Just your average reader that enjoys good reads of simple yet inovatively stimulating stories and such.
I pretty much made this account here so I can read/fav/review however there is a part of me that wouldn't mind giving contribution a try once I buck-up enough confidence & time as well as pick up on some useful techniques and skill development :)
A new adult shop has opened up, and women have been raving.
Well that got me shaking and enthralled :D
2 chapters in and already I'm pining for more :)
Great writing style and I love the concept of that sex-shop it's great.
Here's hoping you continue this series, even if not with Vanessa and James, maybe some other lad that gets transmuted into some other sort of toy for women :D
If you are looking for more, I have two others up so far involving the shop Cherry.
They are Poison Ivy, and Carnal. Expect more.
Glad you enjoyed this one. Thanks for reviewing.
-Xxana
Glad to see you didn't quit writing this story. This update was spectacular and did well for setting up some minor and useful exposition on Mike's character/past relationship with his step-sis :)
Also, I too think it was a good move to adjust his age to 15. 13 seemed a bit too borderline in my opinion so 15's a passable change I reckon : d
Looking forward to your next update! ^_^
Thanks for your interest. And thanks for the review.
A parody of A Visit From Saint Nick, better known as 'Twas the Night Before Christmas. The entire thing is done in poem-format.
Maxine walks into the city to visit a fan for his birthday.
(I rhymed "garage" twice, I think I deserve some kind of award.
Also, this is taken from my tumblr account.
http://ask-microkink-labs.tumblr.com )
Woah man! That was one epic birthday for that little Anon! :D
I like how you wrote this in 1st person, makes it way more interactive for sure, and damn I adore interactivity with this fetish, so kudos :)
Great job with the writing and rhyming, absolutely brilliant :)
It's detailed answers and stories like this from you which gets me really rearing to sugest/ask a real probing/encouraging Tumblr question myself one day
Great, Job! ^_^
What a lovely thing to say. Thank you for your detailed review, dear! ;) I'm so happy you enjoyed it.
The second season to The Size Zone
Wow!
That was truly a spectacular Size-Zone story! :)
A story within a story, I gotta say this has easily been one of the most clever fantasy meets reality style giantess stories that I've ever read.
Very good job with that, mate ^_^
Thanks! I always try to push my limits. I'm surprised as you are it worked out.
After an outdoor party they are attending gets out of hand and police arrive, four highschool chums are forced to abandon their ride and walk back to town. Crossing through a corn field, they stumble across the town's rural 'haunted' house, replete with the legend of missing people, a witch, and suicide. One things leads to another as the boys dare one another to venture into the dilapidated mansion as a test of courage. Getting in is easy...
Oh man is it bad that I suspected that the opperator was gonna turn out to be one of the two ladies? xD
Suspected it when the opperator was described as a woman, became 90% certain after the steady buildup of the operator trying to get John's exact location xD
Oh well, looks like underdog Charlie may well get to be the last little guy standing (in a manor of speaking ^_^;)
Here's hoping he wins a happy ending for his success! :D
It was either that or have Simone scent him out, but either way, it was John's turn. Next installment will have a nice twist, :)
Alright! Well looks like John got his comuppance and so swiftly too. I guess Dustin's the favorite for the two of them so far... though it's hard to tell what's really a punishment in this game xD
But better yet, Charles! He's doing it! Could he become the unsung hero of this story? :D
He definitely deserves points for trying, now :)
Not a clue what he's gonna be able to do withthe pin and hair-tye but whatever the case I bet he gets to be declared the winner of this game. He deserves it after all ^_^
Hoo boy! Dustin's back in the game! :D
Too bad in doing so he's probably forfeited his ranking as favorite pet to pet in need of punishment. Not sure if his clever wiles will save him a second time upon capture :P
But at least Charles is glad to see him. Though he doesn't seem as fond of the girl's uses for their captives? I say he shouldn't knock it till he tries it, right? xD
-also incase you're wanting to be alerted on any slight typo's there was one that stuck out a bit in the first paragraph section:
Pausing, he listened to the sounds of the women breathing, hoping and praying one of them did get up suddenly.
You meant to say 'didn't' right? Not trying to be a grammar nazi or anything, that one just kinda stuck out to me as a contradiction to what Dustin was trying to achieve while escaping ^_^;
Thanks Alman01, I appreciate your vigilance catching the typo, you're right it is definitely the opposite of what he wanted and it's funny, i think i've edited and then re-read and I'm like crap, another one? :P
Well without a doubt I can honestly say that this story was absolutely fantastic! :D
It was quite a treat to take a week's absence only to come back and find this story fully loaded with a bunch of new conclusive chapters! ^_^
Overall I liked this very much. I enjoyed how in each chapter the perspective switched evenly between the shrunken men and Simone & her friend. But even more so I was impressed with the creative solutions you were able to write for Dustin in navigating the house at a shrunken scale. Make-shift grappling hooks, climbing the stairs using a straw-beam etc. Very inventive and seldom seen in other shrunken_man senarios. I'd definitely recomend keeping up with shrunken-men using inoventive solutions with future stories :)
Another aspect I liked was definitely those 'playtime' scenes as well and how you seemed to keep each one different for each guy to avoid repetitiveness. With Dustin getting the most descriptive and enjoyable escapade, then John enduring a pleasure/punishment game and finally with Charles having a relatively soft-paced introduction to it which seemed most appropriate for his character :)
So yeah the variance was appreciated too. ^_^
Final thoughts, good story with a good range of content which helped lead up to a satisfactory ending which didn't feel rushed or dragged at all. The story was well paced with only a few parts where I felt that more description could be appreciated (cause I'm a greedy reader like that ^_^;) as for the ending. I liked it :)
Though the police officer's actions have me notably confused about what's supposed to be happening next, leaving me with questions which I wouldn't mind seeing answered in some kind of sequel. *hint*hint* ;)
Gotta say this is by far one of the most enticing and interesting cat&mouse themed Giantess stories I've read in a long while :)
The way you've written in each tiny's characters to influence their decisions on surviving this game against an interestingly crafty pair of witches makes this a very gripping story :)
Dustin's my favorite character. But I also hope Charles gets some enjoyment before meeting his fate. He really seems like the sort that could use a break like Dustin ya know? ^_^;
Thanks for taking the time to share a review. We'll see how the fates of the little ones unfold. You got to kind of feel for Charles at least just a little :)
Who should shrunken people turn to for help? They shouldn't turn to Claire, that's for sure.
This story is about the daily life of Claire Little, who is an agent that works for a company that helps people who have been illegally shrunken. However, she knows that the agency won't find out if a few of the victims go missing from time to time, and has a bit of fun with the small people.
Well you certainly weren't kidding when you said this'd be a gorey chapter. Holy geez :P
Can't say vore and gore is my thing, however I gotta say I do like this concept you've writen up so far about there being an agency which deals with matters related to shrink crimes and this Claire abusing a few flaws in the agency's system.
It's a good setting and interesting to see what will hapen to the remaining three..
However I think you could probably do much more with this concept. Maybe midway through have a chapter that works to explore or highlight more about the agency processes, something like Claire going through a typical day at the office etc.
Also you're doing well to show how the shrunken victims get treated, however what about the criminals responsible for shrinking them? Do they ever receive any retribution at Claire's or the agency's hands? ;)
Hey no need to apologise for having a chapter that doesn't appeal to my personal preferences of the Giantess genre. Just because it doesn't appeal to me doesn't mean that it wont apeal to the many other viewers also reading this chapter :P
I'm fine with it. Variety's cool too and much appreciated as well, though don't stress too much by trying to apease everyone :)
Like you said, you love a good story as do I.So as long as the good plot is maintained throughout variety can be an added bonus to make us readers grin ^_^
As for the criminals I'm aware of Claire being just as bad that much is clear xD Some morality twists could be interesting too :D And I very much doubt that Claire would be the only one dealing with tinies. So to find out who else around is also having their giant-sized fun should be good to look forward to aswell ^_^
Enlisting the aid of his sister, a teenaged highschooler who has been inadvertantly shrunk decides he wants to crash the birthday party of the girl he's been crushing on, but the party is girls only.
After the party, the story tracks the tribulations of the shrunken lad as he navigates his way through a sea of lovely ladies.
Well it's sure nice to see Tom get a brief reprive from his earlier days of 'torment'
Though I reckon he seems very much like a self-destructive protagonist, exposing himself like that but more importantly, refusing or denying a phone-call to his sister to come rescue him Xd
Eventually he or Lina is gonna go one action to far leading to circumstances where that Phone-call home may no longer be an option for him xD
Hindsight is 20/20 and sometimes the wanting is better than the having...sometimes
Alright! That explanation/coverup was spectacularly clever! :)
Lucky for Tom that Lina's such a quick thinker, otherwise his daft idea to hide and squirm in her panties of all places would have been totally screwed xD
Of course I'm still waiting for Lina to become an impediment to Tom's ambitions, once he finally gets bored of playing around with her and starts missing home etc.
It wouldnt' surprise me if Lina becomes clingy enough to not wanna let Tom go home so easily ^_^;
Thanks for the read review and praise on how to throw Janine off the trail. I wanted everyone to think oh oh jigs up and pull a quick one. That said the dynamic in the house is about to change.
Alright, still going strong this one is. Very good. I must say I did kinda enjoy Lina asserting her dominance over Tom when he tried his same old anticts again at the end of the last chapter. Sometimes a cocky tiny guy has to remember his position even with gentle giantesses xD
Also this was a good chapter. Though I wanna go on record here and see if I'm gonna be right or not: Tom isn't in that eye-glass container.
Nope, I'm pretty sure that somehow during the hour interval after the phone-call, Jannie probably swiped Tom from his hiding spot. Maybe did some switcharoo? : d
I'll have to wait and see xD
And now the new chapter reveals the answer...
Still going strong with this story mate! Very good, and an ominous mysterious twist which will probably get resolved in the following chapter writen in Tom's pov. Unless his abductor's wearing a mask or acts 'off screen' with him for a bit before the identity is revealed : d
Quite a mystery as to who could've found Tom and abudcted him like that. Were there any hints in earlier chapters to who this character might be and if they know about Tom?
^_^;
Hmm, no overt clues per se. Here's my guess, - Colonel Mustard, in the library, with the candlesitck, joking! Next chapter will be the reveal, I promise
What happens when the members of the rock band Injustice get shrunk and stranded in the hands of their most ardent and fervent young female fans? Will they help or will they surrender to their star struck passion?
Alright, I'm very much enjoying this story mate. It's great to see that it's still going strong :)
I'm probably more taken with this one because I think the set up reminds me a lot of your previously completed story: 'Double dog dare' Another story where a group of four (five if you count the driver) are caught playing an epicly proportioned game of Cat & Mouse ^_^
I'm also enjoying it because it includes a range of distinguished shrunken cast members too with respective personalities. My favorite I'd have to say so far is Charlie, the smart guy with his head on straight. Here's hoping he gets an enjoyable experience despite being the not-so-popular drummer ^_^;
Thanks for the review, there have been a few others that link this story to Double Dog Dare. I think with multiple characters with different personalities can keep it fresh and appealing. the cat and mouse is always a favorite, heightens the sense of playfulness. I wanted Charlie to be the laid back dude, we'oll see how he fares in forthcoming chapters.
Naomi's hiding something from her girlfriend, Lorelei. She wants to surprise her, so she's doing something she never does- she's lying to Lorelei. The guilt is eating her up inside, but she hopes that Lorelei will forgive her. She's decided to go with the excuse of wanting a new car for why she's taken on a second job. It's tiring, and most of the time she's been leaving before Lorelei wakes and coming home to Lorelei having fallen asleep, but Naomi is persevering. She thinks it'll all be worth it in the end.
Lorelei is scared and furious. Naomi has a second job now, and she's given a bullshit excuse. Lorelei admits it's an adorable attempt at lying for the ultimate good girl who's never so much as omitted the truth in her life, but it was also a major red flag. So, Lorelei stalked her girlfriend and followed her to work- and she's meeting up with that damnable bimbo, Sammi, an ex-girlfriend of Naomi's that still flirts with her constantly. Problem for her is that Naomi is now dating LORELEI, and she's not keen on sharing.
Woah damn! This has been one rollercoaster of a story so far!
You guys make a good colaborative story :)
I figured I should pause and comment here as the surprise twist of Lorelei actually listening and restoring Gloria's size etc I didn't see that coming :D
Also wanting to take a break so that cliff-hanger has more of a dramatic impact! xD
When heavy metal loving, pot smoking seventeen year old high school junior Morris Jablonski cuts class to sneak out and blaze up, he unwittingly witnesses the school’s three hottest girls shrink down another student. Trying to sneak away quietly, he coughs, inadvertently drawing their attention…
Gotta say I'm plesantly surprised and intrigued to see that you didn't go with the insta-shrink result which the first chapter may have implied for Garfield to suffer.
Instead you're giving him time to possibly rope Tom and others into this story before the furies spring their trap through mounting suspense?
Thanks for reading I'm trying to build the suspense. I think I'll make the shrink personal and up close requiring physical contact. But didn't Len get shrunk for telling tales?
Yep as I thought, more are getting obliviously roped into this unbelievable tale. The more folks Tom tells I'm sure the worse it'll finally be when the trap is sprung.
Len was shrunk for spreading false-tales, so what'll happen to Tom for spreading true-tales?
Whatever the case, the girls are doing a great job of setting up an eerie goosebumps kinda vibe around the protagonist :D
I'm curious as to whether Tom'll be saved for last but throughout the day, the people he shared his unbelievable story with will start disappearing xD
Trying to heighten the suspense for poor Mo as he tries to find a rational explanation for an irrational situation, he may be inadvertantly drawing more flies to the spider's web, we'll see :)
A nice chapter this one :)
Pretty short but still nicely laid out and it did good to mildly lay out Morris' normal home-life. The writen mother and son dialoge there felt very natural to read so good job there ^_^
But more importantly, Tom getting a mysterious visitor in the middle of his phone-call?
'Gee.... I wonder who that could be?' ;)
Don't get my emote and quote-text wrong, I am absolutely loving this build-up here. I can't wait for the final trap to be sprung, for Morris to finally learn if what he saw was a dream or not :D
I've been trying to get at 1000 words per chapter across most of the stories I'm working on in order to provide speedy updates though some are longer depending on the story. Thanks for the dialog props reminiscent of my own adolescence. We'll see if alls well with Tom chapter after next, maybe not sure yet
