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Insignificant by Scapegoat26 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Bradley, a young man on his way out of juvy, finds himself readjusting to the crazy world in which all men have been reduced to half the size of women, and criminals (depending on the severity of their crimes) are nothing more than slaves, toys and snacks. 


Categories: Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Insertion, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Scat, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Watersports
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1805 Read Count: 12156
[Report This] Published: October 01 2017 Updated: October 01 2017
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: October 01 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Incarceration

Really interesting premise, can't wait to read more. I hope you make good use of the foot tag

Amnesiac and the Angel by Bentoo Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Kaleb wakes up at two inches all, with no memory of how the hell he got there. He quickly finds out that he is not alone in this insane new world, and delves into some very unpleasant adventures with a mysterious woman. 

This story is mostly foot-related, with a couple exceptions later on. 


Categories: Body Exploration, Giantess, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Odor, Unaware, Butt
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15844 Read Count: 83427
[Report This] Published: October 01 2017 Updated: January 02 2018
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: October 02 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lots of potential please keep writing



Author's Response:

Thanks for the encouragement!

We Fall Together by BlackAnt Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
Summary:

Mira is a young woman with a curse to bear unlike any other. Faced with a dark craving that she's long since lost the battle against resisting, Mira preys upon her fellow college classmates in an effort to satiate her specific desires. That is until, she targets an acquaintance named Anthony, a good-hearted and genuine man who she knows from her psychology class. When powers that be determine that Mira can no longer control herself, they step in and place both the woman and her new friend into an impossible situation. One is at risk of losing their life on a day to day basis, while the other is constantly reminded of a relentlessly approaching deadline that if not met, promises a fate worse than a trip to Hell.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Footwear, Giantess, Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Couples, Crush, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore, Entrapment
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 106358 Read Count: 88578
[Report This] Published: October 10 2017 Updated: April 27 2019
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: December 08 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Decisions And Consequences

You can't stop here, you've gotta keep writing



Author's Response:

Done, and done.

Get to that new chapter!

I Dream of Gina by Vintovka Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

Nearly six years after being shrunk, Fulda's ex-boyfriend is somehow holding on, Gina fancies herself a goddess through dark magic her sister taught her, and a tribe of shrunken people lives in fear in her room.  As memories of the time before he shrank grow more distant, he struggles to manage being an unwilling leader for the tiny people and Gina's favorite toy - and, to her, her boyfriend.

 

Sequel to The Prom Incident.


Categories: Lesbians, Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Butt, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Legwear, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63592 Read Count: 143509
[Report This] Published: November 29 2017 Updated: August 06 2018
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: May 28 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Aftermath

After this chapter I kinda want Gina and her friends to get what's coming to them



Author's Response:

Without spoiling too much: something along those lines is planned, but it's going to be a long time coming.  Like, not even in this story.

Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: August 06 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Catching Up

So the largest complaint I have with your writing as a whole is there's too much character building for my smut, and not Enough smut. Having said that it's a good ending that feels emotionally satisfying.

 

You do some very good writing and write the occasional hot line, and your characters are far more fleshed out than anyone's here, but it certainly feels like it's more narrative fiction than fetish fiction. 

 

I still enjoy it and it seems you're working more towards it in your verticality story. 

 

Otherwise, good story, wish the protagonist recovered otherwise I'm happy. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I think.  Most of my focus is on characters, their relationships, their sheer size differences, and sometimes death.  Most of my longer stories have a sex scene of some sort, but it's limited and rarely penetrative.  I realize it's not everyone's cup of tea, but at the end of the day I'm writing the stuff I want to read, and other people are welcome to come along for the ride.  When I try to write more graphic content it falls flat and my heart really isn't it.  I'm glad you still manage to enjoy it, and hope you keep reading even knowing my full position.

Main Squeeze by Jay-Bug, Molotav Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Minus has a particular and damning condition: he can have the size squeezed out of him.  Plus and Sum, his overbearing older sisters, are more than willing to abuse this aspect of his aberrant situation.  Can dutiful obedience and dry wit keep our hapless hero safe and sane?  

Probably not.

Written by Jay-Bug, Illustrated by Molotav


Categories: Breasts, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Incest, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15291 Read Count: 68090
[Report This] Published: February 06 2018 Updated: February 21 2018
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: February 09 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Bath Time with Sum

Love the story, wish you went more in depth with the foot scenes. The art is amazing as well. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'll pass along your compliments to Molotav.  I do have a tendency to wrap up the foot stuff quickly, mostly because I don't want to feel like I'm repeating myself.  But perhaps in the future I'll add a bit more detail, if it's what people are looking for.

Lowering the barre by dalespale Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Fit girls in leggings tease and torture ant-size men.

 

My first story after lurking for a while. Indulging some, let's say, particular fantasies of mine. Hope it's somewhat enjoyable for folks...


Categories: Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9668 Read Count: 52891
[Report This] Published: June 04 2018 Updated: October 09 2018
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: June 22 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm really loving this story. I hope Brian and Sarah come to love each other and be comes to enjoy feet and being small

Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: October 09 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I gotta tell you, I'm kinda sad she didn't experience a charecter arc. I was hoping she might become loving and their could be a  relationship of sorts based upon her power and him being subservient to her.

 

Regardless I understand why you choose what you choose and I'm just glad you finished it. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, she didn't really develop much as a character. I struggled with how to end it, but cruel seemed fitting for her personality. Thank you for reading and commenting! It means a lot as a first-time writer who has no idea what they're doing.

Tomgirl by D W Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

A country Tomgirl and her best friend become even closer after an unknown event causes him to shrink and her the power to control him.


Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Muscle, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26012 Read Count: 48435
[Report This] Published: June 25 2018 Updated: October 15 2018
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: June 25 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Pit Of Destiny

Interesting premise, keep writing

Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: July 16 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Pit Of Destiny

I really like this story and the degrading and humiliation of the protagonist, especially at Jane's feet. I only wish you would update more frequently. 



Author's Response:

We've had a series of storms lately.  I've spent most of my Summer picking up tree limbs knocked down in the yard, not a lot of time left over for writing ;P   I do agree though, nothing more anoying that cliff hangers, which is not my intent, my apologies on that count.

Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 14 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Pit Of Destiny

I'm really loving the dominant story and dehumanization of the main charecter. For example your line about shrinking away his anatomy is such a next level mindfuck and I love it. Absolute immaculization. As long as she doesn't kill him, I'm loving the be my slave and you'll learn to love it dynamic. I hope you write more and more frequently. This is a story I keep looking forward to and I certainly anticipate the domination as dehumanization, especially at the feet of a woman

Terms & Conditions by pursuedsub Rated: X [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

After a nasty break up, unemployment, a gambling addiction, and crippling debt, I sought out the comfort of the only person I most recently found comfort in; my ex-fiance, Natalie-- even if she didn't want anything to do with me. I had nowhere else to go! But despite my infidelity, Natalie accepted my plea with open arms, paying off my debt, and giving me a job at her lawfirm. Little did I know, the terms and conditions of the contract of employment I signed would change my life forever.


Categories: Slave, Giantess, BBW, Butt, Feet, Footwear, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21797 Read Count: 47420
[Report This] Published: November 02 2020 Updated: November 14 2020
Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed
Date: November 10 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Cherry Pie

Really well written and rather brutal. I think you should emphasize scale more. Thought it would start off with him being her toering.

 

Please carry on, both your writing and the characters have depth.

 

Personal wish list is more micro and foot action



Author's Response:

I'm happy you enjoy it! I'll be sure to keep more micro action in mind for the future. Trust me, I'd write sonnets about feet if I didn't fear the reader's boredem lol. I try to spice it up with variety.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.