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Time-Out 6: Power Play by Jacksmith Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 244]
Summary:

Scott Stevens, shrunken and incarcerated in his own home, faces dire consequences for his crimes in the hands (and shoes) of his giant family and acquaintances.  All the while, his mother Judy is hard at work on her senatorial campaign, and as usual has some conniving tricks in store.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Couples , Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Giant, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Time-Out
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70647 Read Count: 348429
[Report This] Published: July 15 2014 Updated: February 15 2015
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: January 30 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: MVP

By the way, how many chap are left?



Author's Response:

Four

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: January 31 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: MVP

By reading reviews, It seems readers considers Judy did not know Nancy's attitude for Scott But I stongly doubt abt that. 



Author's Response:

Judy may be aware of more than she's letting on, which we'll see very soon.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: January 31 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: MVP

Do u plan to update TO 6 again or the freshman ?



Author's Response:

Both will get updates again soon.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 03 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: MVP

emotional chap for maggie n scott. Indeed, she's opening her eyes in front her bro's reality even she still conflicted she didn't say sorry...



Author's Response:

This is definitely something of a little awakening for Maggie.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 04 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Maggie's Actions

i admit that when i saw title of your latast chap "Maggie's actions", i thought Maggie was gonna confront Nancy and the things would've nasty! for Scott 1 of new goal could be protect to his siblings from Judy's sick mind. Maybe Ella could be a ally as grilfriend or not!



Author's Response:

Especially after his encounter with Maggie, Scott is realizing how damaged all Judy's children are, not just him, and that he can't just give up yet without trying to do something about it.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 05 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Maggie's Actions

good to knw that scott gonna do something abt current situation but he need from 'nice' people like Maggie (even if she's conflicted), Libby, Ella, Carolyn and Kyle!  



Author's Response:

You're right that he won't be able to do much on his own. Scott's got his work cut out for him making things right.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 07 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Ella's Words

good to see Ella backing Scott. I am wrong maybe but for me it's possible Judy or Maggie (the old one) would frame Scott abt accident event. just a theory. Can't wait the two final chapters!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Anything is possible here; Judy certainly wants to keep Scott in her house.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 08 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Ella's Words

I think judy lost already her status as mom n parent for his son. Can't wait to see the talk with scott!



Author's Response:

Scott might very well feel the same way.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 11 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: For the Good

Grea chap to show judy still determinated, confiandent (easy with techlogic lobby) and pervert. will Maggie or Kyle in final chap? 



Author's Response:

I'd say all of those adjectives fit Judy to an extent. Maggie and Kyle will be absent in the last chapter, though there will be one other person appearing in some fashion.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 12 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: MVP

I think Scott needs Allies rather tools. Funny some people find  hard to believe that Judy is all but a mother! See how cool and emotionaless Judy reacted about Scott's rape. And Maggie as caring sister is not planned (i think). but from now she will be a bit more 'normal' one.



Author's Response:

You're right that Scott needs allies now. Luckily for him, he's on his way to having a few after this story, though that still may not be enough to stop his mother. Your prediction about Maggie is a good one - she's not going to magically turn into a sweet angel, but her relationship with Scott is definitely changed after what Nancy did to him.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 13 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: MVP

Indeed NOBODY can't from Judy from doing  her mission lol , Wonder what happens if scott start to call judy by firstname or surname!



Author's Response:

Judy would definitely have a problem with Scott addressing her like that. She already spends enough time insisting he call her Mommy.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 14 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: MVP

Do u plan to wait a while before posting TO 7 once you post the final of this?



Author's Response:

It's hard to say, though there will probably be at least somewhat of a gap in time, since I have several other new stories I'm looking to post soon.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 14 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: MVP

New stories!Great! some are they set in PRMD universe?



Author's Response:

One of them will be, yes.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 15 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Time-In

GREAT END ! I agree with jimbob about Judy's hanging threat to let Nancy abuse of scott is very sick n twisted. i bet that his dad is framed by techlogic too Looking foward the part 7 n yours new stories!

Ps: I missed the part where judy ban scott from eating normal meats! Can you tell what scott eat then? Table scraps? Which part of TO this ban is implanted? 



Author's Response:

Thanks man; I've appreciated all your feedback on this story.

Judy never actually "banned" Scott from eating normal meals, and he sometimes does, like with the pancakes in an early chapter. Most of the time he doesn't get to eat at the table though or have the same food as them.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 16 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: MVP

So basicly, Scott eats what they give him  ? 

 

PS: Is your new upcoming PRMD story a sequel to Shrink act files ?



Author's Response:

Basically yes, whatever they give him.

It is not a sequel to Shrink Act Files, though it takes place around the same time.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 16 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Time-In

Oh man I need to refresh my memory! What Maggie's blackmail are you talking about?



Author's Response:

"Blackmail" was probably not the right term, but he's talking about when she put him in her mouth in exchange for calling Ella.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: February 17 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Time-In

thanks for clarification! 

PS Is the option for contacting an author disabled? I contacted two and no reply.



Author's Response:

To my knowledge it has not been disabled.

Downtrodden by Nostory Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 238]
Summary:

Alvin Summers, seventeen going on eighteen has enough on his plate. Bullies at home and in school, a social life as alive as a fossil and under immense pressure to get to a good college, these don't even come close to the biggest one of all.

 Maybe things will get better, maybe he'll rise up. If it does, the path ahead is fraught with danger and he'll need to be at his best to fend off whatever threats may come his way. 

A story set in the Interiszables Universe created by vgiv. 


Categories: Giantess, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, New World Order, Sci Fi / Fantasy, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m, FF/f, FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: Intersizable Universe
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86192 Read Count: 243747
[Report This] Published: September 11 2014 Updated: March 04 2016
Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: May 21 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Olive Branches

 Wait do you believe that Wendy was sincere about making peace with Alvin!? 



Author's Response:

As the author, I'm gonna keep quiet on this one :)

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: May 29 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Forgive and...Forget?

Yes Wendy seems sincere but route to pardon is still long!



Author's Response:

I believe that forgiveness is earned not given, anyone wishing to get it should do more than offer a simple apology. 

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed
Date: January 09 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Bios

Good chapter. I don't think that a nurse was needed Cassie could've do nursing on Alvin.

PS: Are your stories in this universe connected to each other.?



Author's Response:

Thank you! Well safety first, don't want Alvin getting out and actually having  more serious injuries. Cassie would be good at mouth to mouth though....

Loosely connected, Downtrodden has a small connection to vgiv's Incorporated. Alvin's stepmother worked at the same company Linda did. 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.