Reviewer: Petite Soeur Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2018 11:20 AM Title: The insect's point of view

I find this story to be interesting and relevant to my interests, so I hope you maintain the motivation and inspiration to continue. I like fantasy stories with cute characters, which is hard to find on English GTS fiction sites.


Even though Lynn is a giga giantess, being that she isn't mortal, she doesn't necessarily need to be constrained by the idea the microscopic denizens of the mortal realm are fully beneath her notice. Would make sense that the elder goddesses would have lessons and developments for how they could interact with mortals, and Lynn being young and inexperienced, would probably have to figure some of this out on her own in a cute, makeshift sort of fashion with some destructive oopsies along the way. 

Based on the story categories and your profile, I don't know exactly what you have in mind for future chapters or what kind of fetishes you're trying to fulfil. Like if the purpose of this story is to simply satisfy a gentle-destructive fetish where Lynn cutely destroys the mortals, or one where she'll learn and grow into her new role with some of the mortals winding up as recurring characters that she interacts with. The latter would turn the world into a vast diorama with all sorts of entertainment to be had and scenarios she wants them to recreate for her that might, or might not, be based on reality in the form of handsome princes slaying dragons and Lynn becoming sexually interested in one of them without understanding the beating of her heart and the heat in her loins; she is the goddess of innocence after all.


In any case, are you writing this with a keyboard or a smartphone? The spelling and grammar mistakes make me think you're writing this all in a single pass, which is probably for the best since the narrative flow doesn't really suffer from it.

Author's Response:

Whoa! Thanks for the amazing response! 

Wouldn't want to ruin the surprise hehe :P

This is my first story that I have submitted here and also the first story that I have ever written about the subject so there are a lot of mistakes than I would like to admit in my work and for that I'm sorry. Writing this on my smartphone. I think up something at night before I sleep where I feel more imaginative and rush to type it here in the morning where I feel most inspired. So again, thank you for your kind words kind stranger and I hope you stay and watch this story flesh out more <3.