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Reviewer: Petite Soeur Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2020 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm glad Makiura's story inspired you to write this. At first I thought the perspective and name 'Lilith' was a coincidence, but there's plenty of nods to the original. Another author, Jellytea, also tried his hand at this perspective after reading Makiura's story, but I feel like you've done a better job at nailing the eroticism in a way that's more appealing in English.

Upon reading this, I also read and enjoyed your other story 'Shrinking in the Morning'. Erotic extreme size difference relationship stories are rare on this website, and it seems our tastes are similar enough that I'll be looking forward to anything else you have planned in the future.

 



Author's Response:

Hi. I'm glad you liked the story.^^

But to be honest, I have no idea, which story you are talking about. ^^"

It is possible i read it once and it influenced it but as it stands, it wasn't intentional.

 

As for the name Lilith: It is actually fairly often used as a name for a witch or a female demon in fiction since, according to myth, Lilith was supposed to be Adam's first wife but she rejected him and God's order.

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