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The Escape Redux by Nostory Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

What happens when a young Englisman on vacation finds him washed up on an island? An island containing a sexy sassy giantess to boot? Fun and adventures of likes of which Jack Erikson has never experienced before!

This is a re-write of The Escape, I'm redoing it to address plotholes and the quality of the writing, it could do with an improvement. 

Credit given to fellow user vgiv, who gave me advice on character development, fact checking, someone to bounce ideas off and to critique my writing when needed! 


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Crush, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: The Escape
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54558 Read Count: 147215
[Report This] Published: July 18 2014 Updated: July 14 2015
Reviewer: dragonking64 Signed
Date: June 18 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Heart to Heart

First you remove the original 2 story series of The Escape and bring up The Escape Redux and then you don't frinish the story.  Where is the rest of the story at?



Author's Response:

I plan on finishing this one, its all planned out and there's only 3 chapters left, this story will be finished soon but I do have Downtrodden and that needs some editing for the final arc. I deleted both of the originals and I didn't plan on finishing the original 2 because I found I had messed up the plot and characters to the point it was becoming impossible to use. So I rebooted. If you want the originals I can email them to you, just send me an email and I'll be happy to do it. 

I realise I lost quite a bit of readers by rebooting but it'll work out in the long term as the sequels I planned will go in a different direction than Aftermath. Plus I already mapped out the sequels so its a matter of fine tuning and finding time to finish it. S

Reviewer: dragonking64 Signed
Date: June 18 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Heart to Heart

First you remove the original 2 story series of The Escape and bring up The Escape Redux and then you don't frinish the story.  Where is the rest of the story at?



Author's Response:

Sorry if you didn't like the reboot but I hope you can find it in you to give this a chance. 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.