Excellent setup! I love stories involving breast torture, and I hope the next chapter has plenty of it!

A brilliant and worthy addition to the story! I love how each character's thoughts and personalities are fleshed out and interact with one another, and you have a knack for writing vivid and engaging micro scenarios. This is still one of my favorite giantess stories; I'm glad to see it updated, and I'm looking forward to where it may go from here.

Excellent introduction! There really aren't enough good giant woman with tiny couple stories. Your writing style is very descriptive and as engaging as a giantess story should be. Great touch with trapping them in Emily's bra, hopefully she'll have some fun with that before letting them out...

I very much enjoyed the chapter.  The second giantess was an unexpected but very welcome surprise.  I thought the the teasing interactions between the giantesses and the tiny couple were very well-written and a nice breath of fresh air, and Brooke trying to force them to have sex in her cleavage was a fantastic idea.  So often giantess interaction falls into the same motiveless cliches, but you really brought out a playfully cruel side in Brooke.  I also enjoyed the idea of the tiny characters being small enough to explore the bra strap as a ledge: I haven't seen many authors do this, so points for originality! You have a discriptive style and wonderful, original ideas, and I'm curious about where you'd be able to go with a longer breast-play chapter in the future, as well as incorporating the second giantess a little bit more into that scenario (and the story as a whole).  For a first go at a breast-focused chapter, you did very well; as for the chapter as part of the story as a whole, you've set up the action nicely, and seem to have a knack at pacing the story in a way to keep the reader wanting to see the next chapter.

Excellent story so far! I love how detailed and drawn out you're making the character's experience. I really can't wait for the breast part! Any chance of a stop at the underarms while he's exploring her torso?

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm trying to make it as detailed as possible. I wasnt going to write much about the underarm, but since i'm trying to write in detail about every part of her body, I'll throw in an extra couple of sentences for you.

Wow! Much like Roger, I'd been anticipating what happens next and this is everything I could have hoped it would be and more! You have a very unique and immersive style of writing, and it's great to see you make such a grand re-entry.

Shelly's an excellent protagonist: whether she's tiny or a giantess, she definitely is in charge of the situation. It's rare to see a well balanced dominating presence like hers in these stories, and I'm looking forward to how she adds her other pets to the mix. I'm also looking forward to what ther plans she has for the next nights: maybe some micro interaction? Whatever you've got planned, I can't wait to check it out! Welcome back!

Author's Response:

Thank you Smutty! I'm gla I could keep your.....expectations up. I will try my best to keep it up for you. <3

A prequel about Shelly's past sounds good! Going by her character now, I'm sure that would be quite the story to tell. I'm stoked about what's to come for this story, though: I'm glad there's plenty of Shelly left to explore and revisit.

I'm all for a new character, too. I'm curious if he/she would be a new toy for Shelly or a fellow full-sized playmate?

Author's Response:

I am thinking maybe the girlfriend who introduced her to the powder can make a small visit. Someone else who is used to the powder and it effects. Then there will plenty of fun to go around!

It's interesting to see you writing a much more violent giantess than your previous work. While it's fun reading about the ways gentle characters like Bianca and Shelly play with those under their charms (often literally), your writing style blends nicely with Kellie's more forceful character. The way teases the tinnies in the shoebox at the start of the story is as brilliant as it is humiliating for them. The story is an excellent change of pace, and between her reasons for shrinking these people and her cruel yet very sexy disposal methods for them so far, you've added another great character and story to your catalog. I'm looking forward to seeing what else you (and Kellie, by extension) have up your sleeve for the rest of her poor victims.

Sorry for the repost, forgot to add stars and wanted to correct some spelling.

Author's Response:

I appreciate the review! My darker alter ego has been clamboring to get out so I gave her a shot.

A lot of great potential, and so far so good! You do well at describing the unaware aspects, I'd just slightly slow down the pace to give more detailed descriptions of the giantess and her actions. Can't wait to follow this story!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it so far. I'm a fan of unaware, so I guess it comes a little easy. :)

Smaller, more frequent updates sounds perfect, especially if they're all this good! Once again you've delivered the goods in an engaging and descriptive way. I loved what you did with the navel play! I'm looking forward to learning the rules of Shark, though I bet they won't be at all fair.