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Summary:

A young girl comes into posession of a jewelry case, entirely unremarkable sparing it's fascinating contents.

 

Been writing this one up for a while, so it will be the first story I will post in chapter format, seeing as it is yet to be finished. Also the first micro (as opposed to macro) story I've written, so do point out any incongruities or improvements I could make.

Would love to have comments, reviews, and critique. Thanks.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Lesbians, Odor, Body Exploration, Butt, Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20967 Read Count: 176400
[Report This] Published: June 16 2014 Updated: June 28 2016
Reviewer: smuttymcsmutpants Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 03 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: More Than Just A Hug

What a comeback! I love the changes in perspective, and being squashed between two sets of breasts is always an excellent scenario. Excellent work as ever, and I look forward to any more you have planned.

Summary:

Tom Branson thought that this summer was going to be very similar to every other summer with maybe just one exception: being able to work next to the girl of his dreams, Marissa Jacobs. 

Why can't things just ever seem to go his way?


Categories: Couples , Teenager (13-19), Body Exploration, Entrapment, Unaware, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3754 Read Count: 4983
[Report This] Published: June 23 2014 Updated: June 23 2014
Reviewer: smuttymcsmutpants Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 23 2014 Title: Chapter 1: How I royally screwed up

An excellent start and a refreshing take on the teenage loser shrinking scenario. I love how aware Marissa is of her assets, charms, and overall sexuality, and I hope she milks them for all they're worth while humiliating little Tom and his friends. The shrinking has barely started, but she does a great job already of making the reader feel small, and I hope that continues.

I'd also like to see her relationship with her boss explored a little bit more. How is it that he got the shrinking formula in the first place? Is he aware of or even participating in how Marissa will be using it? This story has a very promising premise, and I hope to see more soon!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! And don't worry, Coolie will stop by next chapter for a bit more explanation.

Summary:

James, 35, lives with his new family which includes his beautiful 17-year-old stepdaughter who despises him.  It doesn’t help that she has magical size-altering powers.  And it certainly doesn’t help that he has a secret shrinking fetish.

(size reduction to 1 inch)


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Breasts, Adult 30-39, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Humiliation, Incest, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26561 Read Count: 178687
[Report This] Published: August 19 2016 Updated: November 02 2016
Reviewer: smuttymcsmutpants Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 29 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 ... 9-29-16

Hey, I've been lurking this story for a while and I thought now's as good a time as any to say that I really love what you've got going here! I enjoy giantess stories for their storytelling as much as I do for their erotic content, and the depth of your writing is some of the best I've seen on here in a long time. Even though James has only shrunk just now, the tension building between him and Adelaide has been thrilling and darkly sensual, and the descriptions really paint vivid pictures in the readers' minds. It's rare to see a perfect balance of seductive and impish, as exhibited by Adelaide. I'm excited to see how some of the tags are utilized in this story (I do confess to being a sucker for stories with the Breast tag), but I'm also really looking forward to seeing what else you have in store for both your readers and your characters!

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for your kind words.  I try to focus on both the storytelling and the eroticism... it's a balance, as you said.  I, too, think having breasts as a part of the story also makes it that much more enjoyable.

Reviewer: smuttymcsmutpants Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 ... 10-13-16

Once again, you're a master of building up the tension between James and Addie! Although they barely interacted directly in this chapter, I loved how humiliated he was by his stepdaughter and wife's conversation, as well as James's attempt at relaxing horribly backfiring on him. Personally I'm hoping that since Addie's noticed the effect her breasts had on her little stepfather, she puts him back with them to force him to finish what he started, but either way I'm really looking forward to what direction this goes.

Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting.  Yes, James needs a release, and Addie is in a unique situation.

Summary:

I've always had a gambling problem and it's gotten me into trouble before, but now I am definitely in over my head. I made one last bet with a friend, if I lose, I live on her as a parasite for a month to "learn a lesson." What will I do once her girlfriend and my sister get involved too? Can my mite sized body survive a month at the hands and bodies of three playful and taunting women?


Categories: Watersports, Giantess, Adventure, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Maternal, Mouth Play, Muscle, Nose, Odor, Unaware, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: FF/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11143 Read Count: 169322
[Report This] Published: September 06 2016 Updated: November 10 2016
Reviewer: smuttymcsmutpants Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The Last Bet

You're off to an excellent start, I LOVE micro and nano stories, and the premise for this one's really great. As far as things that might be interesting to explore in the story, besides breasts, I'm partial to lesser travelled areas on a giantess, such as navels, armpits, and/or ears.

Author's Response:

I am glad you like it so far. I plan to use the full giantess as much as possible. I want to do some breast play stuff at first, but...he's shrunken for a month. That is a long time. He's going to see some other areas, don't you worry ;)

Reviewer: smuttymcsmutpants Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Annie Gets Her Fun

Excellent to see you back, and I love the new chapter! Well worth the wait. As for what next, I think it might be interesting to see Chris slip somewhere unexpected, like maybe falls into Mei's armpit after the giantesses break the kiss, or accidentally gets dropped in her navel as Annie makes her way further down. Regardless, I'm interested in seeing what's next up your sleeve!

Summary:

What happens when a young Irish girl wants a job working with celebrities? She ends up in their hands at half an inch tall, of course!

 

Fair warning this story MAY include giant males. I intend on using all the tags below.

 

 


Categories: Adult 30-39, Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Couples, Crush, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Footwear, Giant, Humiliation, Incest, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Lesbians, Mouth Play, Slave, Unaware, Violent, Vore, Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, FF/f, FM/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1218 Read Count: 16571
[Report This] Published: November 14 2016 Updated: November 14 2016
Reviewer: smuttymcsmutpants Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14 2016 Title: Chapter 1: I Never Asked For This...

I really like the potential scope, from the tags, and your writing has a solid feel to it. Definitely a great setup to what I'm sure is going to be an excellent story! As for celebrity suggestions, Amanda Palmer's pits and bush could be fun to explore! Couple-wise, it's also hard to find anyone who were more well-endowed than Kat Dennings and Tom Hiddleston.

Summary:

On a hot summer day, the oldest sister in the family decides to have some quality time with her little brothers and sisters. The "quality time" is more for her and at the expense of her "little" siblings


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Humiliation, Young Adult 20-29, Breasts, Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3288 Read Count: 11055
[Report This] Published: June 11 2017 Updated: June 11 2017
Reviewer: smuttymcsmutpants Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 11 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Sunbathing is a family activity

A most excellent story! I almost wish it were longer to give more detail about the siblings' various experiences, but it's a perfectly sexy and concise story as it is. I was very delighted to see some navel play, as I feel bellybuttons are always overlooked for their G/t potential. It's a personal favorite of mine and you made great use of the scenario, especially telling it from the giantess's perspective. Honestly, I'd love to see what this giantess could do with some specks on her armpits or the small of her back.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

I wrote this kind of as an exercise, but I left it open to more potential for further stories. I can see what I can come up with for those, but I think there is a lot of potential with this group of characters

I think that there can be a lot done with a bellybuttons, armpits, and back as a G/t element, but it seems kind of limited in terms of what can be done :/ All the more reason to give it a try!

Summary:

A man is shrunk while going about his day which would prove to be dangerous all by itself... but the level of danger increases when he realizes just who he was shrunk by.


Categories: Slave, Giantess, Couples, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Giant, Humiliation, Insertion, Odor, Young Adult 20-29
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: FM/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13051 Read Count: 122056
[Report This] Published: December 03 2017 Updated: February 24 2018
Reviewer: smuttymcsmutpants Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 03 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love a good cuckold/revenge story, and the setup for this is incredible! I like the unusual element of Jake being the one to initiate the events. I hope that the two of them put him to good use during the course of the story.

Reviewer: smuttymcsmutpants Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So far, so good! The reveal and humiliation so far are top notch, and I'm really liking how Kendall's character is developing. Jake having more pills has me wondering if those will come into play somehow later on. Also with Kendall being an athletic-type and her hair noted as reaching down to her armpits, I'm kind of hoping that Mike will subjected to some underarm torture from her, but either way I'm really enjoying the story and can't wait to see what else is in store for him!

Summary:

A short story by Dark Writer.  Rachelle makes a quick stop at her old alma mater for a workout and a shower.  Two freshmen repeatedly annoy her and she easily puts them in their places, permanently!


Categories: Humiliation, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Footwear, Odor
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7204 Read Count: 28310
[Report This] Published: April 09 2018 Updated: April 09 2018
Reviewer: smuttymcsmutpants Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Workout

In complete agreement with the others! Armpits are completely underrepresented in this community, which is criminal for something with so much potential! You did a fantastic job of focusing a story around this niche, and I hope you'll consider exploring it some more. On behalf of all armpit fans in the G/t community, I thank you!

Author's Response:

As I noted previously, this story was written in response to a posting in the Challenge section by Jamilton.  I really had no idea anyone else would have an interest in armpits; but since reading your very kind comment I have come up with a premise for another armpit story.  My usual topic of interest is the female derriere.  That is what most of my writings, yet to be posted, are centered around.  If there is enough interest perhaps I shall write out and post the new story. 

Thank you for your comments.

Summary:

My girlfriend wants her and I to visit her younger sister across the country, but airline flights are too expensive for us at the moment. But there's a cheaper way to travel...

[Emphasis on hands and feet, and accordingly, fingernails and toenails. me 1/8th of an inch tall.]

[June 5th Update]: I was bored and drew a crude layout of Grace's apartment here:

https://i.imgur.com/R5McPM3.jpg

[June 6th Update]: I'm done. I wrote most of this while drinking, so if there are any big mistakes in the writing, grammar or story-wise, I'd love to hear about it in the comments so I can fix them. Thanks for reading, all you guys supporting the scene are great.


Categories: Adventure, Feet, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22733 Read Count: 100849
[Report This] Published: May 21 2018 Updated: June 06 2018
Reviewer: smuttymcsmutpants Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 26 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Arrival

I adore the idea of people shrinking down and travelling by mail, and 1/8th of an inch is such a fun size for this scenario! I really like the tension built in the latest chapter, with the threat of sisterly revenge. The unaware aspect so far is great, and I hope you explore it a bit more befor they get discovered. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take the story from here. I'd love to see maybe some underarm or cleavage torture for our tiny protagonists, whether by accident or Grace indulging her cruel desires.