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Big Problems Pending by dingbing Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 133]
Summary:

Michael Parker and his wife Amy have recently purchased their first home that they can truly call their own. They're about to throw a housewarming party and their friends will be attending. What will happen when Michael decides to entertain their guests by showing off to them the latest invention he's been toiling away on for the past few months?


Categories: Crush, Adventure, Feet, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59434 Read Count: 266702
[Report This] Published: May 21 2013 Updated: June 17 2014
Reviewer: codeman83 Signed
Date: May 27 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

So glad to see this updated! Wonder if the dream at the end is a sign of things to come?



Author's Response:

Glad to see that you're glad! As for what's to come, we'll see!

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed
Date: June 18 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Wow an entire house she sure is getting bold! Im wondering if somebody did see her and if her collection of people is about to get a little bigger!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and for another review! Glad you're still enjoying the story!

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed
Date: July 30 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Its a good idea to keep the group's thoughts and plans out there. They are shrunk but still have ideas And hope for survival, your keeping a good repor going. Nice work on the speedy update!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you liked the chapter. I was afraid it would be boring to some people where it wasn't heavily Claire-focused, but I think it's important to give the other characters a little foucus when they're alone in the attic. 

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed
Date: August 05 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This is great she's established herself as a goddess and shown them how futile their situation is. Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed
Date: May 24 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow the shrunken truck interaction is amazing, love the idea of a normal sized girl handling

A shrunken vehicle like a toy! Hope there is even more interactions with the truck, and maybe some chase action?

Great story so far keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

I don't currently have plans for a "chase" scene, but I will say we haven't seen the last of the truck. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed
Date: May 30 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh man first contact with a giantess, can't wait to see how she reacts to the tiny vehicle

And its occupants.  She may want to have a bit of fun with them before helping them out,

who knows maybe she's playful?

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed
Date: June 04 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I knew this would happen!! She has all the power right in the palm of her hand, very curious to see where you take the story next anything could happen!! Great work!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed
Date: June 04 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Also you never know claire and her mother might not be getting along, she might be waiting for her to come home and shrink her and her vehicle down. Great story keep it up!



Author's Response:

Haha, you and your shrunken vehicles.

I'll tell you the same thing I told Aaron: Claire's mother, Amanda, MAY or MAY NOT appear in some capacity at some point later in the story.

I don't want to reveal anything just yet as a few of my plans aren't 100% set in stone, but I hope you continue to enjoy reading and giving me your thoughts as the story continues to unfold!

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed
Date: June 05 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Dude this is amazing the foot play is great, very curious about what her important work is. Keep going!



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed
Date: June 06 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yeah that was kinda the way I felt too about the truck playing a key role with them getting out of the box. But hopefully they decide to wait till they're no longer in the attic anymore because they would have no way down from there really.

And I'm very curious still about her important work still, maybe she conducts more tests of her own with the shrinking device?  Could there possibly be someone she intends to extract revenge on and add to her collection?  There really are a lot of possibilities with where the story could lead keep up the great work!

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed
Date: June 08 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Dude this story is amazing you've taken many major things that I like in a story and rolled them into one. The footplay and vehicle shrinking being the two major things at least for me.

I think I can sense the dilapidated car being ground to dust beneath her powerful flip-flops later in a display of her power over the group perhaps? And shrinking the vehicles and the machine was very smart on her part, it makes it appear they disappeared without a trace.

Your crafting a wonderful tale ill be eagerly awaiting the next chapters, great work!!

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed
Date: June 11 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love all the vehicle interaction, kinda surprised she left them up there with the cars while she goes out. Claire is anxious to test how powerful she is compared to the shrunken vehicles and is likely looking for a reason to flatten one beneath her thick powerful flip-flops.

I hope they don't stay in the attic all the time. Keep going, great stuff!

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed
Date: June 11 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have to agree with aaron on this amy wishes she was still the giantess, and bath time would be a fun idea for claire. Since she has so many toys!

Maybe as for food amy may not have unloaded everything from her car, perhaps there is something in there for them to eat?

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed
Date: July 26 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great to see your writing again! I think the idea of collages or even some renders from someone

Who has the ability to make them is a great idea. Hope your laptop gets fixed soon, the new chapter was a welcome surprise hope you can add more soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks! No one has expressed any interest yet in making anything, which is a little disappointing, but maybe someone will sometime in the future. 

I'm glad the new chapter was a welcome surprise to you, thanks for continuing to read and review!

Dominating by Firestone Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

A woman brings home her new friend for a night of fun.


Categories: Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Lesbians, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5206 Read Count: 12044
[Report This] Published: June 04 2013 Updated: June 04 2013
Reviewer: codeman83 Signed
Date: June 05 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Man this was incredible, I can't help but notice the use of the name lorelei. Are you the same person who wrote lorelei 1 2 and 4 years ago? Just curious.  Great story although it says it's. Complete you really could  continue it easily if you chose to do so.

Tiny Terminators by dingbing Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

 

A group of mercenaries is hired to covertly assassinate a target. Little do they know, they're in for the BIGGEST mission of their lives.

 


Categories: Feet, Adventure, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1722 Read Count: 5444
[Report This] Published: August 10 2013 Updated: August 10 2013
Reviewer: codeman83 Signed
Date: August 11 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yeah this definitely has some potential man! I like how you mention he still feels in control of the Situation. Curious to see where this  goes big problems pending as well!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Removed and Published to Amazon by Thornton Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

A Magical Box was given to James by his first ever girlfriend, Jenna. She believed that they were soul mates, and that nothing could hold their love together more than ancient magic.

Only problem is, Jenna may have been a powerful witch... but her love clouded her judgement and now she's learning the price of her mistake.

A new style of story that I think you'll enjoy.


Categories: Body Exploration, Butt, Entrapment, Feet, Humiliation, Insertion, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4095 Read Count: 20030
[Report This] Published: August 22 2013 Updated: August 25 2013
Reviewer: codeman83 Signed
Date: August 23 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Love is Blind

Wow this is a great start! I wonder if the box can shrink anyone or anything somehow? And im a crush fan it seems there could be some foot related stuff later, possibly some cat and mouse?



Author's Response:

Cat and Mouse? Crush?

Potentially Chapter five, maybe four. I didn't intend on it, but now that you asked... I'll throw it in.

Thornton

Home Invasion by carnaj2 Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

While enjoying a little self-bondage, Jennifer's apartment is visited by some tiny invaders.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Middle Age (50+), Crush, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Lesbians, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, The Following story is appropriate for all audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29240 Read Count: 79179
[Report This] Published: October 18 2013 Updated: October 28 2013
Reviewer: codeman83 Signed
Date: October 19 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Discovered

Oh man how's she gonna get un-cuffed now? Great start!

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed
Date: October 24 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Discovered

Good story, definitely got me guessing as to what will happen next.

Hopefully she gets free and extracts vengeance upon the tinies!

Size, Weaponized by dingbing Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

So, how to explain this thing...

Basically, it's based on several ideas I had in my head back when I first watched Pacific Rim in theaters over the summer. 

It might be a little too weird for some, but if you enjoy movies about giant monsters, and if you're a fan of giantess stories, (if you're not the latter, I don't know how you're even seeing this right now) then I think there's a fair chance you'll find something to enjoy here.

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To combat mysterious giant creatures that have begun launching assaults on our cities, humanity must develop a massive new weapon of its own.

There's going to be giant insects and other creatures that are normally quite tiny blown up to colossal sizes, so this definitely shouldn't be taken too seriously. 


Categories: Giantess, Crush, Feet, Instant Size Change
Characters: None
Growth: Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3425 Read Count: 19523
[Report This] Published: October 27 2013 Updated: December 03 2013
Reviewer: codeman83 Signed
Date: October 28 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

It is odd that the giantess in question would want to be shrunk. Nice start, hope your not losing steam on big problems pending though.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! 

As for Big Problems Pending, I'm afraid I am losing steam. I'm still quite excited about it and I have a lot of things planned, but I'm definitely losing steam and it's taking longer and longer to write. 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.