Penname: Afroking [Contact] Real name: Jonny
Member Since: April 29 2012
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Been reading for a few months and ive read about almost every stoty LOL. God bless every writer. And I found out im in the top 10 Most Prolific Reviewers! cool beans


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Adela by scrymgeour Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

At the beginning of the school year, a student named Martin finds himself shrunk and in the clutches of his old English teacher, Ms. Holly. He soon learns that she and her daughter, Adela, may have bigger plans in store for him--and the world.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Butt, Adult 30-39, Crush, Feet, Growing Woman, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, New World Order, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Holly's Library
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36380 Read Count: 297461
[Report This] Published: August 29 2012 Updated: December 02 2012
Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Taking away free will is hard to read but it makes the story different. I understand wht your saying to truly be a slave his will has to be crushed. I was thinking if Martin was given his hight back for a while and still served them that would show his submissive life. Just an idea I know this is a gts site, I dont need to give ideas I already like the flow of the story. "FEED ME MORE"

Author's Response:

I'm saying that neither Adela nor Holly necessarily 'believe' any more in their own free will than Martin's. And--you'll see--Martin is a character that can be crushed, I think. He's blows where the wind lists, and the wind is pushing him and a bunch of other people toward Holly and Adela. He adopts to the situation and tries to move on, yeah, but I don't think that he ever really believed in things like hierarchies and power struggles and masters and slaves. That's sort of what I like about the three main characters. They play their roles, but ultimately they see themselves as the gamepieces of larger forces. Anyway, that's how I see it. Best to bring this out in relief as the story goes on.

I like your idea, and I think I'll use it. :)

--scrymgeour

Reviewer: Afroking Signed
Date: November 06 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

 

srry about not having power. great ch by the way.



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 27 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

 

Fuck something else! plz excuse my language. I love these characters, u could write a sequel to this with Adela and Martin. srry this story was good and I feel like I could of got more from Adela and Martin's new interest in each other.



Author's Response:

Possibly I will. Or a prequel with Holly and her husband.

I have to be honest, the more I write the larger and more detailed this world seems to become. (It's fascinating, but also--at least for me--a little frustrating, because I really want to get started on other stories, too. And, at this point, I can really see this going on for twenty more chapters.)

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 27 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

If u do move on to a new story may I request u do one with the main character as a shrunken girl? It just I don't read about it as much and its my favorite type of story. Whatever u do im here to support u. Cant wait for to see wht the hell Adela has gotten them into lol.



Author's Response:

A shrunken girl? Of course. I've seen a number of those stories, but fewer in the first person than third.

Adela's a downright inconvertible hedonist, but she'll do right in the long run.

Thanks for the review.

MILF by Cheezo Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 32]
Summary:

A story about a boy and his relationship with his best friends' mother.

I will be adding tags to the story as I write it, so if at this stage you don't see the tags you want, stay tuned, I might write about them later on.


Categories: Toilet, Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Couples , Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Maternal, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9172 Read Count: 152692
[Report This] Published: August 29 2012 Updated: September 29 2013
Reviewer: Afroking Signed
Date: September 03 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Dinner

 

good story so far



Author's Response: Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 03 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Aftermath

 

ahhhh this is getting good!



Author's Response: It will get better :D

Nekoman by Waldo Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

This is a Felarya fan story, so fair warning. Also, obviously there will be giantess/shrink content, but I am also trying to tell a story and practice character development, so not every chapter is gonna be jam packed with eroticism. Just want readers to keep this in mind and not bother reading if that's all they're looking for.

 

Summary:

Cedrick finds himself stranded in the wilderness of Felarya with no recollection of how he got there. On top of that, the amnesia event some how turned him into a neko when he swears he was human. Struggling to find answers and return himself back to normal, Cedrick uncovers some unsettling secrets, which only serve to thrust him into ever greater danger.

Disclaimer: Brief character appearances of Anko and Jade are owned by Karbo and Ravana3k respectively. All other characters are original. Rated for violence, gore, adult themed content and language.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Mouth Play, Vore, Crush
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6950 Read Count: 15671
[Report This] Published: August 31 2012 Updated: September 09 2012
Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 03 2012 Title: Chapter 2: The Outskirts of Bulvon

 

dear god your taking on the Felarya challenge! these are my favorite stories but they are never finished. best of the i will be glad to see more.



Author's Response:

Haha, yeah it's intimidating. I haven't written anything for chapter three yet because I've just been reading the wiki. Though, I pretty much know where I'm taking this.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 10 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Nekoman

 

will there be gentle naga or giantess? Ive always liked stories with a gentle naga because they have the power to kill but choose to be kind, but i still like it when they have a violent side. Thats just wht i like anything you put up and I will enjoy it.



Author's Response:

Maybe, we'll have to see about that! I only have a general outline for where this story will go. I haven't even made any specific pred characters yet and am not sure if there will be any major pred characters in this story or not. Every chapter is a step closer to figuring that out. I'd like to try and tread where few have gone in Felarya, but we'll see.

Lillian's Wrath by Makaze Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

A request for http://kitten-lily.deviantart.com/ on deviant art involving my charcater, Maki or rather her former parent/siblings and that of Lillian.

A giantess decides to overreach her station and is punished for it, in a most cruel and horrid fashion

This story takes place in a world still being built, what little info is out can be found here http://theworldproject.deviantart.com/


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1573 Read Count: 6698
[Report This] Published: September 06 2012 Updated: September 06 2012
Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 

I love kitten-lily. good story. 

Stainless by Saf Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

When a giantess and a human wake up in a metallic room with only the knowledge that they are to work together to pass a series of tests, the question of emotion affecting personal values is brought to a greater meaning.


Categories: Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Gentle, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7361 Read Count: 49023
[Report This] Published: September 13 2012 Updated: November 02 2013
Reviewer: Afroking Signed
Date: September 13 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chrome

 

I like the change of perspective between characters. makes the story more interesting. good luck:)

The girl of my dreams by Datkignika Rated: X [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Just read it
Categories: Transformation
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 569 Read Count: 7932
[Report This] Published: September 13 2012 Updated: September 13 2012
Reviewer: Afroking Signed
Date: September 13 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 

interesting. i read it twice lol. I like it but you could put more details in the story. Its harder but makes story better.

Naga Forest by Ghostbuster5 Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Hospins is the last settlement of humans. Jared was a normal kid, until a farming accident forced him to flee, into a forest filled with danger of a giantess kind.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Couples , Gentle, Mouth Play, Maternal, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7230 Read Count: 59933
[Report This] Published: September 16 2012 Updated: November 19 2012
Reviewer: Afroking Signed
Date: September 16 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Farming Accident

 

I really enjoyed read this. Can u describe Jared? I like to picture the character it helps me really get into the story. I love and hate cliffhangers it makes me want to read more :) good start on 1st story



Author's Response:

Yes! You will read more! YOU WILL!!! MWAHAHAHAHAH! Haha. Ha. Huuuu. Well, it was awesome meeting you!

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 17 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Meet Tina

 

First I love friendly nagas already a great story. second I thought the flow of the story was really good. Revealing the the giantess character is important and you did it very correctly. cant wait for more!:)



Author's Response:

Thank you. I really do love other's inputs, and I personally don't see why people like sadistic giantesses. I put the sadistic types as villains.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I really do love other's inputs, and I personally don't see why people like sadistic giantesses. I put the sadistic types as villains.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 17 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Meet Tina

 

Damn Im checking every few hrs for more! I hate:) stories that dont update every 30mins. lol JK. no really I see this can go on to be a long story if u put in some time and heart. type damn you lol



Author's Response:

You are? Well, I probably will post about once every day (almost said year. I'm an idiot XP) Just because I don't update every thirty minutes does not mean you can rush me. I know what is going to happen next, but I need to work on the actual story. SO HOLD YOU DAMN HELL-HOUNDS!!! Yeah, people have to get used to my way of talking. Cause in the end, ADHD rules my life.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 19 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Identity Crisis

 

homunculus? Ive heard the name a few times mostly in Fullmetal Alchemist. am i wrong? good ch. :)



Author's Response:

^^ Thank you. Eeeh? No. I've personally seen that show, but that is not what I am talking about. It was supposed to be a monster that could replace humans.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 20 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Farming Accident

 

is this set in the world of Felarya? and does anyone know the names of other stories with nagas? Ive only read a few. any help would be cool



Author's Response:

One, no. That's the one with Crisis, right? No, this isn't. This is MY story, in MY land, in MY head. :B Anyway, I wish I knew. Sorry. I can't help you there.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed
Date: September 20 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Farming Accident

 

Well im glad to heve stepped into your world :) just hope I dont get eaten lol. takes a real writer to come up with there own world.



Author's Response:

You want to continue this conversation in shout?

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Woah to the Web Weaver

 

This chapter was a tease lol



Author's Response:

Nooooooo. It was a... I had no idea! *Rolls eyes* Yeah yeah, a little rude. But I had to say what happened, right? Poor Hachime. Why? WHY??? BECAUSE I CAN DAMMIT, SO STOP ASKING ME!!! XDD I'm kidding, kidding. That was at least a little funny, right?

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Dangerous CPR

I liked it. who the hell knows wht the inside of a spider girl looks like. lol. Your intellect is good enough to write a good story like this.



Author's Response:

...If I said that I do... what would you think?

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10 2012 Title: Chapter 7: And that is why going down someone else's throat is not a good idea...

 

Dude im #7 most Prolific Reviewer. I love to encourage authors on their stories,and I have no life lol. The stories I read I am grateful for. I love nagas and giant spiders(Dridders). IF all u need is reviews to write more im here for u lol. I cant wait a school of giantess! King=Man lol.  



Author's Response:

I've met three girls online that have "king" in their username. I'm just checking. So... Dridders. Actually, I didn't know what they were called. Well, hope you liked the story so far. Cause I am not even done yet! Not by a long shot! And school is gonna be hectic.

P.S.: You have a life. Don't undermine yourself.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.