her advice on how to treat the family. Would she be running herself ragged thinking only of her family and ignoring her own needs, possibly snapping under the weight of the responsibility leading to a much darker place? Anyway, thanks for the story can't wait to read the next chapter.

I felt the outlines gave enough information that you could get a feel of how the story could have been, so while I am sad to see they are not full stories  I still enjoyed the read and hope you put more up. Though I will also say your outlines are longer then some short stories on this site so I may just treat them as one.

Great new chapter. I am always a sucker for multiple perspectives in a chapter as I feel it better idea of how the same event can be perceived differently so I like this style of writing. Also, thanks for using my idea, I can’t believe you were able to make a story out of it so quickly.

Another idea for a chapter would be Sarah using a similar kind of time manipulation like in Rise & Fall of the Umbran Society but this time on a piece of food or a dessert for Charlotte. With the shrunken people making cities out of the food they are on maybe a leaf house in a salad or chocolate skyscrapers on a chocolate bar. Depending on the size of the food and shrunken people there could be just one city or maybe even entire civilizations being nothing more then a decoration/garnish on the food Charlotte eats.

Thanks for the quick reply. I reread the chapters and they were along the lines of what I was thinking about. It must be why it was stuck in my head. Glad to hear your going to be using the concept more in the future as I really enjoy reading it as a story setting.

Since my last suggestion kind of was already done I have another this one for Sarah. The sugestion is telling exactly where does Sarah get all the food supplies she uses besides the tinnes in her cooking. There was some mention that the Goddess wasn't sure where Sarah sourced some things in chapter 17 and I didn't really see anything since so maybe she finaly remembers this and decides to follow her to see where the produce is coming from. 

Sarah could have whole agriworlds setup to grow the fruits and vegetables possibly with humans fighting  wars against giant sized pests to keep them away from the equally giant sized produce. The tiny humans can ensure that not even the tinest imperfection goes unnoticed with only the imaculate produce being harvested. There could even be factories setup to proccess things into finished goods like the milk from millions of cows being proccessed into a single bucket of icecream or grinding down giant coffee beans to make filters or instant coffee packets. 

The other option I was thinking of is she goes from grocier store to grocier store on different planets picking up the different ingredents on each with no one knowing who she really is when she is shopping. A possible difficutly with this option is getting caught up while another maid is going through the proccess of punishing a planet for some reason and Sarah still must go through with getting the ingredents even though the world is going crazy all around her because it is a crucial part of a meal planned for the Goddess lster and there is no time to go to another planet.

She could also do a combination of both since maybe somethings can only be grown on one planet.

Keep up the great work.