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Summary:

When someone does something nice for you, you return the kindness. Orphened and raised by her villages local Doctor, Abby struggles to do just that when she winds up in a circumstance she never thought possible. Faced directly with her fears, she now has to try and help the very ones she hates the most...

Monsters...

Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 341499 Read Count: 225594

[Report This] Published: October 31 2016 Updated: April 10 2021

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed

Date: January 14 2018 Title: Chapter 27: Paving a way for their future,

Hey, it's been a while! Finally, I got some things sorted out with my schedule and have more time to review now. I Felt bad for not being able to comment the previous chapter before the current one...

26:
Knowing the methods that Najia used for getting info is a nice extra, one could already guess that she was more of a pacifist but she seems to totally stick to it now. I wonder for what reason she chose to go down that path. Or maybe is just some differences between her birth country and the current one?

Eve went through a difficult choice, I'm glad in the end she went for what she believed to be right and got to stay but Najia side. Is also great that the Kitsune got to know at least a few Eve's feelings towards her before she got to her current comatose state, it would've been rather sad otherwise.

I don't know what to think about Eve's parents naming sense. Either they're rather wicked or that's just their way to deal with their loss and/or honor Eve's "memory". It was also a nice detail that the vampiress could recognize Caitriona faster than her biological mother. And I'm happy that the maid got to see her heiress is still alive. I don't know how she'll feel about Eve since their final encounter before the incident wasn't exactly the best but, if anyone needs to know that she's still "alive", I'm glad it was her.

And also, is nice nothing worse happened to Brook ;_;

27:
There's a big change for Eve in this one. Seeing her all giggly was great, even somehow alluring, maybe because of the gap with her more stern behavior? Anyway, it gave the feeling that she got a big weight out of her back after telling Abby about her past.

The letters were a really cute detail, in a lot of senses! It was also clever to leave them to explain some of Eve's feelings and the transition she went through in her mindset about Abby. Wonder when will be a good time to send it.

And, there goes the chance for a harem ending I guess? I'm unsure now about who will mate with Abby. Rather, I'm unsure about who I want to mate with Abby, all of them are so cute ;_; Anyway, Eve took the rejection quite good for now. It was too sudden for Abby indeed. But is good that she isn't giving out!

For the final, it really was a demonstration of that alluringness I mentioned before. I'm sure this rocked around Abby's mindset in a lot of ways, especially knowing those are her actual feelings. She'll have some thinking to do after all of this. Also, Eve sure knows how to take advantage, being the first one to prioritize completely Abby's pleasure.

Excellent job overall you two, I will be looking forward to the next one as always. Will try to comment faster for that one.

See ya~

Author's Response:
Don't feel bad D:

Was hoping you were alright.

I'm glad you still enjoy the story and the chapters coming out. :)

I was worried about how my last chapter would pan out but I'm getting positive feedback so that's a plus. Also, I won't say anything in regards to Abby's relationships. You'll just have to patiently wait and find out. :P

Thank you for the review Kenta, I missed you! :3

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed

Date: January 29 2018 Title: Chapter 28: The Hardest Goodbyes,

Hi! I'm now a bit earlier than the last time. Hope to be able to keep the free time for reading...

So, starting with another flashback. I wonder what triggers them? I tried figuring out the monster's identity in Abby's dream but seem like I can't pinpoint it yet. At first, I thought it might be some kind of elf because of the ears but it might be something more demon-like.

Moving on, pretty cute and informative session with Abby and Eve. Too bad for them that it was more informative than sexy. I wonder about Enya's identity but not a clue now. So far I can only think of a Lamia because it was mentioned before but really is just a vague guess. It should be a strong kind though, I suppose. Also makes me wonder about her past since she might have human blood running through her?

Poppy smelling earthly is just Eve way of saying she's sweaty...? lol

Anyway, lavender and lemon on the scene, somehow I found them even more adorable this time! And their first encounter with Eve was somehow cute, even in that scary situation. Glad to hear Eve isn't too pained about Abby losing her clothes one way or another. Rather sad to see such a hard work wasted all the time.

I think I know who the next girl is but will wait to confirm my theories in the next one. Nice chapter.

See ya~

Author's Response: Glad you were able to review at all Kenta. Sorry if life’s keeping you busy. It’s annoying sometimes. >,< In regards to Enya, I already put enough hints in this chapter to cover what she is with what I’ve said so no more will be revealed... For now. I also wanted a more calming chapter here to make room for what's to come next. It's hard to find moments of peace in a story like this but they are needed none the less. I expect most everyone to know who the next girl is as well but font worry, you'll meet her soon enough. I'm glad you liked the scents bits I added in. It has a purpose though, I assure you. See you around Kenta. I hope you can find time to review again whenever I post next time. :D

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed

Date: February 13 2018 Title: Chapter 29: Face, Faith, and Feathers!

I'm early-ish on this one =P

I have a bit of fear for birds, so having an enormous harpy in front of me could be terrifying, I have to agree with Abby on that...

Well, Amy is a really cute girl. Though, I can see why she would be difficult to write. Seems like she got a nice start with Abby, compared to some of the other girls, even if the teen was scared of her at the start and a bit later on.

Also, Abby still lets her curiosity take priority when choosing what to do, though I can't blame her. I'm also curious about how Najia got ahold of Amy's egg.

And well, nice scare got Abby there, it was pretty well written. Good thing she noticed what was going on quick enough. However, I do feel a bit bad for her dress, hope Eve isn't really too upset about it...

It was mostly a cute interaction between Amy and Abby from here. Glad she tiny got a breather for a bit. There's also a hint about Ebon's (?) relationship with Amy, which seems to be a rather nice one. If she actually referred to Ebon, of course.

The ending was also really cute, with Casey finally getting something nice ^^ I still don't know who I want Abby to be with ;_;

A cute chapter indeed.

Oh, and I guess that's where the vore tag comes from. Congrats on fulfilling that.

See ya~

Author's Response:
Thank you for your review Kenta! :D

This chapter was a bit tricky to figure out but F.W is the one to thank for his help with Amy. I wanted to try a few things with her but after going over them with him he helped me figure out a good way to have her and helped me write her in. :3

I'll be going more into Amy's backstory as the next couple chapters go on. Hope you can wait till then. :P

Also, I have all the tags there for a reason, ;)

I plan on using them all don't you worry~

See ya next time!

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed

Date: February 25 2018 Title: Chapter 30: The Cycle Continues...

The weekend is here and that means free time!

Cute act between the twins, Casey and Abby. Nice to have more background about Amy, I wonder when we'll get to hear what happened that night since that info seems quite limited. Also, who would have thought that Amy wasn't on the dumb side and actually was pretty intelligent for her species standard lol.

I didn't expect Ebon here at all, to be honest. It was a nice action scene, is pretty cool that Casey now was more useful when facing off the dragon, hopefully, she's not too hurt... Same with the twins, they had quite nice moments to shine on this one. Though, Ebon keeps showing she's a beast. Hope Emma gets better soon...

Now, I wonder if Eve knows Abby is safe. Ebon's health might depend on that. Also, what measures will take the vampire about Ebon. The option to kill her is there of course and she should be really mad right now but she knows that would upset her little Abby. Maybe she'll hurt her to a point she can move? Shrinking her doesn't really seem to be an option but I have to say it would be funny to have a tiny Ebon, maybe being captive by Poppy.

About the next girl, I'm unsure about her species but her powers seem pretty cool. I feel a bit frustrated that I forgot about her previous appearance in chapter 8... For the one in chapter 13, I have to agree that it might be when Abby was saved from the flames. I wouldn't have noticed if I didn't read your comments though. Eager to see what happens to her.

Also, very cute how Casey kept calling Abby her storeen.

See ya~

Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it Kenta :D

Sorry for not replying until now. I got caught up in my next chapter and with school. :(

I was wondering if anyone ever noticed her hands in this but it didn't look like it so I wanted others to have a little hint. I plan on the next chapter coming out soon enough so I hope your patient and will enjoy.

Also, don't worry too much about Ebon. More will be explained later~

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed

Date: March 12 2018 Title: Chapter 31: Alone in the Dark?

Hi hi ^^

Yu is pure love! I fear she will make it more difficult for me to choose a favorite now since I was already having enough trouble. I liked doppels a lot already but this girl was just totally adorable.

Though, lots of mystery surrounds her. I can't conclude too much from the current chapter but it does seem like a really tragic past. Also, I wonder why she's helping Abby. Maybe she looks like her previous mate or something similar? Or maybe she's allied with Eve in some way. I suppose it should be really important since she's going through a lot for the tiny. Did she have some plan in case Abby didn't allow her to get her energy...? It's also uncertain for me if the other girls know about her.

Also, very interesting and mysterious way for her to collect energy. I wonder if Yu was just with her eyes closed or maybe took a different form...? Also from I can gather I think she vored Abby in some way to extract even her saliva or something similar to that.

On that note, is she really healed? I hope she's not just transforming and fooling Abby into believing she is indeed alright now...

Anyway, interesting chapter. Really does makes me want to know more about Yu in different ways. Though I also wonder what's going on on Ebon's side.. Whichever you're doing next, I'm sure it'll be interesting too.

As for the secrets, I don't know. Feels a bit frustrating not being able to guess some stuff in a bit. Though, if related to the imgur, maybe "..."? You might understand if so.

See ya~

Author's Response:
I'm surprised you asked that. Why she's helping her. Attention to detail always warrants my appreciation. :3

As for why though that will be shown as the chapters go on. Don't worry though, Yu still has time on her hands. And as for her hands, don't worry either. They're healed. Also, her plan never included taking essence from Abby, to begin with so if you think that's why she was helping her, think again. :P

In regards to her intimate moment with Abby, that's all in the mind's eye. I wanted to make it questionable to the readers meaning, she could have swallowed her, could have inserted her, or perhaps even of drowned her. There is no definite answer for what she did and not even Abby knows herself... But, I know~ ;)

And lastly, as for Ebon, don't expect her to show up anytime soon. Angering a Vampire is a fatal mistake...

For this, I'll leave for now. Thank you for the in-depth review as always Kenta, they're always so wonderful to read. :)

But, I will say this, considering only you seemed to catch it... As for my secret, I put into this post, you're on the right track.

...

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed

Date: March 26 2018 Title: Chapter 32: Grief, And Sorrow

This one took me a bit longer to read, I was even interrupted thrice while trying. But Anyway, I finally finished!

Nice to know a bit more about Yu's powers. She seems pretty powerful so I wonder what's her classification on the scale? Though, maybe her species isn't really classified as it's so mysterious.

For her past, it was indeed very sad. While it was interesting the way Yu managed to take the blonde's place, the outcome, well... Also, pretty brutal what the other girl did and how no one stopped her. Was it because of her being of the high class?

And, it was a nice touch Yu going to get in with her "real" appearance by the end but, well, it was too late...

I'm curious about Abby's way of seeing things now. At first, she was completely on the human's side and as the story moved on, she was going towards neutrality. Now, however, she seems to be completely on the others' side. I mean this because she didn't seem to think anything weird about the idea of Yu taking the other girl identity and actually deceiving Clarette. I was a bit bothered that not much of this was touch upon but glad to see Abby did mention it when lecturing Yu about how she should've told the truth and how it might have been worse if she didn't appear at the moment. And that's especially true since we don't know what might've been of Clarette if Yu didn't come into her life...

Also, I might know already why Yu can't really talk, was it the "price" she paid for that last help towards her mate?

I have to say Yu seems even more adorable each chapter. And is good that Abby finally made her mind. However, I feel things won't be that easy from now on anyways.

There was also a hint of where are Eve and the other girls I guess? Though no idea what place is lightened enough.

Eager to see what will be taking place on the next one.

See ya~

Author's Response:
Glad you were able to get to my story Kenta, I'm always eager to see your reviews. Their very insightful to read. :D

This story takes place in the mid-sixteenth century, so classifications in social status do come into play. So I would say yes, being in an upper cast does mean one tends to be a bit more... of a bitch. Pardon my language. :P

I think you have a good way of viewing Yu's past but let me turn that around so you see both sides please~

Yu is a being who literally gives up her identity to be with her love and mate. She'll become whatever she needs to be and give her mate everything she desires and more. This is the love depth of a Doppelganger. She is giving up, everything from her own life to fill the hole for her mate because Clarette, is now her purpose in life. While I don't disagree that Abby didn't bring it up, consider both situations. I hoped that Clarette was written in how I intended her to be and not as someone who could just pick herself back up after what had happened.

Yu's intervention saved Clarette. But, it also doomed her as well. See where the coin comes into play? I do wonder and have toyed with what would have happened had she not shown up at all, but, if that happened then Yu wouldn't exist. 3:

I like your perspective on her intentions. No one else bothered to point that out. It was interesting to see what you thought. I hope that doesn't mean you don't like Yu anymore though... ;-;

And as for the price she paid, don't worry about it. ;)

Also in regards to Abby's opinions on humans and monsters, I would think your opinions would change to if you learned that animals can talk, feel and act like humans, and show apathy and remorse for others. I've done something similar to this story as I did with my last but one stark difference is that Abby, could potentially be the cause of a lot of these girls problems inadvertently because of who she is and what shes's done. And this is one of the things that weigh's on her. Sorry if a balance seems off but it's deliberate. And I don't plan on changing it either, much.

I'll be getting to the others soon as well, so don't worry about them either. Or... perhaps really worry! :D

I love keeping people guessing xD

Talk to you later Kenta~ :3

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed
Date: March 26 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Doctor, doctor...

Oh, no, no, of course I like Yu, I even said I find her adorable. Didn't mean to say she had the intention of deceiving Clarette or doing any wrong to her, I know Yu's acts were out of pure love. Just wanted to point out that she was deceiving her in the end, and that most "humans" might have focused on that. Unlike Abby who had a different point of view.

Also, of course Abby having changes in her judgment in the normal thing in that situation, just pointing out how she's been going from one side to the other, nothing wrong with that.

And yes, I do agree that Clarette wasn't really a strong-willed person so her future without Yu didn't seem too shiny either.

Hope there were no misunderstandings in what I said D:

Author's Response: I didn’t think I sounded accusatory, sorry about that. :( You’re fine Kenta! I didn’t take offense to what you said. I’m glad you still like Yu though. :3

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed

Date: April 15 2018 Title: Chapter 33: The Good News

Hey! This one took me waaay more than usual but finally managed to find time for reading the new chapter.

But first, I wanted to congratulate you on getting 100 reviews. So, congrats!

Now onto the chapter, well it was more of a transition chapter. Yu seems to have a full recovery, or close to one at least, and that's great. Very sweet her last interaction.

Eve had a short apparition but dropped the comment on how Ebon will never bother them again. Really curious on how she managed that. On other scenarios, I might think she lied in some way but I doubt she would do that to Abby. I suppose there was some kind of blackmail going on? Also, indeed it seems Ebon still worried about the other girls and won't really harm them even when trying to get to Abby. I wonder if Casey also noticed this or just wrote it off as the dragon being tired or something. Oh, and I'm curious on how far will Casey get in terms of power, she seems to be doing nice progress.

For Kari, is nice to see her after so long. Cute as ever, but left us with the doubt of what she's hiding. I'm a bit out of ideas for this one, to be honest. I don't think there was space for Kari to do some foul play or something that would Abby in some way from the start. Maybe later on?

There's also the question of how will stuff proceed after Najia wakes up, and whether they'll try to unshrink Abby right after that. Though, I kind of would like her to stay like that of course, haha.

See ya~

Author's Response:
Glad to see your review after so long Kenta :D

I figured life got in the way or something was keeping you hanging. :)

I don't have much to say in regards to Eve and Ebon. That will come up later don't worry. And as for Kari, that will be coming up sooner than you might think. That's all I'll say :X

I hope you like the new chapter to and it doesn't take you so long to read it. xD

See ya next time :3

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed

Date: April 30 2018 Title: Chapter 34: Mine is yours.

I'm really sorry it took me this long to read the new chapter ;_;

Now with that out of my chest, onto the chapter.

Casey seems to be planning something special, with a kind of obvious intention. Meanwhile, Kari is acting more suspicious. I now have some idea of what she might be hiding but I'll have to wait and see.

Also, now we get to know Najia is waking up in 1 or 2 days. really wonder how will the story go from there. I'm a bit scared to ask but, does Najia's awakening means the story is getting to its end?

Now about the star of the chapter. Nya was very cute in this one. While reading her flashback for some reason I kind of pictured a Disney movie lol. Sadly, the ending wasn't as happy as a Disney movie...

While is good that Najia managed to pick her up, can't put away the thought of Nya's mother... Hope she's okay, though, that would only mean she's still looking for her child... Doesn't seem like a bright future either way. Also, I wonder if it was awkward to write scenes in which most of the dialogue was "Nyaa".

The ending with the belly rub was cute! Nice one that Abby decided to went onwards, to not hurt Nya's feelings.

Looking forward to the next one, specially since it seems it'll be Casey-centered. However, I'll be traveling in a couple of weeks so I'm unsure when I'll be able to read it... Still, I'm sure it'll be a nice one.

See ya~

Author's Response:
I'm really sorry it took me this long to write you back! I swear I wasn't being vindictive! I mean it! Please don't hate me. T^T

To answer your question, once Najia wake's up, the story will be at it's end. So in a sense, yes. But, that doesn't mean we're through with it just yet. There's a lot of stuff I need to get to. Kari, Ebon, and of course, Enya come to mind. I'm sure you're curious of at least one of three.

I'm glad you enjoyed Nya's back story. I wanted it to be clear why she is so attached to Abby so hopefully my sentiment was strong enough in it. But as for her mother, don't expect to see her in This, story.

And no... it was actually really fun writing the dialog for Nya and her mother. XD

I'm wondering how confused everyone else is when their sentences made perfect sense in my mind and no one elses. :3

I hope you read this next chapter soon and that you still enjoy the story.

Again, I'm really sorry I never replied back to you. I just had some personal stuff that kept me away from here. Sorry...

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed

Date: June 16 2018 Title: Chapter 35: The Bad News...

Welcome back! Of course, I don't hate you. I'm really glad you're back to writing.

A bit refreshing to see Abby being the one making mistakes this time, even if it meant hurting Casey's feelings by not noticing her intentions ;_; Keep going Casey, I'm sure you will manage to surprise her at some point...

Liked the way the small teen moves around the dullahan, climbing and sliding down her. It's very cute. Makes it even cuter for when they're together.

Too bad the nice moments went downhill though. I noticed Casey had moments of self-blaming but didn't expect it to be that bad. That moment with Abby can be a start for a process of self-acceptance, hope they keep working things out together.

And well, the confession. The answer was as expected but is good that Casey hears it directly from Abby herself, especially now that she seems at a low point with her self-esteem. Cheers Casey, there's still chance. Hope she manages to call Abby Storen someday.

"This was the first time she had ever cried in happiness" This part got me a bit, is really sad to think someone never experienced bliss like that before. Now wonder how Eve will feel after learning Casey heard it first. Makes me also think about what Najia's opinion will be about this when she wakes up. Sounds like she could be very understanding about it but who knows.

As for Kari's secret. I expected something along those lines but still, poor her. Abby wasn't sure whether she or Casey was more excited about her growing back, but I'm not sure whether Kari or Abby is more devasted about the bad news.

And well, it's also a bit sad to hear the story might be coming to its end but is something expected from all stories, yet I'm glad to see there's still more to come. Though, I wonder if you have something planned with other girls than the ones you mentioned in the previous review?

Anyway, hope you manage to get back into writing pace, just don't overwork yourself!

See ya.

Author's Response: I’m really glad you’re still reading my story Kenta. Your reviews are always nice to read and reflect on. :D I wanted to show the closeness of the two this chapter so I’m glad that you got that vibe from it with how Abby and Casey interacted with one another. Even if it took a darker turn later on. I’m also glad though that you understood the weight behind her confessions and in turn Abby’s. I always worry I’m not writing a feeling strong enough sometimes... ;-; I guess I might have foreshadowed to much with Kari, didn’t I? I hope it was still somewhat of a surprise. We’ll be going into that and into her next chapter so don’t worry. Also don’t think I’m not going to give any of the other girls any more attention. They weren’t just there for filler after all. XD I promise I won’t overwork myself but I will be writing again soon! Don’t you worry! Thanks again Kenta :D

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed

Date: August 20 2018 Title: Chapter 36: A Flower Among Weeds...

Hey, it's been a while! Got started in a new job and still getting used to it so took me a bit to get some time to read...

I think Abby thinking that way of Kari after hearing the news is the normal thing to do. Of course, is not a good thing, but is what's expected. Quite nice she managed to overcome her anger and inquire more on the matter, though.

Quite cute Abby and Kari's relationship, going more along the lines of mother and daughter but not being quite the same. It's also good for my heart that she isn't really another candidate for a lover, I already got enough trouble choosing for a favorite among the current ones...

"she watched Kari obey her like she always did. Like they all seemingly did." I wonder if this is foreshadowing for something.

The story is indeed quite depressing, especially the fact that the humans made sure that Kari observed her mother as the "trial" went on. Though, I'm unsure if I find this one or Casey's as the saddest. Nevertheless, I think it was quite interesting, even if sad.

And I'm glad the chapter ends on a happy note, as happy as it can get after that tale of course. Abby mentions ones again that she hopes Najia would let her stay so I wonder what the girl would do if Najia declined. Also, she will need to get the approval of Ebon and all the girls before that, or maybe she hopes Najia does something about her? Though it could also be that Abby didn't think that far yet.

So you said you're getting trouble for writing? Please take your time, you don't want to post something you're not satisfied because of a rush. Hope you manage to overcome your block or the trouble that you're having.

See ya!

Author's Response:
Thank you Kenta. Your reviews always make me feel better. :)

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, it was a harder one to write for some reason. I guess it was a combination of coming back in to writing and the darker theme with a character like Kari. Either way, i'm hoping the next chapter wont be as long. I already have the idea's prepared for it, i just need to sit down and sort them out in the proper order.

As for Abby and Kari's relationship, that was aout what i wanted to portray. Don't worry, not every girl is a candidate for lover, lol. When it comes to Najia however, I wouldn't put to much worry into it. It's best not to assume anything about a character you know nothing about. ;)

I'll try to keep this story updated as soon as I can.

Thank you again for another review. :)

And congratulations on your new job!

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed

Date: October 03 2018 Title: Chapter 37: Round Two...

Hi! I wanted to write the review sooner but work caught up quite fast.

One problem "fixed" and another to come. Really, Abby can't catch a breath. Throughout Casey and Eve's fight I kept trying to find a side to cheer on but got quite difficult, both of them were definetily on the wrong here and it shows since they start yelling at each other, throwing low blows all the time. Is good that there's not "good" side in this case.

Wonder what solution Eve came up with, and whether it'll keep them away enough for Ebon to do as she pleases.

Poor Abby, she's the real victim on this one. Glad Kari snapped her out of victimizing herself. Though, I guess this kind of situation might help her in some way when choosing a mate in the future, there should be a lot to take in after all.

And well, Ebon back. Very cursiousin why she's going from a destroyer to kidnapper in this one. Maybe someone needs energy? Hope to get to know soon!

See ya!

Author's Response:
Thank you for the review Kenta, sorry it took me so long to write something back to you. I hope you read and enjoy my next chapter to if you liked the last one. :)

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed

Date: December 31 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Doctor, doctor...

Finally got time to read it ;_; It's been a while, hope you had a nice Christmas!

Ebon methods are still too rough but you can tell from the start that she wasn't fighting all out, really makes me wonder what Eve did to make Ebon behave. Now, hope Kari doesn't blame herself too badly after this...

The conversation with Ebon reassures the idea that she really cares for the others, and all she's doing is out of care and kindness, I suppose. And her story has to be quite tragic to have a hatred that intense. Also, picturing her moving around all that gold and hoping is enough to "buy" Abby, I find that very cute for some reason. Hopefully, they can talk out their worries.

So now Ivy is in here too. I got an idea of how this might go and if I'm correct it could be quite entertaining! Looking forward to reading the next one.

Have a happy new year!

Author's Response:
KENTA!

Long time no see! S-Sorry...

I'm glad you still like my story :D

I'm glad you're able to see through Ebon's rougher side. It's hard to find a good way to describe what I want with her. It doesn't nearly come as naturally as it does with some of the other girl's. But, I think thats whats so fun about her too.

Also, you think you know what Ivy's going to do? fufufu~

We shall see!

See you later~!

I hope you like the next chapter I just posted! Enjoy!

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed

Date: January 20 2019 Title: Chapter 39: Communication.

Well, this one did take me a while D: Had some stuff going on with graduations... I'm here now though!

I did guess Abby was going to be used as a pacifier, though I expected something like a half-body in. Still, it was a very cute scene! I think a good job was made describing Ivy, and I'm intrigued in why she got so close to Abby so quickly. COuld be just child innocence, but there might be something more? Also, petting Ivy's tongue sounds adorable haha.

That being said, my mental image of Ebon panicking while watching Ivy sucking Abby should be very cute too! I really enjoy seeing different aspects of her. At first I thought she was going to make Ivy sleep before taking Abby back but seems that didn't work?

There's an interesting back and forth between Abby and Ebon, whether they end up as friends after this or not, I'm sure Ebon will see Abby in a different light after this.

How Eve theratened Ebon could've been guessed, but is very nice to see her defending Abby to such an extend.

Now I'm really interested in seeing what Ebon will do next. And, I really hope Abby can help her somehow with her wing...

See ya! Have fun writing the next one!

Author's Response:
I guess it took me a bit to get back to you too. 3:

Thank you for the review Kenta, I'm glad you enjoyed Ivy's introduction. But how did you know I was going to use Abby as a Pacifier? I was hoping to make it a surprise. X'D

I'll have my next chapter up shortly. I hope you enjoy what follows!

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed

Date: March 02 2019 Title: Chapter 40: Black and White.

Hi! I think I got faster than usual this time... Hopefully...

Now to answer the pacifier thing: Is just a scenario that I've thought about before. Though, again, I was expecting a half-body-in thing so it wasn't exactly as I predicted.

About the chapter, it is nice to get to know more about Ebon and Ivy. For what I gather here, I suppose the dragons leave their eggs alone? And have them look for themselves right after hatching. Well, they got the power to survive that as Ebon showed there.

It's adorable that Ebon thinks of Ivy as her treasure! The way they lived together and their first encounter with humans was nicely written. Though the outcome is quite sad... Also, was neat how Ebon gradually learned the human language.

It's disheartening to read what they went through while being displayed and attraction for that circus, and even worse when the escape failed and Ebon got that wound... I hope that there's any way to get her better, even if unlikely...

The part of Ebon feeding Ivy was especially hard to read, both hurtful and sad... Well at the end Najia got there at the last minute before tragedy kept piling on, I'm curious at how she mentioned Ivy and Ebon are from different species. I suppose that's the reason why Ivy still isn't able to talk?

Looking forward to the next one, great job!

Author's Response:
Sorry for not getting back to you Kenta. I really feel bad about that. D:

I was caught up posting my new chapter quickly that i didn't check if I had any new reviews for the last one!

Thank you for the review, I really appreciate it. :D

With Ebon and Ivy's tale, Dragons are a bit fickle to write about so I took that approuch to make others wonder if thats how they're raised or if hunters just got to them first.

i'm glad you enjoyed Ebon's point of view through the years. I wanted to really explain herself since mostly shes been seen in a harsher light. And also to help express just where her hatred stems from and that its not without reason or mindless.

As for their species, it could be related to that. Or it could simply be that Ivy's still just a pup and hasn't matured yet. Its for me to know and maybe reveal. :)

Than you again for the review. I'll make sure to respond to it quicker next time!

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed

Date: March 25 2019 Title: Chapter 41: Sacrifices.

Well, this one certainly took me a while to read, sorry ;_;

The current Ebon-Abby relationship is quite nice! The dragon won't be all friendly but is good enough for now. Also, it's cute she's trying to resist the flattering haha.

Now, as for the main part... Certainly, I didn't expect that kind of solution. It was a given that Casey and Eve had to be at peace for Abby's happiness but this was going beyond that. The pact made by Eve and Casey seems quite heavy, and I can't really say if this was the best outcome but... I guess it is? I'm quite satisfied with the result, the three of them are on their way to happiness now. Though, other than Abby saying yes I suppose there should be something more to be done before she's officially their mate?

Also, going by Eve's words I suppose Abby should still be able to give energy to the others hominals and bestials. And I'm quite curious about how much Casey's abilities have been affected by this.

Seems there should be some more stuff going on, looking forward to reading that!

Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it... I was having doubts.

I hope that it was a surprise at least, and a well recieved one. I had planned on this from the beginning, or at least at a certain chapter turning point early on. I have more to follow which is why I chose to do this, and I'm hoping it will show in the upcoming chapters. Whenever I get around to them.

Thank you for telling me what you thought. It means a lot to me, Kenta.

The Real Trials of Alola by Franchise Writer Rated: X

[Reviews - 13]

Summary:

A short series of stories revolving around the games Pokemon Sun and Pokemon Moon.

Categories: Giantess, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Feet, Mouth Play, Odor, Slave, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20581 Read Count: 24354

[Report This] Published: December 25 2016 Updated: August 16 2017

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed

Date: August 18 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Acerola

Hi hi.

A great chapter, the building up was enough to give the mc's friends reason to los his patience as well as have the mc get a contrast with Acerola before and after shrinking.

The girl's playfulness was really enjoyable to read through the whole chapter and added a good pack of humilliation to each interaction with the shrunken dude. I love how you could fit in so many different kind of not so usual interaction, as well as the description on each of Acerola's odorous games. Also, it fits a lot with my tastes, and made me enjoy some other stuff that I'm usually indifferent to, like the golden shower part.

The last part was also really good, having the mc feeling powerless without even touching him and punishing the other guy at the same time. About the not-so-mean guy, I wonder if he got to the "best outcome" one could get with Acelora, or if he's even alive...

So yeah, excellent chapter.

Author's Response:
Thank you KentaRyu, I'm glad you liked it as well. You know I had some trepidation when attempting certain interactions but with what I added in and cut out, I figured the most I could add would be enough to give the readers a general idea of what to expect while letting them know the fear of being powerless. There's no greater fear than that one oneself unable to act, IMO that is.

^,^

Ominous Future by Lexander Rated: X

[Reviews - 4]

Summary:

Follow David as his life falls apart!

Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Odor, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18505 Read Count: 19641

[Report This] Published: February 18 2017 Updated: March 04 2017

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed

Date: March 05 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Shattered Reality

Nice, I really enjoy this kind of familiar stories so I'm looking forward to the next chapters. I think this one was pretty good, I liked the content.

Mediation by Ecstacy Rated: R

[Reviews - 97]

Summary:

Born with a genetic defect that's caused him to shrink throughout his life, we follow the story of 3 1/2 inch tall Tanner and his adoptive family consisting of his high achieving step-sister Ingrid and widowed step-mother Ivory as they try have functional lives.

Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Maternal, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 90488 Read Count: 333729

[Report This] Published: March 01 2017 Updated: November 05 2020

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed

Date: March 04 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Drop By

This is a good start, I liked Ingrid an the other girls' personalities and I'm also interested on the tags. Looking forward to the next chapters.

Author's Response:
Appreciate the review, I'm trying to have a good blend of personalities to play off of each other. All in good time, I'll get to the tags of the story.

Miss Kobayashi's Dragon by Franchise Writer Rated: R

[Reviews - 3]

Summary:

After a long night of drinking, Kobayashi reveals certain secrets to her loving Dragon Maid. When morning comes around, she's in for a surprise, thats for sure.

A short story i wrote for the lovely ladies of Miss Kobayashi's Dragon Maid. This is an Anime story as you may know. If your not into that please look somewhere else.

Categories: Giantess, Young Adult 20-29, Entrapment, Fantasy, Gentle, Insertion, Lesbians, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5058 Read Count: 10446

[Report This] Published: March 11 2017 Updated: March 11 2017

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed

Date: March 11 2017 Title: Chapter 1: A morning to remember

I know I said this before but this is really nice, the way Tohru tried to do her best for Kobayashi and how she acted in the end was really cute. The characters and the way it was writted it did felt like in the anime.

You have this as not completed, will there be more?

Author's Response:
I tend to leave my stories as uncompleted generally because i may come back to them in the future. It usually depends on the fan base for it. Like my One Piece story for instince. It was meant to be a one time deal, but i had plenty of people on Eka's beg me to continue it. It just depends on if people really like it or not. Thank you for reviewing again on both sites, i'm glad the story was really to your liking :)

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