Penname: SpookyTaco [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: February 05 2014
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I'm a fan of giantess stories and would like to try writing something. My email is spookytaco7@gmail.com.


Splinter's Edge can still be found here: http://tinyurl.com/npbfgzu


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Uptown Girl by Nostory Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

Set after the events of The Escape Redux, Jessica Chen is no longer living on the island she called home for ten years but with her rich billionaire friend Jack who agreed to house the giantess for the time being. She doesn't expect it to be trouble but when you throw a two hundred foot giantess into the mix, trouble is the least to expect.

 

  As if things could not get any worse, Jessica must contend with Jack's girlfriend Caitlin, a woman who cannot stand the sight of Jessica and believes the latter has an ulterior motive. Which is false, Jessica wouldn't have anything up her sleeve? Or does she? 

Tune in to find out how our beloved sassy giantess gets out of this one!

Also, I had help from both vgiv who helped me with the outline and general idea of where the story and series as would go. Finally, a big thank you to versusterminus7 for providing a second opinion on the story itself!


Categories: Body Exploration, Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Butt, Gentle, Humiliation, Sci-Fi
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: The Escape
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44290 Read Count: 84385
[Report This] Published: June 04 2016 Updated: February 16 2018
Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 21 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Taking Stock

Looks like Jessica found a job! But I agree, a million dollars seems a bit on the low side. She should have requested a percentage of the sales on top. Would give her incentive to improve at modeling.



Author's Response:

Hey thanks for the review!

 

I've read other stories where the giantess, standing hundreds of feet tall gets paid easily an eight to nine figure sum for basically her first ever modelling job. I think its unrealistic to get so much and well, I think food might be cheaper if you buy in bulk. I also think a million dollars for your first job is a pretty big sum as it is, what with the clothes thrown in and stuff. Then there is the fact she got free clothes to wear. 

She may get increments, provided she sparks a spike in sales. It may be a bit early to request fof a percentage of sales but I could see that happening if the job works out. 

 

 

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 29 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Beach,Bikini,Babes

She appears to be having fun modeling. But it's time for her to make a move on Jack. Or vice versa! Can't let Caitlin have the victory.



Author's Response:

She needs the fun , after being cooped up in her tent and island. I don't know if she should be the third party, even if one of the first two is a bitch. Thanks for the review! 

Omega: Other Foot by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

Ashley King and her tiny boyfriend, looking to take their relationship to the next level, get a few firsthand lessons in intimacy between sizes under toe and tongue.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Couples, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Mouth Play, New World Order
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Omegas
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18231 Read Count: 78612
[Report This] Published: June 19 2016 Updated: August 02 2016
Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 04 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Walkabout

When you walk on hot coals, you think your feet are going to burn, but a trick of physics prevents it from happening. I suspect a similar trick is at play here!



Author's Response:

Not at all a bad way to imagine it. Plus, with just a little bit of plot-device logic-less magic included. ;)

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Make-Out

Nice chapter! Question though. I thought a Beta was considered to be 3 inches compared to an Alpha, just as an Alpha was 3 'inches' compared to an Omega, relatively speaking.

Three inches seems like a lot to have in one's mouth. So Claire's comment of 'don't let him near your teeth' seems impossible. At a height of 3 inches, it seems some part of his body would be touching her teeth at all times, at least the inside of her teeth.

Unfortunately, I don't have a 3 inch scale figure to test this with. :)



Author's Response:

You're right, they're roughly 3 inches. I probably could've worded some of that dialogue a little differently. The main idea is to avoid letting him spill too far over her teeth; inevitably, he'll bump on her teeth a bit while inside. It's more of a stretch for the imagery than anything else, and also the fact that this is a pretty large Alpha (Ashley's over six foot) while Jack is on the smaller side for a Beta his age.

A Little Blackmail: Forever Hers by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 80]
Summary:

A shrunken brother, having survived for years as his sister’s secret slave, finally commits to be his giant sibling’s property forever. Now the only thing standing in the way of their wildest fantasies is the limit of their imaginations.


Categories: Breasts, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: A Little Blackmail
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38574 Read Count: 301962
[Report This] Published: July 02 2016 Updated: July 25 2017
Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Shoe-Tasting Party (Part 2)

Just have to wonder what's going to happen when Carly gets a boyfriend. I have a feeling Jack's life will change dramatically, and not necessarily for the better. She'll give Jack less attention, perhaps toss him aside in a shoebox. I'm not sure Jack could handle it, since essentially, Carly is his entirely life now.



Author's Response:

Who says Carly wants a boyfriend now? ;)

Stepsister's Delight by Tiny Jedi Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 42]
Summary:

Mike’s life turns upside down when, at age 15, he gets the incredibly rare shrinking disease.  His stepsister who is 17 finds the whole thing amusing that Mike shrinks whenever he becomes sexually aroused, as small as an inch tall, lasting 24 hours before returning to normal size.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Humiliation, Incest, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34149 Read Count: 137269
[Report This] Published: July 15 2016 Updated: November 04 2016
Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 31 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 13 ... 7-29-16

This story is fun to read. Colleen doesn't seem too serious about punishing her daughter. She appears to be more interested in watching Mike shrink. This doesn't bode well for Mike!



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far.  I agree, it doesn't bode well for Mike.

Hands on by Zoobee Rated: R starstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

A person wakes up to a new world with no memory of his past, and struggles to survive in what turns out to be a very hands on experience.


Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 834 Read Count: 7323
[Report This] Published: July 31 2016 Updated: July 31 2016
Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 02 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Everyone's gotta start somewhere. Welcome to being a writer, Zoobee!

You do a good job of describinging the setting and vastness of the narrator's surroundings.

The areas you should work on are character and plot. Character is most important. We need name(s) and personalities, individuals we can relate to.

Plot is also critical. Right now you have a situation: small guy in a huge world. I think once you add character personalities/concerns/problems, a plot will emerge naturally, some central goal with consequences and high stakes.

Anyway, keep reading a lot and writing. Good luck!

Kimberly by Happy Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 126]
Summary:

A happily married man catches the shrinking disease, and falls for the feminine wiles of his daughter's best friend.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Mature (40-49), Body Exploration, Gentle, Mouth Play, Slow Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93154 Read Count: 470592
[Report This] Published: August 16 2016 Updated: November 09 2016
Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 27 2016 Title: Chapter 21: 2 inches (Tricks, pt 2)

Excellent story so far! Brooke is an odd daughter, but she makes things interesting. I'm hoping he grows a bit though. Shrinking below two inches can mean more danger and less fun. Either way, I'll keep reading!



Author's Response:

Agreed on the under 2 inches being more dangerous and less sexy. I think the 2 inches to doll range is really the best.

Bigger Better Sister by realRS Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Mindy was never the best big sister.  Thanks to the shrink virus, she'll finally get a chance to make up for it.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Gentle, Humiliation, New World Order, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f
Warnings: The Following story is appropriate for all audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2291 Read Count: 14926
[Report This] Published: August 20 2016 Updated: August 20 2016
Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 20 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter Only (Just a One Off)

You have a way of making us care about the characters quickly. I want to see what comes next. Here's to hoping you take more flights and continue this story.

'DaiOnna' by midnightwriter85 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 201]
Summary:

A shrinking story told from the perspective of Billy Little. An odd character, that happens to stumble into something that will dramatically change his life forever. It's an extremely detailed depiction of his nightmarish episodes. This is just the beginnings of something so much bigger than Mr. Little. Because, before he realizes what's actually happening, the entire world has already changed into a completely different humanity.


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Humiliation, Legwear, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 154994 Read Count: 654204
[Report This] Published: September 25 2016 Updated: July 24 2017
Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice first chapter! Ought to be interesting to see how Billy, with his extreme social anxiety, survives the situations he'll soon face.



Author's Response:

Thank's Spooky!  

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Doh! He got caught in the panty drawer. This could very well be the end for our hero. But, I suppose there are worse fates. :)



Author's Response:

...so much worse!  ;`)

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Moving In with Amy

Looks like Billy is headed for some potential trouble! Hopefully Amy doesn't have anything too bad planned for him. Hopefully Jazzy doesn't introduce him to her pet hamster!

One recommendation I have is to use less ellipses. It feels ok when you're in the process of writing (since you're trying to indicate passage of time or a pause), but for the reader, it's almost always better to omit them. Just reads better. Commas and periods are less jarring. Anyway, take it or leave it, just wanted to mention it.

Otherwise, keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

I'll try and restrain myself from the persistent use of the ellipse.  I love using them, though, I realize that they should be reserved for the most significant situations, but, really, ...it seems so easy to use them to force the reader to slow down, and actually consider what's actually happening...

   Sorry dude, ...I really like these three little dots.  They make it so easy to expand a sentence and to stop the reader from jumping ahead too quickly, Or, maybe I'm just lazy, and the use of the ellipse allows me to think that I'm using more words than I actually am, ...I'm not too sure, but, I really like using them, ...A  lot! 

  Thank's Spooky!  

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 08 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Jazzy's Play Room

Billy needs to get out of there fast. And shouldn't Amy be supervising her daughter? Seems awfully neglectful of her. Jazzy needs lessons on how to 'be careful', because she appears to be doing the opposite. ;)



Author's Response:

It might not be so bad, maybe Jazzy's Bark is worse than her bite?

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11 2016 Title: Chapter 25: 'Hide and Seek'

Billy escaped by the skin of his teeth! He just needs to be more assertive. If he'd stopped running away earlier, Jazzy never would've chased him that long.



Author's Response:

Yeah, it wasn't any fun when he stopped running away, Jazzy was just playing with him as she would with one of her little pets!

Spirit Intrusion by Silent-One Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

The ability to transfer your soul into inanimate objects has all kinds of uses. This particular person with such a gift is all to quick to use it for perverted, voyeuristic purposes . . . which inevitably bites them in the ass.

Happy (slightly) early birthday, Choreo!


Categories: Breasts, Object, Couples, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1815 Read Count: 9345
[Report This] Published: October 04 2016 Updated: October 04 2016
Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Peeping

Soul transfer is a fun idea, but I'd want to transfer into something more interactive, or somehow allow communication to occur. Then again, I suppose he could always talk about where he'd been after the fact. :)



Author's Response:

AAAAAAH OH MY GOD I GOT A REVIEW FROM SPOOKYTACO

Ahem.

Anyway, this was based on something Choreo said he liked the idea of, so I made it for him for his birthday. However, if we ever became friends, I'd be glad to make something fun for you for your own birthday- I like giving presents to people.

Beggars Can't Be Choosers by Paris Green Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

A young man who wants nothing more in life than to be owned and used by a giantess lets himself be shrunk and sold in the hopes of making his dream come true. Unfortunatley for Jason, it's not just women who have a taste for shrunken men...

This is almost exclusively a giant male story.

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Giant, Muscle, Odor, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: M/f, M/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2590 Read Count: 39502
[Report This] Published: October 12 2016 Updated: October 28 2016
Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You can definitely use more pronouns, especially in chapter 1. Instead of 'Jason', use 'he'. You described the action scenes well, though I felt there should have been some dialog in the first chapter. Surely some words would have been spoken with so many people in a small box. As for the ending of chapter 2, here's to hoping Jason escapes and finds the giantess of his dreams. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks a bunch for the review! I'll make the substutions for the pronouns as you suggested when I post the next chapter, which I'll begin work on soon. I'll also take a look at adding some dialogue between the micros. 

You'll see what'll become of Jason with a few days (school permitting). I'm debating keeping it at 3 chapters or spiltting it into four.

 

 

In Over His Head by Mouseyman99, Raziell Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

Do you play Skyrim? Do you mod? What if that crazy, custom, bouncy, busty, nearly nude world you made through combining all those mods came to life..and had it’s OWN story? A story with giantesses, sexy monsters, powerful beautiful women, sex, and "unbirthy"ness/"vory"ness! But also a story with romance, adventure, comedy, and an epic saga involving Daedra, gods, and many of the most powerful forces in Tamriel, all set in a time just after the events of Elder Scroll's Online.

It begins with a peculiarly small Bosmer, far far north of the main Skyrim province, in a small but bustling Nord town, on a remote, frozen island in the middle of nowhere...


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Fantasy, Gentle, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 124462 Read Count: 157063
[Report This] Published: October 19 2016 Updated: May 26 2019
Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 21 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

You're a gifted writer. I admire those who can write authentic stories set in history. I suppose this is more Tolkienesque Fantasy than history, but still, very impressive. Reminds me of Terra by lancealot501.

I'm really not sure how Edovan is going to explain his way out of this one. He's going to have to do something big to make it up to Yagaritte. He's a good elf, but he causes SO much trouble for himself. My hope is that he finds a way to participate in her adventure today, and she finds a way to forgive the overly curious little bastard. Either way, looking forward to the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

There's going to be some punishment involved xD Hard labor of a sort. But you know Edovan. He's going to try his hardest xD

 

Can't tell you how gratifying it is that people are gettig into the story and the characters the same as we are. We feel in love with all of them ( even B) so we hope you will too!

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 22 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yet another fantastic chapter! I want to know more about Svie and the 'loud female voice' that stopped her from proceeding. Is she Yagaritte's sister? I'm a bit curious how Edovan avoided female attention all his life. They're quite attracted to him. Then again, this is a brothel. I hope Yagaritte doesn't get jealous. I'm glad she's getting closer to forgiving him. He did wrong her, but in much the same way a big-eyed puppy chews up a new pair of shoes. The puppy is at fault, but you can't stay mad at it forever!



Author's Response:

Svie will be back around <3  She's one of the Feature girls of the Boar, and you will meet Loud female voice  on the next chapter xD

Edovan has many secrets..even he doesn't know all of them, but rest assured everything is happening to him for a reason.  More clues on that in next chapter as well!

And you are totally right about Yagaritte.  Its not so much a question of if she will forgive him as WHEN will she let him off the hook and TELL him he's forgiven.  She does love to tease him!

So happy you are getting into this as much as we are! Thanks for your support!

 

 

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 26 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Nice chapter! Poor Edo's logical brain just can't seem to win. Of course, his lizard brain's having a great time. The twins should be interesting. They haven't attempted to seduce Edo yet. Since they play by the rules and have access to magicka, I'm betting they win the contest somehow. But my true hope is that Yagaritte re-enters the picture and either stops the competition or claims victory. I really missed not having her in this chapter. Looking forward to the next one!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  We are saving the best for last..hahaha And you will definitely see Yagaritte again before the end of act 1 xD  Thanks again for giving us your feedback!

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I think I like Mavka now more than Yagaritte! I enjoyed how the mouse scared Mavka and she turned to Edo for protection. Nice reversal in dynamics. Plus she now sees him as something more than a toy. It would be interesting to delve further into their relationship, highlighting the conflict between her 'hunger' to consume him and her interest in him as a person. Which would win? Surely she wouldn't let her passions kill him...or would she be unable to control it? Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

very keen insights!  Let the shipping wars begin!!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.